Arcane Uprising: Setting Sun 2.0 (Dragon Age Mage RP) [Open, Started. PM GM for info on joining.]

[Lizmichi]

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Any chance we could get feedback on the sheets that have been submitted then?

I give feed back if I see any glaring issues, other then that so fair I've found no issues but I'll be doing another read through of the sheets.

 

[Lizmichi]

Are you still there? (Yes this is a bump)

 

[Ruedyn]

Are you still there? (Yes this is a bump)

Yes, I am.

Whedn is this starting again?

 

[CrazyBlaze]

Are you still there? (Yes this is a bump)

Yup. Just wondering if I could get any feedback on my sheet.

 

[TheIronRuler]

Yes, we're here. I would like to see you toss some comments about our sheets. Might move the thread a bit.

 

[Pappytech]

Aye, that we are.

 

[CJ1145]

Yes indeedy.

 

[Redryhno]

I be here, just waiting for a yay,nay, or a "I'm dead, screw this rp".

 

[Lizmichi]

Sadly things seem to be leaning in the direction of dead. I don't have enough sheets to pick through and it hasen't help that I've been sick in been for 5 days now.

 

[Redryhno]

Well...12 sheets is more than most rp's get...if you're talking about sheets that've got in not being enough, the best way to do that in my experience is to let the people not in know about it. Tends to make some people inspired to do different if not better. That way we can all get together in harmony and start singing about dogs being the center of our culture and all that fun stuff.

 

[Ruedyn]

Cat's are better tho- *Shot through neck with an arrow*

 

[Lizmichi]

Snippy

It seems odd to me that a shadow rogue would have a bow. Shadow is in your face stabbing. Also the grammer is... worrysome. Many the lack of capitalazation on the first letter of a line.

 

[Lizmichi]

Choppy choppy

I'm not sure what it is, over all I like the sheet but something bugs me. Maybe it's just because you didn't pick a specialization. Yea I;m sure that's it. It's just odd to me is all. That's it.

 

[PrinceOfShapeir]

Alright, Lizmichi wants me to convey that I'm going to be Co-GMing, and that she's started selecting sheets.

 

[CrazyBlaze]

Choppy choppy

I'm not sure what it is, over all I like the sheet but something bugs me. Maybe it's just because you didn't pick a specialization. Yea I;m sure that's it. It's just odd to me is all. That's it.

I didn't a specialization becasue their wasnt't really one that I felt fitted him I can add one if you would like me to.

 

[Ruedyn]

Choppy choppy

I'm not sure what it is, over all I like the sheet but something bugs me. Maybe it's just because you didn't pick a specialization. Yea I;m sure that's it. It's just odd to me is all. That's it.

I didn't a specialization becasue their wasnt't really one that I felt fitted him I can add one if you would like me to.

Blood mage might make sense, though I think everyones secretly a blood mage. Even the Templars.

 

[Lizmichi]

Choppy choppy

I'm not sure what it is, over all I like the sheet but something bugs me. Maybe it's just because you didn't pick a specialization. Yea I;m sure that's it. It's just odd to me is all. That's it.

I didn't a specialization becasue their wasnt't really one that I felt fitted him I can add one if you would like me to.

Na it's ok. It doesn't bother me that much. I understand why you didn't pick a specialization.

 

[Lizmichi]

Accepted Sheets.

Nemin Jaluk

Nyanthe Eorith

Berven Halten

Valerian

Also note the GM and co GM sheets are included in this. Thank you to all that applied. I'll have the OP up as soon as I can.

 

[Ruedyn]

Accepted Sheets.

Nemin Jaluk

Nyanthe Eorith

Berven Halten

Valerian

Also note the GM and co GM sheets are included in this. Thank you to all that applied. I'll have the OP up as soon as I can.

Aw

Oh well. Don't suppose you can tell me how I failed?

 

[Lizmichi]

Aw

Oh well. Don't suppose you can tell me how I failed?

The bio was a bit too sort for my taste and also I have enough mages then I know what to do with. It was a matter of how many mages I wanted to have.