The Story of the Seven Deadly Sins (Closed, Started)

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Ruedyn said:
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There we go.
VonKlaw said:
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Let me know what you think (preferably in PM) and let me know if I need to change anything.
cori said:
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Done, hopefully
Terratina. said:
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There it is. Be gentle. :p
roushutsu said:
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Hope this works for ya.
Quintley said:
This seems like a really interesting concept!
Let me know if you want me to make adjustments (PM preferably)

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Ok this is checking to see if you all are still interested, if you are then please respond in the forum or via PM. If everyone is still interested then I'll put together a gluttony sheet so we can begin.
 

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IFS said:
Ok this is checking to see if you all are still interested, if you are then please respond in the forum or via PM. If everyone is still interested then I'll put together a gluttony sheet so we can begin.
'Course I am! >:D
 

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IFS said:
Ruedyn said:
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Ok this is checking to see if you all are still interested, if you are then please respond in the forum or via PM. If everyone is still interested then I'll put together a gluttony sheet so we can begin.
Still here, being greedy.
 

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IFS said:
Ok this is checking to see if you all are still interested, if you are then please respond in the forum or via PM. If everyone is still interested then I'll put together a gluttony sheet so we can begin.
Still here and interested.
 

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Ok this is checking to see if you all are still interested, if you are then please respond in the forum or via PM. If everyone is still interested then I'll put together a gluttony sheet so we can begin.
Yes still interested.
 

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Ok this is checking to see if you all are still interested, if you are then please respond in the forum or via PM. If everyone is still interested then I'll put together a gluttony sheet so we can begin.
Yep! Been waiting and ready!
 

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Apologies, I am still very interested but I will be away for a week (without internet access, gasp) starting at the end of this week and I don't want to let you guys down so I'm afraid I'll have to pull out.
 

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cori said:
Apologies, I am still very interested but I will be away for a week (without internet access, gasp) starting at the end of this week and I don't want to let you guys down so I'm afraid I'll have to pull out.
Honestly, I would prefer if you stayed. A week of absence could be explained in-game, and I have a feeling the best thing to do would be to get everyone together now, and start.

So, if you want to keep in, and don't mind making (or me making) an excuse for your absence, then we're good to go. Your character is pride, after all, she might not be interested in going along with the rest of the group at first, thinking they're below her, or something similar.

As I said, it's up to you.
 

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Sin: Gula

Name: Gluttony/Gula

Appearance: He has dark hair which is rather lengthy and unkempt, as well as fair amount of stubble on his face. His eyes have a perpetually hungry look to them, and he is clearly well fed to the point of being somewhat fat, though his face remains striking and charismatic. His burden is on his waist as an overly tight belt with a golden gem in the buckle, he can't seem to get it to loosen even though he fiddles with it constantly.

Personality: He is obsessed with eating, not just the act of it but the sensations it brings with it, and in the end many of his actions lead to the simple goal of obtaining something to eat. He is very charismatic and tries to accrue followers whenever possible so that they might aid him in his goal, and he is not above screwing people over, or even killing them if it suits him. He likes to claim to be above it all, though it is not hard to make him lose his temper.

Power: All of his senses are heightened with the exception of taste which is so diminished that everything tastes foul and ashen to him. He can still smell the enticing aroma of food, or see the juices glistening on a steak, but he cannot enjoy the act of eating. His eyesight is greatly enhanced both far away and up close, magnifying what he sees if he wishes it, or letting him see as though he had a telescope, his sense of smell is like that of a bloodhound and his hearing can detect the faintest whisper from twenty yards away.

Backstory: Gula was always an oddity in his family, the small dark eyed child had little trouble getting his way but what he wanted was rather simple, new things to eat. This fascination grew in him as he aged, and he began to become bored by usual fare, seeking to try more exotic or taboo delicacies. His natural charisma grew as he aged as well and it wasn't long before he began to accrue followers accidentally at firsts but later he began to seek out the susceptible and gullible in an effort to expand his following, and he soon realized that he had formed a cult of sorts around him, who hung on his every word.

He began to travel with his ever growing cult, who served his every whim, but even in distant lands he found little satisfaction for his urges, there was never enough new foods. Finally his boredom caused him to snap and bite the arm of one of his followers who was serving him food, she screamed but he put a stop to that with a knife, and began to hack her apart and devour her. The others of his cult were horrified at first, but he quickly spun the situation to his favor explaining that she was one with him now, and that by eating others they would spread their message and gain their strength.

Those who resisted this change were devoured, and his cult quickly transformed into a ravenous cannibal band, preying on people across the countryside. In the end his band was wiped out by the authorities after years of preying on innocents, and he was found having choked to death on a bone.

And there is the gluttony sheet, I expect we'll begin shortly.
 

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[HEADING=1]7 Sins[/HEADING]

Seven people wake up in the middle of an ancient temple. The floor and walls are of a dark-sand colored stone that is warm to the touch, and it is oddly light, despite having apparent source of light. However, as they look around, they find that there are no walls, the floor they stand on seems to be surrounded by an endless flow of lava. Somehow, they are not melting, but it is hot enough to be uncomfortable. They are not dressed very heavily, but rather in thin and dark cloaks that covers just enough. If there is a ceiling it is so high up that is cannot be seen or reached. Around them, there are a number of obelisks in different shapes and colors. All are made of stone, and between each pair of matching ones, there is a mirror into another world. Each of these is a trial, a level to clear. In the middle of the room, a circle is drawn, like that of alchemy, but for now, it only seems like a decoration. It is a strange and wondrous place, and none of them know why they are there.

Suddenly, a man appears in front of them. His face is obscured by a mask far too similar to a human face, and he is dressed in white. On his back, there are two broken bones sticking out, almost as if he used to have wings. His hair is long and blonde, almost white in color. He speaks.

They have all committed a grave sin, he tells them.

"Luxuria, Gula, Avaritia, Acedia, Ira, Superbia and Invidia. I have waited."

He lets the words hang in the air for a while. With a sinister grin he then explains that this is a special part of Hell, and that they have been chosen for a trial because of their past deeds. Should they succeed in passing all of the trials then they will be set free to the outside, and should they fail... well, that remains unsaid.

"Now, let the game begin."


[HEADING=2]Game Start[/HEADING]

The man in white gives them a short moment to be shocked, amazed, surprised, angry, just about any emotion might surface. No one speaks up, and he tilts his head.

"It seems you still have need of understanding this. It is very simple, allow me to give you a bit of the details. I am the one you refer to as "The devil", by the way. I prefer Lucifer, the Bringer of Light, personally, and this is a game of my own creation." His voice sounds almost excited, and he's clearly taking a sort of joy in it.

"There are 9 windows here, each a window to a new world, and a new level. None of the worlds are real, but I would advice you to act as if they were, else there might be unfortunate consequences." He motions for each of the "windows", 9 sets of different pairs of obelisks, between them what looks like a thin layer of glass, large enough to walk through. He places a gloved hand on one of them, showing it can easily be broken through. "You go inside, and you solve the problem. Choose wisely, because you cannot that easily get out from one once you've entered it. A solution is the only key. You have each been given a special power that can aid you, have fun with those." He chuckles, before continuing. "I would advice you to act carefully, everything can have a consequence. Now, for the rules." A piece of thin, fine paper appears in his hand, and he writes something on it. It soon turns into a scroll.

He opens it, and reads it out loud.


"Rule 1: Do not kill each other. If one of you dies, the levels will end up being unsolvable, and you will all lose by default.

Rule 2: You have all the time in the world. However, the world is ending fairly soon, so I would suggest moving fast so you can enjoy it.

Rule 3: You cannot bring anything from any of the worlds, as they are not real.

Rule 4: Do not try to escape, there is no way out apart from the way I have provided you with.

Rule 5: Lucifer lies a lot, and at least one of these rules are untrue.

Rule 6: Lucifer is fond of small kittens.

Rule 7: The rules might be updated according to Lucifer's whims."

He tosses the scroll to Luxuria, choosing her at seemingly random. If there is an intention behind it, he doesn't let it be known.

"And now I will take my leave, being the ruler over the eternal souls of most of humanity is busy. Any questions?" He lets no questions be asked, as he quickly continues.

"Magnificent. I will be rooting for you guys."

And then he's gone. They are left to their own accord, to explore and interact. However, if one of the rules are to be believed, their time is limited.
 

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She caught the scroll, almost automatically.

Luxuria had studied the man in white carefully during his little speech. The initial statement just showed that he knew some Latin. The rest? Well... If that man was indeed the Devil, then that certainly changed things. She when to stroke her hair only to find that her head was covered by the hood of a dark cloak. Of course, there were more pressing matters. Such as that strange pressing sensation against her throat. She looked down to see a dark blue sapphire set in the center of a black choker. Well, this was quite a change of wardrobe for the mademoiselle wasn't? And this was quite the change of scenery as well. Luxuria had been told about how her so-called 'sins' would bring her to Hell. She had never imagined that to be true.

Composure not cracked, she turned to the others, "Shall... we start?"
 

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"Wait. These rules make no sense."

Ira thought about what had just happened, unsure if he wasn't merely dreaming but deciding to play along anyway.

"He states, as a rule, that at least one of the rules are untrue. But if that very rule is untrue, then all the rules may be untrue and we are merely doing ourselves a dis-service by blindly following them..."

Ira shook his head, increasingly certain that this must be some form of deluded nightmare. He had read much of the devil, and was fairly certain that he did not like kittens, nor would he joke about such things. The whole idea of writing rules that could be untrue was an absurd idea he could barely comprehend.

"At least one...which might mean all of them anyway. Have you even checked whats actually on the scroll?"

Ira shook his head again.

"We need to think this through. Properly."
 

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While he listened, "Acedia," as he was now called, continuously shifted his weight from one side to the other, swaying slowly before he decided to simply sit down on the warm ground. Upon kneeling, he noted the dark robe he was now swathed in. He reached to adjust his glasses when he felt something small brush against his cheek--a thin chain attached to the right frame. Dangling off the end of the chain was a tiny light blue crystal. Where did that come from? he thought to himself.

He simply sat and listened to Lucifer explain these "rules," rolling the crystal in fingers. Now that he sat in his presence, he wondered just what was the big deal about him. Wasn't he supposed to be some kind of scary, grotesque monster?

"Why bother" he asked after the devil had taken his leave. "Didn't one of those rules mention that we should hurry because the world was going to end? Why should that matter to us at this point?"
 

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The conversation was distracting, enough to cut through the bewilderment. The masked man's words had been almost as confusing as the surroundings - souls? New worlds? The names, too, were difficult to place. Except for the last - Invidia - that was her, she was certain.
There had been another name, though. Why couldn't she remember?

She pulled the hood low over her eyes and glared at the tall man who had been shaking his head.

"You're surprised that the rules don't make sense?" she muttered under her breath. "None of this makes any sense."
 

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'Avaritia' was too busy with his new clothes to really notice much of what the man in white had said. It'd never compare to his noble finery, he'd rather go nude if he could. He was certainly pretty fucking warm. His necklace ,the one thing he liked thus far, fascinated him endlessly, although the craftsmanship was shoddy and the jewel was the only thing remarkable, and even then he probably had 10 of the things. A droll item to accompany him.

His ears perked up a bit when he heard the thing in white call himself the Devil, Lucifer. It was not his religion, but hadn't he heard Hell was his punishment as well? Suppose once you give a being a whole underworld, he'd conquer it eventually...

He agreed with the skeptic, Ira, though he couldn't see a ceiling and the floor was literally lava. As an afterlife, he found himself thoroughly unimpressed. Throwing off my hood, I look at the rest of my group. A lazy bastard was already losing hope, and a girl was mumbling to herself. The one who had the scroll must've been special in some way, he'd keep an eye on... without voices, Greed realized he had no idea what gender these people were. Cloaks were no fun, he'd have to see if anyone else would act on his nudity idea.

"Right-oh, a bunch of puzzles for another crack at life before the end? I wonder if maybe I hug a few more puppies if I'd get to a place a bit more... pearly." Greed smirks at his own joke, and he looks at one of the mirrors. A few puzzles and he'd be free again? This was going to be fun.
 

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Gula shifted uncomfortably as he listened, he could already tell what his 'power' was, his tongue was a bitter weight in his mouth and yet he could clearly make out every wrinkle and crease in the others faces, hear the motion of their cloaks with every shift of their bodies, and the smell of brimstone and sulfur was overpowering to him. Beyond that he could feel a tightness around his waist, not painful merely uncomfortable but he could not loosen it no matter how he fidgeted and the annoyance it caused seemed to be growing. I need something to eat, take my mind off of all this, perhaps one of these new worlds will offer such a treat. Surely my tongue is merely dry from the heat, something fresh and juicy will remedy this foul taste in my mouth.

The others seemed to be in various states of confusion, or irateness, he couldn't blame them this Lucifer fellow clearly lacked what it took to be an effective religious figure, he should know. But the others were clearly in need of direction and he in need of food, hopefully these problems could be used to resolve each other. He set aside his thoughts of discomfort and put on his most charismatic grin.

"Friends clearly we must band together to overcome these challenges, and why wait when each moment we do so delays us reaching our succulent goal," he spread his arms wide and licked his lips hungrily, though it brought an even fouler taste to his mouth. He turned to the nearest mirror, squinting to try and peer through it, his eyes wandering over both it and the obelisks around it "We should make haste through a mirror so that we might confront and overcome these ordeals laid before us."
 

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The obelisks Gula is examining is aged, but in a good condition. The stone used for them are in a soft brown color, and looks like it would be smooth to touch. It has simple decorations, dark patterns that shows suns and moons, clocks and people. It looks like the handwork of an artist, and carries a small signature, although unreadable. Perhaps a clue?

Or perhaps just a useless detail, no one can be sure, for the devil lies. The sights through the glass is very tinted and weird, twisted beyond recognition. However, one with as good a hearing as Gula, might hear the sounds of a busy street through the glass, and the ringing of a bell.
 

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"At least one...which might mean all of them anyway. Have you even checked whats actually on the scroll?"

"Hush; darling. Give me a moment." Luxuria replied, irritated.

Idly, Luxuria flipped through the scroll, stroking the choker as she did so. The gem was pretty, yes, but it made it a bit harder to talk. Sweet-talking was her favorite activity after love-making, and she was slightly miffed that she would have to put a little more effort in order to do that. Luxuria turned slightly to the gentleman seemed uncomfortable, the one who licked his lips and addressed the people here as 'friends'. She couldn't help but silently chuckle at that. Friends? If what Lucifer said was true, the people here - including herself - had committed grave sins. Not exactly the type of people you would call 'friends'. But then again, sinner can't be choosers. She turned away, to the muttering girl who had pulled her hood over her face.

"None of this makes any sense."

Adopting the similar attitude of the gentlemen with the fancy necklace, she said, "Kitten, if it made any sense, it wouldn't be fun. Now dears, shall we at least introduce ourselves? It won't do to keep our faces hidden."

She took the initiative and threw off her hood in a dramatic fashion, revealing her face and golden locks.
 

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Acedia listened to the others talk to each other. "We're really going to go along with this?" he asked, sighing. Did he really have no choice or say in the matter?

"Kitten, if it made any sense, it wouldn't be fun. Now dears, shall we at least introduce ourselves? It won't do to keep our faces hidden."

He didn't even blink at the woman's reveal. Just who are you trying to impress? Maybe it had something to do with her name. "So which moniker did that guy give you?"

But now with the hood off, he caught a glimpse at the crystal that hung at her throat. Cocking his head to the side, he gazed down at the crystal that he held in his fingers again. They were very similar, save for the different shades of blue. Hers was a deep dark hue compared to his paler one.

"Does everyone have these things?" he muttered to himself.
 

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"We should make haste through a mirror so that we might confront and overcome these ordeals laid before us."

"Really, so soon? But this weather is just so divine." Greed smirked, winking at him. Fatso wanted to play leader, he was more than welcome to it. The one with the scroll revealed herself to be attractive, and female too! The choker even made her seem obedient. She spoke to the quiet one with the feminine voice.

"Kitten, if it made any sense, it wouldn't be fun. Now dears, shall we at least introduce ourselves? It won't do to keep our faces hidden."

'Drama queen.'

"So which moniker did that guy give you?"

"It's polite to offer your own first, you know. I'm Avaritia, which means Greed I think. We'll just stick with that." The Whiny One played with his necklace and spoke up again. A mumble really, but there didn't seem much noise to drown him out. The lack of ambient screams disappointed him greatly.

"Does everyone have these things?"

"Mine's orange, and a necklace. [sub]And better[/sub]." He said casually, holding up the necklace. He'd have to see about taking some of the other's nice things. Nice things were better off in the hands of those who appreciated them, really. Not that they seemed to have much beyond their ugly cloaks.

"But yes, moving on seems... well, not good, but at least productive." Greed shrugged, moving towards the mirror Fatso was standing next to. "Lead the way?"