Welp, I think the changes are alright and the Bio is more neat than before.2HF said:Name: Roberto Ramos
Age: 17
Gender: Male
Personality: Distrustful of everyone but fiercely loyal once trust has been earned. Quiet but with a strong will to live. Loves movies and music. He retreats into these things when strong emotions threaten to overcome him.
Appearance: 5'4", 130lbs, messy black hair, brown eyes, jeans ripped at the bottom (stolen), mostly intact black hoodie (stolen), and navy blue chucks (stolen).
Notable Skills: Climbing (trees, pipes, poles), car boosting, knowledge of electrical systems acquired via hotwiring cars and cracking garage door keypads, fist fighting, McGuyver level... McGuyvering skills
Weapons: Flathead and Phillips head screwdriver, homemade slingshot and a dwindling amount of steel ball bearings, along with whatever small stones and assorted items he can find.
Gear/Miscellany: A backpack containing various items. A change of clothes, a hacked PSP, a twinkie for a special occasion, and a tire iron for removing nuts from tires for ammo (A time consuming and risky task).
Bio: Born into a poor family, Roberto suffered greatly under the rule of a drunkard father. Home repairs were often left to Roberto since repairmen cost money. Duct tape and screwdrivers were always the right tools for the job. He would escape from this hell to his uncle's garage where he spent many days learning to do minor repairs on cars. Oil changes, break changes, and the occasional electrical bug all became routine. One night, when Roberto was 14, a couple of junkies came in and shot his uncle to steal a few power tools. Roberto was in the office flipping through a playboy when he heard the shot. When he came out to the garage and found his uncle dead he decided to leave this life behind. He hopped into a nondescript Civic he'd helped fix and drove north without incident until he ran out of gas, ending up a few miles short of the Gateway Arch. He walked the rest of the way into the city to begin his new life of petty thieving and grand theft auto. He began selling cars to a local scrap yard that didn't care about his lack of ownership. By age 17 he'd been in and out of juvie a few times. When the outbreak occurred Roberto survived by sleeping in car trunks and bringing down birds and squirrels with his slingshot.
Other Notes: Roberto charges his PSP overnight when sleeping in cars by splicing wires coming from the battery into the car and connecting his own spliced charger. The PSP contains a few movies, some songs, and a few games.
Bonjour! Apologies for the late reply, but I have been quite busy as of late. I do not have an exact date, nor an exact number of players I'd like to see. Maybe 6 or 7, depending on how things go. I look forward to seeing a sheet from you in the near future, if you're still interested of course. ^^Tips_of_Fingers said:Yo Monsieur le Mortis!Mortis Nuncius said:Snippy-Snip
I may throw a sheet in sometime later this evening. If not, expect on within a few days.
When do you plan on starting? And how many players will you be recrtuiting for this macabre adventure?
I just enjoy hyperbole. Almost as much as Donald Trump enjoys the tender morning combing he gives the squirrel that sits atop his head each day.ruedyn said:Yeah, the jealousy thing I could've explained better, it's because he was short is all. I guess he just wanted to be above everyone?Mortis Nuncius said:snip
The second, I meant he was using a computer, thus the sim thing. Not certified, just trained.
The third... Crap. That one was actually a mistake.
I see one thing to fix, two to explain better. Not exactly swiss cheese. I'll just assume the harsh critique is because you love me [sub]To say it isn't, simply post a LOL didn't read .gif[/sub]
Alright, still a few things I think could use some touching up. Not sure if it was overlooked, but it says "he joined the army as a pilot" and that would require one to have proper flight training, which would eliminate the need for simulations if your character didn't familiarize himself with two air vehicles. Now, I'd assume he had his chopper experience in the army seeing as he seems to be the most skilled at that. Also, I'm assuming that by saying "took to the air in a news building" you meant the chopper, seeing as buildings don't fly (sorry, don't take that too harshly, I just couldn't help myself ^^'). What still confuses me is the part about him not really having knowledge of current events. I mean it's not difficult to see what state the world is in, but I guess there's not much that really needs clarifying other than that.ruedyn said:I HOPE this explains things better. I fully expect to come back to this, provided Mortis even bothers giving me a third chance.Name: Steven Wyman
Age: 27
Gender: Male
Personality: He has a dark sense of humor, and is easy to get along with (especially when he's in the air). He has been on the fence about suicide since the apocalypse, leaning more towards 'do it' after the failed attempt by his military to contain it. He doesn't fear the undead, only becoming one. He becomes more jovial and happier when flying or talking about things that do.
Appearance: He is a burly chap, standing at 6'1 and muscular. He has short, red hair and a rough beard. He is wearing his fatigue jacket over his plain grey shirt and plumber jeans.
Notable Skills: He is skilled with his pistol and can fly Helicopters and Jets.
Weapons: M1911 psitol (14 rounds, and not keen on using them), and a fire ax picked up on his adventures.
Gear/Miscellany: He has a swiss army knife, but the knife broke off of it in the early days of the apocalypse. He has a pocket watch that can tell time, though it's 20 minutes fast. He has a dinky red chopper that needs fuel soon.
Bio: Steve was always the smallest kid, till he was 15 and his growth spurt actually kicked in. As thus, he was always jealous of the tall kids, and even more of the birds, those small creatures that can still manage to make him feel small. In fact, he was always interested in planes, helicopters, and for a time UFOs, building models and researching them.
Needless to say, when he became 18, he joined the army as a pilot. He took to it very well, almost a natural. When he was stationed in Iraq, he was reserve so he never really got much action. His first mission resulted with him getting shot so close to his spine you could hold a quarter up sideways and still over shoot it. He got out for awhile to heal in rehab. While he was there, he played flight sims on a laptop from his brother. Knowing he couldn't go back to military (or rather, didn't want to) he thought of becoming a pilot. Days before his final sim (on landing) was when the apocalypse hit. He was glad to be able to walk, and run again. The first couple months was spent rounding up the military for a last ditch effort of containment. When that failed he roamed around the country, spending a few months in a fire station, and his last few before he took to the air in a news building. He's been flying since the last ones' fall, so about 1 week. The engine is having troubles though, and his food supply is lower than ever. Every night he lands he hears the moans of the dead that follow his noisy ride.
Other Notes: He has spent most of his times flying between locations, so has less of an idea of current events than most others. Also, he has bullet lodged near his spine that causes him pain every now and then. He also doesn't know how to land anything other than helicopters.
This one, I like. I was honestly surprised about the mention of a gun midway through the bio, but really, what fellow American in their right mind wouldn't camp without a weapon? I can't be sure just why so much dish soap is necessary, but cleanliness is close to godliness and...well, they're all so very close to meeting their respective makers, so I suppose it's only suiting they doll themselves up for the occasion. One minor thing: I do wonder what model Beretta it is, or at the very least what kind of round it fires. Other than that itty-bitty thing, can't see much that needs adding. Good work.SkyeNeko said:Name: Naomi Blackwell
Age: 30
Gender: Female
Personality: Determined and optimistic, and of the belief that there's nothing that some hard work and sweat can't solve. She constantly pushes her limits, a fitness and adrenaline junkie. She doesn't let anything, even the zombie apocalypse, get her down.
Appearance: Naomi has short blonde hair in a pixie cut, with previously red highlights that have faded to orange, and light brown eyes. She's 6 feet tall, with a slim, athletic build.
She normally wears a white sweatband, a purple sweater over a black tank top, loose cargo pants with several pockets and sneakers with metal cleats.
Notable Skills: Peak physical condition, wilderness survival techniques, hunting and scavenging skills, basic self defense
Weapons: A pocket knife, a pair of ice tools, and a Beretta with an extra clip of bullets.
Gear/Miscellany: Climbing ropes, a lighter, a tube of heat rub, 2 bottles of dishwashing soap (one watered down, one concentrated)
Bio: Naomi was born and raised in California, her sun kissed skin a product of the sandy beaches of Malibu. She got her fitness obsession from her parents, who were health nuts. In high school she was in Volleyball and Track, easily making the varsity teams while keeping her grades reasonable. There was nothing she loved more than feeling the wind on her face, exploring the unknown, and adventure.
In college she majored in Plant Sciences. It was easy, it was useful in the wild, and it was a degree. What she was really concerned about were her extracurricular activities, which ranged from rock climbing to swimming and snorkeling. She met her husband during one such activity: biking. It was love at first sight. They spent their honeymoon on Mount Everest (although they didn't make it to the top), rappelling hundreds of feet down the cliff faces. After their marriage, Naomi happily became a housewife for her engineer husband, making dinner and cleaning the house in between running marathons.
Her drive for everything athletic temporarily changed when she found out she was pregnant. Naomi and Daniel were ecstatic. They had been trying for years to get pregnant. For the next 6 months she ate nothing but chicken, salad, and water (not like that was far from her normal diet). She attended prenatal yoga sessions every other day. On March 25, the Blackwells were gifted with a healthy baby boy, named Blake.
They spent a lot of time outdoors on camping trips, especially in Yosemite. It was during one such trip that the zombie outbreak occurred. The family had taken a trip to St. Louis, Castlewood Park, to be exact, for Blake's 6th birthday. They stayed in the wilderness for a few days until they encountered their first member of the undead. The man ambled towards them, moaning, clearly not... alive. Who hadn't watched horror movies? Still, it was hard to actually have to kill it. Daniel shot it once in the chest and once in the head when it tried to grab Blake.
From there it was a mad dash to the nearest road as they tried to get help. They only had enough supplies for 2 more days in the wilderness, and the roads were crawling with the undead. Naomi was separated from her husband and son when their car crashed and they were forced to make a run through the woods to safety. Thankfully, they had already came up with a contingency plan. If they ever got separated, they would meet at Plaza Frontenac, the only real landmark they all remembered in the city.
Alright, looks just fine. Only complaint is the creative liberties taken with the zombies; they wouldn't be decaying to that extent, not quite yet. Other than that, it's just fine.TheBlueShotgun0 said:Name: Jacob "Jake" Robin
Age: 19
Gender: Male
Personality: Although he tries to play himself off as being brave and heroic, he is in fact neither of these things. He fears for his own life more than he'd care to admit, but honestly wants to be the hero he believes he should be. Beyond that, Jacob is also fairly kind, if a bit dim. He likes to be part of a group, and will commit himself to that group to the best of his ability. His training in the Army has made him a very by-the-books person and he has great respect for rules and laws, something that becomes more and more rare as the days go by.
Appearance: White, 6 foot, with messy brown hair. He's usually wearing his sun glasses and Army gear.
Notable Skills: Marksmanship and hand to hand combat are Jacob's strong suits. He's also become skilled in stealth since the outbreak.
Weapons: Silenced M4A1 Carbine, Beretta M9, combat knife.
Gear/Miscellany: 60 rounds of 5.56mm ammo, 30 rounds of 9mm ammo, canteen, Army Combat Uniform, lighter(scavenged), sleeping bag (scavenged), gun cleaning supplies (scavenged and supply is running low).
Bio:
Up until graduation, Jake had spent his entire life in the ghettos of Chicago. His father left when he was 3, and Jake still doesn't know his name or what he looks like. His mother had to raise him by herself, and was away most of the time working one of her three jobs. With so little parental guidance, Jake fell in with a bad crowd almost instantly. He would frequently skip school to shoplift, do drugs and get into fights, all with the constant encouragement of his friends. He had the rest of his life planned out; he would drop out as soon as he could, join one of the local gangs, and spend the rest of his life working his way through the ranks. He would have gone through with it too, if his friend hadn't been gunned down when he was 15. The friend had been the victim of a drug deal gone bad, and this taste of real gang violence shocked Jake out of his life style. He realized that he was leading a life that would put him in an early grave over a few grams of crack. Jake rethought his life and eventually decided that he wanted to join the Army, hoping that the military would impose some level of order on his life. He turned his back on his former friends and started getting his grades up. One he graduated, Jake enlisted in the US Army and left Chicago for good in 2013.
Jake was sent to basic training and trained as a "Combat Specialist"; a fancy way of saying grunt. Jake was fine with this; most other jobs were too technical for him. After training, he expected to be sent over seas, to Afghanistan or maybe Korea. Instead he was assigned to homeland security. He was happy to hear it; he thought it meant that he wouldn't see any combat. For the few months that Jake was stationed at Fort Leonard Wood, the Army was everything he hoped it would be. The discipline and rigid structure of life appealed to him, and the nationalism and commitment to duty of his peers slowly rubbed off on him. But when Jake's unit was ordered to set up a quarantine around St. Louis, he couldn't help but have questions. They weren't told what kind of disease they were containing, only that no one was allowed into or out of the city. But it wasn't Jake's duty to ask questions, so he didn't. None of them did.
A 12 foot tall barbed wire fence was set up along the perimeter. Jake was one of a handful in charge of stopping traffic on route 70 just outside the fence. The quarantine held for about 3 days. The last night is forever burned in Jake's memory. Before that night, he had never seen one of the zombies, but he'd heard their moans from behind the fence. He remembers hearing gunfire in the distance, cries from the radio, and then yells and clattering from the closest part of fence. He and his squad turned to see a horde of dead bodies bashing against the chain link, their decaying forms falling apart as they pressed against the metal. As more zombies joined in, the more the fence buckled under their force. At some point, the Sargent snapped out of the shock that had gripped the squad and ordered them to fire at the horde. Jake switched his carbine to full-auto and started firing blindly into the mass of bodies. Around the city, other G.I's were doing the same, but it wasn't enough. The fence fell under the combined weight of thousands of undead, leaving nothing between them and the Army. It is at this point that Jake turned and ran, leaving his fellow soldiers behind. He turned back after about 20 yards to look at his comrades. Upon seeing the state they were in, he keep on going.
Jake wound up camping over night near Mark Twain Lake, and has maintained a base camp there for the last few months. He did join with another group of survivors for a short time, but left after a very heated disagreement over the treatment of helpless women. He regularly goes into one of the surrounding towns to scavenge what he can (one time he even found a suppressor that was compatible with his M4A1) but dwindling resources will soon force him into the city.
Other Notes: Jake has survivor's guilt over the death of his squad. He feels he shouldn't be alive and should have died with his comrades.
Well, this one is...interesting, to say in the least. A unique, unexpected direction you took with this character, though that isn't to say it's bad, just different. Not much else for me to say, other than I really can't help but wonder if she wore her katana all the time, even before the outbreak, which is really the only logical explanation for her having it at the point it was mentioned.Wenseph said:<spoiler=Yasei>Name: Dana "Yasei" Nakamura
Age: 23
Gender: Female
Personality: Laid back most of the time, but can easily become energetic and enthusiastic when motivated. It doesn't take much to motivate her either, and she prefers remaining optimistic rather than breaking down and crying. She can't stand negative people or whining, it gets on her nerves. Dana doesn't have an endless reserve of energy though, which is why she tries to remain calm normally. She likes quoting lyrics from songs when speaking.
Appearance: Dana is of asian heritage, but was born in California in the US, to a japanese father and an american mother. Her body is well trained and muscular, with quite large arms, but not in a way that it looks unnatural. She keeps her long blue hair back with a black bandana, which has the band name "Inspired plague" written in white letters across it. Dana wears a black sleeveless shirt, which arms has been cut off. Her pants are grey regular jeans, with a couple of large chains attached to them. She also has rocker boots and a short leather jacket, with her band name written on the back, over an image of a plague doctor's mask, with a red snake slithering through its eyes. She is 170 cm, with green eyes and asian looking facial features.
Notable Skills: She can speak japanese and english fluently, and knows some german too, not nearly as much, but she can get by when talking with others. Dana can drive a variety of vehicles and has licenses for most of them. The ones she has driving licenses for are cars, motorcycles and lorries. Her occupation before the outbreak was as a drummer in the band Inspired Plague, and whenever she had time she would practice her drumming, which drove her family crazy at times during her teens.
Weapons: A baseball bat and katana strapped to her backpack.
Gear/Miscellany: Two pair of drumsticks, a lockpick toolkit, a package of batteries, two bottles of water, a backpack, a large bag of weed, some chicken sandwiches, headphones and an mp3 that runs on batteries.
Bio: She was born in California, to a wealthy family. Her mother was a surgeon and her father was the CEO of an international company, that made cars. As such, money was never a problem for her and she had a spoiled childhood at the family's mansion. Her family consisted of her two older brothers, a couple of guard dogs and a butler. The family's butler spent more time with the children than their parents, who were both busy working.
Dana went to a private school, that her parents paid for, but she rarely felt motivated to study. The only subjects she actually enjoyed were music and language. She was taught Japanese and English, from an early age, on her parents request, but later chose to study German as well. The reason she chose to study german was because of Rammstein, one of her top thirty bands.
Despite learning three languages, the songs she tried to write often fell short. The lyrics were no good, or had no real emotion to them. They might be grammatically correct, but that didn't make them better than people who believed in what they wrote or had experienced a lot in their lives. Her sheltered life as the daughter of wealthy parents had limited her ability to write.
It frustrated her, and she took out most of her frustration while drumming instead. She had enough anger for her parents absence, their dislike of her choice to study music and the world in general, to drum for years during her teens. It was her rebellious period, but it did end up making her a great drummer. She didn't care about any other instruments or that she couldn't write towards the end, instead Dana would spend most of her waking time drumming or working out. Practice makes perfect, and she needed the energy she got from working out to be able to drum for longer.
Her brothers both went to universities, to study, but Dana had no real interest in doing so. She was eventually forced to by her parents, but they compromised and she ended up studying music and language again. It wasn't the best university, as her parents didn't want to waste money on such an education, but she did meet her future band members at her new school.
Their lead singer, an older boy who came from a troubled background and wrote most of their songs, which Dana would later edit. The two female guitarists, who were sisters and did basically everything together. The introverted bassist, who didn't speak much, but certainly knew how to play his instrument.
None of them completed their education, as they went on a roadtrip during the summer vacation to tour the country. They were unknown at the start of their trip, but towards the end they had gained a smaller fanbase. A record company offered them a contract when they got back home, and after their first album, which became a hit within the metal community, they went on to tour North America on larger stages. They also toured Europe at one point and were on their second tour of North America, when the outbreak happened.
Her father bought her a Hennesy Venom 1000, when she turned eighteen and had a driver's license. He figured it would fit his daugther, even if her mother didn't approve entirely. It created a much stronger bond between them, as Dana suddenly got an interest in cars. She talked with her father more, and got him to pay for her to learn how to drive more than cars.
She's gotten caught two times for speeding and one time for road rage. She spent some nights in prison because of it, but her family bailed her out every time, and it was lucky that no one ever got badly hurt.
Dana got separated from her band when the outbreak happened, which she suspects might have gotten killed by now. She found an abandoned lorry and used it to escape from Boston, mowing down a shitload of zombies in her wake, while blaring Iron Maiden loudly in the lorries speaker, with open windows. Whoever had owned it before the outbreak had a good taste in music.
The truck eventually broke down, somewhere between Pittsburgh and Columbus. She had little knowledge of how to repair the vehicles she drove, and couldn't do much. She's been making her way back home to California, but it's been going slow since she lost her truck. Most of the items she's currently carrying she's scavenged from dead bodies, except for the headphones, drumsticks and her katana, which she originally bought as a joke to appear more badass. It's of good quality though. The mp3 was a lucky break for her, as her own didn't run on batteries and finding something to charge it with was nigh impossible after the outbreak. Batteries were easier. She thought that the lockpick toolkit she found would come in handy, but still hasn't figured out how to use it properly.
Link_to_Future said:Quick question. What sort of zombies are we dealing with? Are they the slow, lumbering kind or the sprinty, yelling kind?
Redlin5 said:I'd personally prefer the former although I'm fine with the latter.
There'll be a mixture of both. Not everyone has the same immune systems, so not everyone will be affected the same. People with weaker immune systems will take to the disease better than those with stronger immune systems, 'better' here meaning they'll react and move faster, have better coordination and more functional motor skills (at least compared to the lessers). Also, the disease takes complete control of the brain and central nervous system, so enough trauma to either will do 'em in. The time it takes for the disease to take over varies as well, usually depending on where and how severe the bite is.NeoAC said:I'm with Redlin. Hard to shoot the sprinty yelly kind.
Welp, not many criticisms have I here. Kinda like the mention of rapidly waning civility between strangers. Good work.KelevraBD said:Name: Herman Downing
Age: 29
Gender: Male
Personality:
Herman has always been very reserved and shy. Socially awkward, he possesses no leadership qualities and is sometimes barely able to hold conversation. Herman is not brave, and has spent his professional and personal life avoiding danger and risk because of that. More a follower than a leader, Herman will often look to others for guidance and direction. Despite his cowardice, Herman is compassionate and loyal, especially to those precious few that will take the time to get to know him and help him along.
Appearance:
Herman had been very meticulous about his appearance before the Outbreak. He owned multiple copies of the same dress shirt and khaki pants that he had cleaned and pressed every day before going to work. He combed his short black hair the exact same way, and always cleaned his glasses before placing them over his blue eyes. Since the Outbreak, Herman has grown a bit of stubble on his skinny face and has let his hair fall in a shaggy mess atop his head. His suite is gone, replaced by a t-shirt and dark jeans, with running shoes that have seen their fair share of running. Herman is five foot seven inches tall, and Caucasian. He is by all means a small and insignificant man, the sort one passes on the street and completely forgets an hour later.
Notable Skills:
Herman is very talented with computers and other electronics. Fixing and building things like radios, computers, watches, and other trinkets was a hobby of his before the outbreak. He also took the time to jog around his neighborhood on weekends, so his cardiovascular endurance is above average.
Weapons:
One round medium length of steel pipe, bloodied from use.
Gear/Miscellany:
- Small hiking backpack with 2 water bottles, one empty and one full.
- A half dozen snack bars
- Previously used handkerchief/scrap piece of cloth
- Old belt
- Flashlight with 2 spare batteries
Bio:
Before the Outbreak, Herman was a quiet, reserved man with few friends. He lived in St. Louis and worked in the IT department of a small telemarketing firm. He kept to himself, did his job, went home, and worked on his many trinkets. On the weekends he would jog around the neighborhood, giving nervous greetings to anyone he passed on his route.
The closest thing he had to a friend was Conner Jennings, a fellow IT worker. Conner and Herman worked together for many years, and always stuck by each other. Conner was much more confident and capable than Herman, and was always willing to give his friend a helping hand in the social arena. Be it through inviting him to parties, or trying to fix him up with a nice girl, Conner would constantly be looking for ways to help Herman branch out and gain more confidence, though to no avail.
When the Outbreak hit, Conner and Herman stuck together through the initial days. Together they managed to scrape together enough resources to get by, and eventually they found a group willing to help them survive. Conner thrived in the group, and Herman fell into the background, most people within the group believing he couldn?t pull his own weight.
A few weeks after the group formed, they came across a woman and her husband, pushing a shopping cart full of blankets, food, and other resources. The group had been running low on food lately, and the growing panic among the population was beginning to affect people in dramatic ways. Most of the group wanted to kill the couple and take the supplies, but Herman wouldn?t go along. It was then that Conner turned his back on his longtime friend, his desire to survive outweighing his obligation to Herman. Under the pretense of giving them shelter and helping them to find more resources, the group managed to separate the couple from each other and their cart, killing them quietly and taking the resources for themselves. Herman decided shortly after to strike out on his own, not able or willing to face his friend after what he?d been part of.
Since then Herman has tried his best to survive alone, having seen the damage that a large group of survivors is capable of. His strategy of avoiding conflict and being quick and quiet when gathering the resources he needs to live has paid off thus far.
Other Notes: