The Ratings War IV: Paradise City

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The Sorrow

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Why, hello there. Hope this security drone didn?t startle you too much; can?t be too careful, you understand.

Now, down to business. If you?re listening to this recording, you either received my invitation or, by some freak chance, found this place on your own. If that is the case, I applaud you. In either case, let me welcome you to my city. I am Michael King, CEO of MasonTech Incorporated and unofficial boss of this little paradise.

Let me lay down something you need to know: you are not wanted here by anyone but me. If any member of the populace so much as glimpses you, you will be treated with lethal hostility. Luckily for you, I?ve designated The Gurney Wheel, down on the corner of 4th and Pennyworth, as a safehouse. All food and drink will be placed on my tab, and dear Mr. Timmoth won?t bother you at all and can brew a rather spectacular margarita, should you be interested. You are to remain there at all times unless specifically contacted by me through Timmoth.

And don?t try to learn more about me through him. He knows only what I want him to know.

My messages will arrive periodically. If I am correct in my assumption, you will not be alone. Treat the others in there with the utmost respect; any violence among you will result in a gas pipe conveniently bursting directly beneath the bar. In the meantime, sit back and enjoy yourself.

Welcome to Paradise City. The grass may not be green, but the girls are very pretty.

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Yes, ladies and gentlemen. Time for Round Four.

The general rules are the same as the last few times. Each competitor will create a character and write an entry describing their character defeating their opponents each round.

SPECIFICS:
I will be bringing back the instanced battle system from last time. I enjoyed the amount of creativity you guys showed me and wish to replicate that.
The time limit per match will be TEN DAYS. Should you need more, inform me at least a day in advance. Should you not inform me, you risk disqualification.
Every competitor needs a profile and an audition, describing their character and how they got to Paradise City (either through a message delivered via mail from King inviting them to come or stumbling on it by themselves). In either case, the character will be met by an armed security droid who will play the aforementioned recording.
Battles will be judged on creativity, accuracy of both the competitor?s and his opponent?s characters, plot, and general quality. If the three-man judge core from last time wishes to stay on, just let me know.
You have TWO WEEKS to get your profile and audition together. I will accept as many as come in.
Battles must end in victory for the competitor?s character. This can be death, incapacitation, or you can get creative.
The bar will serve as the hub for characters to interact between bouts. Timmoth is just a simple-minded bartender, so don?t have him spilling secrets he doesn?t know in your plots.
All characters must be ORIGINAL. Fan-characters and Mary-Sues will be turned away at the door.
 

Lord Krunk

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The man straightened his blazer and tightened his mask. He knew he was about to walk into hell. He knew what this woman had done, what she was capable of. He also knew he was set for life after delivering his message. Sucking up his courage, he knocked.

He knocked again.

And ag-

*click*

There was no time to think as he dodged out and away from the door. Two shotgun blasts tore up the door he was standing in front of just seconds before.

Fuck, he thought. I didn?t sign up for this.

?Who is iiiiiit?? rang a feminine voice from behind the smoke that billowed out of the room. Her silhouette began to form inside.

He coughed. ?I work for Mister King, CEO of-?

?Well, why didn?t you say so? Come in!?

He stood up shakily and stepped into the room. It was darkly lit, but he could definitely see the silhouette of a woman behind the smoky veil that twined around her features. He could also see the vivid outline of a shotgun aimed directly at him.

?Don?t just stare at me. Take a seat, you silly man. How?s Mike these days??

His mind started to come back from the trauma. ?As enigmatic as ever. He has a proposition for you, by the way.?

She paused. ?Ah, who?s he want killed now? Politicians and businessmen are so damn boring. I need to fight real men, someone challenging.?

He smiled underneath his mask. ?Mr. King thought you?d say as much, and that makes you perfect for the job. He doesn?t want just anyone dead, he wants a massacre. You interested??

She leaned forward. ?Like that 9/11 fiasco? Levelling buildings is fun, but it ain?t as personal as a bullet to the f-?

?He knows your preferences. These guys have balls, and would gladly see you dead. There?s a level playing fi-?

?I?m the CIA?s most wanted. I?ve killed more people than the cents you?re earning for this little funtime happy run. What have a couple of mercs possibly got on me??

?Let?s just say that if you don?t take the offer, Mike?ll be cross. And he?s deadly when he?s cross.?

?So I?ve heard. Let his men come, I need a bit of exercise anyway. Tell your boss that he?s made my day.?

The man stood up and turned toward the door. ?It seems that I can?t convince you; maybe Mr. King will do a better job. I have a security droid that?ll play you the official message.?

?Then why send Captain Charisma and his fail brigade to woo me into submission??

?Mr. King thought you might destroy it before it plays the message. I?m here to make sure you hear it.?

She shrugged, putting down her cigar as she stood. He could see her properly now, her short bronze hair and curvaceous features directing his eyes ironically away from the gun that she held at him. ?He knows me too well. Send it in then.?

Clapping his hands, an armed droid rolled into the room and stopped, facing the two.

*whrr, chk*


Why, hello there. Hope this security drone didn't startle you too much; can't be too careful, you understand.

Now, down to business. If you're listening to this recording, you either received my invitation or, by some freak chance, found this place on your own. If that is the case, I applaud you. In either case, let me welcome you to my city. I am Michael King, CEO of MasonTech Incorporated and unofficial boss of this little paradise.

Let me lay down something you need to know: you are not wanted here by anyone but me. If any member of the populace so much as glimpses you, you will be treated with lethal hostility. Luckily for you, I've designated The Gurney Wheel, down on the corner of 4th and Pennyworth, as a safehouse. All food and drink will be placed on my tab, and dear Mr. Timmoth won't bother you at all and can brew a rather spectacular margarita, should you be interested. You are to remain there at all times unless specifically contacted by me through Timmoth.

And don't try to learn more about me through him. He knows only what I want him to know.
My messages will arrive periodically. If I am correct in my assumption, you will not be alone. Treat the others in there with the utmost respect; any violence among you will result in a gas pipe conveniently bursting directly beneath the bar. In the meantime, sit back and enjoy yourself.

Welcome to Paradise City. The grass may not be green, but the girls are very pretty.



She smiled. Paradise City? Michael King?s City? We?ll see just how much of a paradise it is when I?m finished with it.

?Scratch what I said before, count me in. I?ll keep your robot buddy.?

?Sure,? he smirked. ?I?ve got plenty of them back at home.?

?Sense of humour, I like that. Thanks for the message, you may leave now.?

?You?re welcome, Sarah.?

He disappeared into the daylight beyond. She was alone once more.

I wonder?

She threw her cigar at the droid?s eye, making it click and whirr loudly.


She beamed as the droid?s arms began to shoot flames in every direction. Dropping her shotgun, she ducked behind cover and caught her breath.

?Mike, you always know how to make a girl smile. How couldn?t I accept??


Laughing, she drew the pistol from her hip. ?Yeah, let?s dance.?


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Name: Sarah Austen

Nickname: The Siren

Age: 29

Appearance: Short brown hair, lightly tanned skin and subtly muscular, she?s your typical image of feminine beauty. She has curves in all the right places, a wardrobe that could suit all of female London (acquired through means both fair and foul) and moves that will dazzle the straightest of women and the gayest of men. She knows her power, and she flaunts it with absolute flair.

Clothing: She dresses in style, her fashions are glorious and you?d better not expect her to wear the same outfit twice. One day she?s a businesswoman, another day she?s a goth. It all depends on her mood, and what?s on today?s to kill do list.

Weapons: Knives, guns, grenades, any weapon that will suit the job. And she makes sure you?ll never know what heat she?s packing underneath the latest Summer trend.

Powers: Only her beauty, charisma, charm and experience with combat (armed and unarmed). She has no magic, no superpowers and no special ability of note.

Strengths: Men and women alike. Anyone can be wooed given enough persuasion, and anyone that breathes can be killed. That?s her motto, and it?s never let her down.

Weaknesses: Her self-confidence makes her cocky and proud. And while she never lets this make her get sloppy, she would rather die than admit defeat to anyone.

Personality: Sarah has a dark past, a big ego and a kill counter that hits digits you wouldn?t have thought possible. A bisexual Casanova, she just wants to have fun. And lawful civilisation just doesn?t cut it.

She enjoys nothing more than the chase, whether she be the hunter or the hunted. A challenge must be necessary, and she will only instigate an assassination if the job interests her personally.

Michael King is the only man that has ever resisted her wiles, the only man she has been unable to kill (after her only botched job in the year 2004). And boy, does she admire him for it. Of course she also wants to destroy him, but the two enjoy playful banter nonetheless.

She has a dark past that pains her to remember, and she responds to it with apathy for all life. And God help you if you try to use it against her.

Bio: Molested at 12, Sarah blamed herself for her personal demons and could never look anyone in the eye without breaking down into tears.

Aged 14, she has a severe mental breakdown, the result of which she concludes that if her rape was in fact her fault, than she has enough power over men to make them commit the vilest of crimes.

Aged 15, she begins to use this to her advantage. Manipulating all the men around her, her rise to the top of the food chain begins. Later that year, her attention turns to women as well.

Aged 16, she leaves home with shattered hearts trailing in her wake. Worms her way into celebrity purely by association with powerful men.

Aged 17, she turns to modelling and obtains wealth beyond measure. She is deemed a gift from Aphrodite herself to the world of journalism, and she uses it to bend everyone to her will.

Aged 19, Sarah Austen retires to live in her mansion in Beverly Hills, albeit not giving up her pastime of seduction and heartbreak. She quickly grows bored of this lifestyle.

Aged 20, she develops a nickname in popular culture as ?The Siren?, not just because of her feminine charms but also because that?s the sound that follows in her wake.

Aged 21, Sarah torches her mansion for reasons unknown, the fire travelling too quickly for anyone to comprehend and wiping out both Beverly Hills and a portion of Los Angeles. She is charged for mass manslaughter and arson, but the police never find her.

Sarah Austen died on the 13th of February, 1999 in a freak accident that torched a quarter of a city, destroying both herself and her worldly possessions. That was the official story.

The unofficial story is that Sarah Austen lives on in a tragic and destructive path, killing simply when she feels like it, or when there appears to be a challenge. Crime lords, powerful politicians and high-up businessmen alike are her only contact to the overworld, and she disappears with no trace of her existence. The CIA have been hunting her for a decade, but she has never been found.

I?ll be on holidays for the next 2 weeks, so don?t sign me up for anything until the 10th.

Feedback, as always, is welcome.
 

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Question: Just as last time, the characters can be of any Genre we like, correct? There are no guidelines other than that they have to be original?

If that's the case, then give me a bit to make a sheet and write up a little snippet. This requires thinking time.
 

RagnorakTres

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Hmm...I do believe I shall set to work on a character...when I get my usual computer up and running. You certainly do know how to write an opening, Mr. Sorrow.
 

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And so, after a long, long, long hiatus brought upon by self-doubt and melancholy sulking, Crow does feel that the time is right to return and try his hand at forum RP'ing based on creative quality writing once again! (Although the planets aren't aligned like I wanted them to be.)

Anyway, I never thanked you for getting me interested in the forum RP thing to begin with, ser Sorrow, it was your first Ratings War which drew me in.

So it goes. I've got a character in mind for the story. I'll post his backstory and other stuff in a while. Just need to flesh him out a bit.

Good luck to all partcipants, and a happy merry Christmas!


Lol, i iz waz jus jk'ing.

i wil b a good JUDJE
 

Khedive Rex

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Name: Percy. (Short for Perseverance)

Appearance: Percy is 5?5 and thin to the point of starvation. This can typically only be seen in his face and hands though, as the rest of his body is covered in elaborate billowing white robes tied at the waist with a simple grey scarf. He wears a white turban that mostly covers his graying hair. He is olive skinned and middle aged. His eyes are very deeply green. His face looks like it might have been round and boyish once but is now much rougher. He always seems a little confused. He is very imperfectly clean-shaven. There is something bloody and avian lashed very expertly to his back with tough cords; it struggles at times and bleeds on his robes continuously. He carries a gnarly redwood staff with him and a few pouches on either side of his gown.

Weapon: Percy has all the powers of a classical white mage ala Final Fantasy. That is to say he can cast spells such as protect, shield, reflect, haste, slow, cure, esuna, life and holy which (in order) protects against physical attacks, protects against magical attacks, bounces magical attacks back at their caster, speeds people up, slows them down, recovers health, eliminates status aliments, brings things back to life and deals massive damage to unholy things. He can also hit you with his staff for very little damage. He carries the skeletons of creatures he?s bested. Occasionally he?ll use them against you.

Personality: Percy is prickly around people and very contemplative. He talks to himself occasionally, typically to berate himself. He is devoted to the concept of morality and honor even though he does not fully understand the subject. Human subtlety confuses him and, even though he will always attempt to behave honorably, he often looses his temper trying to navigate people?s underlying meaning and intentions. He always tells the truth (because he knows lying is bad), and is very religious. His purpose is to explore what counts as moral and immoral in people?s eyes and to understand why each is in each category. A white mage is all he?s ever wanted to be and he will take deep offense if people attempt to dishonor or discredit him.

Little. Flying. Birds. Maybe Robins. Delicate things. Dandelions with wings and beaks and songs and colors elaborate and bright, floating across the sky on a breeze they create through their own sunny perseverance, even on days besieged by thunder and thunderous claws; innocent and warm avatars of tranquility. That?s what they are. Little. Flying. Birds.

And hawks. Proud things. Big flying birds. The trees of the sky soaring in the wake of typhoons and sunny days indiscriminately; silvery or golden idols flying where they know the wind should take them and feeding on what is needed for sustenance, nothing more and nothing less, only the sharp edge of their calm gaze and the knowledge that their self-imposed restraint is all that keeps talons engineered to tear and rend from succumbing to their duty. The strength, the burden, the novelty of that stare and all the childlike fear it exhumes in weary and weathered men. That?s what they are. Big. Flying. Birds.

And I have to ask the question, because it?s important, which is like God? I always thought the second contained more divine qualities and yet most would agree the first seems more holy. I don?t know how a god could be so different from what it demands of it?s followers but I?ve thought about it for a long time and I know that what is holy is not godly. And what is godly is rarely friendly. And what is friendly may or may not be sinful; it?s a mess! It?s so ? complicated, the art of being good.

In that way perhaps I am an artist. A weak artist, but a devoted student. My name is Percy. But you?re a robot, so you don?t care. And you can?t answer my question. I think that you can only invite me to Paradise City with your cold metallic hands and array of artillery. I like to think of you as a person though. It makes me happy to imagine there is someone who can hear and understand me after so long wandering alone. Say, would you like to hear where I came from? The people I?ve told said it was a good story.

I?m not an artist. I?m a cleric. My father was a cleric too, and a drunkard. And my mother was a nun but she died, of old age, after a point. It was very sad. But when I was old enough I joined a traveling mercenary group as their resident holy man and both my parents waved me away and said they were very proud. My uh, my parents didn?t have a mastery of words. ?Very proud? was high praise.

The group was small but successful. We had a swordsman, Thom, who insisted we pronounce the ?h?. And another swordsman, Derek, who was a lot stronger than Thom. There was a magician, Crystal, who wore dark robes that didn?t hide her striking red hair nearly as well as she thought. And there was an archer. Alys. Alys was a friend of mine. I liked having friends.

We killed things; sometimes wild dogs, sometimes wild men. And when we finished all of us walked around the dead bodies and took the valuables. The hides and teeth were all we could get off most creatures unless we ran into one that had alchemical value or had eaten travelers in the past. When we found those we could make items or pick money out of the gullet, sometimes we even found small weapons, believe it or not! Those were only really good though if they came from a particularly mean beastie. No, the slaughter of people was where real money was made. Alys told me that early but I didn?t realize until we?d killed our first band of thieves.

The field smelled fresh and clean. It rained the day before and flowers were in bloom, I remember because Alys was picking the red ones after the fight. Derek was hurt bad and I cast cure on him. He slapped me on the shoulder and said I?d done a good job. Thom scoffed and said I stayed as far from the fight as possible.

?That?s the point.? Derek said, very posh. ?That?s what he?s supposed to do. A cleric isn?t any good in a fist fight.?

?I just don?t understand why were payin? him if all he does is hide. Thas all I?m sayin?.?

Derek held up his left arm and wiped the blood away. His skin was fine underneath, no cuts no scars.

?Stop fighting and clean up you two.? Crystal said crossing her arms over her stomach, revealing the shape of large breasts hidden behind flowing robes. I looked to Alys picking flowers and rolling her eyes. She?d noticed that I?d noticed. I didn?t really know what to say, so I started cleaning.

The bodies were newly dead and smelled more of iron than decay. The leather armor was slippery with blood or bile and I?ll confess, I didn?t want to touch it. I was standing over the corpse of a man who?d bleed to death from his shoulder. He wasn?t much older than me, he seemed angrier than me though. I wanted to think that if I was dead he?d let me keep my dignity; but something in the wrinkles of his forehead prevented me from imagining anything but a looting. So I untied his armor, one string at a time. I threw the leather chest plate to the side and started to work on his arms. With all his apparel confiscated I looked down at the half nude man soaking in his own juices. Then I took his coin pouch, which had sixty gold pieces. All around the field this dance of possessions was mirrored, until finally we had a waist high mound of marketable goods and some three hundred gold coins. When we had finished I approached each of the naked dead and cast life. They shouted like infants at birth, then shielded their eyes, saw me, saw themselves covered in blood, gathered the strength to stand, and than ran naked back home! I assume they went home. I never met any of them again.

The beauty and the thing no one understands is that I was doing the Lord?s work. It?s godly to kill the wicked. And it?s holy to show them mercy. And so in the end it didn?t matter what I did, in every fight no matter what, I was good. In a way. Alys used to say that we were killing for other people?s benefits. A bandit who?d been run through wouldn?t cause anyone harm. And the ones I brought back would learn through humility to follow the righteous path. I liked Alys. She had a way of saying things.

But I have to ask you another question you can?t answer. Can I kill a man for his own benefit? I thought so, a long time ago, which is why I left them like that. I didn?t want to abandon them but ? but I think it was holier to kill them. So I killed them. Don?t look at me like that! You?re a robot, you know nothing about morality! I?m a good man! I?m a good man damn you!

I don?t want to tell you the rest of my story. I think, I want to be alone again. You?ve done nothing but take advantage of me! I want to watch the birds!

The recording robot watched stoically while the man in white backed away, face red with anger and resentment. The horrible winged thing strapped to his back pulled against it?s lashings and shouted a pure crisp magical note. The man, Percy, raised his gnarled staff and shouted ?Slow? calmly, like an ocean boiling just below the surface. And then, for minutes, there was only the picture of the wandering man lowering brutal strikes at speeds he should not be able to muster. And then the camera broke.

?You think he?ll be any good?? the man behind the robot said to his friend, positioned behind another small screen. The fellow took another deep pull from a cigar and returned to his work. ?He?s crazy enough. That?s a start.?


You know, I feel like I'm missing something in the character sheet. Was it always just Name Appearance, Personality and Weapons? Ah well, if anyone thinks of it just tell me and I'll add it in.

Oh, and it's good to see you back Crowghast! I knew you couldn't stay away (Its an addiciton they haven't built rehabilitation centers for yet. Though I'm sure the minute they do I'll be out living a healthy active life.)

And Lord Krunk: Nice intro. I feel bad though, I wanted to get the fight with Axel and Athena done before you revealed your RW4 character. Ah well. Rest assured I'm still working on it.
 

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All right, you know what, you've intrigued me. Nothing perks my interest like a war over ratings.

Name: The Gold King

Appearance: The Gold King is goldy-looking. He wears a gold suit, complete with a golden top hat, and has blond hair with a sparkly sheen to it, a bit like gold. His eyes, if you look closely, are also golden. That's probably a result of the contact lenses he wears. He carries around a gold-tipped walking cane, which conceals his primary weapon. He wears a gold cross on a chain around his neck.

Weapon: Concealed within The Gold King's walking stick is a sword (it's made of gold). In addition to this, he can unhook his cross from around his neck and twirl it around like a flail, or utilize it as a grappling hook (magical extendo-chain, short enough to be a necklace, but long enough to entwine an elephant's legs). He throws gold coins like shurikens as a means of long-distance combat.

Personality: The Gold King absolutely hates gold. The very sight of it makes him sick.
Pfffft.
No, seriously, there's nothing in the world The Gold King loves more than gold. He'll do anything he can to get ahold of it, including, but not limited to:
Assault
Murder
Thievery
Sale of stolen goods
Kidnap
Drug-dealing
Self-prostitution
...and the list goes on! He doesn't like people as a rule, and typically sees them as little more than a means to obtain more money. And what does he do with all the money? Nothing. Nothing at all. He's quite mad, you see.

"Money! Moneymoneymoney! Woohahahah!" The Gold King was amusing himself by skipping about his Golden Mansion, hopping about on all the Golden Furniture, while cooking some Golden Noodles. They hurt like hell on the teeth, but The Gold King just loved the concept of eating gold, so he stuck with it. An orphan had rung the doorbell not ten minutes ago asking for a christmas donation, and in his rage The Gold King had picked him up and thrown into a fridge. OF GOLD!!!
"Please sir, let us out..." The orphan pleaded.
"Not until you learn the spirit of christmas," The Gold King replied. "'Tis better to give than to receive, commoner. So give me all your wealth, and then we'll talk about your freedom!"
"What if oi were to tell you that me brother were standing behind you with a high-caliber rifle trained on yer back?" The orphan asked.
"Why, then I'd do this!" The Gold King replied, leant over backwards, stood on his hands and kicked the youth standing behind him in the chest. He athletically sprung off his hands into the air, unsheathed his sword and buried it in the youth's shoulder. Rather than the wonderful squelch noise that usually occurred when The Gold King stabbed someone, however, there was a nasty grinding sound, like metal scraping against metal.
"A robot, eh? Can't say I was expecting that," The Gold King muttered. "Just who the hell are you anyway, boy?" The orphan sprung out of the well and pulled off his face to reveal that he was actually a midget dressed like an orphan. He reached into his pocket and pulled out a tape-recorder, which played a message explaining the current situation.
"Paradise City, eh? And why the hell would I agree to something like that?" As an answer to The Gold King's question, the midget reached into his pocket and pulled out something that looked like a taser. He tapped the robot The Gold King was standing on, and in a flash the metal of it's body transformed into a shiny yellow substance. Gold...
"Hmmm... Yeah, alright. A taser that transforms any metal it touches into gold, eh? I'm sold! Okay, so when do we leave?"
"You're already there," said a voice behind him, and The Gold King turned around to see that his mansion had vanished. In it's place was a bar of some sort, which, judging by his previous instructions, he wasn't to leave. "I say, barkeep," The Gold King called to the man sitting behind the bar. "You wouldn't happen to serve molten gold, would you?"
 

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Mookie_Magnus said:
Question: Just as last time, the characters can be of any Genre we like, correct? There are no guidelines other than that they have to be original?
Yeah, you can make them anything or anyone you want, so long as thay haven't already been created (as in, in pop culture. You ouldn't have a Sarah Connor or Draco Malfoy fan-clone) or they're an author avatar (Mary Sues, pretty perfect in every way, all the characters go OOC around them and all that shit).

Just be creative, and you'll be set. Your character can be a magician, a supernatural entity, aregular guy, whatever.

Just a two tips for character creation though, from the finalist of RW2 and semifinalist of RW3:

1) Make your character interesting, and likeable. Make the judges want to read more about them. Make us all want to follow (and write about) your creation.

2) Don't make your character overpowered. Make it too easy, and it'll not only be no fun to write, but everyone will be able to predict your every move and easily anticipate the turnout. And the judges don't like that. Give your character a challenge, but at the same time don't make yourself underpowered.

That last time might seem hard, but it really isn't. Most of the time, a player will be able to work out a way to defeat their enemy. Just make sure it's a challenge, but not one you can't handle.
 

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Khedive Rex said:
And Lord Krunk: Nice intro. I feel bad though, I wanted to get the fight with Axel and Athena done before you revealed your RW4 character. Ah well. Rest assured I'm still working on it.
That's awesome. I really want to see what you wrote.

I read your character sheet briefly, and I can't help but think that Percy reminds me of a sort of mirror-image of Lex. I don't know if it was intended (as you didn't like his character), or that I'm reading it wrong, but I just thought I'd voice that observation.
 

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Khedive Rex said:
You know, I feel like I'm missing something in the character sheet. Was it always just Name Appearance, Personality and Weapons? Ah well, if anyone thinks of it just tell me and I'll add it in.
Strength/Weakness mayhaps?
 

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Just a quick announcement to say I'm no longer a contestant, but a judge. Perhaps another time.

The rafters snapped, and I dove for safety. Relative safety, anyway. The doorway flew by, and I managed to see the hallway behind me collapse into a horrible mess of drywall, smoke, and shingles. My helmet came off midair, and I crashed back first into the stairwell. The carpeting did me a favor, and it only hurt catastrophically. The momentum carried me down the stairs, vision spinning violently. Shoulder, ankle, arm, foot, wall, shoulder, back, leg, and I realized I was in a painful sprawl on the hardwood floor of the old house. I must've fallen all the way down the stairs. I felt a pair of hands wrap around me, and toss me over a shoulder. Good God, did it hurt. "Augh!" I screamed, by way of informing my carrier, but he didn't seem to care. He started a quick jog, and I heard the fire roar and the house creak. That was it, mission failed. I clipped the doorframe on the way out, and it hurt.

My vision was still swimming by the time I got out, and I watched as the flames claimed another victim from humanization. The entire building was going to collapse, and the whole department knew it. It was an old house, poorly constructed by modern standards, so collapse was assured the second the place caught flames. I was just happy to be laying down. My shoulder hurt like hell, as did my back, legs, arms, chest, head, and neck. The cement was cold, but I can't say I was too worried about it.

Vision swam by the time the EMTs got to me, and they managed to poke me in every possible place it hurt, and I got loaded onto a gurney and sent out to the hospital. The doctors were a little more kind with anesthesia, but everything still ached way more than it should. After what must've been a day straight of being awake and poked, the doc put me under morphine and let me pass out.

When I woke up, it was particularly dark. Most of the lights were dimmed, or off completely, and everything was quiet. I sat up, which hurt everywhere. But it was a more distant sore, rather than the active pain of a broken bone. My shoulder twitched in a way that suggested it was dislocated, which was further evidenced by the sling. I got up, and read my chart. It had been quite a few years since nursing classes in college, but the core of the message wasn't completely buried in medicalese. My right shoulder was dislocated, and I had very minor muscle damage on my arm, legs, and back. There was a warning flag for whiplash, though since I wasn't dizzy, I doubted that particular symptom.

I rolled my neck, and it cracked with the familiar habit from where I wrenched it when I was a toddler. Everything moved when I told it to roll, which was a good sign. My shoulder still hurt, but it seemed fine to me. I walked from the room, removing the sling long enough to shove my shoulder once. It made a ripping sound, the large crack of the bone being shoved by into place. The nurse at the floor's reception counter looked up in horror. "Please sir, don't do that!"
I tossed my arm back in the sling, feeling it rotate a bit. The relief was immediate, although I'd be lying if I said relocating it didn't hurt like hell. "It's alright, I've trained to do this."
She eyed me suspiciously, "Sir, that was an ant-"
"Anterior shoulder dislocation, of which I am a patient with frequent dislocations."
She glared, "Which means you know that the proper method means relocating by allowing the humeral head to be rolled back into place."
"Traditionally, yeah, but that puts undue stress on the rotator cuff. I'd rather risk the soft tissue, since that will actually recover faster, and more whole than the bone if something were to get damaged."
She frowned, "That kind of procedure is usually done with two people. And gently."
"I doubt you'd've been willing to help anyway. Besides, I'm already undergoing daily physical therapy, and I already have a medical sling for after the the shoulder reset. Unless you want to keep me here under general anesthetic, there's nothing you can do here that I can't at home."

She buzzed a doctor, who came and gave me the same schpeel. After going through the same song-and-dance, I got my release forms signed and went got a cab. The department paid for the ambulance and treatment, which is nice, and part of the reason I didn't stick around to rack up the bill. Even though working at the Fire Department had it's obvious perks, a lot of funding wasn't one of them. I tried to keep my bill as short as possible.

I rang the department, and got the answering machine. My watch told me it was nearly ten PM, which meant I probably should be in bed for work. I went to bed hoping my shoulder would feel better in the morning. Surprisingly, I had been right. The warm shower made it to where I almost couldn't feel the shoulder at all. Considering I could lift a cup to my lips during breakfast, I figured I wouldn't need the sling for too much longer.

When I got to work, I was lead immediately to the manager's office. He told me that had been my third workplace accident that year, which meant I was put under mandatory vacation. I had several weeks of vacation, two of which I was required to take. Even though I didn't want to, the contract was particularly ironclad when it came to workplace accidents. I spent the morning saying goodbye (and shooting the breeze) with the guys, and made my way home.

I don't spend much time in my kitchen, and most of it spent with my face curled into a scowl. I never liked cooking, nor did I like having enough time at home to do so. I pulled a little binder from the shelf beside the pantry and slapped it on the counter. Although my old man died at an early age, he left me an unhealthy amount of contacts from every profession. It meant that I knew several doctors, lawyers, nurses, government workers, and just about anyone I could want to know.

Across town, Marv was unhappy. Business was slow, and his sponsors were about to get up and leave him low and waterlogged. Travel agents couldn't work without contacts, which meant that he'd probably lose his business where it sat. His desk was a mess of papers, sentimental cards sent by customers, and a whole lot of bills buried under the rest of the crap on the desk. The folder on top was his biggest travel contact, a high-dollar travel agent that only managed to turn a profit by being sued, winning, and counter-suing for expenses and stress. The business model was high-risk, high-reward, and had worked out nicely enough to turn a small business into a racket.

This year's destination of choice was Paradise City, a corporate-owned city whose streets were paved in liquid gold and blood in equal parts. It was the kind of place appealed to the sort of crime lords and lawyers that built their thrones on top of equal parts corpses, torn down governments, and the collective weight of the dead or destroyed. Marv hated the place, and did his best to steer customers away from the guaranteed doom that "Paradise" City represented. Mostly so they could keep giving Marvin their money. Marv had fewer morals than he did wallets.

The phone on his desk rang, and it took him more than a few seconds to find it from under the canopy of papers, envelopes, and brochures on his desk. "Hello?"
"Marvin Palmer, my friend... We need to talk."
"...Russel?"
"Yes, Marvin. Listen, my assistant tells me you haven't booked a single customer on the Paradise City vacation all year." His voice dropped to something darker. Marvin saw fleeting shadows out of the front window, and he wasn't sure if it was a passerby, or a gorilla with a nail-studded baseball bat. "This makes me unhappy, Marvin. You know what happens when I'm unhappy?"
Marvin was about to answer that he didn't when he heard a blade rake against his office's front window. The text was easy to read from the inside. "You're Next."

"Don't make me unhappy, Marvin. Send at least one person this year, and I'll let you off easy."
The knife blade sunk into the window, the blade serving as the phrase's period. Marvin eeped, and slammed the phone down on the hook. He was running out of time, having already booked most of the seasonal vacation seekers. Marvin squeaked when the phone rang, again, and his voice sounded unsteady as he answered. "H-hello?"

My kitchen was dark as I listened to the phone ring, and said when I heard an answer. "Marvin Palmer? Hi, uh... This is Adam Walker. I'm Cliff's son."
"Cliff?" Marvin said, a mix of confusion and relief. "Didn't he die last year?"
"Yeah. I had his contact book. I got hurt in an accident at work, and I'm now on mandatory vacation. The doctors think I should get away from the house, and I figured I could use a long vacation. Something unusual, shake my life up a bit. Y'know?"
"Oh yeah, yeah. I have just the vacation for you, a nice placed called Paradise City. It's not a quiet town like this one, and they'll be plenty for you to do an see while you're there."
I was thinking something more beach-related, but maybe doing something new would make the mandatory vacation less dull than a palm tree and endless ocean. "Sure, that sounds good, how much?"
He read off a figure, and I wrote it down. Seemed reasonable, and was easily much cheaper than any tropical vacation. "Sounds fun, Marvin. Can you mail me the tickets?"
"Nonsense. Let's get you there tomorrow. You can come pick up your tickets this afternoon, we can have you in the air tonight."
"You sure?"
"Yeah, no problem. More vacation means more relaxation."

However, I was more suspicious than excited when I stepped off the plane into a country airstrip. The logic was that Paradise City didn't have any public airports, which struck me as a little odd. The completely automated airport also looked suspicious, as did the electronic monorail that was also completely automated. There wasn't another human in sight for miles. Even the captain of the plane had locked himself in a bulletproof cabin.

By the time I got into the city, I suddenly understood what the precautions were about. The terminal had burn marks into the polished steel, which would've just be unusual were it not for the sign of concussive explosions and bullet holes on every available surface. I even heard a bullet ping one of the windows, also bulletproof, as the monorail pulled away. I dove behind a steel wall at the terminal, discarding the sling.

In front of me, a column of steel hovered into view.

Why, hello there. Hope this security drone didn't startle you too much; can't be too careful, you understand.

Now, down to business. If you're listening to this recording, you either received my invitation or, by some freak chance, found this place on your own. If that is the case, I applaud you. In either case, let me welcome you to my city. I am Michael King, CEO of MasonTech Incorporated and unofficial boss of this little paradise.

Let me lay down something you need to know: you are not wanted here by anyone but me. If any member of the populace so much as glimpses you, you will be treated with lethal hostility. Luckily for you, I've designated The Gurney Wheel, down on the corner of 4th and Pennyworth, as a safehouse. All food and drink will be placed on my tab, and dear Mr. Timmoth won't bother you at all and can brew a rather spectacular margarita, should you be interested. You are to remain there at all times unless specifically contacted by me through Timmoth.

And don't try to learn more about me through him. He knows only what I want him to know.
My messages will arrive periodically. If I am correct in my assumption, you will not be alone. Treat the others in there with the utmost respect; any violence among you will result in a gas pipe conveniently bursting directly beneath the bar. In the meantime, sit back and enjoy yourself.

Welcome to Paradise City. The grass may not be green, but the girls are very pretty.


I blinked, and tried to process the message. "Uh... Okay. Hey bot, where's the Gurney Wheel?"
In response, it raised a robot arm and fired an armor piercing round where my head had been previously. It cut a hole through the 3-inch steel wall I'd be hiding behind. "Holy crap!" I yelled, cursing at my weak shoulder. "What the hell is up with this place?"
"You know how these things can be." The droid replied humorlessly, "Another day at work, another dollar in the pocket. That is the expression is, is it not?"
Another two shots pinged into the bulletproof glass of the bus stop's back, punching holes clearly through them.

I jumped, and grabbed the arm with the gun. I jerked hard to one direction, and wrenched it back. The robot reacted by firing twice, punching two thumb-sized holes in its own head. Spinning again, I managed to rip the joint out of the thing's arm, letting a bolt bounce harmlessly to the floor. The thing's response was to slam another phone book-shaped arm into my back. "Augh," I said, slamming the gun-arm like a bat into the robots head. It made a hollow throng! "Damn!" I shouted, turning to run. I jumped, foot catching the safety railing and flinging myself airborne. I didn't get far, but my fingertips slammed hard into the shingle of the nearby building. Flailing on a roof ledge wasn't conducive to further survival, especially since the locals were likely to start shooting if I stood still for too long. My legs swung once as I hoisted myself into the air. My shoulder burned, but it lifted the weight I needed it to.

On top of the roof, I started running. The sloped shingles weren't exactly the best place to do sprinting exercises, but it's a lot easier to run when not covered in multiple layers of thick nomex and carrying a bunch of heavy gear. I got to the tip of the roof, vaulting the point and sprinting full-speed downslope. On the last step, I jumped, and caught the roof of the adjacent house on my feet, still running. I wasn't sure if the robot could climb or chase, but I wasn't willing to find out.

At the end of the street, I jumped off the roof. The floor slammed hard, and I rolled awkwardly off of my left shoulder. I didn't want to risk doing it normally with my right shoulder injured. I took to an alley as soon as I could, legs burning with the sprint already. There was a raised fire escape at the end of the alley, and I wasn't sure what all was following me. However, anywhere was better than here. I took and experimental step on the wall, and jumped, fingers of my right hand latching onto the iron step and ripping the rust from the joint. The stairs fell with me, slapping explosively against the bare concrete and exploding a echo as loud as a gunshot out of the alley. If anyone hadn't known I was there, they did then. My right shoulder hurt, but standing still was a great way to die. I ran up the fire escape.

After taking a second to pull the stairs back up, I got to work on the fire escape's full height. The journey was monotonous, and painful. My legs were trying to give out on me, but I kept going despite that. I got to the top, and collapsed on the gravel that made up the roof. Between gasps for breath, I said, "Whoever decided that safety should be up fifteen flights of damned stairs sucks."
It took a few minutes, but I finally felt like I was beginning to get my breath back. I stood up, and took a second to look around. The city was particularly amazing, with interesting architecture all around the city. One of the most interesting things was a building across the alley which was over a small drainage ditch, maybe ten feet across. The building looked like a child's playground, with a bunch of thin poles keeping the thing up. The lip of the building to completely glass, but the rest of the poles were shaded by the jutting roof. It probably made for a really cool look from both the ground and while airborne. The result from the side made it look like a giant play-pen, completely with vertical poles, monkey bars, and any number of assorted oddities.

A small clanking started coming from below, almost like a gear grinding against its housing, or an old air condition that pings as it runs. I ignored it, in favor of seeing something across the ditch. Down the alley, I could see the reflection from the polished building, it looked like the sign for a small building. The sign was gaudy and yellow, but the reflection clearly read "The Gurney Wheel" on it. "Thank God," I said, turning to the fire escape. Down below, I saw the source of the pinging, the robot from earlier coming up the fire escape. I yelped and jumped back, just in time to see a column of fire fly from the floor below it. I could feel the heat from where I backed up, but at least I wasn't on fire. For now, anyway.

I realized that I couldn't even remotely take the thing out without a weapon, and it had, at the very least, a flamethrower on me. I turned to the building across the gap. It was at least ten feet away. "No way," I told myself, gravel spitting as I started to run. "Oh my God!" My legs stopped feeling rested immediately, and groaned audibly as I crested the lip of the building.

Everything slowed down as I leaped from the building. The wind roared, and I heard the mechanical hiss of the flamethrower igniting behind me. The wind whipped through my shirt, pants, and hair, and I could feel the heat of another spit of fire behind me. I flew, gaining incredible distance over the crest of the jump before I started to fall. I eyed a particularly pretty-looking parallel bar jutting brokenly from the overall contraption. I reached, and time sped back up as my fingers slammed home. "Okay... This is going to break..." I held on for dear life as the steel bar protested the weight. The support that held the bar, a metal clamp, began tearing from the building. "Oh God," I told it, reaching my arm for the clamp firmly secured to the building. It creaked, and I pulled hard, letting go of the bar. The bar fell, spiraling into the darkness. I slipped with it, managing to clasp down hard on a corkscrew pole. My legs swung wide from the vertical momentum, but I managed to keep hold. "Okay... Easy, Adam. You can do this." I followed the corkscrew down, carefully watching my handholds as I went.

The building seemed much less hand-hold friendly up close than it did across the gap. I looked around, and saw a few potential handholds. I eyed one suspiciously. "You're not going to break on me." I looked around, and saw a following vertical pole. The corkscrew was good since it had places for me to use my legs, but other than that, there was nothing for my legs to rest on. I wrapped my fingers around the horizontal bar between myself and my escape pole. The wind whipped wildly, and I could feel the draft from the alley way trying to rip me from the building and throw me to my death in the ditch below.

I took a deep breath, steeled myself against my nerves. "You can do this," I said to myself, letting my legs swing freely over the hundred-billion foot drop. I slowly began, arm by arm, traveling down the length of the pole, feeling the wind thrash violently against my legs. I flailed through the air, arms burning with exertion. The trip took a long time, the length of which was spent with my shoulder twitching occasionally in pain. I made a few more arm-lengths, and reached the end of the pole. Hanging there, I eyed the first mistake I'd made. The pole was at least three or four feet away from me. "Damn it," I told it, "you were supposed to be closer."

Above me, gravel showered into my eyes and hair. I looked up and saw the robot soaring through the air, coming to chase me to the ends of the Earth. "You've got to be kidding me." The robot grappled a vertical bar that rocked with its weight. The robot loosened its grip, and started to sink toward me. I saw the a small camera on top of the machine, a targeting camera most likely, start tracking my movements. I panicked, and held on for dear life. The machine pivoted, lanced through the air, and caught another free-hanging metal sheet, a decorative chime of sorts. I noticed a subtlety within the pinning mechanism, and knew immediately that it would fall. "Good jump, but bad move." The rigging snapped, and the robot plunged into the darkness, slamming support beams and metal pipes alike. I panicked when my nerves jumped. I had a feeling the pipe that was supporting me was about to fall.

I swung twice, feeling a screaming fear within my mind slowly build into panic. In a rush of adrenaline and panic, I flung myself across the gap. My back bowed as I flew, and I fell into the vertical pole in front of me. As I landed, crashing into the pole with my chest and arms, the pole above me collapsed. The metal flew in a dangerous arc, missing my head by centimeters. "Good God, when does it end?" I looked down at the drop below me. The pole lead at least a hundred feet straight down. "Just like at work," I told myself, between heavy breaths, and slid down the building. The rush of the wind roared around me, and I could feel myself gaining speed at a dangerous rate. I slowed myself, fingers gripping around the pole. My fingers hurt, but it beat accidentally launching off the base of a pole into the culvert below.

I reached the bottom, a curving sweep of the pole that lead into the glass tower of the building. I considered looking into the glass building, perhaps breaking in and getting out. Inside, I saw a security guard raise a submachine gun at me. I yelled, "Oh crap!" just in time to hear bullets crashing into the window. Which was bulletproof. He glared at me, but I suspected I shouldn't stick around. He raised a radio to his mouth, and I turned my focus elsewhere.

I scowled, and looked around. The playground look of poles had eased exponentially, leading to a shortage of places to go. I looked around spying a few concrete columns. They had light carving in them, which provided what looked like thin handholds. The columns were a good drop from me, and curve into glass sculptures at the top. It meant that the only handhold I'd get was halfway down the column, and wouldn't be very thick in the process. I looked around, hoping to spot another option, but that was as good as it got. And the columns were at least another ten stories off the ground, far too high to lead to the ground. So it was the end of the line for me. I looked back up the pole, considering looking for another way around. The pole was at least a hundred feet to the next best foothold, and way too tall for me to do on at all, much less now.

I laced my leg and arm around the pole, and hung tiredly. My arms all burned from overuse, which is no surprise given just how far I'd traveled on them. The city went on for miles, and it was difficult to imagine anywhere but the Wheel being a good places to settle down. My breath finally started returning to me. Inside the building, other guards were beginning to arrive and point at me. More were coming, I'd imagined. Looked like the column was it. All or nothing. I watched my handhold, gauged the distance, and jumped. Behind me, armor piercing rounds blasted through the window.

The world came into explosive focus as my hands hit the smooth concrete of a wall. I'd missed the handhold. I looked down in panic, seeing I was just above it by a few centimeters. My forward momentum died completely, and I started to fall. Hastily, I shoved my fingers into the slit and held for dear life. The resulting shock rocked up my arm, causing a sharp pain in my right shoulder. I screamed for all it's worth, and glass rained in splinters against my back. "Easy, Adam, easy..." I looked around, my legs bowed against the concrete column, and sought purchase for my feet. There was a foothold just below me, so I lowered myself the full length of my arm. It hurt, especially since it was my right arm holding the most of my weight, but I managed to grab my foot into the column and reclaim a hand-hold with my left.

The wind pushed against my back, an ever present reminder of the danger of my circumstances, and I started to lower myself slowly. I couldn't see any footholds below, so I rounded the corner on the column. To my relief, there was a building a few stories below. It was still a ways away, but a much safer drop that going to the ground. "Last jump," I said, heart racing, "easy as breathing."

I took to the air, falling for seconds before slamming into the roof of the building. I fell into a roll, momentum pushing my body flat against the sloped roof. The momentum gave out, letting me fall along the slope of the roof, over the lip of the building, and into the air. "Oh God," I said, centering myself and catching my center of balance. My feet managed to get under me just before the ground did, and my ankles and knees screamed with the shock of the concrete. I groaned, entire body feeling like one large bruise. Behind me, I heard the door open, "Welcome to the Gurney Wheel."
I started laughing, "No freakin' way." It hurt, and felt good, all at the same time. "I landed on the Gurney Wheel."
The barman lead me inside, and smiled as he closed the door to sanctuary. "Always a pleasure to have strangers drop in."

Character Sheet - Adam Walker said:
Adam Walker
5' 11" (180 cm)
157 lbs (71 kg)
24 years old

Although young, Adam has seen his fair share of injury and tragedy, both at the hands of the Fire Department. Although always a trouble maker, Adam spent his child and adult life climbing, both into and out of things he shouldn't have been in. Unsurprisingly, he's the only fireman that takes the pole both up and down at work. Although he's never really trained in any formal fighting styles, he boxes on the weekends with some of his friends from work.

Physically speaking, Adam is fit for his age and weight, bearing muscles on every part of his body honed from function more than any gym membership can provide. Accompanying his muscular build is a keen set of eyes, which have a particular talent for guesstimating the structural reliability of the things around him. It's gotten him out of a thousand scrapes in burning buildings, but has failed him catastrophically before. To wit, his mouth manages to spit line after line of nonsense, even during the aforementioned catastrophes.

Even during boxing, Adam isn't very "kill"-happy. He tends to wear out his opponents, dancing away from blows. His eyes help him there, spotting potential danger often without realizing it, which carries over into his instincts. Although he's largely more chicken than not, and will flee from danger, or at least dodge until he has a reliable opening.
 

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- Jacob Kaynard
- Height: 6 feet, 1 inch
- Weight: Approximately 131 lbs
- 27 Years old.
- Iq: 145
- Fears: Deep water, venomous insects, heights (ironic, given his preferred hobby)

The common consensus among his peers at the research institute was that Jacob was a genius. He could fix any mechanical problem and devise new machinations with a certain ease and grace. This inherent grace translated to Jacob?s real life as well, allowing him to move in a manner most swift and elegant. He used this aptitude for grace in his preferred hobby of parkour, which he picked up as a restless youth.

Jacob is rather underweight for his height category; due in parts to a relentlessly swift metabolism and an astounding inability to gain significant muscle mass. Despite a moderately low upper body strength level, Jacob has always had a modest aptitude for running, able to run a mile in 5 minutes and 30 seconds flat.

After a lifetime of enjoying games like Doom and the more recent Modern Warfare 2, Jacob has acquired an interest in firearms, which manifests itself in his enjoyment of hunting and shooting various guns at the local firing range. His aptitude for these activities is nothing extraordinary, though respectable. Eventually, he acquired a gun license and purchased a Colt M1911 (and a holster to match).

In general, Jacob prefers to flee from confrontation.


"So, have you decided where you?re gonna go?? inquired Ross.

?Eh, I dunno, I was thinking I'd just go to Hawaii or something," I responded listlessly.

?Pfft, Hawaii?? Ross scoffed, ?Everyone goes to Hawaii! C?mon man, you?ve got to do something new! Something spontaneous and exciting!?

?What?s wrong with conventional??

?Nothing, if you want to be boring.? he said, in an annoyingly self-satisfied tone

I simply responded, ?Well, maybe I?m just boring? and redirected my attention to the gearbox prototype that was perched upon my desk.

Throughout the day, Ross continued to badger me about my choice of vacation locale, peppering me with such comments as, ?C?mon, haven?t you ever wanted to do something exciting?? and ?The ladies love a man of action?

Exasperated, I eventually snapped, and asked, ?Alright then, where do you suggest I go??

He smugly responded, ?Seeing it my way, eh? Hmm, you could go to some crazy, uninhabited island off the coast of the Australian outback? No, no, not hardcore enough. How about this, lets plug a word into Google and send you to the first place that pops up??

?You?re shitting me, right??

Ross didn?t respond, too occupied with his efforts to dislodge me from my computer chair. Despite my resistance, Ross succeeded to displace me, sat down in my chair, and quickly navigated to Google.com on my computer.

?Alright, gimme a word.? Ross enthusiastically said

?No, this is stupid.?

?C?mon, don?t be a twat?

?Fine, um? how about ?Paradise???

?Eh, not very creative, but it?ll do? Ross replied disapprovingly

After a few short keystrokes, Ross exclaimed, ?Got it!?

?What?d you find?? I asked, expecting the worst

??Paradise City?, ?the place you?ll never forget??

Thinking about the woefully unoriginal catchphrase, I pushed Ross off my chair and looked over the site.
?Look! It even has a shooting range for gun nuts like you!? Ross noted, poking at the screen with his cheeto-dust laden index finger.

Brushing away the cheeto detritus left by Ross? finger, I read the phrase in question, which read, ?We guarantee that out shooting ?ranges? are like none other!?

?Why is the word ?range? in quotation marks??

?Nevermind that, look at this testimony from a satisfied customer? ?My trip to Paradise City was easily the most hardcore experience of my life.? That?s just what you need! Something Hardcore!? Ross exclaimed.

?Eeeh, Hawaii is still lookin good to me?? I mumbled

?Nonsense, this is just what you need!? Ross yelled as he called the number listed on the site, despite my many protests.

?Hello? Yes, my friend would like to visit Paradise City, and we were wondering how much it would cost. Mmhm. Yes. Oh, Really? Hold on a minute please.? Ross covered the receiver with his hand, and excitedly blurted out, ?Apparently a complete package trip, complete with travel and accommodation fee, is just $500!?

As I pondered why it was so cheap, Ross continued the phone call.

?Yes, we would be interested in purchasing this package. No, just one. Do you take American Express? You do? Oh good. One second please. ? Hey, Jacob, lemme see your American Express card.?

?Why?

?How else am I gonna pay for your trip??

?But I don?t know whether or not I actually wanna go on it!? I complained

?You?re going. Gimme your card?

?I?d like more time to thin-Hey!? I started, before Ross snatched my wallet from my pocket.

?Yes, thank you for holding. My credit card number is??

And with that, I was booked for a next-day flight to Paradise City.

The next morning, I rolled out of bed, got dressed, packed a bag, and hailed a taxi to the airport. While in the taxi, I looked over the confirmation email I received. ?Be at Gate 17 at SFO by 1:30, please do try not to be late.? It read.
As I began to think about what I may find in ?Paradise City?, the taxi driver informed me that I had arrived. After paying my fare and getting my bag from the trunk, I walked through the revolving doors that stood as the precipice between the airport and the place I had grown so comfortable with. Sighing deeply, I shuffled through the various parts of the airport, and eventually arrived at Gate 17. As he approached the gate, a stewardess dressed in a remarkably uninteresting grey uniform approached him.

?Ticket.? She said, her voice perturbingly monotone.

?Pardon me??

?Ticket.?

?Oh! Oh, I?m sorry, I?m a bit foggy in the mind right now ( awkward chuckle ), here it is.? I muttered as I handed her my ticket.

?First seat on the right.? She austerely responded.

?Um, thank you!? I uttered as I headed through the gate.

The plane was unusually small, almost unbelievably small. It had but one compartment, and exactly 16 seats. As I settled into my seat and buckled up, I was suddenly overcome by an irresistible wave of exhaustion, and drifted off to sleep.

I awoke to find the stewardess I encountered earlier standing over me, informing me that, ?We have arrived at our destination.?

Intimidated by the stewardess? oppressively austere nature, Jacob got up, grabbed his bag, and left the plane with all haste. Upon stepping foot in the sterile, colorless airport, I immediately noticed that something was out of place. As I wandered about, wondering where I was supposed to go, a small airborne droid hovered into view. My first instinct was to examine the droid closely, as I was mystified as to how such a machination could be hovering without rotors. As I observed the sleek little droid, it began to ?speak?, or rather, produce words from an unseen sound output system.

Why, hello there. Hope this security drone didn't startle you too much; can't be too careful, you understand.
Now, down to business. If you're listening to this recording, you either received my invitation or, by some freak chance, found this place on your own. If that is the case, I applaud you. In either case, let me welcome you to my city. I am-?


Before the recording finished, the droid suddenly fell to the floor in a flurry of sparks. As I knelt down to examine the now-grounded droid, I spotted a small red dot appear momentarily on the ground before disappearing. I had played enough videogames to know what that meant. Sniper. ?Or it could a jackass with a laser pointer, but given the crapped out robot before my feet, I?ll go with sniper.? I reasoned to myself as I dove behind a nearby wall.

Immediately after I took cover, a high-pitched ringing noise violated my ears as a bullet was deflected off the metal floor where I was standing a moment ago.

?Fuck!? I whispered to myself as more ringing noises filled the air.

I helplessly looked around my surroundings for an escape route that would leave me unscathed, but found nothing. Having lost all hope, I collapsed against the wall and sighed deeply. As I fell, I felt something strange pressing against my back, and when I turned around, found it to be a ventilation grate. Stifling my overwhelming urges to cry out in unadulterated elation at this apparent escape route, I quietly examined the grating. I managed to pry the grate off with my house key over next few minutes, after which I immediately crawled into the ventilation shaft, glad to escape this perilous situation.

I blindly crawled through the pitch-black ventilation shaft for what felt like an eternity, but eventually came upon a source of light. As I crawled toward the light, I found that it was a grate much like the one I had entered through. As I grew nearer to the grate, I felt a slight breeze wafting through it.

?Could this lead to freedom?? I asked myself as I pried the grate off the wall. Once I exited the ventilation shaft, I found myself to be immediately blinded, forcing me to avert my eyes until they adjusted. As I stood there with my eyes squeezed tight with pain, I took a deep breath, enjoying the fresh air that surrounded me. After a few moments, I sat down, opened my eyes, and began to plan my next moves.

?I could shimmy down that pole and look for help on foot? No, no, I?d be too exposed. I could? um? Got it! I?ll shimmy partway down the pole, then jump to the roof of the adjacent building, and look for help from the rooftops.?

I wrapped my legs and arms around the pole, and slowly slid down the pole by loosening my hold upon it in intervals. Once I reached an acceptable height, I took a deep breath, looked back, and flung myself towards the nearby roof. Landing in a graceful roll, I immediately broke out in a sprint towards the next rooftop.

After traversing a few rooftops, I stopped to catch my breath, crumpling in a heap on the gravelly surface. As I finally began to relax, a falling man caught my eye. I watched as the man hit the floor with a surprisingly audible crack. As I winced with a sort of sympathy pain, I watched as the no longer airborne man was ushered into a nearby building by a jolly looking man.

Intrigued, I asked myself, ?Could that door lead to safety?? Realizing that it was my best bet for the time being, I scampered down the side of the building and ran towards the mysterious doorway.

Upon arrival, the jolly looking man who I saw earlier simply smiled and said, ?Welcome to the Gurney Wheel.? As he held open the door for me.
 

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I've written the stat sheet, with a bit of complimentary backstory for your viewing pleasure.

She's darker than any other character I've ever written, certainly. But ambition is what signs me up for these competitions.

EDIT: It's on my first post in this thread, just under the OP.
 

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Hamlet 3.2.380-384 said:
Tis now the very witching time of night,
When churchyards yawn and hell itself breathes out
Contagion to this would: now could I drink hot blood
And do such bitter business as the day
Would quake to look on.

I woke up, which surprised me. I mean, it usually does--I have trouble sleeping, you see. I just can't seem to relax enough, and when I try to empty my mind it fills with words and symbols. It's hard to sleep when some love-mad Gatsby's hosting a party in your brain, you know? So I'm always surprised when I awake, because all I remember is falling deeper and deeper into a maelstrom of ideas and fever-brain philosophy.

This time was a bit different, though. I was surprised to wake up this particular time because I distinctly remembered some people trying to lynch me. Maybe it had to do with those guys I killed, I don't know, but they weren't too pleased about something. Maybe it was just my eyes. People tend to dislike my eyes.

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They say the eyes are the window to the soul. This is true, if you're willing to accept a somewhat limited definition of "soul." There are only three main features on the human face that are used to form expressions: the mouth, the eyebrows, and (of course) the eyes. For a small orb of jelly and fluid, the human eye can be remarkably expressive.

The eyes are the window to the soul. They can tell you what someone is thinking, whether their laughter is real or whether they're trying to evade the question or a thousand other things. With most people, the eyes reveal some small part of who they are.

Examining this man's eyes is like looking through two small holes leading directly into the darkest pits of Hell. They are so dark a brown as to be almost black, and close inspection reveals currents of amber and gold swirling in their depths. The colors seem to change with every moment, so you can never be sure of what you are seeing: the only certain thing is that whatever lurks behind those eyes is utterly and completely mad.

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Psychopath is a poor word, don't you think? People like to describe me like that. Psychopath. They don't really know what the word means, just that it sounds good on the news. I'm not a psychopath (I have that bit of information direct from a noted psychologist, in case you were wondering). A psychopath is someone who thinks he's received word from God to shoot the mayor because he's in cahoots with the reptilians who are secretly running things. Your average crazy, probably paranoid schizophrenic. You know the type. Newsmen love 'em.

Sociopath is closer, but still no cigar. A sociopath is someone who doesn't understand the morals of society. He'll lie outright just for the hell of it and not see anything wrong, and be completely astonished when everyone else does. Those people who call me a sociopath are definitely closer to the mark, and more likely to know what they're talking about, but they're still wrong. I know what I'm doing. And besides, your average sociopath isn't exactly an educated man. You'll most likely find him scrawling obscenities on vending machines in some back-alley shithole, working for minimum wage in a job he doesn't understand.

Now, I? I like to think of myself as an educated man. I'm intelligent, cunning, maybe a little romantic. I believe in the essential goodness of mankind, that courage and generosity will always come through in times of adversity.

Heh. Fuck that, eh? When you hold a knife to someone's throat, they don't sacrifice themselves so others may live. No, they scrabble for their own petty lives. Survival instinct, right? You've got to look at it scientifically.

Yeah, I'm lying again. You see? Fuck science. Science never did anything for me besides spit fumes in my face.

See what I did there? I was lying, but I knew that it was wrong. I understand morals and civic virtue and conscience. I'm no sociopath--besides, your everyday sociopath doesn't usually kill people. And I'm not exactly crazy, either.

They don't have any words for what I am.

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He sat up, taking his time, stretching languidly, working out all the little kinks in his neck and back. There were many--the men who had meant to hang him hadn't been particularly gentle. Viciously-aimed boots had been much in evidence.

So. Why was he still alive?

He recalled megaphones and sirens, the servants of the law coming to claim him for their master. The vigilantes hadn't been too happy about that. He grinned as he remembered the hate and the fear in their eyes, the desperate need for vengeance. It amazed him that killing three people could have brought a crowd of dozens hungry for his blood. Almost poetic, that. The police had to drop a few of them with nonlethals before they got the memo.

And now...he looked around. Armored car, it looked like, with him handcuffed to one wall, engine growling and road racing past unseen outside. Opposite him two officers in full combat gear sat still and silent, weapons not quite pointed at him. He offered them a lazy smile.

"Nice day for a drive, eh?" he said. They didn't respond.

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You know, I like the police. I respect them. They believe strongly in law and order, and they put their lives on the line to support that belief. And in doing so they turn themselves into the most justifiably paranoid sons of bitches you're ever likely to meet. Cops are required to assume that everyone is a criminal, and probably an armed one. Because the one time they don't, the one time they're the slightest bit lax, they're dead. If they see you reaching for your glove compartment, you're going to look up into the barrel of a .45, because if you're reaching for a gun they do not want to get shot. Best be careful around these police types. Those .45s don't have safeties.

Man, I love the police. Paranoid assholes, every one, and they're on the side of law. Makes it easier to foment a little anarchy if the law is a jackass.

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There was silence in the armored car, broken only by the sound of traffic and the engine. It lasted for a few minutes before the prisoner spoke once more.

"All right," he said. "Looks like you guys know who you're dealing with here. These handcuffs are damn near welded shut, aren't they? And you even found the cuff knives. Well done."

The armed officers watching him were silent.

"It's a shame, really," the man continued. "You seem like decent fellows. Kind of quiet, but that just gives you less of a chance to make a fool of yourself, eh?"

The officers said nothing, merely leaning their rifles slightly more toward the prisoner. He smiled lazily.

"You ever read--" he began, and it was about then that the grenade took out the driver's compartment.

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But then I sigh, and, with a piece of Scripture,
Tell them that God bids us do good for evil:
And thus I clothe my naked villainy
With odd old ends stol'n forth of holy writ,
And seems a saint, when most I play the devil.


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The armored car rocked onto two wheels, fire and smoke streaming out of the driver's compartment. When the wheels slammed back down onto the pavement another explosive shot punched out the front tires. The car skidded, sparks flying, and for a moment it looked like it was going to make it; but no, it flipped with a sudden twist that stunned the mind with its violence. Metal screeched across pavement, screams sounded, and all the while the prisoner in the back laughed, and laughed, and laughed...

He was still chuckling when the car came to rest. "Oh, you should have seen the looks on your faces!" he said. The officer with the broken neck said nothing: the other merely glared at him.

He rose with a smooth easiness that should not have been possible after the high-speed tumble that had thrown the other two occupants of the car out of their seats. The handcuffs fell neatly away from his wrists, twisted into fragmented pieces, and he flexed his fingers.

The remaining officer raised his pistol, and screamed as his fingers burned. The prisoner held a small knife, blood beading along its length, and the officer's weapon dropped from a nerveless hand.

"Surprise, surprise," said the prisoner. "This is a dagger I see before thee."

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Out of the jaws of death...

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The drone was waiting patiently for him after he kicked out the remains of the car's rear door.

"Identify," it said. "You are Nicklaus Dorcheld?"

"That I am," he said, grinning at the machine. "They call me Corkscrew Nick."

"Begin playback," said the drone.

The voice was scratchy, artificial and obviously a recording. "Why, hello there..." it began.

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Interesting scenario, isn't it? Some hotshot CEO brings me (me, of all people!) to a place called Paradise City, where apparently I'll be shot on sight everywhere but the bar. He's got nerve, I'll give him that, but good intentions? Why, absolutely! Mr. King has only the good of humanity at heart, right? And Brutus is an honorable ************.

This could be good.

Formal Name: Nicklaus Dorcheld

Common Name: Corkscrew Nick

Archtype: The Eloquent Killer

Psyche Details: Corkscrew Nick is a killer who has the mind of a deranged literary professor. He sees the world in symbols and deeper meanings, tends to quote Shakespeare and make other literary references at every opportunity, and doesn't take anything as seriously as he should. He is to be considered armed, dangerous, and hostile at all times: even when he appears friendly, he may attempt to kill because of the symbolic interpretation of an otherwise meaningless action. Moves rather like a cat, and is about as lazy as one. Believes death, and life in general, to be something of a joke, or not quite real. All the world's a stage, after all.

Physical Details: Corkscrew Nick is a small, wiry man with dark brown hair and dark, hypnotic eyes. His features are unnervingly angular, but not quite gaunt; the observer is nevertheless reminded forcibly of a grinning skull, an impression reinforced by the fact that he usually is grinning. He is unusually strong for his stature, and very, very fast when he wants to be. Other than that, he's a normal human being.

Accessories: Corkscrew Nick usually wears a black button-down shirt with a white skull embroidered on the left breast and rolled-up sleeves. Always has knives in the pockets of his jeans. Actually, he has knives pretty much everywhere.

Subject is to be treated with extreme caution.

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Lord, I really want to get in on this but I'm in quite the writing funk at the moment and the competition seems rather steep.

Still, I'll see if I can't come up with something on the plane ride today - not much else for me to do on there. Then I just have to cross my fingers that I'll have wireless access after we land.
 

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Name: Trent Hilthelay

Appearance: Trent is a tall, gaunt Caucasian with unusually sallow skin and almost comically prominent cheekbones. His eyes, though deepset and black, are bright and jolly. His black hair is cropped short and his strap goatee is carefully trimmed. An adjective that is commonly used by those asked to describe him is "neat," as he dresses very like an old undertaker (full black dress suit with tails), carrying nothing except a long black walking stick, capped with a ruby-eyed silver skull. He also wears a tall black tophat, completing the "Victorian gentleman/Classical undertaker" look.

Personality: Trent is a kindly soul, if a bit morbid, known around his neighborhood for taking in stray animals and keeping at least one generation of children out of the local gangs. His cheerful proclamations of death and doom often throw people for a loop. He walks with a long, easy gait, carrying himself with confidence and poise, tipping his hat to ladies.

Powers: Trent has a certain amount of control over the spirits and flesh of the freshly dead and can use certain types of magic (many fire and wind spells fall under his purview, notably, and he can occasionally pull off truly powerful magical stunts (such as the nigh-impossible school of lightning)). He is rarely taken by surprise due to the training of his (naturally quite powerful) sixth and seventh senses (the sixth being "I see dead people" and the seventh being "I sense a disturbance in the Force"). He has been said to move like a cat when aroused, which is rarely. He also has a high tolerance for temperature, only the most extreme heat and cold affecting him at all.
Trent sat in his high-backed chair and twirled his walking stick. It was moments like this that made him feel the full impact of his forty-three years. He considered the implications of the message he had just received.
Why, hello there. Hope this security drone didn't startle you too much; can't be too careful, you understand.

Now, down to business. If you're listening to this recording, you either received my invitation or, by some freak chance, found this place on your own. If that is the case, I applaud you. In either case, let me welcome you to my city. I am Michael King, CEO of MasonTech Incorporated and unofficial boss of this little paradise.

Let me lay down something you need to know: you are not wanted here by anyone but me. If any member of the populace so much as glimpses you, you will be treated with lethal hostility. Luckily for you, I've designated The Gurney Wheel, down on the corner of 4th and Pennyworth, as a safehouse. All food and drink will be placed on my tab, and dear Mr. Timmoth won't bother you at all and can brew a rather spectacular margarita, should you be interested. You are to remain there at all times unless specifically contacted by me through Timmoth.

And don't try to learn more about me through him. He knows only what I want him to know.

My messages will arrive periodically. If I am correct in my assumption, you will not be alone. Treat the others in there with the utmost respect; any violence among you will result in a gas pipe conveniently bursting directly beneath the bar. In the meantime, sit back and enjoy yourself.

Welcome to Paradise City. The grass may not be green, but the girls are very pretty.
He sighed. Standing, he strode to the security drone and tapped it's metal shell with the tip of his stick. "Very well. "Take me to your leader"...or his barkeep, as it were."

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PARADISE CITY, ONE WEEK LATER
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Trent panted and grinned. It'd been years since he'd had this good a workout. He lurked in the shadows of an alley, three blocks from his destination. It'd taken sacrificing the security droid and almost his hat to get this far. He had known, intellectually, that what the droid had played back in his London townhouse had been true. Now, however, he knew it at a much deeper level. He had been nearly killed about five different times so far and he felt twenty years younger. He grinned a little wider and stepped out, launching a thin line of fire down the street at a group of pursuers. It speared one of them and he chanted quickly, bringing the suddenly empty shell of flesh under his control, using it as a meatshield from the hail of bullets they sent his way. Covering his retreat with the zombie, Trent laughed aloud, gaily, as he approached the door of the Gurney Wheel. A man stepped out of it and smiled, holding it for him as he jumped in and cut his lines of control over the fleshy shell outside. He felt more than heard the door shut as he sat down into a chair hard, smiling widely and breathing heavily. He had made it.
 

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"Watching the city again, Gabriel?"

The gigantic crimson form in front of the priest seemed to nod its head. "It has always confused me," the priest continued. "How can you see anything from so high? Perhaps beings such as yourself simply have greater sight than us humans, but I can only see dots of light."

Gabriel spoke; a low, fierce monotone that seemed to come from his chest rather than his mouth. "I see enough, priest."

The priest smiled and moved closer. "If I've told you once, I've told you a thousand times; call me Terrance. It makes me uneasy to be referred to as just, 'Priest'."

Terrance looked out over the five-story ledge Gabriel was perched on. Indeed, between the fog and his general poor eyesight, all Terrance could see were pinpricks of light, pinpricks he presumed were the headlights of various cars. His mind, on the other hand...

"What do you see, Terrance? Spots of light dancing between the folds of the mist, or something more?"

"More, friend." Terrance replied. "Much, much more. great events transpire-"

"I'm sorry, but do you two do this every day, or just every time it gets foggy out?"

"Neither." Gabriel replied. "Very rarely does Terrance grace me with his company here, and I've never asked for his help before."

Behind Terrance and Gabriel, at the door to which led to the balcony, stood a freckled teenage boy. He wore a baseball cap, jeans, and a long coat. "Why're you doin' it now, then?"

"I feel uneasy." Gabriel replied.

"With good reason." Terrance said. "A man, a powerful man, is receiving an unwelcome message from an even more unwelcome visitor. You should aid him."

"Won't he be scared-"

"This kind of man does not fear that which he sees, but that which he knows." Terrance replied.

"What does that mean?" The boy asked.

"It means, Sam," Terrance continued. "That simply being large and threatening will not frighten him."

"Well, why wouldn't he be scared?" Sam asked.

"Why weren't you afraid of me when we first met?" Gabriel asked.

"Dude, I was, like, twelve. And you saved my life."

Gabriel nodded, and stood. "I shall see to this." Steam shot from the thick wires on his head as he soared off into the night sky.

Elsewhere in the city, a man in a dark room took apart a small piece of wood by slivers. A shape slowly formed in his hand; he thought of it as a guardian of some sort, though he did not know what it was.

He heard the machine coming before it burst into the room. "Tell your benefactor," he said, "I have no interest in this 'game' of his. I am content to live my days out as I am now."

A feminine voice issued from the machine. "Michael King, CEO of MasonTech Incorporated, wishes for you to appear at-"

"Tell the man I don't want to go to his damned game again; it cost me enough last time."

"That is most unfortunate. Mr. King has requested that in case of your refusal, you and your entire place of residence be incinerated. Are-"

The man heard something else, then, something like wind, but faster. Something coming to help him, perhaps?

"-sider?"

"No, I'm fairly certain. Thank you for the warning, though."

"As you wish. Incineration wi-"

The third party smashed through the man's window. "It's going to explode." The man said calmly. He heard metal clanking, an explosion, and felt an immense heat.

Steam shot from Gabriel's 'hair'. The heat had scorched his wings; they were glowing bright white.

"Sorry for the trouble," a raspy voice behind Gabriel said. "I had not expected anyone to come for me until just recently."

"It is fine." Gabriel replied, turning around. Sitting on a wooden stool, carving a wooden sculpture out of a block of hardwood, sat a man aged beyond what any human should be allowed to. He had neither hair nor a beard, and a dirty white cloth was wrapped around his eyes. "Who are you? What did that thing-"

"Who I am...is not importiant." The man said. "I am like your friend, The Priest; when my time comes, another will be born to fulfill the same duties, and so on, and so forth."

Gabriel viewed the room. "If you are like Terran-"

"See for yourself." the man said, holding up the sculpture. It was redwood, and exceedingly detailed; it was a wood carving of Gabriel blocking the incineration of the machine. "The Priest sees things of importance; I see things before they happen, regardless of my eyes." Gabriel began again, but The Old Man interrupted him. "A grave injury yes, and inflicted the last time I participated in Mr. King's game, a game I believe you should take part in. The place you should go is on the bottom of the sculpture; take it, please. If they ask, tell them the priest led you there. I doubt they will ask, but it will be much more convenient for me if they think me dead."

"Why-"

"Because if you don't, they will either kill me or capture me, and if they capture me, very bad things will happen."

"I don't understand this." Gabriel said, taking the sculpture.

"You aren't meant to. Now go."

Name: Gabriel
Gender: Indeterminate
Age: Unknown (at least seven)
Height: 6'8
Weight: 1107 lbs
Appearance: In full armor, resembles something like a Gundam. Without, more resembles a plain suit of armor with black rubber joints. Head has heavy wires that resemble dreadlocks; when under excessive stress, steam issues from these wires.

Gabriel's armor is dark red, highlighted with gold, and is capable of repeling most small arms fire. His armor covers most of his body, but leaves most of his larger joints (elbows, knees, armpits) exposed. While his back is mostly unprotected, he has two wing-like appendages that can act as a shield; these are much stronger than his armor, capable of protecting Gabriel from steel shrapnel, most explosives, and armor-piercing ammunition.

Description: Gabriel is a Bio-mechanical life form. Most nutrients he gains through a form of photosynthisis; however, he cannot gain calories this way, and can consume solid and liquid nutrients (he is particularly fond of avacados).

Gabriel has several vital fluids running through is body; a thick, light blue fluid inicates a crack in his exoskeleton, a much thinner, semi-transparent green fluid indicates a deeper wound. A black, grainy fluid indicates joint wounds. The blue fluid carries nutrients throughout his body (and conducts photosynthisis) the lighter green fluid is a coolant, and the black fluid is his joints.

Gabriel moves by coursing an electromagnetic current through the black fluid, expanding it. If hit in a joint in such a way (with an edged weapon, perhaps) the liquid will spill from the joint and he will be unable to move it.

The weapons on his forearms and thighs aren't as durable as the rest of his body; striking them correctly will cause immense pain.

Abilities: Gabriel is a capable hand-to-hand fighter, and is studying several martial arts. His "wings", though unknown means, are capable of flight; Gabriel has traveled at the speed of sound in such a way (although only shortly, and it left him exhasted for days). They are partially covered in metal "feathers" that can be projeced with enough force to rip apart an armored police van. Collapsable silver tubes on his forearms and thighs can project energy blasts capable of leveling buildings; distaining violence, Gabriel usually only uses them to stun or scare.

Gabriel is much stronger than most men; he can bench-press 700 lbs. Gabriel is also resistant to most conventional weaponry (being made of metal and all).

Gabriel's physichal presence is extremely intimidating.

Personality: Gabriel is best described as fierce; he does not speak often, and does not speak loudly when he does. He remains mostly isolated; the only people he talks to on a regular basis are a priest at the church he lives, Terrance, and Sam, a boy he rescued at a young age.
 

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I'll have a little something ready tommorow or the day after. I'll be back to my own house and computer then.
 

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Name: White Space
Appearance: Mr. Space is smiling man with a white suit, white tie and white pants. Eyes are a deep brown and his eyebrows are often raised, as if surprised. His hair is hidden, snugly tucked under a white bowler hat. He has a constant smile on his face, though whether this is a friendly or threatening depends on the feelings of the person he?s staring at; Sort of an optical illusion really. However, his build is very non-threatening; he seems almost too thin to move and carries a pearl cane around to assist him in strenuous motion.
Personality: Mr. Space is a mysterious being who walks about with a constant smile on his face. Little is known about him since he often moves around too quickly for any legend to spread about him. His cheerful proclamations of death and doom often throw people for a loop. He speaks quietly but intelligently and tries to be friendly when the opportunity arises.
Powers: Mr. Space, as mentioned before, is neither a strong man, nor an able fighter. His true strength comes from a familiar that he channels through him. The spirit travels freely through his arms and springs out freely through his will. He can?t fire it out of his hands, rather he builds up the familiar in his body like an aura so he can manipulate gravity, time, and speed within the realms of his area.
Strengths: Close range combat, can warp the fabric of time and space within the field. Expands at an initial rate of 2 feet per second, eventually maxing out at about 13 feet around him. In his young age, he used to have 100 feet range, but his age has weakened his powers. Time has given him masterful control over the being.
Weaknesses: Limited mobility, exhausted quickly. The powers take quite a deal out of him and too strenuous exercise will kill him. His adventuring days have given him general heart problems.
Bio: At 18, Landon Parker start traveling as the sidekick of a globe-trotting archaeologist. After two or three adventures, the duo found a large tomb warning the presence of curses and powers within. Parker couldn?t remember his name, let alone what happened, but his mentor was lost and his body was occupied by a cursed spirit and unusual powers to alter time and space. His smile is a forced source of the curse and his name was the title of the spirit in life and the only moniker he has left.

White had just finished packing all of his stuff into the suitcase. An extra shirt, an extra pair of slacks, a few papers, etc. It couldn?t have been more than 15 or 20 pounds, but White still had to wrap both his arms around it to keep it off the ground. If he could scratch some extra cash together, he ought to get a weight set or something. There?s weak and then there?s dead from the neck down? and with each passing day he found himself too close to the latter.
He managed to find a map and planned on going down to Louisiana for a week or two. Might be able to do some good there? He considered using his powers to make the walk down country a few minutes, but the being always seemed to get him into trouble so he decided against it.
White, and you accepted the trouble with the power, The being responded without tone, his loud thoughts ringing through his mind. White flashed his grin a little brighter, though he couldn?t argue. Too long ago, young and foolish, he had cursed himself with this creature and he had spent 50 years trying to figure whether it was a demon or an angel. Or maybe an alien. Some kind of parasite. Or maybe this war the afterlife and he was just blindly running around while the voice forced him to go insane.
White, now is not the time to day dream. T?was true, he had to admit. In his absent-minded age, he had wandered down a dark alley at a bad time of night. Several young men had stopped in the alley, probably to help him find his way out.
?Give us what?s in the suitcase, old man.? Or not? He held his hand up and light seemed to emanate from his fingers. One had a bat, one had his fists, the last had a pistol. Now, that the demon was free, it began to flow through him. His control began to grow.
?Nice trick. Get him, Omar.? The one with the bat stepped back, ?You get him, he?s freaking me the fuck out.? The one empty-handed stepped forward sighing and slammed White against the wall. White?s grip almost slipped but he managed to retain his arms around his precious cargo. ?I?m not fuckin? around here, old man. Hand it over!?
White, the time has come. The teen?s fist surged forward toward his face. His fist hurdled forward when suddenly it stopped inches from White?s face. White?s smile remained shining on his face. The teen took a step back confused and surged forward to hammer him again. Without his grip on him, White disappeared from his spot and the thug?s hand slammed against the wall. ??the hell?? A fist flew through the air and a haymaker crushed the thug?s head against the concrete. A punch from a seventy year old man is a bit more effective at 155 miles an hour. Omar finally decided to step forward and swung forward with the bat. Suddenly, the bat dropped out of his hands and his back arched. ?AHH! Fucking thing weighs a ton?? Another fist across the skull. Bam, splat.
The last one didn?t move. He merely cocked the gun and pointed it forward. Sweat trickled down White?s face and his hands began to droop with exhaustion. He once had better energy over his powers, but now, he could only manage a few powers here and there. He was too exhausted to spread his field around the man with the gun and even then, it would?ve killed him to stop the bullet. ?Drop the suitcase.? The suitcase clattered against the ground and most of his clothes spilled out onto the cold wet ground. Maybe the young man would see nothing of value and let him leave. ?Now, get the fuck outta here.? He ran away as fast as his legs could carry him. He forced his way down the alley, turned quickly and slid on the ground. He cursed himself with a smile for how he had aged. Fifty years ago, hell five years ago, he would?ve been able to massacre those hoodlums. He needed?something?he needed?how long was there a giant fence near the city?
He stared up at the gigantic city in front of him. He must have used the being to get away faster than he thought. He felt awful but he was more puzzled by the presence of a cornucopia of buildings that appeared in front of him? He turned quickly as a cold hand whipped across his shoulder and forced him into the city as an audio file played behind him.
Clapping his hands, an armed droid rolled into the room and stopped, facing the two.
*whrr, chk*
[INITIATING DIALOGUE PROTOCOL. REPLAYING RECORDING BY MICHAEL KING.]
Why, hello there. Hope this security drone didn't startle you too much; can't be too careful, you understand.
Now, down to business. If you're listening to this recording, you either received my invitation or, by some freak chance, found this place on your own. If that is the case, I applaud you. In either case, let me welcome you to my city. I am Michael King, CEO of MasonTech Incorporated and unofficial boss of this little paradise.
Let me lay down something you need to know: you are not wanted here by anyone but me. If any member of the populace so much as glimpses you, you will be treated with lethal hostility. Luckily for you, I've designated The Gurney Wheel, down on the corner of 4th and Pennyworth, as a safehouse. All food and drink will be placed on my tab, and dear Mr. Timmoth won't bother you at all and can brew a rather spectacular margarita, should you be interested. You are to remain there at all times unless specifically contacted by me through Timmoth.
And don't try to learn more about me through him. He knows only what I want him to know.
My messages will arrive periodically. If I am correct in my assumption, you will not be alone. Treat the others in there with the utmost respect; any violence among you will result in a gas pipe conveniently bursting directly beneath the bar. In the meantime, sit back and enjoy yourself.
Welcome to Paradise City. The grass may not be green, but the girls are very pretty.

White?s teeth seemed to shine a bit brighter at the prospect of a chance to feel a bit younger. He got out of the way of the security drone and began to walk next to him. White, I?m not sharing a body with you so you can pound a plethora of people younger than- White stopped listening a moment to take in his surroundings. What a beautiful day to start up again?

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