Haiku Battle!

[new_age_reject]

That cabin would smell
When it reaches summertime.
Wood is much better.

Point well made sir but
In Spring, the sunlight shall be
Beaute upon the flesh.

 

[Lukeje]

That cabin would smell
When it reaches summertime.
Wood is much better.

Point well made sir but
In Spring, the sunlight shall be
Beaute upon the flesh.

But in the autumn
The bodies will be obscured
By leaves a-many.

 

[Kaijj]

Oh crap I have
been defeated, I was
truly ninja'd

This is no haiku
The first line is very wrong
One syllable short.

You must learn the way
Five-seven-five is correct
It's not four-six-four.

 

[Zangamarth]

Hablo la lingua
de Español, es la más
bueno de todas

 

[Zangamarth]

¿Hay alguien qué
hablen Español y
Ingles también?

 

[TheFacelessOne]

Games are but a war
Waged by two compeitiors
Who will win this one?

Watch as the stream moves
Colored red with dark blood
The war has begun

 

[new_age_reject]

That cabin would smell
When it reaches summertime.
Wood is much better.

Point well made sir but
In Spring, the sunlight shall be
Beaute upon the flesh.

But in the autumn
The bodies will be obscured
By leaves a-many.

The leaves a-many
Shall hide my heinous murders
from the pigs. autumn.


Damn!

 

[Kaijj]

Hablo la lingua
de Español, es la más
bueno de todas

Foreign languages?
Why speak about the weather
In a different tongue?

 

[Zangamarth]

nevermind this post
The Escapist won't let me
delete what I say.

 

[Zangamarth]

Hablo la lingua
de Español, es la más
bueno de todas

Foreign languages?
Why speak about the weather
In a different tongue?

I take it you are
unsure as to what I said.
Anyone speak both?

Spanish and English
I should have mentioned up there
but the rules stop me.

 

[balimuzz]

This is a nice thread.
But a contest you're saying?
I won't be playing.

 

[Kaijj]

Hablo la lingua
de Español, es la más
bueno de todas

Foreign languages?
Why speak about the weather
In a different tongue?

I take it you are
unsure as to what I said.
Anyone speak both?

Spanish and English
I should have mentioned up there
but the rules stop me.

A mistranslation.
I must have been mistaken.
My Spanish skills fail.

 

[Siegreich]

hmm... a haiku thread
now what to write, what to write
I am out of space

 

[demotivational fail]

My lip gloss is hot
Yo my lip gloss is poppin'
Man I suck at these

I am sorry y'all
I won't do that again k?
Psych! I'm so lying.

 

[Zildjin81]

Haikus are easy
But sometimes they are random
Refrigerator

I didn't write this one.

 

[Zangamarth]

Hablo la lingua
de Español, es la más
bueno de todas

Foreign languages?
Why speak about the weather
In a different tongue?

I take it you are
unsure as to what I said.
Anyone speak both?

Spanish and English
I should have mentioned up there
but the rules stop me.

A mistranslation.
I must have been mistaken.
My Spanish skills fail.

[A-N] a proper translation is "I speak the language of spanish, it's the best of them all."
The other one says "Is there anyone else who speaks Spanish and English as well?

 

[TheFacelessOne]

I just ate dinner
And yes, indeed it was good
But now I am fat

 

[Kaijj]

Hablo la lingua
de Español, es la más
bueno de todas

Foreign languages?
Why speak about the weather
In a different tongue?

I take it you are
unsure as to what I said.
Anyone speak both?

Spanish and English
I should have mentioned up there
but the rules stop me.

A mistranslation.
I must have been mistaken.
My Spanish skills fail.

[A-N] a proper translation is "I speak the language of spanish, it's the best of them all."
The other one says "Is there anyone else who speaks Spanish and English as well?

Ah! Now I see it.
One wrong word changes it all.
I see my error.