As Kuchi said, I didn't actually edit this one, I was off having sex with young ladies, taking illicit substances and being rude to politicians. All the healthy things students do with their lives. I did mention it seemed a bit silly that my name was as an Editor for this but hey-ho. I'll take credit where it's not due.Zombie_Fish said:Also, do what Novajam suggests, especially the proofreading -- despite the editing by [user]Amnestic[/user], I still found a few mistakes in there, and it only takes a few mistakes to ruin the review (and a lot to get hated [http://www.escapistmagazine.com/forums/read/9.51811#356409]).
Other than that, it was pretty good.
That's another thing we do.
Why not just get some hentai? At least it doesn't lie. Ikki Tousen pretends to have some semblance of a sensical storyline in between endless panty shots and softcore rape scenes (Never thought that was possible), whereas hentai is upfront: It's wank material, plain and simple. Sometimes there's a perverted taxi driver, or a perverted school teacher, or a perverted student but they spend five minutes on exposition and then jump right on in (innuendo!) with the sexytime.TsunamiWombat said:If you watched Ikki Tousen expecting a plot, you missed the point. If you watched Ikki Tousen with mute off, you missed the point. If you watched Ikki Tousen with your pants on, you missed the point.
Ikki Tousen: Japanese for "Titty" and "Ass"
Say what you like about hentai, at least it's bloody honest!
Yes, you missed a few things and thus the whole review was ruined. Stop being silly ya sod. Was just a few bloody pictures. It's all a learning process after all.Kuchinawa212 said:Sorry, those were my fault. Amn had the day off. I guess I'm just a horrible editor.Zombie_Fish said:Also, do what Novajam suggests, especially the proofreading -- despite the editing by [user]Amnestic[/user], I still found a few mistakes in there, and it only takes a few mistakes to ruin the review (and a lot to get hated [http://www.escapistmagazine.com/forums/read/9.51811#356409]).
*sigh* I hope it didn't totally ruin the review.