Nikolaz72 said:
guidance said:
So having never done this before there are many, many errors and things I can change with what I just wrote. Please if you have suggestions and know of anything I should fix, tell me.
Area: UK
Name: Gill Stranton
Nationality: Born and raised in London.
Age: 25
Education: Recent graduate from Imperial College London with a masters degree in mechanical engineering.
Affiliation: Has nothing against the common aliens on the planet, really curious about their technology and is currently trying to get a job that will get him as close as possible to it.
Appearance: 5'11", small build, thick black hair, brown eyes
Familial status: Single, but have have a Mother and Father, and a sister who moved away and hasn't heard from in a long time.
Social Status: Currently looking for work as an engineering, working under alien technology or as close as possible.
Notable Skills: Knows technology earthly and some alien. Can build and disassemble almost anything. Has no idea how to fire a gun, but knows how to put one together. Has learned some alien language, but very basic, only what they could teach him in school.
Personal Philosophy: Just wants to do what he loves, and that is building things. Doesn't get involved in the political world, and has nothing against aliens BEING on the planet, but he does kind of feel weird being under their rule. Wishes they could live and trade together but would rather be under human rule.
Bio: The Stranton family has moved from country to country throughout most of the 20th century. They moved from Russia, to Israel, to Canada, and near the beginning of the 21st century they found themselves in the UK where they called home. It is said that every male in the Stranton family will eventually end up an engineer. Gill like his father and his father before him grew up with an interest in technology. Curious about how everything worked, he disassembled everything he could lay his hands on. Growing up under alien rule Gill hasn't known another life, but he doesn't really care too. He is happy in his life as long as he is able to achieve his goals. The aliens also bring Gill something the humans can't a challenge. His goal now is to get as high ranking as possible and work with the newest alien technology, not the scraps that the rebels can steal. Rebel groups have raised interest in Gill, but he wants no part in their political battles. He still remains in talking with smaller groups, so they can smuggle him some small bits of alien tech. here and there.
It looks good. Except, there arent really a lot of common aliens, England is ruled over mainly by its old goverment and its own law enforcement. Aliens are mostly behind-the-scenes.
Updated:
Area: UK
Name: Gill Stranton
Nationality: Born and raised in London.
Age: 25
Education: Recent graduate from Imperial College London with a masters degree in mechanical engineering.
Affiliation: Not really on any either of the battle, but is cautious of the alien presence. Really curious about their technology and is currently trying to get a job that will get him as close as possible to it.
Appearance: 5'11", small build, thick black hair, brown eyes
Familial status: Single, but have have a Mother and Father, and a sister who moved away and hasn't heard from in a long time.
Social Status: Currently looking for work as an engineering, working as close as possible to alien technology.
Notable Skills: Knows technology both earthly and some alien. Can build and disassemble almost anything. Has no idea how to fire a gun, but knows how to put one together. Has learned some alien language, but very basic, only what they could teach him in school.
Personal Philosophy: Just wants to do what he loves, and that is building things. Doesn't get involved in the political world, and has nothing against aliens BEING on the planet, but he does worry sometimes if they will start something.
Bio: The Stranton family has moved from country to country throughout most of the 20th century. They moved from Russia, to Israel, to Canada, and near the beginning of the 21st century they found themselves in the UK where they called home. It is said that every male in the Stranton family will eventually end up an engineer. Gill like his father and his father before him grew up with an interest in technology. Curious about how everything worked, he disassembled everything he could lay his hands on. Growing up under alien rule Gill hasn't known another life, but he doesn't really care too. He is happy in his life as long as he is able to achieve his goals. The aliens also bring Gill something the humans can't a challenge. His goal now is to get as high ranking as possible and work with the newest alien technology, not the scraps that the rebels can steal. Rebel groups have raised interest in Gill, but he wants no part in their political battles. He still remains in talking with smaller groups, so they can smuggle him some small bits of alien tech. here and there.