How about this?
Area:Columbia
Name:Jean
Nationality:Columbia
Age:29
Education:Home educated,advanced understanding of medicine,master of martial arts.
Affiliation:neutral,doesn't care about politics.
Appearance:Female,has dark hair,usually in a ponytail,red eyes often obscured by circular sunglasses,wears dark jeans with a Hawaiian shirt ,often uses a labcoat ,and carries a medium lenghted blade and a simple gun.
Familial status:single,with no known(live) relatives.
Social Status:Neutral doctor who often gets mugged by people too dumb to live.
Notable Skills:medicine,as mentioned above,martial arts,quick thinking,genre savviness,is often good at anything she tries,however she only tries things she is interested in.
Personal Philosophy:Heals anyone,regardless of race or ethnicity,as long as they meet certain standards placed by her,likes to troll people,often giving false information.
Bio:Jean was raised in a rural part of columbia,away from society,her family was mostly compromised of darwinists,who thought a spartan-like upbringing would be healthy for their children in these troubled times,she was one of four children,by age 8 two of her siblings had died due to their parents brutal parenting methods,this stopped at age 14 when the old folks decided they finally had what it got to be "adults",she and her remaining sister lived distantly from the rest of their family for some time,however this was soon interrupted by a local conflict between rebels and a traveling group of aliens,while none of them wanted to involve the family in the crossfire,it was inevitable,and many lives were lost,Jean was away at the time,and upon returning and witnessing the ruined scenery of her childhood she giggled a bit,and quickly stopped,she soon found her father was alive,albeit grieviously(grievously?) wounded,since she was experienced as a medic,her father thought she could help him,and that salvation had arrived,that was not the case however,as the old man's wounds were too deep for him to be saved.
At least that is what the old man thought upon his death.
Her father's wound were very grave,albeit not grave enough that he could not be saved,he would probably be unable to walk for the rest of his life,however Jean lied to him,telling him he had no salvation,and putting him to sleep with wis own revolver,Jean did not do this out of compassion,or pity towards the old man,but rather as curiosity,curiosity as to how the man who seemed made of steel met his doom,she was specially pleased she was the one to end his life. No other human survived,however the aliens were nowhere to be found,as was the body of her sister,after disposing of the bodies,she spent a few months living in the ruins,examining the collections of books,movies and games her family had,she decided to become a traveling healer as she had nothing else to do,and so she did,ending as much lives as she saved,after a decade or so of doing this,she decided to drop the "traveling" part,and settled down in the old ruins,a bloody future ahead of her,in more ways than one.
so am i in?,do i have to alter anything?,any criticism?
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