A Kingdom's Fate (Rp): Ended.

[Jav3lin]

Lovely, I'm going to put another spoiler in the OP regarding the Classes of the game. Yes, yes, I didn't say anything about Classes, but to equalize every race and use their differences, I had to do something.

I hope you like the classes I've brought up, and hopefully they're not too OP.
And btw, Death Knights will mostly just be an NPC Cult of Half-Bounds, I'll add that to the Cults and Orders spoiler aswell.

 

[Broken Orange]

Could you get me a reservation? My heart is a little broken after getting rejected.

 

[Jav3lin]

Could you get me a reservation? My heart is a little broken after getting rejected.

Yessir, but don't think you're immune to my rejection though. Bring up a nicely made sheet and show me your writing skill is top notch, then we talk spots!

EDIT: Classes are in the OP.

 

[Cinnonym]

Reserve?

 

[Jav3lin]

Reserve?

You got it

 

[The Hairminator]

Could you get me a reservation? My heart is a little broken after getting rejected.

Yessir, but don't think you're immune to my rejection though. Bring up a nicely made sheet and show me your writing skill is top notch, then we talk spots!

EDIT: Classes are in the OP.

Get working on the templates already! Rawr! :]

 

[Jav3lin]

Could you get me a reservation? My heart is a little broken after getting rejected.

Yessir, but don't think you're immune to my rejection though. Bring up a nicely made sheet and show me your writing skill is top notch, then we talk spots!

EDIT: Classes are in the OP.

Get working on the templates already! Rawr! :]

I AM! But those Classes took a whole lot of time and thinking so my thinking Jar is empty
FINE! I'll go work on them right now, juuuust for youuuu...

EDIT: THE POWER!!!!
*Shakes fist with mad eyes*
"Oh"
*Clears throat*
"The Templates are up, start massacaring your fingers!"

 

[The Hairminator]

*Shakes fist with mad eyes*
"Oh"
*Clears throat*
"The Templates are up, start massacaring your fingers!"

Let the Manocide begin! (Mano=hand)

 

[The Zango]

Dammit! This is not the time to get writers block!!

 

[Jav3lin]

Dammit! This is not the time to get writers block!!

I recommend looking at the map and reading the Race information, you might get inspired.

EDIT: Remember, you can make edits to your sheet once you post it here, I won't pick until everyone has posted a sheet. Unless ofcourse it has been like five days...
EDIT: Who thinks my Map is silly? xD

 

[The Zango]

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EDIT: Who thinks my Map is silly? xD

Nah dont worry the maps great.

 

[Jav3lin]

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EDIT: Who thinks my Map is silly? xD

Nah dont worry the maps great.

Alright, I hope it helps hehe.

I'm still waiting on those sheets people!
And, keep in mind that this RP is not freeform, but in between Quests and Story encounters, you will have access to markets and taverns etc.

EDIT: I will be editing the OP with the currency for the RP. I will also keep tabs on everyone's money, so REMEMBER TO TYPE YOUR CURRENT GOLD COUNT INTO YOUR EQUIPMENT OR ELSE YOU HAVE NO GOLD.

Just, thought I might Caps that so you don's miss it

 

[The Hairminator]

Dammit! This is not the time to get writers block!!

I recommend looking at the map and reading the Race information, you might get inspired.

EDIT: Remember, you can make edits to your sheet once you post it here, I won't pick until everyone has posted a sheet. Unless ofcourse it has been like five days...
EDIT: Who thinks my Map is silly? xD

A bigger map wouldn't hurt. It feels like the known world is squeezed in on a tiny space

Also, about 1/2 finished with sheet.

 

[The Zango]

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EDIT: Who thinks my Map is silly? xD

Nah dont worry the maps great.

Alright, I hope it helps hehe.

I'm still waiting on those sheets people!
And, keep in mind that this RP is not freeform, but in between Quests and Story encounters, you will have access to markets and taverns etc.

EDIT: I will be editing the OP with the currency for the RP. I will also keep tabs on everyone's money, so REMEMBER TO TYPE YOUR CURRENT GOLD COUNT INTO YOUR EQUIPMENT OR ELSE YOU HAVE NO GOLD.

Just, thought I might Caps that so you don's miss it

How much is like a sword or somthing? So i can get the gist of the currency

 

[Jav3lin]

How much is like a sword or somthing? So i can get the gist of the currency

It's in the OP, and I don't want your sheets to explain how your character has 1000gold, he can't!
And, the regular price for a human-made iron sword would be around 30g, whilst a good Elven-made longsword would cost around 250g, but then again, those are the most expensive ones.

 

[PurpleSky]

Just wanted to say your story reminded me of a fantasy novel. I'll say wich one later.




*EDIT* It's Michael A. Stackpole's Age of Discovery what the story reminded me of ,even the map if you turn in round a little bit*

 

[Jav3lin]

A bigger map wouldn't hurt. It feels like the known world is squeezed in on a tiny space

Oi, the map was bigger, but I couldn't fit it into the Camera box. But yeah, I will add more to the map in the South or North once we go into Chapter 4-5. Then the area will expand, and more Towns and Villages, forests and oceans will come into play, and the story will improve, maybe a new enemy, introducing more Races and more Quests.

But first is chapter 1-4

Just wanted to say your story reminded me of a fantasy novel. I'll say wich one later.

I did not know that, due tell!

 

[Cinnonym]

Okay, here's my...

Spoiler: Sheet

Name: Ellondra Renaldo [Prefers to be addressed by her surname]

Age: 26

Gender: F

Race: Human

Class: Blademaster

Skills: Extensive training in the Royal Guard's Port Wesburg branch, fluent in Dwarven and Elven. Diplomatic and very obviously ambitious for officership. The best in her division in terms of both skill and intelligence.

Appearance: 5'10", sun-tanned with an agile, athletic build. Hazel eyes. Her long chestnut hair is her absolute pride: every painstaking curl is a discipline not unlike militant mens' grooming routines. She does not tie or restrain it. Her piercing gaze and persistently set jaw make her appear very fierce and stern, though she is actually just thinking very hard. Calloused hands reflect her years of training.

Equipment: EDIT: Ellondra wears boots suited for riding, leather breeches dyed a dark grey, and a silk blouse beneath her chain mail. There's a colored sash around one arm denoting rank. Armor is the Guards' standard issue--for the most part. She forfeits defense for speed and grace, therefore wearing a lightweight breastplate over a chainmail shirt, light shin protection, and an iron bracer on her right forearm to deflect attacks in place of a shield. She wields a falchion at her hip, much preferring the curved blade to the standard issue weapons. If applicable in the situation, carries her personal effects in a bag across her shoulders: maps, documents, matches, a knife, dried fruit in case of low blood sugar, and a single flare... She is always prepared. EDIT: As the daughter of a merchant and on the Guards' salary: 350 gold.

Personality: Though diligent and driven, her seriousness is often mistaken for brutality where it is actually engrossed concentration and occasionally absentmindedness. Is quick to sarcasm out of habit more than humor. Composed and structured on the field and off of it. Is fond of strange and exotic things but does not enjoy being surprised [surprise = swift stabbing].

Backstory: Ellondra grew up the only daughter of a widowed man in Port Wesburg, and he brought her up the way he himself had been raised: with strict military discipline. Her proud parent knew she was destined for a life of law and combat the instant she used a stick to chase down and beat rebellious neighborhood children in the busy market streets. Challenging herself with her privileged education, she finished it posthaste to be prepared to join the Guard the moment she was able. She has attacked the regimen with vigor and still seeks to continue climbing the ladder of rank.

At home, she has taken command of her father's household, including property, investments, finances, and whatever other resources she could bring under her control--because there's just no one better to do it.

Extra/Note: Originally left-handed, she has trained herself to be ambidextrous for "fairness". Her hobby is entomology, making her occasionally extremely creepy.

Let me know if there's anything you'd like me to add/edit.
EDIT: Sorry, you mentioned gold as I was typing this. Added.
EDIT: Added clothing, much to the dismay of many.

 

[The Zango]

Is it ok if i type one up for tommorrow? I'm getting no good ideas now and i'm also kinda busy.

 

[Jav3lin]

Yes, that flare in the equipment? Do you propose to fire that from a Crossbow, or has your Blademaster invented guns all of a sudden?

And one more thing, it would be nice if you could add your current gold coin number into your equipment. If there is nothing regarding gold in your equipment, your character carries none at the start.

Other than that, I love your vocabulary and I think your sheet is very nicely done.

Is it ok if i type one up for tommorrow? I'm getting no good ideas now and i'm also kinda busy.

I recommend watching a Medieval movie or read through the Races and Classes, see if you can't find something suitable.
Or, you can just start to type up some sort of a sheet and have it front of you and keep changing it; mold it into what you want.
But if you're busy then yes, tomorrow is quite alright

EDIT: On a side-note, I will be changing the Reserve list in post #3 to show who's sheets have been submitted.
Once every sheet is submitted, I will pick the 5-6 best ones and start Chapter 1.