Yu Yu Hakusho!!! Spirits Amok! (A Spirit Detective RP!) Chapter 3: Genkai's Training.

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Oh man... I loved this show as a kid...
Alright reserve. Will soon have in a sheet.

Also, for all who didn't know, Yami is Japanese for "Darkness." Bit of a hint to the nature of the new demon lord, eh?

EDIT: Did Yusuke actually die in the manga?
No, he didn't. This is set about 20 years after the events of the show.

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Yami huh? I don't suppose it's the soul of an ancient pharaoh.
It just might you know, it just might....XD Crossover idea is crazy. :D
 

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And so, it is finished. Enjoy.
Name: Damien Lier

Age: 16

Description: Damien stands tall at 6' even, while the best description of his body would be streamlined. His body is lean and toned, but his looks do not betray his actual strength, especially in his arms. His grip strength is especially fierce. His ocean-blue eyes however, contain nothing but kindness. Just like the ocean though, he can turn in a moment into a sea of rage. Damien cuts his golden spiky hair close to his head, and usually wears what is most comfortable to him. Most often this includes his white sneakers, black sweats, a blue t-shirt, and a white hoodie with a tribal insignia right over the heart.

Power: Spirit Napalm

D- Class: Damien's power is severely limited in this state. He requires two hands to form an explosive ball of energy and has to keep it like such to stabilize the ball and not have it blow up in his face. As such, Damien will usually take a pitcher's windup to throw the ball. He cannot put any spin on the ball.

C-Class: Damien is more used to stabilizing his power and so can form the energy sphere with only one hand. He can also burn off some of the explosive power to launch the ball at high speeds without warning. 

B-Class: Damien is slowly mastering his power and has created a technique able to control the flight path of a sphere after it has left his hands. Damien is able to control multiple spheres simultaneously. Finally, each explosion leaves a burning fire that is difficult to put out.

A-Class: Damien has reached the apex of his power. He is able to create spontaneous combustions in the air by igniting the hydrogen in the air. He has mastered the base explosive sphere, and thus is able to use 'slow burn'. Instead of launching the sphere, Damien contains it in his hand, creating a hole in the side and letting energy escape out that opening, spouting a jet of flame. He is not limited to his hands after reaching this state when using his power.

Bio: Damien was born in Los Angeles and had lived there most of his life. He always played in any baseball league he could and excelled. However, last year Damien's father received a promotion and so the family had to move to New York. Damien was sad to leave his friends behind, but his jocular personality helped Damien fit in quite well. He Quickly became the starting pitcher for varsity baseball.

However, this past week Damien had begun to see strange creatures slinking around town. Damien didn't think much of it until he was savaged one night coming home from practice at night. Damien held his hands out in front of his face and was amazed as the creature reared back and fell down dead. Damien walked over to it and saw its face had been blown apart before it turned to dust in front of his eyes. He took care not to mention it to anybody, but instead began to practice the power, trying to control it for when he would need it again.
 

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And so, it is finished. Enjoy.
Name: Damien Lier

Age: 16

Description: Damien stands tall at 6' even, while the best description of his body would be streamlined. His body is lean and toned, but his looks do not betray his actual strength, especially in his arms. His grip strength is especially fierce. His ocean-blue eyes however, contain nothing but kindness. Just like the ocean though, he can turn in a moment into a sea of rage. Damien cuts his golden  spiky hair close to his head, and usually wears what is most comfortable to him. Most often this includes his white sneakers, black sweats, a blue t-shirt, and a white hoodie with a tribal insignia right overthe heart.

Power: Spirit Napalm

D- Class: Damien's power is severely limited in this state. He requires two hands to form an explosive ball of energy and has to keep it like such to stabilize the ball and not have it blow up in his face. As such, Damien will usually take a pitcher's windup to throw the ball. He cannot put any spin on the ball.

C-Class: Damien is more used to stabilizing his power and so can form the energy sphere with only one hand. He can also burn off some of the explosive power to launch the ball at high speeds without warning. 

B-Class: Damien is slowly mastering his power and has created a technique able to control the flight path of a sphere after it has left his hands. Damien is able to control multiple spheres simultaneously. Finally, each explosion leaves a burning fire that is difficult to put out.

A-Class: Damien has reached the apex of his power. He is able to create spontaneous combustions in the air by igniting the hydrogen in the air. He has mastered the base explosive sphere, and thus is able to use 'slow burn'. Instead of launching the sphere, Damien contains it in his hand, creating a hole in the side and letting energy escape out that opening, spouting a jet of flame. He is not limited to his hands after reaching this state when using his power.

Bio: Damien was born in Los Angeles and had lived there most of his life. He always played in any baseball league he could and excelled. However, last  year Damien's father received a promotion and so the family had to move to New York. Damien was sad to leave his friends behind, but his jocular personality helped Damien fit in quite well. He Quickly became the starting pitcher for varsity baseball.

However, this past week Damien had begun to see strange creatures slinking around town. Damien didn't think much of it until he was savaged one night coming home from practice at night. Damien held his hands out in front of his face and was amazed as the creature reared back and fell down dead. Damien walked over to it and saw its face had been blown apart before it turned to dust in front of his eyes. He took care not to mention it to anybody, but instead began to practice the power, trying to control it for when he would need it again.
Looks Good Xero, Sheet accepted.
 

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Please note that in the event that we do not get the number of players needed to start the adventure, then i will start with who we have now. Right now we are sitting at Five characters including myself and Three reserves.

I Am setting the deadline for submissions on this coming Friday. That is plenty of time for anyone interested to get their two cents in.

-AHL
 

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Anyone wanna message the guys who out in a reserve 'n tell 'em about the deadline? Having Jack in here would be interesting... Anyone wanna bet that he chooses a summoner? Or that he summons Calumon and can amp the little dude's power?

... Or better yet, like in the show, have the little guy like the energizer bunny for Spirit Energy. Just ideas of mine, pay them no heed.

List of reserves:
AgentBJ09
Chaos Incarnate
Jack and Calumon
 

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My knowledge of the anime is limited, being so that I've only seen the abridged series of it so far; I'm interested in it, though (yesterday I bought the first season on DVD, so I'm liable to get more knowledgeable as the RP progresses) and I think the setting'd make for a really interesting RP.

Name: Sonny Road

Age: 15

Description: Blue eyes and blonde hair coming down in a fringe over one eye. Sonny wears a white long-sleeved dress-shirt and a plain black skirt, with white socks coming up to his knees and a pair of sensible shoes. He is slight of build, substantially shorter than average height for his age-group and paints his nails black.

His eyes glow an unusual shade of yellow; that isn't to say they have yellow irises, but they actually emit a faint yellow glow. This glow becomes more prominent when Sonny uses his powers.

Power: Vitamin D manipulation (sunlight-based powers)

D-class: Sonny can imbue an object he's looking at with rays of sunlight, causing it to glow brightly. This makes it difficult for anyone looking in the object's direction to see, and also causes the object to become warm. The instant the object is imbued with the sunny property it flashes brightly, temporarily blinding anyone who was looking in its direction, and grows particularly hot for a second before cooling down, meaning anyone who was touching it at the time would be burned.

Due to Sonny's unique eyes (a side-effect of the power) he is unaffected by the glow.

C-class: Sonny creates an aura of heat around him, lifting small objects near to him off the ground at the time due to convection and creating a weak barrier to stop certain light or slow-moving projectiles. Heavier or faster-moving projectiles flying at him would be slowed down in their course.

Sonny is incapable of movement whilst invoking this power.

B-class: Sonny can shoot beams of visible heat from his eyes, burning anything the beam connects with. The beam is incredibly bright, and staring at it would be like looking at a lightbulb.

A-class: Sonny burns in a pillar of light at an incredible temperature, badly burning anyone caught within a ten-foot radius of him and destroying anything above him at the time. The pillar shoots down directly from the sun, so if there's anything which would be impossible to destroy between Sonny and the sun he's incapable of invoking the power.

Bio: Sonny is fairly timid, and often has difficulty making friends; he's nice to everyone he meets, though, and is rarely confrontational about anyone. He was raised by a single mother, and at an early age he became accustomed to the fact that he felt more comfortable wearing clothing typically designed for women than men. He's not ashamed at all by his nature as he doesn't see anything wrong with it - his mother raised him telling him he could act however he wanted, so was always supportive of him - and due to his appearance and the way he dresses most people have difficulty telling whether he's a boy or a girl.

Sonny isn't afraid of the dark - his strange eyes give him excellent night-vision - but areas with little sun make him uncomfortable, and he hates the idea of going underground.
 

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Sam G said:
My knowledge of the anime is limited, being so that I've only seen the abridged series of it so far; I'm interested in it, though (yesterday I bought the first season on DVD, so I'm liable to get more knowledgeable as the RP progresses) and I think the setting'd make for a really interesting RP.

Name: Sonny Road

Age: 15

Description: Blue eyes and blonde hair coming down in a fringe over one eye. Sonny wears a white long-sleeved dress-shirt and a plain black skirt, with white socks coming up to his knees and a pair of sensible shoes. He is slight of build, substantially shorter than average height for his age-group and paints his nails black.

His eyes glow an unusual shade of yellow; that isn't to say they have yellow irises, but they actually emit a faint yellow glow. This glow becomes more prominent when Sonny uses his powers.

Power: Vitamin D manipulation (sunlight-based powers)

D-class: Sonny can imbue an object he's looking at with rays of sunlight, causing it to glow brightly. This makes it difficult for anyone looking in the object's direction to see, and also causes the object to become warm. The instant the object is imbued with the sunny property it flashes brightly, temporarily blinding anyone who was looking in its direction, and grows particularly hot for a second before cooling down, meaning anyone who was touching it at the time would be burned.

Due to Sonny's unique eyes (a side-effect of the power) he is unaffected by the glow.

C-class: Sonny creates an aura of heat around him, lifting small objects near to him off the ground at the time due to convection and creating a weak barrier to stop certain light or slow-moving projectiles. Heavier or faster-moving projectiles flying at him would be slowed down in their course.

Sonny is incapable of movement whilst invoking this power.

B-class: Sonny can shoot beams of visible heat from his eyes, burning anything the beam connects with. The beam is incredibly bright, and staring at it would be like looking at a lightbulb.

A-class: Sonny burns in a pillar of light at an incredible temperature, badly burning anyone caught within a ten-foot radius of him and destroying anything above him at the time. The pillar shoots down directly from the sun, so if there's anything which would be impossible to destroy between Sonny and the sun he's incapable of invoking the power.

Bio: Sonny is fairly timid, and often has difficulty making friends; he's nice to everyone he meets, though, and is rarely confrontational about anyone. He was raised by a single mother, and at an early age he became accustomed to the fact that he felt more comfortable wearing clothing typically designed for women than men. He's not ashamed at all by his nature as he doesn't see anything wrong with it - his mother raised him telling him he could act however he wanted, so was always supportive of him - and due to his appearance and the way he dresses most people have difficulty telling whether he's a boy or a girl.

Sonny isn't afraid of the dark - his strange eyes give him excellent night-vision - but areas with little sun make him uncomfortable, and he hates the idea of going underground.
You only need to know the basic principles of the show to understand this RP, (The characters, Spirit energy, Etc)

Also, ACCEPTED!
 

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All Hail Lelouch said:
I know for sure that Jack is working on a sheet at the time, but I haven't a clue about the others.
I won't be taking part, at least at the beginning.

Too much schoolwork needs doing since it's near the end of the semester. If you don't get enough slots filled, I'll keep a sheet on reserve, but for now, I can't participate.
 

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Well if it Has to be done that soon.

Name: Van Archer

Age: Sixteen

Description: 6' 1" Average build.

Power: Spirit gauntlets
D-Spiritual energy gloves Van's hands, increasing physical attack power.
C-The spirit gloves extend up to Van's elbows. Each finger is also shaped like a claw to allow for slashing attacks. The gauntlet can also be shot off his arm towards his opponent, but if it fully goes past his fist, it instantly dissipates.
B-Van has solidified his gauntlets so they are now hard enough to be used to block and guard with. He can also change their shape and length some.
A-Van can now fire of his gauntlets and control them as they fly through the air. He can also change their size to be much larger.

Bio: Van is a bit of a shut in, though when he gets the opportunity, he attempts to be the life of the party. This contraindicating personality often has many people see him as odd, and thus they tend to ignore him. When he is alone, Van usually plays video games or just watches TV. His parents seem to be accepting of this, as they also spend most of their home time in front of TVs.
When out in public, usually with his friends, Van tries to keep everyone laughing. He constantly tries to make jokes, and almost never takes anything serious. Some of his jokes are aimed at himself, so he has an emotionally thick skin. Even though he does try to keep everyone around him happy, he is unable to deal with other people's sadness, usually just allowing to cry on his shoulder and not say anything.

Other: Regardless of what is going on, Van would rather be at home playing games.
 

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Xero Scythe said:
Having Jack in here would be interesting... Anyone wanna bet that he chooses a summoner? Or that he summons Calumon and can amp the little dude's power?

... Or better yet, like in the show, have the little guy like the energizer bunny for Spirit Energy.
Now now, let's not turn this RP into a fan fiction.

Name: Angelo Fulgur

Age: 16

Description: White hair stood up on his head. Generally wears nothing but white. Trousers, Jacket and T-Shirt reflective of his pure, judging mood.

Power: Thunder Touch and Lightning Pulse

D Class:- Thunder touch is made. Angelo can surround his fingers in electricity which is discharged into whoever he touches with it. Doesn't work when closed into a fist, so at the minute is only good for grabbing. Stronger than him punching, but has limited use and uses up power fast the longer it's maintained.

C Class:- Thunder touch is now able to cover entire hand. Along with being more powerful, it also uses the joint power of the thunder touch and the fist, creating a devastating blow. Uses a fair mount of Spirit energy.

B Class:- Thunder touch more powerful. Lightning Pulse is awakened. Angel can now Pulse a vertical deadly ring out of his body. It's flat out extrudes all around him from the chest. Being made from condensed and tightly compact electricity, it does no damage to structures and only living things can feel it's deadly force.

A Class:- Arcs of electricity can shoot off both attacks, in blows that aren't as powerful, but still can cause damage to who it touches. Main parts of the attacks are more powerful.

Bio: Grew up in America living in the country. He learnt and developed strong morals that he holds himself to. He tries to be nice, but picks out flaws with other people's actions and motives. If there is a big enough issue he would wish to punish them, regardless of who they are. Angelo has had to become strong and taught himself to fight in order to rightly punish those he defines as "true sinners". It is because of this, he does not have many friends and is sometimes bullied for his beliefs.

Other: Angelo is a man. He tries not to be afraid of things and suppresses his own emotions to stay focussed, but he can have an enormous temper burst, making him blind and deaf to all but but the violence he wishes, and who he wishes it on.

Calumon: I don't think I'd fit in well anyway. I hate fighting. :S
 

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Name: Elliot McNeil
Age: 17
Description: He has a certain taste for clothes (being from New Orleans) so he almost always wears blue denim jeans. He also wears a regular pair of workman's boots and his father's leather pilot jacket over T-shirts. Other than clothes he is just a few fractions of an inch shorter than 6 feet tall and he is pretty skinny. He has light brown eyes and dark brown hair that he keeps in a buzz cut. He can almost always be found with cigarettes as well.

Power: Spirit Essence Manipulation

D- Elliot can see the trails of people?s essence and use it to lead him to them.

C- Elliot can move around already-existing essence and use it like a weak form of weapon (kinda like a water-bender in avatar but with essence)

B-He can form essence into shapes or weapons

A- He can absorb people's essence and inflate his own power (but he expends it as he uses it so he can't just keep it forever)

Bio: Elliot grew up in Louisiana until his mom and dad got divorced and he went with his dad to New York. His dad Is retired but he was in the Air Force so he taught Elliot how to fly a plane and shoot a gun. Thanks to his dad, Elliot is a marksman with any kind of pistol and a skilled pilot. He was doing well in school until his father suffered a fatal heart attack. He wasn't able to go back to his mother because she had long since moved to a different country with a new husband. So Elliot ended up living in various foster homes where his behavior and attitude took a dive. He ended up getting kicked out of school for getting in repeated fights. He is very cynical and often times seems bored. He acts kinda like Holden Caulfield but without the alcoholism. He approaches everything from the most pessimistic view point possible and always assumes the worst. While he is willing to work with other people he will not always be nice to them.

Other: He is a pilot and a pistol marksman like I said, and he also smokes a lot. He was trained in hand to hand combat by his dad and used it to dominate all of his fights in school. His closest possession is his dad?s leather pilot jacket.
 

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Jack and Calumon said:
Xero Scythe said:
Having Jack in here would be interesting... Anyone wanna bet that he chooses a summoner? Or that he summons Calumon and can amp the little dude's power?

... Or better yet, like in the show, have the little guy like the energizer bunny for Spirit Energy.
Now now, let's not turn this RP into a fan fiction.

Name: Angelo Fulgur

Age: 16

Description: Black hair stood up on his head. Generally wears nothing but white. Trousers, Jacket and T-Shirt reflective of his pure, judging mood.

Power: Thunder Touch and Lightning Pulse

D Class:- Thunder touch is made. Angelo can surround his fingers in electricity which is discharged into whoever he touches with it. Doesn't work when closed into a fist, so at the minute is only good for grabbing. Stronger than him punching, but has limited use and uses up power fast the longer it's maintained.

C Class:- Thunder touch is now able to cover entire hand. Along with being more powerful, it also uses the joint power of the thunder touch and the fist, creating a devastating blow. Uses a fair mount of Spirit energy.

B Class:- Thunder touch more powerful. Lightning Pulse is awakened. Angel can now Pulse a vertical deadly ring out of his body. It's flat out extrudes all around him from the chest. Being made from condensed and tightly compact electricity, it does no damage to structures and only living things can feel it's deadly force.

A Class:- Arcs of electricity can shoot off both attacks, in blows that aren't as powerful, but still can cause damage to who it touches. Main parts of the attacks are more powerful.

Bio: Grew up in America living in the country. He learnt and developed strong morals that he holds himself to. He tries to be nice, but picks out flaws with other people's actions and motives. If there is a big enough issue he would wish to punish them, regardless of who they are. Angelo has had to become strong and taught himself to fight in order to rightly punish those he defines as "true sinners". It is because of this, he does not have many friends and is sometimes bullied for his beliefs.

Other: Angelo is a man. He tries not to be afraid of things and suppresses his own emotions to stay focussed, but he can have an enormous temper burst, making him blind and deaf to all but but the violence he wishes, and who he wishes it on.

Calumon: I don't think I'd fit in well anyway. I hate fighting. :S
Welcome Jack, you are the last person to be accepted.

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Name: Elliot McNeil
Age: 17
Description: He has a certain taste for clothes (being from New Orleans) so he almost always wears blue denim jeans. He also wears a regular pair of workman's boots and his father's leather pilot jacket over T-shirts. Other than clothes he is just a few fractions of an inch shorter than 6 feet tall and he is pretty skinny. He has light brown eyes and dark brown hair that he keeps in a buzz cut. He can almost always be found with cigarettes as well.

Power: Spirit Essence Manipulation

D- Elliot can see the trails of people?s essence and use it to lead him to them.

C- Elliot can move around already-existing essence and use it like a weak form of weapon (kinda like a water-bender in avatar but with essence)

B-He can form essence into shapes or weapons

A- He can absorb people's essence and inflate his own power (but he expends it as he uses it so he can't just keep it forever)

Bio: Elliot grew up in Louisiana until his mom and dad got divorced and he went with his dad to New York. His dad Is retired but he was in the Air Force so he taught Elliot how to fly a plane and shoot a gun. Thanks to his dad, Elliot is a marksman with any kind of pistol and a skilled pilot. He was doing well in school until his father suffered a fatal heart attack. He wasn't able to go back to his mother because she had long since moved to a different country with a new husband. So Elliot ended up living in various foster homes where his behavior and attitude took a dive. He ended up getting kicked out of school for getting in repeated fights. He is very cynical and often times seems bored. He acts kinda like Holden Caulfield but without the alcoholism. He approaches everything from the most pessimistic view point possible and always assumes the worst. While he is willing to work with other people he will not always be nice to them.

Other: He is a pilot and a pistol marksman like I said, and he also smokes a lot. He was trained in hand to hand combat by his dad and used it to dominate all of his fights in school. His closest possession is his dad?s leather pilot jacket.
Sorry my friend, 8 is the maximum that i can take on this RP, I will place you first on the list of Reserves though.
 

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Ill have a go....

Name: Viktor Afanasi
Age: 18
Description: His slender almost starved body gently hides behind his humble garments. Ragtag with his grandfather?s old vest and trousers Viktor stands at a mere five foot nine always seeming to hide amongst the crowd. His matted brown hair is hidden underneath a tattered popper?s hat while his hands are stricken with earth and grim. He carries an old sack of toys with him at all times to remind him of his violent past.
Power: Mechanical Reconstruction
D- Using his spirit Energy Viktor has found out that he can control everyday electrical devices by enhancing them with his own energy. His favorite device is the old toy tank that given to him by his now deceased parents. Carrying it with him at all times the small tank is able to be controlled via spirit energy through Viktor?s hands, while small and fast the tank is able to unleash a violent blast of energy through its power is only equal to that of Viktor?s own strength and the power time of its batteries.
C-Realizing that his power can be extend to multiple vessels at once Viktor?s recognizable sack of handmade toys is now a noticeable sack of violence as he can now endow any of his hand crafted heirlooms into a devilish device of destruction. However his power is still inhibited by the lifetime of the said device?s physical energy source
B-No longer Hindered by his own premade heirlooms and the need for electricity Viktor can now possess any mechanical device and deconstructed it to fit his necessity, turning his environment into a living nightmare for his opponents. Electrical wires become beacons for drawn spirit energy, Cars into self-propelled spirit bombs, and any electrical device into a potential weapon.
A-Fully realizing his power?s Viktor has now let go of his past horrors and can merge with his creations to enhance his own body with their powers. Almost Mech like Viktor can now arm himself with his creations turning his own weakness into an asset. Armed with his own spirit laden armor and weaponry Viktor no longer is subjugated the sidelines and now has the ability to exact personal revenge on those whom he fits guilty of his wrath.
Bio: Born and raised in St. Peter?s Viktor grew up humbly as a toy maker?s son. However as the Great War grew near his father was forced to leave for the army while Viktor continued the family business. However once he reached the age of 16 Viktor too was forced into service leaving his mother and two sister?s behind to fend for themselves. Fighting on the front line Viktor grew cold hearted and bitter as news of his family?s death reached him. Their loss is what unleashed his spirit energy as he lay crying on their gravesites. Three years pass without anyone realizing his power?s until one day a strange letter happens upon his door explaining the duties of spirit detectives. Curious about his ability and about the Spirit world Viktor only wishes to further expand his powers, in hope to exact revenge for his family?s death.
Misc: Trained in the Russian army Viktor is hot headed and has a severe chip on his shoulder. His fighting style is more long ranged as his physical body is still vulnerable to attack (until his A-power) more of a strategist Viktor prides himself on his cunning and wisdom on the battlefield.
 

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Ill have a go....
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Okay. 1. The setting is a quiet town. 2. There is no "Great War" 3. you aren't a Russian Soldier, you are a highschooler. 4. Please change the entire sheet, no offence to you, but this is almost contradictory to what the setting and story require.
 

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All Hail Lelouch said:
thelastgentleman said:
Ill have a go....
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Okay. 1. The setting is a quiet town. 2. There is no "Great War" 3. you aren't a Russian Soldier, you are a highschooler. 4. Please change the entire sheet, no offence to you, but this is almost contradictory to what the setting and story require.
The 'Great War' was a nickname for WW1, in which the Russians did take citizens of 16 or even younger to fight. He would probably be a drummerboy, admittedly, but the history is correct. The sheet is just set nearly 100 years in the past.
 

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Xero Scythe said:
All Hail Lelouch said:
thelastgentleman said:
Ill have a go....
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Okay. 1. The setting is a quiet town. 2. There is no "Great War" 3. you aren't a Russian Soldier, you are a highschooler. 4. Please change the entire sheet, no offence to you, but this is almost contradictory to what the setting and story require.
The 'Great War' was a nickname for WW1, in which the Russians did take citizens of 16 or even younger to fight. He would probably be a drummerboy, admittedly, but the history is correct. The sheet is just set nearly 100 years in the past.
So what does that have to do with modern day kids in New York?