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Captain Pirate

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Ok, here it is.
<spoiler=Sheet> Name: Balen (bah-len)


Age: 39


Gender: Male


Race: Kin-dwarf


Class: Bard


Skills: Balen prides his hammer and his reputation above nearlu all else. He has become known in Mount Nort for being a master at drinking challenges and fighting, and was awarded honours for mapping numerous areas in detail in the northern dwarven lands. Very good with his only weapon, his personally made hammer. Balen is also an experienced animal hunter, wrestling a variety of dangerous creatures to the death.


Appearance: Balen has an oddly bronzed face for a dwarf: He clearly has been to very hot climates, unusual for a race living in a mountain. He also is slightly tall for a dwarf, with a long black beard and long ponytail. Clearly not one to care about hygiene, the beard is clearly ragged unkempt and the same goes for his smell. His skin is scarred in many places, most of which are under his clothes, but one distinct scar goes right along his left cheek, ending at his left ear, which has chunks missing from it, obviously from an animal attack. He is well built and obviously strong; an experienced fighter and weaponsmith.

Equipment: Clothes/Armour: Balen wears dark green and dark grey coloured clothing, a green shirt with the grey sleeves half cut off, thin and light iron shoulderpads, grey-green boots, made from some sort of animal skin, and dark green trousers, with leather pads on the knees. The clothes themselves are of a thick yet light material, providing protection and comfort. Balen also carries various other items: two small hip flasks containing an unknown liquid, a 25cm by 15cm book with worn leather pages and dwarven runes on the front of it. He also carries a backpack, made from the same animal hide as his book and boots. In it he carries various necessities; two loaves of bread, two leather flasks of water, a dark fur blanket nad small stuffed pillow, a spare bag for carrying whatever it is he finds, and two iron cups and an iorn pot. Balen also carries a necklaces, on it are variou coloured stone and metals in the shape of dwarven letters, along with animal teetha nd claws. Balen also has around 240 gold's worth of money on it.


Personality: Balen is a kindly and jolly man to those he likes, trustworthy and a good friend. Though with those he sees as untrustworthy, he will be highly reluctant to try and make friends. Balen will often make (failed attempts at brightening a dark situation with his happy demeanour. Balen is quite competetive, rarely turning down a challenge, and is also an explorative man. Despite some childish behaviour and general inappropriate positivity, Balen knows when to be serious.

Backstory: Balen was born to a fairly wealthy family in Mount Nort, not exactly rich, but well off at all times. Balen matured quickly in some ways, but never lost his child-like inquisitiveness and competitive nature. Rather, he expanded on them, calculating exploration and challenges and how to approach them with his intelligence. His parents dying in the midlle of their lives, when Balen was 19, he was mortified but quickly recovered and went on with his life, exploring and mapping in great detail the surrounding areas of Mount Nort, along with hunting various deadly creatures.

Extra/noteworthy: Balen's ever-present companion and long time friend is an enchaned hammer, Ironscorn. Balen made it himself at 23, and it has not moved from within a metre of him ever since. It has many interesting properties, namely it's strong force and light weight. It's surface is shiny silver-plated iron. It is 60cm in length from hilt to top, and 20cm from one side of the hammer to the other. It has dwarven runes written along its sides, and they glow yellow whenever a large amount of water is near. This was enchanted because Balen is worried of water; he can barely swim.
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Sorry if it's a bit long... I get carried away a tad.
EDIT: I don't know why there aren't spaces between paragraphs on the sheet, I put them in but it's not showing...
 

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Name: Vanaren Gramirenson
Age: 27

Gender: M

Race: Hilt-Dwarf

Class: Beserker

Skills: Metal crafting skills for arms and armour and has been part of the Wurden town guard since the age of 16

Appearance: height; 4'9". weight; 210 lb. waist length dark brown braided beard, bald head. blue spiral tattoos on his scalp. Green eyes

Equipment: Great-axe, dwarven chainmail, two throwing axes, smithing tools (hammer, tongs etc.), Traveler's Pack - bed roll, flint, tinder and a water-skin, black attaire of the Wurden Town Guard. Has about 150 gold to hand and not much else.

Personality: Stoic usually, capable of flying into a beserk rage in combat, loosing all sense of self preservation.

Backstory: Son of the master smith Gramiren, he learnt from an early age the arts of the smith before turning to a career in the guard. He fought at the end of the civil war when battles took place beneath Wurden and threatened the safety of the town.

Extra / Note: Something of a gambler, though not very good as he is yet to learn the trick is to only appear to drink.[/spoiler]
Hope that's sufficcient
 

The Zango

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One quick question are there any forbiden substances that my character can abuse?
 

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If i joined this... Would being in 3 differnet RP's be too much? If its not can i reserve a spot, this seems like some fun.
 

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dragon_of_red said:
If i joined this... Would being in 3 differnet RP's be too much? If its not can i reserve a spot, this seems like some fun.
If i get in this will be the fourth one i'm participating in. It depends on the amount of free time you have, me i could stay on the Escapist all day (and somtimes do!)
 

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BigZ225 said:
dragon_of_red said:
If i joined this... Would being in 3 differnet RP's be too much? If its not can i reserve a spot, this seems like some fun.
If i get in this will be the fourth one i'm participating in. It depends on the amount of free time you have, me i could stay on the Escapist all day (and somtimes do!)
Hmm, i have enough free time, I do this ad study for school, along with spota and friends but i can still easily fit the other Rp's in...

Now its just a question whethere you guys want more people...
 

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Name: Ra'ive Ter'sal

Age: 70

Gender: M

Race: Elf

Class: Eastern warrior

Skills: Ra'ive being poor prefers to fight hand-to-hand, with ar pair of imprivised (yet deadly) fighting claws or his throwing knives. It is known that while he is not very strong he relies on amazing sharp reflexes, deadly speed and precision. He is very proficient at sneaking and stealth and so often he chooses to opt for subtlety rather than violence

Appearance: Rave has a long thin face, brown fair hair that goes down the sides of his face and a long scars all over his face the most prominent of whicg goes from his top lip to his adams apple. He is 5'8 feet tall and abit smaller than average build. He wears a black cloak that goes down to his feet with a hood over it and a metal mask, when asked about the mask he becomes very defensive and tries to change the subject.


This was my inspiration for the mask and hood. Just replace the guns, katana. For the main body think darth maul.


Just mentaly photoshop them toghether.


Equipment:
At least 20x throwing knives
Wrist tape
Fighting claws : What started out as just two sharp blades loosly tied to his fists (think predator claws that are always out) have over the years been tinkered and changed to incorporate hand protection and he has found newer, better blades. With these and his hand-to-hand fighting prowess he is a force to be reckoned with!


175 gold
A pipe
Usually a small poach of Black rock or Cea-weed

Personality: Out of combat Ra'ive can be quite plesant if not occasionally sarcastic and condesending, he prefers to work alone when possible since he finds it hard to trust others and feels that they will hinder him. In combat he seems to transform from talkative and semi-outgoing, to deadly silence and steely calm. When talking with others he prefers to let them do the talking and he only talks when he must share his views or make a sarcastic comment, but despite his seeming hostilitly to everybody and lone wolf persona he secretly craves to be accepted into another group and belong

Backstory: Born on the streets of Herelden his parents where killed and he was left under the care of his brother. They commited various crimes and were soon excepted into the 'Family' the most powerfull gang in the slums and over ten years they grew in power and status. He began learning the 'eastern ways' from a client he was sent to rough up. Seeing the man could not pay protection money he made up a lie about him escaping in exchange for his knowledge. One day he heard a rumor that it was the Family that killed his parents over protection money and flying into a blind rage attacked them. His brother corrupted by the power afforded to him by the Family fought him and this resluted in Ra'ive's exvile from the slums. For the past 40 years he has been working as a freelance assasin, avioding when possible the slums of Herelden and honing his skills should he meet his brother again.

Extra / Note: Ra'ive's brother as far as he knows is still alive and may still be associated with the family that rules the slums. Also during his time with the family he developed an addiction for Black rock before moving onto Cea-weed

There we have it! My char-sheet can any of you tell me where i can improve it? I know its not the best but please give me a chance.
 

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NimbleJack3 said:
Jav3lin said:
NimbleJack3 said:
I need you to flesh out Backstory and Appearance.
Would it be okay if I invented some areas of Hilt-Dwarven culture?
Please describe. If those were to be map-related, I'd have to say no, but distant lands are okay.
I'm going to add to the map various of other places once we go to chapter 4-5.
dragon_of_red said:
If i joined this... Would being in 3 differnet RP's be too much? If its not can i reserve a spot, this seems like some fun.
I've been in 6 at a time.... :/
dragon_of_red said:
BigZ225 said:
dragon_of_red said:
If i joined this... Would being in 3 differnet RP's be too much? If its not can i reserve a spot, this seems like some fun.
If i get in this will be the fourth one i'm participating in. It depends on the amount of free time you have, me i could stay on the Escapist all day (and somtimes do!)
Hmm, i have enough free time, I do this ad study for school, along with spota and friends but i can still easily fit the other Rp's in...

Now its just a question whethere you guys want more people...
The auditions are still on-going, but I will only take on 5-6 people into the RP. So, type up your sheet, and you might just get a spot! :D

You others who fail to enter, but still brought up a quite delicate sheet, your name will not be taken from the Reservation list on post #3, and then you will join when anyone drops out.
 

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dragon_of_red said:
Jav3lin said:
Why did you quote me twice in that one thing?

Never mind, ill create one now... Must beat others who reserved ages before me.
I was just reading through all the messages and quoting those who said something of value. You happened to do so twice and I wasn't paying attention to what I was doing, kind of just woke up ya' know? :)

EDIT: Post #3 edited....

The following are the last ones: dragon_of_red, 3W, Broken Orange, ravensshade.
 

The Zango

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@Jav3lin is my sheet ok? Is there anything i can change about it?
 

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BigZ225 said:
@Jav3lin is my sheet ok? Is there anything i can change about it?
About that, I'm adding a new spoiler regarding that in the OP, right now.

Captain Pirate said:
And what about my sheet? Am I in or not?
Calm down, the auditions are still on-going. I'm both making my decisions regarding your sheets and waiting for the people who haven't submitted (Hint hint nudge nudge).
Nah I'm joking. But, I will reveal the 5-6 chosen ones once I've decided.

At any rate, auditions will end tonight, regardless if everyone has posted a sheet.
 

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OT: I'm in need of a Protector :/

I've chosen five, but I'm still deciding...

@BigZ225: If you could describe the "fighting claws" more accurately please and put the pictures in two seperate spoilers and add how he presents himself in conversation.

@Captain Pirate: Your skills describe the one of a Blademaster or a Berserker even, not quite Bard material..... :/
 

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Jav3lin said:
OT: I'm in need of a Protector :/

I've chosen five, but I'm still deciding...
*Sits with fingers crossed*
Come ooon Ra'ive! Come oooooon Ra'ive!
 

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<spoiler=My Character>Name: Rowen Longbow

Age: 19

Gender: Male

Race: Human

Class: Tracker

Skills: Rowen's tracking skills are some of the best found around humans, he spent many years with the elves, learning to be a good tracker. Being a smart child, he can plan battles well and can put himself into the best position for maximum damage on the enemy.

Appearence:<spoiler=What i pretty much look like>

Pretty much that. Excpet wih his eyes being open, a Longbow hanging around his shoulders and a long sowrd instead of a Katana. He chooses those clothes for their variety, can be rolled up if its hot, like that if its cold.

Equipment: Longbow.
35x Arrows.
25x Regular Arrows
10x Black Arrows
Long sword.
Flint.
Light Chainmail Underneath Shirt.
Survival Knife.

Personality: Rowen doesnt like being around people that much, he is pretty anti-social. When he does have contact, he usually over does the kind-ness. His nature around is Kind, but cold hearted in battle, he kills withot mercy, but he trys tio make it a quick as possible.

Backstory: Rowen was orphaned at the age of 5, his parents wer quite rich and wer taking a trip near Flemwood to see their beauty, they were victoms of a mugging, Rowen's parents resisted and the thieves killed them. Escaping from his parents death, he runs into the Forest, they give chase, but are taken down after 5 minutes of running by an Elf Tracker. The Tracker took Rowen into his village, after finding out of his parents Death. Since he had no where to go, the Elves decied to as a community raise him, and teach him there ways. There he learnt how to be an Archer, battle tactics and some sword fighting. He excelled in Tactics and Archery, and did ok in sword fighting. When he was 18, he was finally old enough to find out what happened to his parents. He was shocked. After another 6 months of thnking, he thougt it time to leave, he wanted to stop things like his past happening again. He left for the Human world and has been working as a Bounty Hunter and a Vigilante for the past year.

Extra Notes: He has 5 Special BlackArrows that he recieved from the elves before he left them. Only uses them specially and gets the back. He never misses with them.

That is my charcter... Untill or if you decide to add a Mage/Sorcerrer/Some sort of Magic weilding class. Then i may remake my character.
 

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dragon_of_red said:
That is my charcter... Untill or if you decide to add a Mage/Sorcerrer/Some sort of Magic weilding class. Then i may remake my character.
Magic is illegal and forbidden in Calemdar, and Half-Bounds capable of magic, by the order of King Herald, will be killed on sight or brought into Herelden for an execution.

Tiny problems with your sheet.... reading "the flemmwoods gives me a giggle and a slight sadface :(
And, the minimum age is 20, but I can let 19 slide.

Other than the modern name and his armor (where is it?), the sheet looks good, and I'll look it over more closely for further avaliation.
 

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Jav3lin said:
dragon_of_red said:
That is my charcter... Untill or if you decide to add a Mage/Sorcerrer/Some sort of Magic weilding class. Then i may remake my character.
Magic is illegal and forbidden in Calemdar, and Half-Bounds capable of magic, by the order of King Herald, will be killed on sight or brought into Herelden for an execution.

Tiny problems with your sheet.... reading "the flemmwoods gives me a giggle and a slight sadface :(
And, the minimum age is 20, but I can let 19 slide.

Other than the modern name and his armor (where is it?), the sheet looks good, and I'll look it over more closely for further avaliation.
Shhhhhh, that never happened... And damn, i like magic =( I didnt see the no magic rule anywhere, so i was dissapointed.