sky14kemea said:Hey dude ^^ Just wondering about your powers. The first one seems a tad overpowered in the sense that "It can fire things out?" ... Or something? :l It confused me towards the end.Fury Is Me. said:snip
And the second one, you're gonna need to be more specific. "Witchy powers" Isn't really a power. >_>
=P
Okay the first one is fair enough then. :l But the second one you're gonna need to decide on what sort of "witchy powers" and write that instead. xD Otherwise you're being way too vague.Fury Is Me. said:sky14kemea said:Hey dude ^^ Just wondering about your powers. The first one seems a tad overpowered in the sense that "It can fire things out?" ... Or something? :l It confused me towards the end.Fury Is Me. said:snip
And the second one, you're gonna need to be more specific. "Witchy powers" Isn't really a power. >_>
=P
When I say "Fire things out" I mean she can shoot things from different dimensions out of it. Nothing huge, though. The biggest would probably be a car... Or is that too over powered?
The second one. Think non-elemental magic. Pure bolts of energy, pretty much.
Ahem... that second power; that's basically hypnosis, isn't it? Words, I'm sorry, but there is no way I can allow that. I'm afraid you'll need to change it. I'm also a little worried about that first power; it'd be interesting for other characters to react to, sure, but it seems like more of a GM power than one that a standard player could have...ThreeWords said:Name: Alice Shannow
Nickname: Three-Words, or just Three, as she never seems to speak.
Age: 16
Appearance: Alice is, to be blunt, rather plain. She is not tall nor slim, nor particulally dazzling, and her shoulder length hair is a sort of pale brown which an unkind observer might call dirty blond. Neither are her clothes striking, save in the mediocretiy; t-shirts and jeans, or a modest skirt.
Club: Drama
Biography: Alice was brought up by her mother, who supported them with a job as an author after running away form her father, an abusive alcoholic who beat both Alice and her mother. When she spent months refusing to talk, it was thought that the trauma had made Alice a mute; she spent a lot of time simply listening to people, and most to her mother, who read her the stories she wrote to comfort her. She spoke most when interasting with the stories, and in tie, Alice became confident in speech, but only with her mother and witht he stories they told.
When she went to school, she was "The Girl who Never Talks" for a while, till people grew to understand her, and in time she was forced first to say a few words at a time, earing her new name, and to develope an expresive vocublary of mime. In time, the Drama Club became aware of her, and when they recruited her they found she spoke wonderfully and freely, as long as it was in the context of a story.
Primary Power: Share the silence: With eye contact, Alice can instil confusion and surprise (a sort of stun attack) with a lasting effect of blocking any that the target makes to comunicate for a short time afterwards
Secondary Power: The Gift of Gab: When Alice does speak, it captivating; she can keep any auidence in the palm of her hand. This allows her to, when pushed, paralyze, influence of simply persuade any group of people.
Hmm. I'll remix or replace, and get back to you soon...Sam G said:Ahem... that second power; that's basically hypnosis, isn't it? Words, I'm sorry, but there is no way I can allow that. I'm afraid you'll need to change it. I'm also a little worried about that first power; it'd be interesting for other characters to react to, sure, but it seems like more of a GM power than one that a standard player could have...ThreeWords said:Name: Alice Shannow
Nickname: Three-Words, or just Three, as she never seems to speak.
Age: 16
Appearance: Alice is, to be blunt, rather plain. She is not tall nor slim, nor particulally dazzling, and her shoulder length hair is a sort of pale brown which an unkind observer might call dirty blond. Neither are her clothes striking, save in the mediocretiy; t-shirts and jeans, or a modest skirt.
Club: Drama
Biography: Alice was brought up by her mother, who supported them with a job as an author after running away form her father, an abusive alcoholic who beat both Alice and her mother. When she spent months refusing to talk, it was thought that the trauma had made Alice a mute; she spent a lot of time simply listening to people, and most to her mother, who read her the stories she wrote to comfort her. She spoke most when interasting with the stories, and in tie, Alice became confident in speech, but only with her mother and witht he stories they told.
When she went to school, she was "The Girl who Never Talks" for a while, till people grew to understand her, and in time she was forced first to say a few words at a time, earing her new name, and to develope an expresive vocublary of mime. In time, the Drama Club became aware of her, and when they recruited her they found she spoke wonderfully and freely, as long as it was in the context of a story.
Primary Power: Share the silence: With eye contact, Alice can instil confusion and surprise (a sort of stun attack) with a lasting effect of blocking any that the target makes to comunicate for a short time afterwards
Secondary Power: The Gift of Gab: When Alice does speak, it captivating; she can keep any auidence in the palm of her hand. This allows her to, when pushed, paralyze, influence of simply persuade any group of people.
Also, uh... that's pretty grim, bro. Now, I'm not going to outlaw anything in terms of bio, but you need to remember that this is supposed to be a fun, fairly silly RP; I dunno how well a mute with an abusive alcoholic father's going to fit into that theme...
Alright. XD. Give me a minute to fix my sheet, okay?sky14kemea said:Okay the first one is fair enough then. :l But the second one you're gonna need to decide on what sort of "witchy powers" and write that instead. xD Otherwise you're being way too vague.Fury Is Me. said:sky14kemea said:Hey dude ^^ Just wondering about your powers. The first one seems a tad overpowered in the sense that "It can fire things out?" ... Or something? :l It confused me towards the end.Fury Is Me. said:snip
And the second one, you're gonna need to be more specific. "Witchy powers" Isn't really a power. >_>
=P
When I say "Fire things out" I mean she can shoot things from different dimensions out of it. Nothing huge, though. The biggest would probably be a car... Or is that too over powered?
The second one. Think non-elemental magic. Pure bolts of energy, pretty much.
No worries ^^ There's still plenty of time left.Fury Is Me. said:Alright. XD. Give me a minute to fix my sheet, okay?
Alright, I fixed it. Is that a bit more specific? :3sky14kemea said:No worries ^^ There's still plenty of time left.Fury Is Me. said:Alright. XD. Give me a minute to fix my sheet, okay?
Yeah that's a lot better.Fury Is Me. said:Alright, I fixed it. Is that a bit more specific? :3sky14kemea said:No worries ^^ There's still plenty of time left.Fury Is Me. said:Alright. XD. Give me a minute to fix my sheet, okay?
I would never!... [sub]Open a gap and have a car barrel out at 200 MPH at another student[/sub] XD!sky14kemea said:Yeah that's a lot better.Fury Is Me. said:Alright, I fixed it. Is that a bit more specific? :3sky14kemea said:No worries ^^ There's still plenty of time left.Fury Is Me. said:Alright. XD. Give me a minute to fix my sheet, okay?Although your powers still seem a bit kill-happy. xD Hopefully you won't have to use the more extreme ones when fighting other students.
Alrighty then.Fury Is Me. said:I would never!... [sub]Open a gap and have a car barrel out at 200 MPH at another student[/sub] XD!sky14kemea said:Yeah that's a lot better.Fury Is Me. said:Alright, I fixed it. Is that a bit more specific? :3sky14kemea said:No worries ^^ There's still plenty of time left.Fury Is Me. said:Alright. XD. Give me a minute to fix my sheet, okay?Although your powers still seem a bit kill-happy. xD Hopefully you won't have to use the more extreme ones when fighting other students.
But no, I made Shiki an uncaring person just to regulate that. She doesn't care, so she won't actually try, unless it's something she sees as fun, and she doesn't see the fighting as something important, so she'll just be in it for shits and giggles. See? :3
XDsky14kemea said:Alrighty then.Fury Is Me. said:I would never!... [sub]Open a gap and have a car barrel out at 200 MPH at another student[/sub] XD!sky14kemea said:Yeah that's a lot better.Fury Is Me. said:Alright, I fixed it. Is that a bit more specific? :3sky14kemea said:No worries ^^ There's still plenty of time left.Fury Is Me. said:Alright. XD. Give me a minute to fix my sheet, okay?Although your powers still seem a bit kill-happy. xD Hopefully you won't have to use the more extreme ones when fighting other students.
But no, I made Shiki an uncaring person just to regulate that. She doesn't care, so she won't actually try, unless it's something she sees as fun, and she doesn't see the fighting as something important, so she'll just be in it for shits and giggles. See? :3
No cutting my arm off this time then? /joke. xD
I have no idea >.> I'm not that good with anime.Fury Is Me. said:XD
No. :3 No arms shall be cut off.
But a cookie shall be given if you can name the person whom Shiki is ripping off the most.![]()
Not Anime :3.sky14kemea said:I have no idea >.> I'm not that good with anime.Fury Is Me. said:XD
No. :3 No arms shall be cut off.
But a cookie shall be given if you can name the person whom Shiki is ripping off the most.![]()
If you dont mind me cutting in she kidna reminds me of Gaap from Umineko...Fury Is Me. said:-Snip-
Now that you mention it, she does! But no, trust me, she's more Like Yukari. Look up Yakumo Yukari in Touhou Wiki and you'll see what I mean.Zirat said:If you dont mind me cutting in she kidna reminds me of Gaap from Umineko...Fury Is Me. said:Not Anime :3.sky14kemea said:I have no idea >.> I'm not that good with anime.Fury Is Me. said:XD
No. :3 No arms shall be cut off.
But a cookie shall be given if you can name the person whom Shiki is ripping off the most.![]()
She's ripping off Yakumo Yukari from the ame series "Touhou Project" the most.
Yukari is the Demon of Gaps and Boundaries and can basically do what Shiki can, only without restrictions. And she has the exact same personality.
Shiki's name and her nickname, (Shikieiki), are ripped from another character from Touhou, Shikieiki Yamaxandu.
The green hair and Yellow eyes are from Code Geass, C2.
Her fingerless gloves with the pentagram on it you can see as either being from Hellsing or FMA.
She's entirely one big ripoff jumble XD
What with the ability to control portals called 'Gaps' and the messed up personality. Or its just my fried brain making connections after staying up and reading\watching the VNs...