Haiku Battle!

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SharPhoe

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Bofus Teefus said:
Mine isn't all that,
But really they all stand a
Chance. Enter it, nao!
You really think so?
I guess I could just try it.
Where's the harm in that?
 

SharPhoe

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Well, mine didn't win.
The ones that did are great, though,
so it's not all bad.
 

Xvito

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I'm feeling lonely
It was brought by the winter
Summer will be good

[A-N] Edited it...
 

Lukeje

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SharPhoe said:
Well, mine didn't win.
The ones that did are great, though,
so it's not all bad.
Mine didn't either.
The ones that did are all right,
But I can't judge them.

The immense hatred
Blinding my eyes to their charms.
At least I think so.

I can't help thinking
That mine was better than those.
Though I doubt it was.
 

SharPhoe

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Lukeje said:
I can't help thinking
That mine was better than those.
Though I doubt it was.
I know mine wasn't.
It was a quickie I made
about Prototype:

"New York's so boring...
I wish something cool would happ--
Hey! Alex Mercer!"
 

Lukeje

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SharPhoe said:
"New York's so boring...
I wish something cool would happ--
Hey! Alex Mercer!"
That one is awesome!
I would have voted for it.
Mine seems rubbish now...

Mine had a title
I must fit into Haiku;
Oracle of Time

"A sword, a princess,
And but one little request...
You must save the world!"
 

Guitar Gamer

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Maraveno said:
Guitar Gamer said:
it is`very strange
don't haiku's have one extra line?
maybe just a style
5-7-5 makes haiku
damnit folow the rules please mind you
you actually did there though
yes but hear me out
one syllible before 5
but this seems better

hated that teacher
always teaching lies you know
I sure wont miss her
 

Bofus Teefus

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SharPhoe said:
I know mine wasn't.
It was a quickie I made
about Prototype:

"New York's so boring...
I wish something cool would happ--
Hey! Alex Mercer!"
Lukeje said:
Mine had a title
I must fit into Haiku;
Oracle of Time

"A sword, a princess,
And but one little request...
You must save the world!"
Bofus is sad now.
I expected you both to
Be in the finals.
 

jp11

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Haiku connects us
We're apart in both space and time
but here, we can meet
 

Lukeje

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Bofus Teefus said:
Bofus is sad now.
I expected you both to
Be in the finals.
So did yours get through?
If so good luck, the contest
Closer than others.

But don't you be sad,
After all there is always
another, next year.

(...and I've just noticed
That I haven't 'Friended' you.
That I shall correct).
 

Bofus Teefus

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Lukeje said:
Bofus Teefus said:
Bofus is sad now.
I expected you both to
Be in the finals.
So did yours get through?
If so good luck, the contest
Closer than others.

(...and I've just noticed
That I haven't 'Friended' you.
That I shall correct).
It did get through, but
I shan't disclose which it is
Till the votes are in.

Odd. I had assumed
We'd befriended already.
Well I guess not...fix'd.
 

Lukeje

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Bofus Teefus said:
Lukeje said:
So did yours get through?
If so good luck, the contest
Closer than others.

(...and I've just noticed
That I haven't 'Friended' you.
That I shall correct).
It did get through, but
I shan't disclose which it is
Till the votes are in.

Odd. I had assumed
We'd befriended already.
Well I guess not...fix'd.
'Tis very bizarre,
As I thought so too. Oh well.
It is fix-ed now.

Fingers crossed; last day!
The winner shall be revealed,
Votes shall be tallied!
 

Guitar Gamer

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winner shall be me
but now I must have to say
I shouldn't have won

anonymous man
Rorsach is his name you know
his grammar is bad
 

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Bofus Teefus said:
Lukeje said:
Fingers crossed; last day!
The winner shall be revealed,
Votes shall be tallied!
My haiku won not.
Honorable mention, though.
Not too bad, I guess.
If first is the worst.
And second is the best, then
third is one with chest.