I've got a world planned, but that doesn't mean it's my turn. if someone really wants to go first, like Evrant, that's fine with me. Since he did say that he has some kind of training level for Aleister or sommat.NastoK said:
Of course, if we're doing some stuff in character, I've got a feeling Atticus and Caedis aren't going to be too keen on staying when they've got time sensitive and revenge planned respectively.avouleance2nd said:
Undecided.avouleance2nd said:
I kinda want to GM. I already picked out some stuff or my level.hiei82 said:
I liked the level. Seems somewhat short, at least when comparing the number of pages that it fills, but also a lot more eventful. Maybe that's just the thing: More in less. Also liked your wording.hiei82 said:
Huh, and I was considering making my level a fiery one. The setting seems okay, as far as I can tell from that post, though I'd like to point out two things. The first one, a trivial thing, Stonefuse would no longer call Atticus "Just Atticus". The second one is the wording. You're repeating the same words a tad too much, in my opinion. Though that's just an aesthetics.TheNaut131 said:I kinda want to GM. I already picked out some stuff or my level.
As for your level, I think it went pretty well. I like how you handled the behind the scenes stuff with Stonefuse and Prail.
Now, for my level:
They passed through the portal quickly and were immediately assaulted by a burst of frozen air. They looked around the room. Icicles hung down from the roof of the cave while others pierced through the floor. Atticus, Faunra, Nathan, Aleister and Caedis had to hold their footing and tread slowly, trying not to simply slide down the arching path that lead away from the portal.
As Stonefuse and Damien made their way through, the pathway began to slightly crack beneath them and they qucikly shuffled along. While some of the others slightly shivered, Prail didn't seem to really notice the change. She was apparently pretty content in cold temperatures. They made their way down the path, the ice and blue lighting luminating the cave. They made their way through the cave, eventually found themselves in a room of multicolored ice.
"The light must be coming from outside. This must be the exit!" Atticus said, picking up the pace. The others picked up pace, nearing the exit. As they did, Damien felt something strange in the air. He wasn't sure what it was, but all he knew was that he didn't like it. Veritas looked at the ice. He began to wonder how his water abilities would transfer to ice. Stonefuse was shuffling along, when he noticed something. It looked like an ice sculpture of someone. He tried to get Just Atticus's attention, but when he turned to look at the statue once more, it was gone. Aleister decided this would be a good level for flame spells and Zavier tried to see if he had any books that would help them on this level. Faunra shuttered a bit, but her senses picked up on something. Quick footsteps that faded away. Caedis and Nathan simply made their way out of the cave. Atticus was simply miserable. He hated the cold. So much. Prail seemed to actually be enjoying herself. They exited the cave and were bathed by light.
Their eyes adjusted to the light and they looked around. They'd apparently been inside a large mountain which was in a valley. They looked around and realized their was only one way out of the small valley. As they walked, Atticus simply uttered a variation or what he usually says whenever they entered a new level.
"So, where do we begin?"
Again, VERY, VERY, VERY rough! I kinda want to get a few of the guys waiting involved. And don't worry, it seems kinda empty right now, but don't worry. Stuff happens. Oh boy, does stuff happen.
Again, very rough.NastoK said:Huh, and I was considering making my level a fiery one. The setting seems okay, as far as I can tell from that post, though I'd like to point out two things. The first one, a trivial thing, Stonefuse would no longer call Atticus "Just Atticus". The second one is the wording. You're repeating the same words a tad too much, in my opinion. Though that's just an aesthetics.TheNaut131 said:I kinda want to GM. I already picked out some stuff or my level.
As for your level, I think it went pretty well. I like how you handled the behind the scenes stuff with Stonefuse and Prail.
Now, for my level:
They passed through the portal quickly and were immediately assaulted by a burst of frozen air. They looked around the room. Icicles hung down from the roof of the cave while others pierced through the floor. Atticus, Faunra, Nathan, Aleister and Caedis had to hold their footing and tread slowly, trying not to simply slide down the arching path that lead away from the portal.
As Stonefuse and Damien made their way through, the pathway began to slightly crack beneath them and they qucikly shuffled along. While some of the others slightly shivered, Prail didn't seem to really notice the change. She was apparently pretty content in cold temperatures. They made their way down the path, the ice and blue lighting luminating the cave. They made their way through the cave, eventually found themselves in a room of multicolored ice.
"The light must be coming from outside. This must be the exit!" Atticus said, picking up the pace. The others picked up pace, nearing the exit. As they did, Damien felt something strange in the air. He wasn't sure what it was, but all he knew was that he didn't like it. Veritas looked at the ice. He began to wonder how his water abilities would transfer to ice. Stonefuse was shuffling along, when he noticed something. It looked like an ice sculpture of someone. He tried to get Just Atticus's attention, but when he turned to look at the statue once more, it was gone. Aleister decided this would be a good level for flame spells and Zavier tried to see if he had any books that would help them on this level. Faunra shuttered a bit, but her senses picked up on something. Quick footsteps that faded away. Caedis and Nathan simply made their way out of the cave. Atticus was simply miserable. He hated the cold. So much. Prail seemed to actually be enjoying herself. They exited the cave and were bathed by light.
Their eyes adjusted to the light and they looked around. They'd apparently been inside a large mountain which was in a valley. They looked around and realized their was only one way out of the small valley. As they walked, Atticus simply uttered a variation or what he usually says whenever they entered a new level.
"So, where do we begin?"
Again, VERY, VERY, VERY rough! I kinda want to get a few of the guys waiting involved. And don't worry, it seems kinda empty right now, but don't worry. Stuff happens. Oh boy, does stuff happen.