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Evilbunny

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I read CAD up until the latest arc with the miscarriage because it just wasn't funny and needlessly depressing. Although, I think it would have been hilarious if at the bottom of the comic he wrote "DEPRESSING COMIC WEEK!!" as a homage to Cyanide and Happiness.
 

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RentCavalier said:
Saevus said:
To avoid angering people who just enjoy things for what they are, I won't mention specifics. But about 90% of what I see in this thread I know from experience is just bad.

I'm not saying this as a critic, but with about a decade of experience as a writer, some serious study into fiction, and a few of my glorified scribblings published, I've got to say that 99.9% of webcomics are painfully bad and mostly useful as textbook examples of phenomenally bad writing. Stock characters, blatant wish fulfillment and self-insertion, shoddy or more frequently no characterization, painful dialog, and enough tropes and cliches to populate the whole of Siberia more densely than NYC. I could go on, and on, and on, but that'd just be pedantic.

Quality art is a bit easier to come by, but it still largely fails to do what the art of a comic needs to: express. It isn't enough to supplant 'Back in his apartment, John reclined on his sofa' with the art; it needs to evoke a response from the reader, provide emotional context, anything. Complexity isn't what's lacking; no one expects every panel to be a bloody Las Meninas. But even that which is technically quite accomplished all too often fails in actually communicating something important to the reader.
I agree with you mostly, but I would point to any of the comics I put in my "good" section, with the exception perhaps of Dominic Deegan, of being extremely good in both writing and artistry. Chalking up 99% of webcomics as shit is, honestly, an extremely broad and rather bad generalization. Like any medium, the majority of webcomics are fairly mediocre, which is why we appreciate the good webcomics when we get them.
That depends how you judge webcomics. If you compare them to the quality of most material on the internet, then only about 70% are crap. If you actually take the critics scalpel to them, ones that aren't downright bad are few and far in between.

And now, I'll eat my words of 'I won't mention specific webcomics'.

Penny Arcade, from what I've read these days, is one of the few that's good. It manages to be downright clever on several occasions, and is well above any other gaming webcomic.

Dresden Codak is like cheap candy - it looks great, at first, but it simply isn't. Extremely sloppy integration of text and art, self-gratification, a Mary Sue protagonist, strawmen abound... And above all, for all the praise the art gets, it is not good. It gives scenery, explosions, and gratuitous T&A, but rarely gives effective, cohesive flow or expression.

Dominic Deegan is bad beyond bad. You should feel guiltier than Charlie Manson for enjoying it. ;)

LFG I quit reading long ago, so it may have improved since then. Character humour does not work when your characters are stock characters. The jokes are painfully predictable, the cast unoriginal, and the art is, once again, technically proficient but wholly uncommunicative.

Questionable Content also suffers from one-dimensional characters and, consequently, 90% of the humour is predictable. The characters also seem to have this bizarre hive mind; most tight-knit groups of friends end up being similar in mannerisms, but the way they're all on an identical wavelength makes Gilmore Girls look spontaneous. And judging by the art, people have different skeletal structures in Northampton. Or just love standing around in awkward positions.

xkcd is an exercise of repetition now. It's like Munroe's used up all his good jokes, and now either cranks out ones that are simply unfunny or rehashes of old jokes. Sidenote: C&H is the only webcomic that's proven it is possible to make rehashes downright hilarious.

My idea of good writing in a webcomic is, say... Order of the Stick. Namely due to well-rounded, developed characters that balance between realism (motivations, rationalizations, background, etc.) and D&D parody. My idea of good art is Kate Beaton's stuff; go have a look through her entire frontpage, and you'll see how expressive even dead-simple linework can be.

Just my bitter, disenchanted $0.02.
 

RentCavalier

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Looking for Group has improved. I'll admit, initially it was sort of bland, but its a lot smoother now, and both Lar and Sohmer have gotten a lot better at doing a full-page comic (Though I'll agree that his humor fits much better to a smaller sized comic.)

You make good points. Read Lackadaisy and Templar Arizona though. They're easily the best on that list, and arguable amongst the best webcomics online today.
 

Christer

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Saevus, for no particular reason I think you'll like this one: http://www.picturesforsadchildren.com/

RentCavalier, how does this work, is this thread for your reviews only or do I get to post my own?

I second the endorsement of Templar, Arizona, by the way - although it's been a while since I've read it - some of the characters are really just amazingly well written.

Oh, and hi, I'm new here
 

RentCavalier

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Christer said:
Saevus, for no particular reason I think you'll like this one: http://www.picturesforsadchildren.com/

RentCavalier, how does this work, is this thread for your reviews only or do I get to post my own?

I second the endorsement of Templar, Arizona, by the way - although it's been a while since I've read it - some of the characters are really just amazingly well written.

Oh, and hi, I'm new here
Generally speaking, you make your own review thread. Be careful though--you don't want to do a review that somebody else has done unless you TOTALLY disagree with them (like my review of Super Smash Bros Brawl). Also, make sure it is well-written or at least funny.
 

Midnight Voyager

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http://www.schlockmercenary.com/

If I could read only one webcomic ever, this would be the one. Has never ever skipped an update ever in years. Art used to be not good (average for webcomics, let's face it), but it's gotten awesome. Funny, it has a GOOD plot, the science-fiction bits are nice and crunchy... I love it.

PS: Never skipped an update, yeah... now realize that he updates EVERY DAY with three-row-sized ones on Sundays, like a newspaper comic.
 

Mstrswrd

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Well, I only knew two of them personally (VG-Cats and Dr.McNinja). Here's more.

1st: Exterminatus now (yes, it's supposed to be one word).
This takes place in an alternate Sonic Universe, though it has nothing to do with Sonic. It just uses Mobius as the name of the planet, and Sonic style characters. Funny. Updates almost every weekend.

http://exterminatusnow.comicgenesis.com/cast.html

I linked you to the cast page.


2: Next is Girly.

http://girlyyy.com/go/1

I linked you to page one, obviously. It starts out very manga influenced, but gradually shifts to a more American cartoon style of art. Also has nothing to do with videogames, other then vague references. Really funny, but doesn't bother censoring itself a lot of the time. The two main characters are lesbians, for one... and you should go read it to find out more.

Edit: Forgot to say that Girly doesn't get funny until a little later on. Exterminatus now only takes a little bit.
 

PedroSteckecilo

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http://www.robandelliot.cycomics.com/

First, Rob and Elliot, the funniest comic on the internet, if you enjoy truly random humor. It's well drawn, well written and ALWAYS funny. It never falters on this, there is always a punchline, you always laugh, then you wait for the next update. There is a tiny bit of drama, but it fades quickly and then returns to madness. Highly recommended.

http://get-medieval.livejournal.com/

An odd little comic about human like Aliens in Medieval France. It's finished now and didn't get alot of exposure while it was running regularly. The art is cute and gets the job done and also improves overtime. It has fun characters but lacks punch, still, if you like Medieval History and some nice PG humor, give this a look. The same artist-writer also does a DnD based comic and a Super Hero comic which are currently running and are both pretty good. Words of warning though, the Livejournal format of this one is REALLY frustrating, thankfully the other two are on more traditional websites and its easier to get into the archives.

http://www.daniellecorsetto.com/gws.html

Go read this... NOW. Girls With Slingshots is a sort of Slice of Life/Joke a Day comic about two girls and their odd misadventures that occasionally feature a talking cactus. The artist Danielle Corsetto is one of the best pencillers on the internet, she also rarely misses an update and is ALWAYS funny. Give it a read.
 

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RentCavalier said:
Somethingironic said:
http://theslackerz.com/index.php?Page=3

Cool we get mentioned! (sorta)

EDIT: Also, check out Blastwave. It's a good comic.
This: http://theslackerz.com/index.php?Page=77

Sorry Slackerz, but if you didn't suck at riding bikes so much, maybe we wouldn't make fun of you about it so much. Also, sad fact: the best strips are the ones written by the artist. So, its not they they suck at riding bikes--they're just riding a bike with one flat tire, if you catch my drift.
Flat tire here. Thanks for the honest review. It's refreshing, though I'm compelled to defend/clarify a few things.

The "bicycle" comic was not to discredit our negative reviewers but is rather an observation of a practice of people searching for unpolished amateur work just to be brutal and mean with it for the sake of doing just that. Slackerz is a little more well known than the 13-year-old posting his comics about Final Fantasy so obviously we don't apply. We did use our own comic as an example throughout most of the comic, so I understand if the point is misunderstood, but we're not full of ourselves where we think we're immune to criticism. That's the main point I'm trying to get across.

Secondary point is that yeah, I (flat wheel) frequently encounter writer's block and so I take from little obscure pop culture tid bits that I come across and do the best I can. Some weeks, I'm just burned out and it reflects on my work, so I'm thankful I have an artist partner who is good at writing. I find that my best (not necessarily good, but better than my usual shit) comics are the ones I had enjoyed writing the most, refreshed and relaxed.

Anyway, just wanted to drop those lines. Glad you thought we were something enough to review at least. :)

- Smith
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What do you think of these Webcomics:

Gunnerkrigg Court
PolkOut
Drowtales: Moonless Age
Roza
Kagerou
Perry Bible Fellowship (Also, you rock Spleeni)
Zombie Hunters
Strays
Seraph Inn
Phoenix Requiem
Anders Loves Maria
or CANDORVILLE
 

PedroSteckecilo

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I've got one for you all

www.girlgeniusonline.com

Easily one of the best comics on the internets, full of awesome full color art, good writing, loads of imagination and plenty of humor. The plot has been moving REALLY slow for the last little while though, but it's finally picking up again. Frankly the fact that this manages to update 3x a week and always has filler ready should put other, lower quality webcomics to shame.
 

RentCavalier

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SS Slacker said:
RentCavalier said:
Somethingironic said:
http://theslackerz.com/index.php?Page=3

Cool we get mentioned! (sorta)

EDIT: Also, check out Blastwave. It's a good comic.
This: http://theslackerz.com/index.php?Page=77

Sorry Slackerz, but if you didn't suck at riding bikes so much, maybe we wouldn't make fun of you about it so much. Also, sad fact: the best strips are the ones written by the artist. So, its not they they suck at riding bikes--they're just riding a bike with one flat tire, if you catch my drift.
Flat tire here. Thanks for the honest review. It's refreshing, though I'm compelled to defend/clarify a few things.

The "bicycle" comic was not to discredit our negative reviewers but is rather an observation of a practice of people searching for unpolished amateur work just to be brutal and mean with it for the sake of doing just that. Slackerz is a little more well known than the 13-year-old posting his comics about Final Fantasy so obviously we don't apply. We did use our own comic as an example throughout most of the comic, so I understand if the point is misunderstood, but we're not full of ourselves where we think we're immune to criticism. That's the main point I'm trying to get across.

Secondary point is that yeah, I (flat wheel) frequently encounter writer's block and so I take from little obscure pop culture tid bits that I come across and do the best I can. Some weeks, I'm just burned out and it reflects on my work, so I'm thankful I have an artist partner who is good at writing. I find that my best (not necessarily good, but better than my usual shit) comics are the ones I had enjoyed writing the most, refreshed and relaxed.

Anyway, just wanted to drop those lines. Glad you thought we were something enough to review at least. :)

- Smith
www.theslackerz.com
Holy shit, you're the actual writer of the comic? That puts me on the spot now...but you take criticism very well. I know how bad writer's block can be, so I can sort of understand your point, but if you are getting frequently burnt out, maybe you should try to do something different? Slackerz hasn't really had any real "story arcs" or anything, and I think you guys could really do a good sort of off-beat storyline (Akin to Penny Arcade's recent "Paint the Line" bit). You'd generate more readers, and it might give you a chance to work through creative issues.

And, I suppose, to be fair, when you are funny, you can be REALLY funny.
 

pieeater911

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I don't know why there is so much hate for Ctrl-Alt-Del around the Escapist. I mean, it's not exactly the best web-comic around, not by a long shot, but it does, from time to time, make me laugh a little.
I would defiantly rather read Penny Arcade, xkcd, or Dr. McNinja, though.
 

RentCavalier

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pieeater911 said:
I don't know why there is so much hate for Ctrl-Alt-Del around the Escapist. I mean, it's not exactly the best web-comic around, not by a long shot, but it does, from time to time, make me laugh a little.
I would defiantly rather read Penny Arcade, xkcd, or Dr. McNinja, though.
It's just...so...derivative. It tries SO HARD to be clever and funny, but even the wacky moments just fall short of being funny. Wintereenmass should be really funny, but it just isn't. It just isn't.

Plus, Lilah and Ethan have a VERY unrealistic relationship--Ethan is a fucking LUNATIC, not even amusingly, but literally batshit insane. There seems to be no solid foundation in their relationship except for surprisingly sweet and romantic Valentines Day presents.

I mean, PvP has its relationship dramas and, as overbearing and unchanging as they are (It took TEN YEARS for Brent to get married to the one girl he's dated throughout the series? Yeesh) it still does it better, funnier, and more realistic than CAD does. There's just this sort of...desperation to it. Its hard to explain, but everything it does SHOULD work--it just doesn't, and that's why it fails.
 

pieeater911

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RentCavalier said:
pieeater911 said:
I don't know why there is so much hate for Ctrl-Alt-Del around the Escapist. I mean, it's not exactly the best web-comic around, not by a long shot, but it does, from time to time, make me laugh a little.
I would defiantly rather read Penny Arcade, xkcd, or Dr. McNinja, though.
It's just...so...derivative. It tries SO HARD to be clever and funny, but even the wacky moments just fall short of being funny. Wintereenmass should be really funny, but it just isn't. It just isn't.

Plus, Lilah and Ethan have a VERY unrealistic relationship--Ethan is a fucking LUNATIC, not even amusingly, but literally batshit insane. There seems to be no solid foundation in their relationship except for surprisingly sweet and romantic Valentines Day presents.

I mean, PvP has its relationship dramas and, as overbearing and unchanging as they are (It took TEN YEARS for Brent to get married to the one girl he's dated throughout the series? Yeesh) it still does it better, funnier, and more realistic than CAD does. There's just this sort of...desperation to it. Its hard to explain, but everything it does SHOULD work--it just doesn't, and that's why it fails.
Yeah, I have noticed that CAD tries awfully hard to be funny. I dunno, I don't check it very often anymore. I used to read it daily, back a few years ago when it was still kind of funny. Then it all went to shits and now only one out of every 50 or so comics is funny.

Oh well, I still have Penny-Arcade.