What do you think when you read this?
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It confuses me, why do I care about an evil bridge? Also is it actually a V of November or is that supposed to be 5th?
I was wondering if the V was suppose to be the letter V or the roman numeral for 5, let the fifth of november. When I first saw it I thought about V for Vendetta. Plus with the rhymes, it made it seem like a potential opening of a dark fantasy with a V for Vendetta style story.
I thought:
Ultracolor rainbows that I eat off silverplatters with toe knives and lizard forks,
Broken bottles that dart past antimatters with broken lives and wizard corks,
Plastic smiles for the jaded few.
Drastic wiles for the naked Jew.
Then I thought of bridges. Then I thought whether the V was supposed to be pronounced "vee" or "five." Then I thought about Bridges of Madison County. Then I wondered if V was chosen intentionally to evoke the rhyming sequences from V for Vendetta, and how disappointed I would be if that was the case. Then I was confused by the first 3 stanzas rhyming and then nothing else rhyming, because that's pretty nonstandard rhythm. The I wondered what other people thought but figured I should write my thoughts down before I forgot them.
Ultracolor rainbows that I eat off silverplatters with toe knives and lizard forks,
Broken bottles that dart past antimatters with broken lives and wizard corks,
Plastic smiles for the jaded few.
Drastic wiles for the naked Jew.
Then I thought of bridges. Then I thought whether the V was supposed to be pronounced "vee" or "five." Then I thought about Bridges of Madison County. Then I wondered if V was chosen intentionally to evoke the rhyming sequences from V for Vendetta, and how disappointed I would be if that was the case. Then I was confused by the first 3 stanzas rhyming and then nothing else rhyming, because that's pretty nonstandard rhythm. The I wondered what other people thought but figured I should write my thoughts down before I forgot them.
We shall stay hopeful!Doclector said:
OT: I enjoyed it, though I'm not a big fan of rhyming words with the same word. Does it actually mean anything or did you just write this with the sole intent for people to discuss a possible meaning that doesn't actually exist?
I have a bridge i'd like to sell you.
It's south bound and I'm told a terrible secret is buried under it, but that's all local superstition with no basis in reality at all, and has absolutely nothing to do with me trying to sell it as soon as possible.
I need to close this deal before the 5th of November for personal reasons, so please get in touch with me immediately.
It's south bound and I'm told a terrible secret is buried under it, but that's all local superstition with no basis in reality at all, and has absolutely nothing to do with me trying to sell it as soon as possible.
I need to close this deal before the 5th of November for personal reasons, so please get in touch with me immediately.
I wrote this in a novel for my English chlass. I wrote a crime(ish) novel that were located in Venezia. I don't remember the story, but I remember the poem the psychopath wrote.
All in all, I felt that your usage of the word "all" was altogether all too much.
I read V of November as "The V in November" i.e somehow the letter V three letters into the word "November" is going to reveal a secret.
I read V of November as "The V in November" i.e somehow the letter V three letters into the word "November" is going to reveal a secret.