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There is but essentially, you and your party are gonna be from inside the city then all of a sudden your booted out with the idea of go explore. Whether you hit a talkative area depends where you go. It is gonna be luck though because the current idea is, you see the map in the stuff I might use area. That will have one for me and one for everyone elso type thing. That way people will have the freedom to know where to go whereever, and if they find one area boring/too dangerous they can just continue on. More details later though.Teafo said:
Edit:Also If you want to turn you character into a mean s.o.b you can have conflict for no reason.
"The nitty gritty, the machines would recieve a donor sample from two indivuals, then the resulting offspring was grown in a test tube then a pod." Sorry I am going to clarify this. Much like how clones are raised until age 21, to make sure for optimum developement, children are raised in said pods. Yeah I really meant to include that, but I tend to skip things over. Also social interactions is the thing i'm going to add, but essentially breakfast conversation with people came down to. "project x bravo is going swimingly, how about your project." Sorry I really need to finalize the whole, "the way society works" bit so peoples characters can fit nicely but I keep having bits and pieces to do.ae86gamer said:
Sorry I didn't respond sooner.ae86gamer said:
Name: Tig Smith
Job/skill: engineer/robotics
Not clone.
Age: 25
Details: Tig was in a horrible accented during a test run on a new machine which exploded. Even though Tig survive he lost some parts of his body. He wasn't "good" enough to be clone so he set to work to rebuild his body. He is the first "cyborg" of the city, even though he shows emotion on the outside, he still feels every emotion on the inside. He wears a cloak around his body with a hood that helps hide his robotics parts and burnt body. He wears a gas mask like over his face that is link to his lungs to help him breath, due to his lungs being a bit damage though he can take it off, but after a while he needs it back on. He join on the mission to explore the outside world and see what wonders are out there.
Job/skill: engineer/robotics
Not clone.
Age: 25
Details: Tig was in a horrible accented during a test run on a new machine which exploded. Even though Tig survive he lost some parts of his body. He wasn't "good" enough to be clone so he set to work to rebuild his body. He is the first "cyborg" of the city, even though he shows emotion on the outside, he still feels every emotion on the inside. He wears a cloak around his body with a hood that helps hide his robotics parts and burnt body. He wears a gas mask like over his face that is link to his lungs to help him breath, due to his lungs being a bit damage though he can take it off, but after a while he needs it back on. He join on the mission to explore the outside world and see what wonders are out there.
Alright. I'll put up my basic character information first and then go an continue to add to it as you add to the society and the island.bad rider said:
Name: Rayai Colton
Gender: Female
Age: 19
Description: She is considerably shorter than many people. Standing at 4'9". She has long dark brown hair and mousy features. As do many people in her world, she has a deep yearning to learn and to understand. The ambition she has to learn will sometimes go against her better judgement.
(Let me know if something needs to be changed. This is just the basics of her and I will add on to it. If I can let her some how sneak into the mission to the outside part of the world, I will do it in a way that should follow the ways of the people, but still suit her personality.)
You need to change the school bit,(there are no schools) apart from that the colour idea is very nice and you can't be with Anarchemitis as I am being a bit of of a robophobe at the moment and I don't like Anarchemitis's character(but I still think your idea was awesome Anarchemitis it just dosen't fit with what I was going for.)ae86gamer said:
So, when we going to start?(just wondering). Don't like after we get everything settle or after a few more people join in.
Name: Rayai Colton
Age: 19
Profession: Botanist
Specialty: Rayai?s specialty is in plants with a purpose. She knows a little bit about trees and flowers, but the plants that serve as food and what used to be used as medicines is her forte.
Bio: Rayai is considerably short and light. Being only 4?9 and barely weighing 100 lbs. She is very energetic and has a strong desire to learn. She has a love of plants beyond anything else. She is so passionate about learning that sometimes it can impair he judgment. One night, she was studying in a greenhouse for twenty hours and didn?t go home until she dragged away and forced to stay at home.
Even though she spends a lot of time engulfed in studies and work, she still is quite social. She is easy going and will listen if someone needs to talk or wants to discuss their own work. She will listen and comment on another person?s work whether or not she knows a vast amount of their field.
Rayai hasn?t found anything yet that has been worth a clone. She understands cloning in plants, but she has a lack of knowledge on cloning of humans and animals herself, that she is not sure whether she would want to be cloned herself.
Tests:
Strength: 2
Perception: 4
Endurance: 5
Charisma: 7
Intelligence: 6
Agility: 7
Luck: 4
(Let me know if something's gotta be changed. I have a feeling that something does.)
Age: 19
Profession: Botanist
Specialty: Rayai?s specialty is in plants with a purpose. She knows a little bit about trees and flowers, but the plants that serve as food and what used to be used as medicines is her forte.
Bio: Rayai is considerably short and light. Being only 4?9 and barely weighing 100 lbs. She is very energetic and has a strong desire to learn. She has a love of plants beyond anything else. She is so passionate about learning that sometimes it can impair he judgment. One night, she was studying in a greenhouse for twenty hours and didn?t go home until she dragged away and forced to stay at home.
Even though she spends a lot of time engulfed in studies and work, she still is quite social. She is easy going and will listen if someone needs to talk or wants to discuss their own work. She will listen and comment on another person?s work whether or not she knows a vast amount of their field.
Rayai hasn?t found anything yet that has been worth a clone. She understands cloning in plants, but she has a lack of knowledge on cloning of humans and animals herself, that she is not sure whether she would want to be cloned herself.
Tests:
Strength: 2
Perception: 4
Endurance: 5
Charisma: 7
Intelligence: 6
Agility: 7
Luck: 4
(Let me know if something's gotta be changed. I have a feeling that something does.)
Name: Tig Smith
Job/skill: engineer/robotics
Not clone.
Age: 25
Details: Tig was in a horrible accented during a test run on a new machine which exploded. Even though Tig survive he lost some parts of his body. He wasn't "good" enough to be clone so he set to work to rebuild his body. He is the first "cyborg" of the city, even though he shows emotion on the outside, he still feels every emotion on the inside. He wears a cloak around his body with a hood that helps hide his robotics parts and burnt body. He wears a gas mask like over his face that is link to his lungs to help him breath, due to his lungs being a bit damage though he can take it off, but after a while he needs it back on. He join on the mission to explore the outside world and see what wonders are out there.
Strength: 5
Perception: 5
Endurance: 5
Charisma: 5
Intelligence: 5
Agility: 5
Luck: 5
(I think im just going with all 5's for my char)
Job/skill: engineer/robotics
Not clone.
Age: 25
Details: Tig was in a horrible accented during a test run on a new machine which exploded. Even though Tig survive he lost some parts of his body. He wasn't "good" enough to be clone so he set to work to rebuild his body. He is the first "cyborg" of the city, even though he shows emotion on the outside, he still feels every emotion on the inside. He wears a cloak around his body with a hood that helps hide his robotics parts and burnt body. He wears a gas mask like over his face that is link to his lungs to help him breath, due to his lungs being a bit damage though he can take it off, but after a while he needs it back on. He join on the mission to explore the outside world and see what wonders are out there.
Strength: 5
Perception: 5
Endurance: 5
Charisma: 5
Intelligence: 5
Agility: 5
Luck: 5
(I think im just going with all 5's for my char)
Upon reading this, bad rider, I had an immediate memory, a very nostalgic one at that, of a movie and a game.
I see several distinguishing features of this that are reminiscent of the movie "The Island" and the video game "Bioshock". The former more-so, the latter only somewhat.
To anyone who hasn't seen the movie, it was also about a group of people who lived in an isolated tower, and were led to believe that they were being "kept safe" from some sort of disease in the outside world. It turns out-
I am [i\]so[/i] in this, dude.
(I mention Bioshock because it's, well, on the ocean. And contains only the best and brightest.)
I see several distinguishing features of this that are reminiscent of the movie "The Island" and the video game "Bioshock". The former more-so, the latter only somewhat.
To anyone who hasn't seen the movie, it was also about a group of people who lived in an isolated tower, and were led to believe that they were being "kept safe" from some sort of disease in the outside world. It turns out-
That they were all clones of people with the money to purchase them. They were allowed to mature, given false memories, and given rudimentary educations, to properly allow their [i\]organs[/i] to develop, and prolong the life of said wealthy people.
The administrators organized a "random" lottery, where these "survivors" were allowed to go to an "island" where there was no disease.
As it turns out, if they won, they were merely killed, and their organs harvested for transplant. Bleh.
The administrators organized a "random" lottery, where these "survivors" were allowed to go to an "island" where there was no disease.
As it turns out, if they won, they were merely killed, and their organs harvested for transplant. Bleh.
I am [i\]so[/i] in this, dude.
(I mention Bioshock because it's, well, on the ocean. And contains only the best and brightest.)
Bold part you need to veer away from emotions. As for the Italics you need to tweak it a bit so they convey less idea's of emotions (curiosity in this case). Also re-read what you wrote there are some spelling errors in their you may want to correct. Also try and expand on the accident as it may come in usefulOutcast107 said:
Masika:
Name: Rayai Colton
Age: 19
Profession: Botanist
Specialty: Rayai's specialty is in plants with a purpose. She knows a little bit about trees and flowers, but the plants that serve as food and what used to be used as medicines is her forte.
Bio: Rayai is considerably short and light. Being only 4'9 and barely weighing 100 lbs. She is very committed to her work and sometimes forgets that she has to go home. Even though she spends a lot of time engulfed in studies and work, she still is quite social. She is easy going and will listen if someone needs to talk or wants to discuss their own work. She will listen and comment on another person's work whether or not she knows a vast amount of their field.
Rayai hasn't found anything yet that has been worth a clone. She understands cloning in plants, but she has a lack of knowledge on cloning of humans and animals, that she is not sure whether she would want to be cloned herself.
Tests:
Strength: 2
Perception: 4
Endurance: 5
Charisma: 7
Intelligence: 6
Agility: 7
Luck: 4
Name: Rayai Colton
Age: 19
Profession: Botanist
Specialty: Rayai's specialty is in plants with a purpose. She knows a little bit about trees and flowers, but the plants that serve as food and what used to be used as medicines is her forte.
Bio: Rayai is considerably short and light. Being only 4'9 and barely weighing 100 lbs. She is very committed to her work and sometimes forgets that she has to go home. Even though she spends a lot of time engulfed in studies and work, she still is quite social. She is easy going and will listen if someone needs to talk or wants to discuss their own work. She will listen and comment on another person's work whether or not she knows a vast amount of their field.
Rayai hasn't found anything yet that has been worth a clone. She understands cloning in plants, but she has a lack of knowledge on cloning of humans and animals, that she is not sure whether she would want to be cloned herself.
Tests:
Strength: 2
Perception: 4
Endurance: 5
Charisma: 7
Intelligence: 6
Agility: 7
Luck: 4