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Scarim Coral

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May I ask what the synopsis to this RP is? I know we are in a team but what is the situation? Are we on Utopia (comic) or under threat by the sentinel etc? Is the speedball special referring to Colossus throwing ability?
Other than that I'm interested.
Name: Anton Raleigh
Nationality: British
Alias: Wyvern
Race: Mutant (Homo Superior)
Age: 18
Height/Weight: 5'5 65kg
Powers/Talents:
Powers
He transform into a humanoid winged reptile. In this form he has
Flight
Claws on his toes and fingertip that are sharp enough to cut flesh and hard material like rock (within limits)
An ability to withstand higher temperature compare to human.
Tough scaly skin that can absorb small impact like small firearm bullets and weak impalement from bladed weapons.
An ability to flex his scales outward becoming rough like sandpaper skin. It can tear flesh off just by rubbing onto it.
A barb tail that can knock people down (depend how strong this person is) while the barb tip is sharp enough to impale people and hard materials.
Minor regeneration (it?s nowhere near Wolverine level but enough for heal or close open membrane wound on his wing).

Talents
Wilderness survival
Hand to hand combat (but he is still a novice)

Weakness:
He cannot withstand freezing cold temperature (snow and ice) which expose to it without warmth he will freeze to death a lot sooner. This also include being in open water like the sea, river and lake but he would lose mobility and react slower (it may vary depend on the location). Rain (including heavy rain) and warm or hot water has no effect on him.
Since his arm is also his wing, he can only maintain flight for less than 30 minutes (depend much he glide or flapping his arms).

Weapons: None other than his claws and tail.
Equipment: N/A
Appearance:
Human form
He has brown eyes with short brown hair. His body build is slim.

Reptile form
In this form he has light blue scaly skin with an ivory colour underbelly. His nails and toe nails morph into black claws and he also grows out a barb tail. The length of the tail is about 90cm. His upper and lower arm grew out extra bones and membranes which form the bat like wing (he still got his hands). He can fold it back onto the arm when not using it to fly. The wingspan is 1/3 compare to the X-Men Angel (which explain why he can't maintain flight for long). His face is mostly the same albeit with light blue skin. He now sport green reptile eyes, small horns at the jaw line and two horn at the back of his head.

Clothing and costume:
Clothing
Most of the time he is wears a T-shirt with a sleeveless hoodie on top of it and a modify jean to have an extra zipper at the back of it. He also wear either trainers or sandal depending if he feel if he may have to transform (e.g. if he is heading into a dangerous area he wear sandal).

Costume
He follows the traditional X-men attire by having his costume colour scheme blue and yellow. He wears a blue elastic sport vest with a large yellow X on the front and back.
He wear blue short with yellow stripe at the side and a yellow belt with an X shape belt buckle. At the back of the short is a zipper to bring out his tail without ripping his short. He also wear knee guards with X imprinted on it.
Lastly he wears a flexible sandal that can bend into shape when he transform and for his claw to be exposed freely.

General Bio: He had a normal childhood which he had admire the superheroes (Captain Britain, The Avengers and the X-Men etc). When he was 13 he had notice a scale on his chest which he was too terrify to tell his parent. He had looked up a lot of medicals information he could find until he looks it up on genetic. Realising he is a mutant he hide this from his friend and family thinking he was safe for a while (the scale was on his chest which no one can see it). As the years go by more and more scales appear which he had use make-up to cover it but was inevitable when he reach 16.
One day at high school his transformations begin in middle of class freaking everyone out. He left school back to his home to tell his parent who was also shock. They try to cope that their child is a mutant but they were angry at him for keeping it a secret. They were under pressure from the local community which they had deemed him a freak. They finally had enough of their son as they alerted the authority. Fearing for his own life he ran away into the mountain.
He spends a year living in the wilderness and sometimes visits town and villages to keep up with the rest of the world (news). He had begun to control his powers as he learns to revert back to his human form.
One day when Cerebro (or is it Cerebra?) located him, the X-men locate and offer him to join them by enrolling to Xavier school for gifted youngster. He recognises who they are and their reputation (in fact he was planning to go to the school when he had gather enough money).
He had spent a year at the school as he is able to transform between his human and reptile form. He goes by the alias Wyvern because his reptile form resembles one (dragon wing are separate from the arm unlike Wyvern) from the coat of arms he had seen back in Britain.
 

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Sorry for the wait, got busy with halloween and didn't have time to type it up. Finally finished though.

Name: Erica Coppens

Nationality: Belgian, though she's lived in Arizona most of her life.

Alias: The Yellow Caracara

Race: Mutant (Homo Superior)

Age: 25

Height/Weight: 5'8/140 pounds

Powers/Talents: She has the power to physically enhance her body using emotions, or rather, the hormones produce during said emotions, using them as a fuel to add power to whatever area she wants. She tends to get more powerful the more intense the emotions are, but she rarely uses this power in large doses due to what she calls Downer syndrome (explained below in weakness). She'll usually only use this power to traverse terrain and add a bit more power to her punches and kicks (she has to unless she wants to hold it all back and having it blow out on her again).
She's also a Mixed Marshal Arts user, utilizing a combination of luchador-esque grapple attacks and karate strikes.
She's also fluent in Belgian, English, and knows passable Spanish.

Weakness: Tends to hold back in a fight situation, even when it would be justified or required to survive, mostly due to Downer syndrome (as she's nicknamed it), and hormonal withdrawals.
-Blind frenzy: While using a large dose of her power, her mental state changes and makes her unable to hold back, causing her to become increasingly violent until she's mentally worn.
-Downer syndrome: Due to using emotions as fuel for her power, after using all of it she becomes unusually depressed and weakened.
-Hormonal withdrawals: The effects of using her powers doesn't stop there, as when she goes into Downer syndrome, her body loses it's fuel source immediately and, looking for more nourishment, will start to eat itself for more fuel, causing terrible pain. This effect will not stop itself until she uses this power again or she waits long enough, usually between two days to a week (it's not unheard of for it to go on longer though, once lasting up to 3 weeks). Her body will usually heal and replace all damage caused by the withdrawal a day or two later (it actually heals itself while it's eating itself but the damage done is more that the healing factor can make up for at that time.).

Weapons: none but her hands and the beak-like short-claws on her gloves.

Equipment: None.

Appearance: pale skin with short blond hair and eyes in between brown and black.

Clothing and costume: Normal clothing for her is usually a blue shirt, some khaki's or cargo pants (depending on the weather); tennis shoes, full rim glasses, and sometimes a grey jacket (again, weather).

Her costume is a bit flashier and rightfully so; it draws inspiration from both the costumes featured in Carnival and Luchador costumes. It starts with of a feathered head piece, many of which lean backwards and mimic her hair (only showing the lowest pieces and the front tufts of hair) and three individual feathers which are placed higher than the others and stick up, only slightly drooping backwards. Her elbow-length gloves are also feather covered (and pointing towards her elbows) but only on the fore arms while the actual hand part isn't physically distinctive apart from the small beak-like claws at the end. Her knee high leggings don't differ that much either, having feathers on the small bit that reaches the thighs (pointed downward) and on the sides of the actual boot part and that's it. The actual body of the costume is a leotard with 1 1/2 foot feathers coming off the tailbone. lastly, she has a simple mask, covering her eyes with the ends flaired out into little spikes to simulate feathers (they have corrective lenses covering the eye sockets to account for her eyesight0.

General Bio: Erica grew up in Arizona since the age of 1 after her family moved away from Belgium to get away from the family drama (don't know why they picked Arizona). In that time she picked up allot of influence from the culture and became interested in knowing more about the other nations across the border. She did passably in classes until she turned 10, when suddenly she had a sharp drop in grades, owing to poor eyesight and causing her to need glasses. Besides that, nothing of interest happened till she was 17. Her powers had emerged when she was 14 but only at the age of 17 did they emerge enough to become noticeable. She kept it under wraps and continued about her life, graduating high school and applying for college.

For a while everything was fine...then she experienced her powers negative effects for the first time. It turns out that subconsciously, the knowledge of her powers caused a reaction within her body, and later her mind, that wore on her to use said power and eventually, she did. In her second year, a teacher of her's angered her enough to use her powers, making her lose control and murder him within his own home, brutally butchering his family also. After she got home, the pain set in, increasing each day until she used her powers again, this time on two thugs who tried to harm her on the way to the hospital. She instigated two more attacks over two weeks before she could finally break this cycle. She was just lucky enough that in her attacks, she had destroyed most of the evidence that could be linked back to her so the police wouldn?t come after her.

This fact was unknown to her and she spent the rest of her time in college in fear of the police and everyone else involved in the crimes, consumed with guilt about what she had done. Afterwards she moved away from Arizona and tried to come to terms with her power. She learned a lot about it by herself and the few people she revealed it to, not wanting to head to Xavier?s school and risking public knowledge of her powers. She eventually got to the point where she could live with it?but the physical requirements and the knowledge of what she did (mostly the former though since it would stop more incidents like the latter) caused her to try her hand at stopping crime and being a hero.

She was good enough at it that she kept it up as an unofficial job and hasn't looked back since.

Hopefully it's good enough but if not, i'll change a few things.
 

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TheIronRuler said:
You can just call youself "Newton", for constantly breaking his laws.
Thanks for the advice, went with G, not one hundred percent but I think Newton was already a hero's name though I could be thinking of their actual name not hero name.
 

Tyrannical

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Scarim Coral said:
May I ask what the synopsis to this RP is? I know we are in a team but what is the situation? Are we on Utopia (comic) or under threat by the sentinel etc? Is the speedball special referring to Colossus throwing ability?
Other than that I'm interested.
Ok, so like I said earlier, we're staying away from the mainstream as possible. We're still centred at Prof-X's school, Magneto is still a bad guy (but I'll make up some villains for us for the most part). We'll be staying away from the original X-Men for the most part, except for passing mentions. We are a team put together of newly found mutants from various backgrounds. We are a unique team, allowing Mutates along with Mutants. Our team's mission is to protect the school from all threats, whether immediate or not. This includes fighting rogue mutants, recruiting mutants, and defending the school.

Diablo, Scarim and Mind, your sheets are all accepted. Mind, if you could message me with more specifics about your power that would be appreciated. It sounds great, but I'd just like to know a little more about it.
Diablo, if you want to discover one of the "hidden weapons" mentioned in your sheet, please message me first. Again, a great idea, but I just want to make sure you're not to powerful.

I will be closing off applications on Friday. That is all.

IronRuler, that little bit of extra information makes your character sheet fine. I didn't quite understand what you meant. Thanks.
 

Viking Incognito

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Name: Eli Rook

Nationality: N/A

Alias: Scribe

Race: Mutant
Age: 16

Height/Weight: He is about 5?9 and 125 lb.

Powers: He has a way with words. By that I mean he can use words like weapons and tools. If he yells ?Shock? at you, will feel like you have been zapped by electricity and if he were to write down ?Die? and make you look at it, you would kill yourself as fast as possible.

Talents: He is very smart for his age, and he was once described as ??[having] the brain power and thought capacity of a 60 year old man.? by someone he refuses to talk about. And he reads a lot so he has a large vocabulary.

Weakness: His powers are only sure-fire when he writes down the thing and shows it to you, which is usually not as available of an option as he would like. When he uses his voice to make his powers work, he can only do less complicated things like ?shock?. Also, his vocal powers rely on may factors, such as the volume of his voice, the strength of will behind it, and possibly most importantly, what he means. If he says ??shock? but he isn?t thinking clearly, he may just cause the target to be surprised, or if he says ?stop? they may only pause for a moment, or only stop doing a certain thing (provided they are doing more than one thing at a time, like running while shooting). This area of weakness is also affected by the previously mentioned factors (volume etc.).

Weapons: Eli keeps a small mechanical pencil handy at all times and a few pieces of paper. (might also count as equipment)

Equipment: the paper and pencil.

Appearance: Eli is Caucasian and sort of pale with a slender build, despite all the junk food he eats. He keeps his dark brown hair cut into basically a buzz cut, has green eyes and lanky limbs. He doesn?t have any facial hair (despite his opinion that he could make a thin beard or a goatee look good). In general he isn?t particularly handsome (though if h=you ask him, he can look pretty sweet at times) but he isn?t ugly, just kind of average.

Clothing: His preferred outfit is blue-genes, sneakers, some kind of T-shirt, and depending on the weather, his green wool coat that he likes to call a ?Silent Bob coat? (look it up) due to it looking similar to said coat. He is also very fond of his black hat, which is kind of like a smaller, more casual version of a fedora (which he doesn?t know the name for but doesn?t think it is a trilby). When he is in the right mood, he has a soft spot in his heart for ?snazzy? type clothes. Things like a black suit and pants with a grey shirt and red tie, you know, gangster type stuff (Al Capone ?Gangster?, not 50 Cent ?Gangstuh?).

Costume: He thinks big flashy outfits like the Fantastic 4?s leotards are pointless and would rather just wear comfortable effective clothes.

General Bio: Eli was born on a ?private? vessel in international waters from the womb of a mutant mother who was a volunteer for the Weapon-X project, made pregnant by artificial insemination, supplied by a male mutant within the project. The mother was released with a stack of Benjamins and she turned her son over to the scientists. They then turned Eli over to a foster family in New Orleans where he was monitored until the age of six. The people at Weapon-X had learned much about the development process of mutant powers and were ready to ?collect their specimen?, until their plans went very wrong. They ment to get him in his sleep, then drug him so he couldn?t focus his power when he woke up, but as the agents snuck upstairs to his room, he heard a voice in his dream telling him to wake up. He was getting out of bed when the men came into his room, and he isn?t quite sure what happened next, but by the time he was leaving through the backdoor one of the men had run away, the second had been shot in the head, and the third was found unconscious with the murder weapon in hand. Since then Eli has travelled the country a lot, mixing in with the mutant underground, before he was lead to Prof. X's school by a voice in his head.
 

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Viking Incognito said:
Name: Eli Rook

Nationality: N/A

Alias: Scribe

Race: Mutant
Age: 16

Height/Weight: He is about 5?9 and 125 lb.

Powers: He has a way with words. By that I mean he can use words like weapons and tools. If he yells ?Shock? at you, will feel like you have been zapped by electricity and if he were to write down ?Die? and make you look at it, you would kill yourself as fast as possible.

Talents: He is very smart for his age, and he was once described as ??[having] the brain power and thought capacity of a 60 year old man.? by someone he refuses to talk about. And he reads a lot so he has a large vocabulary.

Weakness: His powers are only sure-fire when he writes down the thing and shows it to you, which is usually not as available of an option as he would like. When he uses his voice to make his powers work, he can only do less complicated things like ?shock?. Also, his vocal powers rely on may factors, such as the volume of his voice, the strength of will behind it, and possibly most importantly, what he means. If he says ??shock? but he isn?t thinking clearly, he may just cause the target to be surprised, or if he says ?stop? they may only pause for a moment, or only stop doing a certain thing (provided they are doing more than one thing at a time, like running while shooting). This area of weakness is also affected by the previously mentioned factors (volume etc.).

Weapons: Eli keeps a small mechanical pencil handy at all times and a few pieces of paper. (might also count as equipment)

Equipment: the paper and pencil.

Appearance: Eli is Caucasian and sort of pale with a slender build, despite all the junk food he eats. He keeps his dark brown hair cut into basically a buzz cut, has green eyes and lanky limbs. He doesn?t have any facial hair (despite his opinion that he could make a thin beard or a goatee look good). In general he isn?t particularly handsome (though if h=you ask him, he can look pretty sweet at times) but he isn?t ugly, just kind of average.

Clothing: His preferred outfit is blue-genes, sneakers, some kind of T-shirt, and depending on the weather, his green wool coat that he likes to call a ?Silent Bob coat? (look it up) due to it looking similar to said coat. He is also very fond of his black hat, which is kind of like a smaller, more casual version of a fedora (which he doesn?t know the name for but doesn?t think it is a trilby). When he is in the right mood, he has a soft spot in his heart for ?snazzy? type clothes. Things like a black suit and pants with a grey shirt and red tie, you know, gangster type stuff (Al Capone ?Gangster?, not 50 Cent ?Gangstuh?).

Costume: He thinks big flashy outfits like the Fantastic 4?s leotards are pointless and would rather just wear comfortable effective clothes.

General Bio: Eli was born on a ?private? vessel in international waters from the womb of a mutant mother who was a volunteer for the Weapon-X project, made pregnant by artificial insemination, supplied by a male mutant within the project. The mother was released with a stack of Benjamins and she turned her son over to the scientists. They then turned Eli over to a foster family in New Orleans where he was monitored until the age of six. The people at Weapon-X had learned much about the development process of mutant powers and were ready to ?collect their specimen?, until their plans went very wrong. They ment to get him in his sleep, then drug him so he couldn?t focus his power when he woke up, but as the agents snuck upstairs to his room, he heard a voice in his dream telling him to wake up. He was getting out of bed when the men came into his room, and he isn?t quite sure what happened next, but by the time he was leaving through the backdoor one of the men had run away, the second had been shot in the head, and the third was found unconscious with the murder weapon in hand. Since then Eli has travelled the country a lot, mixing in with the mutant underground, before he was lead to Prof. X's school by a voice in his head.
All good. As long as there is a limit to the voice powers, that's fine. If anyone seems to powerful, I'll just let you know and we'll fix it up.
 

Viking Incognito

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Tyrannical said:
Viking Incognito said:
Name: Eli Rook

Nationality: N/A

Alias: Scribe

Race: Mutant
Age: 16

Height/Weight: He is about 5?9 and 125 lb.

Powers: He has a way with words. By that I mean he can use words like weapons and tools. If he yells ?Shock? at you, will feel like you have been zapped by electricity and if he were to write down ?Die? and make you look at it, you would kill yourself as fast as possible.

Talents: He is very smart for his age, and he was once described as ??[having] the brain power and thought capacity of a 60 year old man.? by someone he refuses to talk about. And he reads a lot so he has a large vocabulary.

Weakness: His powers are only sure-fire when he writes down the thing and shows it to you, which is usually not as available of an option as he would like. When he uses his voice to make his powers work, he can only do less complicated things like ?shock?. Also, his vocal powers rely on may factors, such as the volume of his voice, the strength of will behind it, and possibly most importantly, what he means. If he says ??shock? but he isn?t thinking clearly, he may just cause the target to be surprised, or if he says ?stop? they may only pause for a moment, or only stop doing a certain thing (provided they are doing more than one thing at a time, like running while shooting). This area of weakness is also affected by the previously mentioned factors (volume etc.).

Weapons: Eli keeps a small mechanical pencil handy at all times and a few pieces of paper. (might also count as equipment)

Equipment: the paper and pencil.

Appearance: Eli is Caucasian and sort of pale with a slender build, despite all the junk food he eats. He keeps his dark brown hair cut into basically a buzz cut, has green eyes and lanky limbs. He doesn?t have any facial hair (despite his opinion that he could make a thin beard or a goatee look good). In general he isn?t particularly handsome (though if h=you ask him, he can look pretty sweet at times) but he isn?t ugly, just kind of average.

Clothing: His preferred outfit is blue-genes, sneakers, some kind of T-shirt, and depending on the weather, his green wool coat that he likes to call a ?Silent Bob coat? (look it up) due to it looking similar to said coat. He is also very fond of his black hat, which is kind of like a smaller, more casual version of a fedora (which he doesn?t know the name for but doesn?t think it is a trilby). When he is in the right mood, he has a soft spot in his heart for ?snazzy? type clothes. Things like a black suit and pants with a grey shirt and red tie, you know, gangster type stuff (Al Capone ?Gangster?, not 50 Cent ?Gangstuh?).

Costume: He thinks big flashy outfits like the Fantastic 4?s leotards are pointless and would rather just wear comfortable effective clothes.

General Bio: Eli was born on a ?private? vessel in international waters from the womb of a mutant mother who was a volunteer for the Weapon-X project, made pregnant by artificial insemination, supplied by a male mutant within the project. The mother was released with a stack of Benjamins and she turned her son over to the scientists. They then turned Eli over to a foster family in New Orleans where he was monitored until the age of six. The people at Weapon-X had learned much about the development process of mutant powers and were ready to ?collect their specimen?, until their plans went very wrong. They ment to get him in his sleep, then drug him so he couldn?t focus his power when he woke up, but as the agents snuck upstairs to his room, he heard a voice in his dream telling him to wake up. He was getting out of bed when the men came into his room, and he isn?t quite sure what happened next, but by the time he was leaving through the backdoor one of the men had run away, the second had been shot in the head, and the third was found unconscious with the murder weapon in hand. Since then Eli has travelled the country a lot, mixing in with the mutant underground, before he was lead to Prof. X's school by a voice in his head.
All good. As long as there is a limit to the voice powers, that's fine. If anyone seems to powerful, I'll just let you know and we'll fix it up.
So dose that mean I'm in?
 

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Viking Incognito said:
Tyrannical said:
Viking Incognito said:
Name: Eli Rook

Nationality: N/A

Alias: Scribe

Race: Mutant
Age: 16

Height/Weight: He is about 5?9 and 125 lb.

Powers: He has a way with words. By that I mean he can use words like weapons and tools. If he yells ?Shock? at you, will feel like you have been zapped by electricity and if he were to write down ?Die? and make you look at it, you would kill yourself as fast as possible.

Talents: He is very smart for his age, and he was once described as ??[having] the brain power and thought capacity of a 60 year old man.? by someone he refuses to talk about. And he reads a lot so he has a large vocabulary.

Weakness: His powers are only sure-fire when he writes down the thing and shows it to you, which is usually not as available of an option as he would like. When he uses his voice to make his powers work, he can only do less complicated things like ?shock?. Also, his vocal powers rely on may factors, such as the volume of his voice, the strength of will behind it, and possibly most importantly, what he means. If he says ??shock? but he isn?t thinking clearly, he may just cause the target to be surprised, or if he says ?stop? they may only pause for a moment, or only stop doing a certain thing (provided they are doing more than one thing at a time, like running while shooting). This area of weakness is also affected by the previously mentioned factors (volume etc.).

Weapons: Eli keeps a small mechanical pencil handy at all times and a few pieces of paper. (might also count as equipment)

Equipment: the paper and pencil.

Appearance: Eli is Caucasian and sort of pale with a slender build, despite all the junk food he eats. He keeps his dark brown hair cut into basically a buzz cut, has green eyes and lanky limbs. He doesn?t have any facial hair (despite his opinion that he could make a thin beard or a goatee look good). In general he isn?t particularly handsome (though if h=you ask him, he can look pretty sweet at times) but he isn?t ugly, just kind of average.

Clothing: His preferred outfit is blue-genes, sneakers, some kind of T-shirt, and depending on the weather, his green wool coat that he likes to call a ?Silent Bob coat? (look it up) due to it looking similar to said coat. He is also very fond of his black hat, which is kind of like a smaller, more casual version of a fedora (which he doesn?t know the name for but doesn?t think it is a trilby). When he is in the right mood, he has a soft spot in his heart for ?snazzy? type clothes. Things like a black suit and pants with a grey shirt and red tie, you know, gangster type stuff (Al Capone ?Gangster?, not 50 Cent ?Gangstuh?).

Costume: He thinks big flashy outfits like the Fantastic 4?s leotards are pointless and would rather just wear comfortable effective clothes.

General Bio: Eli was born on a ?private? vessel in international waters from the womb of a mutant mother who was a volunteer for the Weapon-X project, made pregnant by artificial insemination, supplied by a male mutant within the project. The mother was released with a stack of Benjamins and she turned her son over to the scientists. They then turned Eli over to a foster family in New Orleans where he was monitored until the age of six. The people at Weapon-X had learned much about the development process of mutant powers and were ready to ?collect their specimen?, until their plans went very wrong. They ment to get him in his sleep, then drug him so he couldn?t focus his power when he woke up, but as the agents snuck upstairs to his room, he heard a voice in his dream telling him to wake up. He was getting out of bed when the men came into his room, and he isn?t quite sure what happened next, but by the time he was leaving through the backdoor one of the men had run away, the second had been shot in the head, and the third was found unconscious with the murder weapon in hand. Since then Eli has travelled the country a lot, mixing in with the mutant underground, before he was lead to Prof. X's school by a voice in his head.
All good. As long as there is a limit to the voice powers, that's fine. If anyone seems to powerful, I'll just let you know and we'll fix it up.
So dose that mean I'm in?
Yeah, you're in, just don't go overboard with the powers.
We're now officially closed, here is the thread.
http://www.escapistmagazine.com/forums/read/540.321420-Final-X-The-X-Men-RP-Closed

I'll get a group up later.
 

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I'm sorry to ask so late in the proceedings, but is there by any chance one more open spot? I just thought I might ask.
 

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Tyrannical said:
Viking Incognito said:
Tyrannical said:
Viking Incognito said:
Name: Eli Rook

Nationality: N/A

Alias: Scribe

Race: Mutant
Age: 16

Height/Weight: He is about 5?9 and 125 lb.

Powers: He has a way with words. By that I mean he can use words like weapons and tools. If he yells ?Shock? at you, will feel like you have been zapped by electricity and if he were to write down ?Die? and make you look at it, you would kill yourself as fast as possible.

Talents: He is very smart for his age, and he was once described as ??[having] the brain power and thought capacity of a 60 year old man.? by someone he refuses to talk about. And he reads a lot so he has a large vocabulary.

Weakness: His powers are only sure-fire when he writes down the thing and shows it to you, which is usually not as available of an option as he would like. When he uses his voice to make his powers work, he can only do less complicated things like ?shock?. Also, his vocal powers rely on may factors, such as the volume of his voice, the strength of will behind it, and possibly most importantly, what he means. If he says ??shock? but he isn?t thinking clearly, he may just cause the target to be surprised, or if he says ?stop? they may only pause for a moment, or only stop doing a certain thing (provided they are doing more than one thing at a time, like running while shooting). This area of weakness is also affected by the previously mentioned factors (volume etc.).

Weapons: Eli keeps a small mechanical pencil handy at all times and a few pieces of paper. (might also count as equipment)

Equipment: the paper and pencil.

Appearance: Eli is Caucasian and sort of pale with a slender build, despite all the junk food he eats. He keeps his dark brown hair cut into basically a buzz cut, has green eyes and lanky limbs. He doesn?t have any facial hair (despite his opinion that he could make a thin beard or a goatee look good). In general he isn?t particularly handsome (though if h=you ask him, he can look pretty sweet at times) but he isn?t ugly, just kind of average.

Clothing: His preferred outfit is blue-genes, sneakers, some kind of T-shirt, and depending on the weather, his green wool coat that he likes to call a ?Silent Bob coat? (look it up) due to it looking similar to said coat. He is also very fond of his black hat, which is kind of like a smaller, more casual version of a fedora (which he doesn?t know the name for but doesn?t think it is a trilby). When he is in the right mood, he has a soft spot in his heart for ?snazzy? type clothes. Things like a black suit and pants with a grey shirt and red tie, you know, gangster type stuff (Al Capone ?Gangster?, not 50 Cent ?Gangstuh?).

Costume: He thinks big flashy outfits like the Fantastic 4?s leotards are pointless and would rather just wear comfortable effective clothes.

General Bio: Eli was born on a ?private? vessel in international waters from the womb of a mutant mother who was a volunteer for the Weapon-X project, made pregnant by artificial insemination, supplied by a male mutant within the project. The mother was released with a stack of Benjamins and she turned her son over to the scientists. They then turned Eli over to a foster family in New Orleans where he was monitored until the age of six. The people at Weapon-X had learned much about the development process of mutant powers and were ready to ?collect their specimen?, until their plans went very wrong. They ment to get him in his sleep, then drug him so he couldn?t focus his power when he woke up, but as the agents snuck upstairs to his room, he heard a voice in his dream telling him to wake up. He was getting out of bed when the men came into his room, and he isn?t quite sure what happened next, but by the time he was leaving through the backdoor one of the men had run away, the second had been shot in the head, and the third was found unconscious with the murder weapon in hand. Since then Eli has travelled the country a lot, mixing in with the mutant underground, before he was lead to Prof. X's school by a voice in his head.
All good. As long as there is a limit to the voice powers, that's fine. If anyone seems to powerful, I'll just let you know and we'll fix it up.
So dose that mean I'm in?
Yeah, you're in, just don't go overboard with the powers.
We're now officially closed, here is the thread.
http://www.escapistmagazine.com/forums/read/540.321420-Final-X-The-X-Men-RP-Closed

I'll get a group up later.
so sorry to double post, but I forgot to quote you earlier. Would you mind reading my above query?