We Are Our Avatars III (Ended!)

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snappydog

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OoC: Oh, didn't realise we only got one turn... WHOOPS. Since I didn't actually make a move in my last thing, just sort of started jumping in preparation, can I finish it?
 

CmmdrRosh99

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@Gear: Well, Vlad finally finds peace after a long time, retiring to New Earth (Remember that I said that Earth was conquered by the Crusaders)
Outisakanobody said:
CmmdrRosh99 said:
Technically, I thought of the my series to be focused around John, Vladmir and Natalie (The Vanguards). The series was supposed to mimic Dante's Inferno, showing the horrors that humans do to each other. The last circle comes with Natalie "dying" by the big bad, and once John and Vladmir return to UNC space, Vlad is actually a traitor, but also a stealth mentor as he did the same trials well earlier in his life after a loved one died for him.

In the end, the United Nations Confederacy and the Outer Nations Empire form together for a last offensive against the Crusaders. John dies in Natalie's arms. (Natalie was brainwashed into serving the Crusaders, but then gets better after fighting John nearly to the death)

But the war against the Crusaders, had just begun.....
That's...a pretty damn good story. I like this setup. It would really work if you, throughout the story, make the characters more human, which is to say, more flawed. Show them being selfish or ignorant or arrogant or foolish. Not in an extreme way, just enough for people to recognize that these people are actually people with problems and personal quirks. It might even be good to have a few characters who represent "the epitome of humanity" and have them interact with the other, more human characters. Maybe even have the really good people be on the Crusader's side, and the average short of people on the 'Good' side, to show that you don't have to be perfect to do the job of saving the world.
Well true, the problem is that these people were taken in as 6 year olds, compared to the usual ROTC universal program where all citizens have some type of military training (After 18 years old). So yes, the Vanguards and their Warden counterparts DID have their quirks. But thoses are quickly ironed out with training and the Emotion Hardening (The 9 circles of hell type thingy) Though to be honest, I called it the "Awakening" but for the sake of the RP, I renamed it.... G

GOtta GO!
 

Saltyk

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Rachel and Sephiroth each attacked versions of Caenis, but they vanished as the two struck them.

The man with the sword took the hit from Gordon and looked at him. Smiling just before he falls over dead.

Gwen and Sara's attacks hit the true Caenis causing her to drop the false images, revealing that the group had been walking in the wrong direction and talking to a false image teh entire time. "Little wenches!"

Name: Caenis
Recipe: Baal
Number: 7i
Virtue: Lust
Strength(s): Easily able to move around and adapt to the environment
Weaknes(es): Has to move slow and deliberately
Power(s): Perfect Illusion

OoC: The True Form of Baal
http://www.mangarush.com/manga/666-satan/62/p-40
This is about the time things start to add up. Why Athena and Caenis hated each other. What has been going on since the group arrived... And people then get pissed at me for being kinda cheap. XD
@Zeph Sorry, did you get left out? You should have said something!

Group 1
 

snappydog

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ooc: Without any response, I'm gonna go ahead and assume I can do stuff.

Sephiroth landed, his readied materia flaring under the black leather of his sleeve. Thrusting his palm forwards as he brought Masamune around in a wide arc, he sent a powerful Comet spell towards the woman, and another towards the nearby whirlwind, his upgraded materia allowing for the double-cast.

Edit: Oh, responses have happened. Ignore that then, I guess.
 

Zepherus14

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@Salty: Ah it's fine, I jumped into Group 2, but I'm just reading the textbook right now. So I wasn't planning on posting a whole bunch anywho.
 

Silver Shadow

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lilah tried to grab the real image of caenis to stop her from attacking by using her hair from the vantage point of a winsdow sill
 

Outisakanobody

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Gerry shot at Caenis while Grace took a short rest.

OOC: As a reminder, Gerry's attacks really can't kill anyone, no physical damage remember?
 

Chungus

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"What a rotten tongue you have... Let's burn it off!" Kefka yells as he casts a Fira spell, aiming for Ceanis' maw. Inside her mouth, a jet of flame flared up.
"Hope you like it hot!"
 

Wackymon

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OoC:
[HEADING=1]THEN WHAT THE HELL ARE YOU DOING, FIX IT![/HEADING]
I honestly wonder about @Silver at times...
 

TilMorrow

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TW continued conversing with UN
TW: "Well it relatively near the end of their session."
TW: "And they'd messed up."
TW: "But they didn't know it yet."
TW: "Also I got a particularly smug and un-optomistic message from a certain scratchy bastard."
TW: "And there appeared to be no other option to get my plans into motion."
TW: "So yeah."

TW: "It's annoying but beats being an eventual host."
TW: "Anyway."
TW: "Try finding a way to switch host."
TW: "Also the chances of messing with her effectively are slim.
TW: "She'll probably jump an hour in the past, leave herself a long whiney message."
TW: "And come prepared for whatever you do to her."
TW: "I know for one. She's done it enough times."

TW continued conversing with SS
G: "..."
G: "I don't think you're interested at all are you."
G: "Maybe I should stop showing you the other chat."
G: "And I'm dude thanks."

############: "N0 y0u'r3 n0T!"
###@#@#@: "Y0u'r3 M£££££££££££££££££££££££££££££££££!

G: "uuuuuuuuuhhhhhh."
G: "Ignore what just happened."
G: "It was nothing."
G: "Just... Nothing."

The woman approaches the doorway leading to the bridge and peers inside. Within she can see someone standing at a control panel. She watchs him a moment before pulling a cylinderical object from her belt and rolling it along the floor. She then starts running for the hanger.
 

Kirke

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Dio fired a spinfusor disk at Caenis.
"DIE!"

Tophat fired a couple more shots at the sword armed man before running up for a stab.
 

Saltyk

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Jin heard something behind him and saw a small cylinder which he ran over and knocked out the door into the hall with Ashura.

OoC: I seriously don't understand Spell check at times. I mixed up the i and the e in cylinder and it suggested fairyland...
 

Wackymon

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DN: I see.
DN: Alright, I see.
DN: But maybe we could lock them in a room, send it to the begining of the game, and have her locked in it?
DN: Maybe that'll work.
DN: But, anyway, I wouldn't want to be a host, anyway.
DN: Speaking of which, what are your plans for the group?
DN: I am a big fluffy unicorn!