BioShock or Mass Effect?

[Neosage]

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*[1]bioshock,*[2]bioshock, *[3]bioshock. *[4]if you think differently*[5] you must*[6]stupider than stupid!*[7,8]

1. Bioshock needs a capital.
2. See number 1.
3. See number 2.
4. 'if' being the start of a sentence needs a capital.
5. A comma would be prefferable here.
6. I think you need a 'be' between 'you' and 'must'
7. Stupider is not a word, please use 'more stupid'.
8. Consider revising that phrase.​

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That being said, I did enjoy Bioshock more, but I never got round to completing Mass Effect.[/small]

I think the 'be' should go after must and not between 'you' and 'must'

[small]Of course I totally did that on purpose to see if anyone was checking, have some cookies.[/small]

 

[ezeroast]

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*[1]bioshock,*[2]bioshock, *[3]bioshock. *[4]if you think differently*[5] you must*[6]stupider than stupid!*[7,8]

1. Bioshock needs a capital.
2. See number 1.
3. See number 2.
4. 'if' being the start of a sentence needs a capital.
5. A comma would be prefferable here.
6. I think you need a 'be' between 'you' and 'must'
7. Stupider is not a word, please use 'more stupid'.
8. Consider revising that phrase.​

Thank you, your continued donations keep Neosage running.​

That being said, I did enjoy Bioshock more, but I never got round to completing Mass Effect.[/small]

I think the 'be' should go after must and not between 'you' and 'must'

[small]Of course I totally did that on purpose to see if anyone was checking, have some cookies.[/small]

Yay cookies!!!
cheers buddy

 

[Neosage]

Spoiler

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*[1]bioshock,*[2]bioshock, *[3]bioshock. *[4]if you think differently*[5] you must*[6]stupider than stupid!*[7,8]

1. Bioshock needs a capital.
2. See number 1.
3. See number 2.
4. 'if' being the start of a sentence needs a capital.
5. A comma would be prefferable here.
6. I think you need a 'be' between 'you' and 'must'
7. Stupider is not a word, please use 'more stupid'.
8. Consider revising that phrase.​

Thank you, your continued donations keep Neosage running.​

That being said, I did enjoy Bioshock more, but I never got round to completing Mass Effect.[/small]

I think the 'be' should go after must and not between 'you' and 'must'

[small]Of course I totally did that on purpose to see if anyone was checking, have some cookies.[/small]

Yay cookies!!!
cheers buddy

[small]No problem, now this is our little secret okay?[/small]

 

[Dirty Apple]

Just to update, I started the download of Mass Effect last night. I just wasn't feeling the FPS last night when I decided. As to any reccomendations to buy both, I try to enforce a strict 1 game at a time policy. Otherwise, I don't feel as though I'm giving the game my full attention. I'll still probably buy BioShock at a later date, and see what has inspired all its rabid cheerleading. Thanks to you all for the help.