A communism Joke:

[RanD00M]

I don´t get it.

 

[Cherry Cola]

I'm with MaxtheReaper, you bump that fast?

Also, I didn't like the joke.

 

[VonGentlemen]

Hahah, thanks for positive feedback on my joke.

And I do agree with the rest, the setup is way too long for the joke itself to be a simple one liner. Unless the one liner fundamentally changes the nature of the joke, like in the "Halls Brothers Cough Drops" joke.

 

[Lullabye]

made me giggle.

 

[Smagmuck_]

Feedback? Possible Improvements?

Two minutes?
Seriously?

You made a thread about a joke and you bump it in two minutes?
Didn't make me laugh, but jokes generally don't.

Thanks for the full name, though.
Mail bomb is en route.

Wow, 15566 troll posts, you must feel proud of yourself.

You just sassed Max.

Fools walk where angels fear to tread...

Well, Wiliebaz is screwed...

 

[Timotei]

Willis Peterson

All I need now is a clear picture of your face or eyes.

"Communism is like your mom. Every worker gets a share."

That is actually quite good.

 

[VonGentlemen]

All I need now is a clear picture of your face or eyes.

The reason why nobody on the internet knows my name.
Unless of course, they were to click on my profile.

Oh shi-

 

[dfcrackhead]

I just wrote this a few minutes ago, what do you think:

A joke I wrote:
Karl Marx got dumped by his girlfriend and he was feeling a bit depressed, so he went to his friend Mao to talk to him about it. After being told about it Mao said ?Sorry man what a bummer, hey I know, we should go to a bar and get hammer?d, you?ll forget all about it in the morning?. So they went to a bar. When they got there, Karl noticed an attractive woman in an expensive fur coat sitting across the room, but he was too nervous to say anything about it. He mentioned it to Mao, he told him to buy her a drink. Karl was too nervous though. A few drinks later however he felt confident and he decided he would go speak to her. She was a pretty looking lady wearing a nice expensive looking coat. Karl went up to her and said, ?Hey, are you?sh a burshwaushie, ?caush I?m shenshing an uprising in my lower clash?.

Copyright of Willis Peterson

Edit: burshwaushie = bourgeoisie

check it out man, it would've been better if it wasn't so long. You could cut it down to this: "A communist walks into a bar. He sees this hot chick and says 'Hey baby are you a bourgeoisie, because I've got an uprising in my lower class '"

 

[Fritzvalt]

Didn't like it, it was too forced. Also, do we really need Chairman Mao in there? I mean, the two never met, for one thing.

 

[TheGreatCoolEnergy]

Lol not bad.

 

[bcponpcp27]

That was actually good for a chuckle. If you are familiar with Karl Marx that is. What a pick up line, lolz.

 

[Good morning blues]

This doesn't need a setup, the entire joke is contained in the pick-up line. Even if you were going to do the setup, there's no reason to tell us about Marx working up his courage, since the only payoff from that is that the punch line is a lot more difficult to read.

The joke is okay, I guess, but it's not nearly as funny as the fact you seem to think it's necessary to place a copyright notice on it.