believer258 said:
And now you know why books don't have many fight scenes. They're interesting for a climax and a few other scenes, but it's very hard to describe intense and fast action with words. Plus readers have to carefully read it to know what's going on. It's not that it isn't possible, it's just that it isn't easy. Keep working at it and you can get it.
Try describing an actual fight you've seen and rather than do it in great detail do it completely utilitarian. "with his right closed hand in a hook motion he struck him below his jaw." Then re-write it in the more dramatic fashion.
I write about 8-20 reports a day and get paid for it.
One thing that annoys me is a proper report is
required to have poor structure. Anytime you say a persons SURNAME it has to be in all caps. All reports are three paragraphs. Period. It can go on for 10 pages it's still only 3 paragraphs. The first one is introducing yourself, the names of the parties involved, times, and dates. The last paragraph is siting policy numbers and stating that the report is over.
Though it has helped me get pretty good at writing 'fight scenes'
When I was in high school and college I used to write narrative fiction or journal entry type stories. However, my grammar, punctuation and ability to write anything other than straightforward chronological facts has been pretty much atrophied to the point of uselessness. Though I've been trying to re-teach myself to write narratives again. It's a lot easier for me to write things that actually happened. Or write about something that happened and punch up some details than claim it complete fiction.
Some day I'd like to write a three part (auto)biography parts of it on my grandfather, my father, and myself showing a generational evolution from immigrant to American.
I did [a href=http://www.escapistmagazine.com/forums/read/18.267528-Dad-plays-Mario-a-short-autobiographical-story#10229111]Post this recently on the[/a] escapist.