The longest poem.

[Jonluw]

Hiya escapists.
[sub]Inspired by Pinkammena's thread [http://www.escapistmagazine.com/forums/read/18.348578-Write-a-poem][/sub]

Let's try this out:
The first poster writes a line.
The next poster then writes a line that rhymes with the previous, and preferrably one that more or less fits in rythm.
You may change the rythm and rhyme when it feels appropriate.
Don't feel too bound by the rules though.

I'll start us off.

Metal sliding over ice

 

[Javarock]

Metal sliding over ice
Petal falling looks nice

So, go the next bit.

 

[Jonluw]

Metal sliding over ice
Petal falling looks nice
Accompanied by many mice

 

[TheEmoSpeeds666]

Metal sliding over ice
Petal falling looks nice
Accompanied by many mice
Who have eaten all the rice.

 

[JoJo]

Metal sliding over ice
Petal falling looks nice
Accompanied by many mice
Who have eaten all the rice.
Oh, what a vice!

 

[Jonluw]

Metal sliding over ice
Petal falling looks nice
Accompanied by many mice
Who have eaten all the rice.
Oh, what a vice!

Though in spite of such a tragedy

 

[Chairman Miaow]

Metal sliding over ice
Petal falling looks nice
Accompanied by many mice
Who have eaten all the rice.
Oh, what a vice!

Though in spite of such a tragedy
At least we still have the menagerie

 

[Jonluw]

Metal sliding over ice
Petal falling looks nice
Accompanied by many mice
Who have eaten all the rice.
Oh, what a vice!

Though in spite of such a tragedy
At least we still have the menagerie
Of which I'd make a parody

 

[TheEmoSpeeds666]

Metal sliding over ice
Petal falling looks nice
Accompanied by many mice
Who have eaten all the rice.
Oh, what a vice!

Though in spite of such a tragedy
At least we still have the menagerie
Of which I'd make a parody
Starring the great Jack Dee.

 

[The Thinker]

Metal sliding over ice
Petal falling looks nice
Accompanied by many mice
Who have eaten all the rice.
Oh, what a vice!

Though in spite of such a tragedy
At least we still have the menagerie
Of which I'd make a parody
Starring the great Jack Dee.
Tee hee!

 

[Nouw]

Metal sliding over ice
Petal falling looks nice
Accompanied by many mice
Who have eaten all the rice.
Oh, what a vice!

Though in spite of such a tragedy
At least we still have the menagerie
Of which I'd make a parody
Starring the great Jack Dee.
Tee hee!

My poetic lines are staying clean.

 

[The Thinker]

Metal sliding over ice
Petal falling looks nice
Accompanied by many mice
Who have eaten all the rice.
Oh, what a vice!

Though in spite of such a tragedy
At least we still have the menagerie
Of which I'd make a parody
Starring the great Jack Dee.

My poetic lines are staying clean.
And yet, I'm still a poem machine.

 

[TheEmoSpeeds666]

Metal sliding over ice
Petal falling looks nice
Accompanied by many mice
Who have eaten all the rice.
Oh, what a vice!

Though in spite of such a tragedy
At least we still have the menagerie
Of which I'd make a parody
Starring the great Jack Dee.
Tee Hee!

My poetic lines are staying clean.
And yet, I'm still a poem machine.
This is above the normal mean.

 

[Timberwolf0924]

Metal sliding over ice
Petal falling looks nice
Accompanied by many mice
Who have eaten all the rice.
Oh, what a vice!

Though in spite of such a tragedy
At least we still have the menagerie
Of which I'd make a parody
Starring the great Jack Dee.
Tee Hee!

My poetic lines are staying clean.
And yet, I'm still a poem machine.
This is above the normal mean.
Because, I'm winning like Charlie Sheen

 

[Jonluw]

Metal sliding over ice
Petal falling looks nice
Accompanied by many mice
Who have eaten all the rice.
Oh, what a vice!

Though in spite of such a tragedy
At least we still have the menagerie
Of which I'd make a parody
Starring the great Jack Dee.
Tee Hee!

My poetic lines are staying clean.
And yet, I'm still a poem machine.
This is above the normal mean.
Because, I'm winning like Charlie Sheen
And in many ways am just as lean

 

[TheLastSamurai14]

Metal sliding over ice
Petal falling looks nice
Accompanied by many mice
Who have eaten all the rice.
Oh, what a vice!

Though in spite of such a tragedy
At least we still have the menagerie
Of which I'd make a parody
Starring the great Jack Dee.
Tee Hee!

My poetic lines are staying clean.
And yet, I'm still a poem machine.
This is above the normal mean.
Because, I'm winning like Charlie Sheen
And in many ways am just as lean
But I'm also as buff as Mr. Clean

 

[Dr.Susse]

Metal sliding over ice
Petal falling looks nice
Accompanied by many mice
Who have eaten all the rice.
Oh, what a vice!

Though in spite of such a tragedy
At least we still have the menagerie
Of which I'd make a parody
Starring the great Jack Dee.
Tee Hee!

My poetic lines are staying clean.
And yet, I'm still a poem machine.
This is above the normal mean.
Because, I'm winning like Charlie Sheen
And in many ways am just as lean
But I'm also as buff as Mr. Clean.

Mr. City police man sitting.

 

[Jonluw]

Metal sliding over ice
Petal falling looks nice
Accompanied by many mice
Who have eaten all the rice.
Oh, what a vice!

Though in spite of such a tragedy
At least we still have the menagerie
Of which I'd make a parody
Starring the great Jack Dee.
Tee Hee!

My poetic lines are staying clean.
And yet, I'm still a poem machine.
This is above the normal mean.
Because, I'm winning like Charlie Sheen
And in many ways am just as lean
But I'm also as buff as Mr. Clean.

Mr. City police man sitting.
On a barstool, constantly hitting

 

[FalloftheLiving]

Metal sliding over ice
Petal falling looks nice
Accompanied by many mice
Who have eaten all the rice.
Oh, what a vice!

Though in spite of such a tragedy
At least we still have the menagerie
Of which I'd make a parody
Starring the great Jack Dee.
Tee Hee!

My poetic lines are staying clean.
And yet, I'm still a poem machine.
This is above the normal mean.
Because, I'm winning like Charlie Sheen
And in many ways am just as lean
But I'm also as buff as Mr. Clean.

Mr. City police man sitting.
On a barstool, constantly hitting
All of the high notes, so ear-splittting

 

[Dr.Susse]

Metal sliding over ice
Petal falling looks nice
Accompanied by many mice
Who have eaten all the rice.
Oh, what a vice!

Though in spite of such a tragedy
At least we still have the menagerie
Of which I'd make a parody
Starring the great Jack Dee.
Tee Hee!

My poetic lines are staying clean.
And yet, I'm still a poem machine.
This is above the normal mean.
Because, I'm winning like Charlie Sheen
And in many ways am just as lean
But I'm also as buff as Mr. Clean.

Mr. City police man sitting.
On a barstool, constantly hitting
His head on a wall so very fitting.