Right E O said:
This game sounds really cool! If I had any advice as a fellow writer, it would be to remember that not every moment has to be serious. Many stories now a days make everything seem like the end of the world. It can really hurt a story and make actually important moments lose a lot of dramatic weight. A little bit of levity can turn a good scene into a great one.
My personal pick would be Sissel from Ghost Trick. If you like Phoenix Wright, give this game a try! Its practically a crash course in good character design.
In the best rpgs ive ever played being mass effect series and the dragon age series, i have learned that sometimes the best part of the game is coming back to the camp and finding people joking,drinking, laughing, and fighting each other. I know that the best part about having companions on this sort of game is that you want to be able to enjoy and have fun and make them realistic. Thats why we have characters who are comedy reliefs as well as full on series "I'm gonna kill everything"
As a writer i have always loved writing out jokes and "bar" scenes, so i am hoping that will help when i finish the final story. So far it starts out kind of serious but as the game progress we have alot of funny moments. Like for instance once you fight one of the big monsters one of the characters [who isnt the brightest and has the courage of 10 lions] will try to run up and bite the monster, later once beaten and you head back to camp you see this character roasting that monster on a spick over a fire. Everyone else however is avoiding it because it looks nasty as hell.
Check out our deviant art account for more info on some of our characters and such:
http://kiltekstudios.deviantart.com/gallery/45872988