Critical Miss: God Emperor of Steam #1

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Calling it now: Chad(the IGN slowbro) takes down Newell. How do i Know? Look at Panel 1 very carefully.

As for the font: The font seems fine, but I'm not a fan of All-caps. Can you not do that please?
 
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Exterminas

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Grey Carter said:
Exterminas said:
Somehow I can't get why people insist of making fun about that man's weight.
Half of your country is too fat, don't throw rocks from the glass parlor.
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Sorry, which country are you refering to?
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Does it matter?
Obesity has become that common in the western world that I can't really see the reason why it would be still that funny.

Come to think of it: This reminds me of the point movie bob made during his conspiracy video. Why is someone as Gabe Newell, who made a shitload of money with his brain ridiculled for being fat while someone like Michael Jordan is glorified to a hero for being able to run and jump?

I did like the whole children of steam thing so far, but "Gabe Newell is fat" seems more like the Youtube-Level of humor : /
 
AvsJoe

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Aah! Stabbed through the hand with a fork and backhanded with a fist. That's gotta sting. Though I guess she's lucky she didn't share the same fate as James Caan in Santa's Slay:
 
Mythiii

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You should ad some motion lines and make the reflection more noticable. Only the KFC bucket seems to be moving in this comic.
 
The Red Spy

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Next time in Critical Miss...

-Slowbro, now Slowking, bursts through the world map display in the background, surrounded by a pulsating ball of psychic energy-

"I am disappointed by the zombie attack, Gabe, you should know revive was the first item I learned to use... Bro."
 
Cherry Cola

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I'm just curious about how many people didn't get the reference.

It lets me laugh.
 
Canadamus Prime

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Ouch, nailed in the face with a KFC bucket. That's gotta hurt.

As for the font, looks fine. Although using an all caps font does present some difficulties of it's own.
 
dalek sec

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The font looks fine to me, glad to see this "series" coming to it's end. I like it but I do miss your regular work on this site. :D

And for the record, "God-Emperor" is this people:

 
Cherry Cola

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ChillShark said:
Wow, you are really dragging this one out till you get to figure out how to finish it, huh?
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It's as they say: If you fail to be funny, coherent or structured, just throw in random references and the peons will laugh.
 
Grubnar

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I read "God Emperor" in the title and thought: WARHAMMER 40.000

Oh, well. Good comic!
 
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