[HEADING=1]AAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHH[/HEADING]icame said:
*Shivers*

Okay, okay, I put it out of my system now. But damn, that is scary.
[HEADING=1]AAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHH[/HEADING]icame said:
*Shivers*
Sweet toasted Jesus, that's in another league of its own!icame said:
Yeah... as you know, I don't write them, and I don't actively look out for them. So really, everything is just by chance, if I find a creepy thread on one of the forums I frequent, and even then, I need to find a story that hasn't been posted in this thread, which, this thread being 38 pages long is pretty hard. Also, the story needs to be good, so, it's hard to find stories, or even pictures worth being put in this thread.Quiet Stranger said:Hey David G, give us more stories, you're the best for stories
Very, very cool dude. Keep contributing OC people (I'd write some myself, but I suck at writing).Ossifer said:Don't look back. Never turn around, because if you can see them, they can see you.
Don't run either. They notice quick motions.
I glance at my shoes and resist the urge to bite my nails.
Emma notices. "Are you sure you want to do this? We could always go back home..."
Her voice holds a note of false concern. It's a loaded question, just like always.
"I'm definitely sure," I say. My voice is unwavering. "It's straight down the hall, then through the big doors on the left, right?"
She nods, almost hiding her smirk, and unlocks the door. It creaks open, revealing nothing.
I breathe in deeply, and try to stop thinking about what could be inside. It doesn't work, but I take a leap of faith and walk in anyway, before Emma tries to "reassure" me.
I hear the door shut behind me, but I can't resist peeking back. It's locked. The only way out now is down the hallway, on the left.
My eyes adjust to the darkness, but the murky shapes emerging around me only make it worse. I step tentatively, shuffling my feet. My breathing is quiet. I wonder if anyone can hear it. There could literally be anything in here. My body might not be found for years.
My hand brushes against something moist, and I jerk back. My heart pounds. I squint into the darkness. I whirl around. Nothing's there.
There are so many doors. The windows are papered over. I can't see into the classrooms, but I swear something breathed inside.
I walk past some lockers. Some of them hang open at odd angles. I see a decayed hand protruding through one, jammed tight in the opening.. I blink, and it's gone. Or is it really gone? Maybe it just got pulled into the locker. By something else.
Something that is now behind me, in the dark, dark, hallway.
Click.
It's behind me.
Click.
I walk faster. Maybe it's just a clock. Maybe it's an echo. Oh god, let it be a clock.
Click.
My skin goes cold and I run. The walls rustle softly, like wingbeats. There's something wet on the floor. I slip, but drag myself up, sobbing.
Click click click.
I hear harsh breathing behind me. I sprint faster. The breaths rasp and gurgle. Like a drowning person. Like laughing.
Down the hallway, on the left. I can leave, go home, and hide under the blankets. Easy as pie.
Click. Click. Click.
The noises slow down, and I glance behind me. The hallway is empty.
I see the doors. Practically sobbing with relief, I shove them open. I gulp deep breaths. I'm outside. I'm safe. It's alright. Nothing was there.
Emma comes around the corner of the schoolhouse. The shadows thrown by a streetlight distort her body, making her look... odd.
She steps closer, and she's Emma again, the girl I've known since kindergarten. Still a bit shaky, I smile at her.
Emma grins back, her teeth shining. "I assume you didn't die?"
"Not much," I reply. "You?"
Emma's eyes glitter brightly, like a cat's. "So nice," she replies, "So nice of you to inquire."
She makes an odd noise with her tongue, and my eyes widen.
ohgodno-
Click.
I wrote this a while ago. I hope you enjoy it and that the spoiler tag works. Keep the scares coming people!
Also, I'm pretty sure that this is something painfully obvious, but what's the deal with the days thing?Mcupobob said:I really wish I had left that fucking light switch alone. Who would have thought the flick of a switch could mean the difference between life and death. Actually everyone?s thought that. That?s why I turned it on. Stupid little rituals that we take from childhood. The light will chase the monsters away, the blanket over your head will save you from the boogie man. And you just get more of these rituals as you get older. As long as you lock the doors and turn on the home security system, you can rest your head happily in your cozy little fortified home. No killers or psychos, monsters or boogie men.
But it doesn?t work. None of it. We always slip up some how. The one time you forget to lock that door. That?s when they get you. I would have been sound asleep if I hadn?t been woken by the loud slam as the front door blew open. I stumbled out of bed and down the hall to see it swinging back and forth. I moved quickly down the hall to secure it. A moment of panic swelled inside of me. My home felt like a crime scene. It wasn?t my safe little sanctum anymore.
Despite the overwhelming feeling of intrusion, there was no sign of disruption. Just the door. Just my careless mistake. I couldn?t comprehend it at first. It had to be a burgler or some psycho. I looked around the rest of the house. Checking every cupboard, every crevice. Nothing. I felt stupid but relieved. I just wanted to get back to bed, to forget this whole embarrassment. I flung myself back down on my bed, closed my eyes for just a second. I sat back up. There was no way I?d fall asleep unless I double-checked that I locked the door this time. I mean I was sure I had done it this time but I felt this was justified paranoia.
I got to the door and twisted the handle roughly about a dozen times, each time feeling the resistance of the lock. I smiled. Safe. I turned on my heels to go back to bed. But it was just a glimpse, a flicker of something in my peripheral vision that sent me swinging back into a panic. A shadow from the kitchen. I rushed in only to be confronted by my normal kitchen, bathed in moonlight. I sighed, questioned my sanity and decided that this, the longest night of my life must end. I went towards the bedroom once more. Another odd shadow crossed my path. As a shiver travelled down my spine, my tired mind braced apathetic denial and decided that it was probably the neighbours cat passing by the moonlit window.
I sat wide awake in my bed. Trying to lull myself to sleep. Counting in my head until I might eventually nod off. But everytime I closed my eyes that feeling of intrusion was still there. The hands of something unseen looming above my head. Every creak and every shadow filled my mind with the dread of my childhood. Those nights after being tucked in by my parents. Those same fearful thoughts of lurking terror. But it was nothing? right? More creaks. More movement in the shadows. I turned and pushed my face into the pillow. I felt something brush passed my foot which stuck awkwardly out from under my blanket.
I jolted upright, looking deeply into the darkness. Swirling shadows. The monsters. The boogie men. I felt around sheepishly for my phone. The dull light of the screen could put me at ease. Nothing on the nightstand and when my fingers roamed around the edge of the bed, instinctively I retracted them for fear of the unknown. I was alone but in the shadows I saw them, the monsters. Inky abominable beasts.
It was the only thing I thought could help me. I lunged from the bed directly at the switch. My palm slammed down on it and the room erupted into light. My eyes burned momentarily and I glanced round the room. Empty. Safe. Just paranoia. I shook my head and hit the switch once more. Climbing into bed in the pitch black. No shadows without my nightvision. But now I hear them. I can?t see them now. I don?t know what they want but I know I can?t leave. The rituals have failed. They?re on the other side of this blanket and all I can do now is hope that they?re gone in the morning.
With love and fear - Mcupobob
70 Days...
I'm counting down the days in till the one year anniversary of the scary thread. Haven't been able to update it daily though so thats why it changes only every couple of days. Going to try and plan something but I have no ideas at the moment.David_G said:Very, very cool dude. Keep contributing OC people (I'd write some myself, but I suck at writing).Ossifer said:Don't look back. Never turn around, because if you can see them, they can see you.
Don't run either. They notice quick motions.
I glance at my shoes and resist the urge to bite my nails.
Emma notices. "Are you sure you want to do this? We could always go back home..."
Her voice holds a note of false concern. It's a loaded question, just like always.
"I'm definitely sure," I say. My voice is unwavering. "It's straight down the hall, then through the big doors on the left, right?"
She nods, almost hiding her smirk, and unlocks the door. It creaks open, revealing nothing.
I breathe in deeply, and try to stop thinking about what could be inside. It doesn't work, but I take a leap of faith and walk in anyway, before Emma tries to "reassure" me.
I hear the door shut behind me, but I can't resist peeking back. It's locked. The only way out now is down the hallway, on the left.
My eyes adjust to the darkness, but the murky shapes emerging around me only make it worse. I step tentatively, shuffling my feet. My breathing is quiet. I wonder if anyone can hear it. There could literally be anything in here. My body might not be found for years.
My hand brushes against something moist, and I jerk back. My heart pounds. I squint into the darkness. I whirl around. Nothing's there.
There are so many doors. The windows are papered over. I can't see into the classrooms, but I swear something breathed inside.
I walk past some lockers. Some of them hang open at odd angles. I see a decayed hand protruding through one, jammed tight in the opening.. I blink, and it's gone. Or is it really gone? Maybe it just got pulled into the locker. By something else.
Something that is now behind me, in the dark, dark, hallway.
Click.
It's behind me.
Click.
I walk faster. Maybe it's just a clock. Maybe it's an echo. Oh god, let it be a clock.
Click.
My skin goes cold and I run. The walls rustle softly, like wingbeats. There's something wet on the floor. I slip, but drag myself up, sobbing.
Click click click.
I hear harsh breathing behind me. I sprint faster. The breaths rasp and gurgle. Like a drowning person. Like laughing.
Down the hallway, on the left. I can leave, go home, and hide under the blankets. Easy as pie.
Click. Click. Click.
The noises slow down, and I glance behind me. The hallway is empty.
I see the doors. Practically sobbing with relief, I shove them open. I gulp deep breaths. I'm outside. I'm safe. It's alright. Nothing was there.
Emma comes around the corner of the schoolhouse. The shadows thrown by a streetlight distort her body, making her look... odd.
She steps closer, and she's Emma again, the girl I've known since kindergarten. Still a bit shaky, I smile at her.
Emma grins back, her teeth shining. "I assume you didn't die?"
"Not much," I reply. "You?"
Emma's eyes glitter brightly, like a cat's. "So nice," she replies, "So nice of you to inquire."
She makes an odd noise with her tongue, and my eyes widen.
ohgodno-
Click.
I wrote this a while ago. I hope you enjoy it and that the spoiler tag works. Keep the scares coming people!
Also, I'm pretty sure that this is something painfully obvious, but what's the deal with the days thing?Mcupobob said:I really wish I had left that fucking light switch alone. Who would have thought the flick of a switch could mean the difference between life and death. Actually everyone?s thought that. That?s why I turned it on. Stupid little rituals that we take from childhood. The light will chase the monsters away, the blanket over your head will save you from the boogie man. And you just get more of these rituals as you get older. As long as you lock the doors and turn on the home security system, you can rest your head happily in your cozy little fortified home. No killers or psychos, monsters or boogie men.
But it doesn?t work. None of it. We always slip up some how. The one time you forget to lock that door. That?s when they get you. I would have been sound asleep if I hadn?t been woken by the loud slam as the front door blew open. I stumbled out of bed and down the hall to see it swinging back and forth. I moved quickly down the hall to secure it. A moment of panic swelled inside of me. My home felt like a crime scene. It wasn?t my safe little sanctum anymore.
Despite the overwhelming feeling of intrusion, there was no sign of disruption. Just the door. Just my careless mistake. I couldn?t comprehend it at first. It had to be a burgler or some psycho. I looked around the rest of the house. Checking every cupboard, every crevice. Nothing. I felt stupid but relieved. I just wanted to get back to bed, to forget this whole embarrassment. I flung myself back down on my bed, closed my eyes for just a second. I sat back up. There was no way I?d fall asleep unless I double-checked that I locked the door this time. I mean I was sure I had done it this time but I felt this was justified paranoia.
I got to the door and twisted the handle roughly about a dozen times, each time feeling the resistance of the lock. I smiled. Safe. I turned on my heels to go back to bed. But it was just a glimpse, a flicker of something in my peripheral vision that sent me swinging back into a panic. A shadow from the kitchen. I rushed in only to be confronted by my normal kitchen, bathed in moonlight. I sighed, questioned my sanity and decided that this, the longest night of my life must end. I went towards the bedroom once more. Another odd shadow crossed my path. As a shiver travelled down my spine, my tired mind braced apathetic denial and decided that it was probably the neighbours cat passing by the moonlit window.
I sat wide awake in my bed. Trying to lull myself to sleep. Counting in my head until I might eventually nod off. But everytime I closed my eyes that feeling of intrusion was still there. The hands of something unseen looming above my head. Every creak and every shadow filled my mind with the dread of my childhood. Those nights after being tucked in by my parents. Those same fearful thoughts of lurking terror. But it was nothing? right? More creaks. More movement in the shadows. I turned and pushed my face into the pillow. I felt something brush passed my foot which stuck awkwardly out from under my blanket.
I jolted upright, looking deeply into the darkness. Swirling shadows. The monsters. The boogie men. I felt around sheepishly for my phone. The dull light of the screen could put me at ease. Nothing on the nightstand and when my fingers roamed around the edge of the bed, instinctively I retracted them for fear of the unknown. I was alone but in the shadows I saw them, the monsters. Inky abominable beasts.
It was the only thing I thought could help me. I lunged from the bed directly at the switch. My palm slammed down on it and the room erupted into light. My eyes burned momentarily and I glanced round the room. Empty. Safe. Just paranoia. I shook my head and hit the switch once more. Climbing into bed in the pitch black. No shadows without my nightvision. But now I hear them. I can?t see them now. I don?t know what they want but I know I can?t leave. The rituals have failed. They?re on the other side of this blanket and all I can do now is hope that they?re gone in the morning.
With love and fear - Mcupobob
70 Days...
My breakfast is now on the floor. Damn you sir. Damn you and your horribly scary post.icame said:
*Shivers*
And that, my friends, is what I do at the weekends.classygangster said:My friend told me this story, I don't know where he got it from, thou I do know it isn't his.
So, this girl has a dog that sleeps in her room, and every night before she goes to sleep she sticks her hand out from the covers and it licks her hand. One night she gets up to go to the bathroom. She finds her dog dead in the sink, with the words 'Humans can lick hands too' written in blood.
What words do you want copy and pasted and why?TimtheBigDaddy said:Can you copy paste the words into a comment please? I really want to read what the writing said. I've already seen the thing and it was stupid.