Half-Fortress

[Logan Westbrook]

Hmmm, I still think it needs some work guys

 

[x434343]

[img_inline width="750" caption=Next in the series. We originally had a strip before this, but it didn't come out too well. Basically, this is a nice little interlude. No, they do not end up like Gordon Freeman.]http://img370.imageshack.us/img370/5926/4compam3.jpg[/img_inline]​

Hi everybody!

 

[broadband]

they dont end like Gordon? aw, i wanted to see how they would move throug the canals and toxic waste.

i bet the engineer would be ashamaed to show his teleporter to Kleiner, jejeh.

 

[OverlordSteve]

Dang it, I had an idea for a Garrysmod comic. Eh, I'll come up with something one day.

*Bookmarks*

 

[the monopoly guy]

I demand more of the physical humor I say!

EDIT: On the contrary, I'm sure the engineer would be proud of his teleport, it's much easier to build and reproduce, it's smaller, more compact, easier to transport and comes with a sentry!
Plus it doesn't mutilate cats

 

[broadband]

hey, wait a minute, i just noticed, theres a spy behind the teleporter.

spah sapp.. ah i better dont write it.

 

[brabz]

I'm glad to be aware of this, but was wondering if you're planning to set up your own site to view the strips? It'd be nice to view them in order with a slideshow feature or something similar. Keep up the good work.

 

[Sir_Montague]

Love it. Hands down.

 

[guyy]

hey, wait a minute, i just noticed, theres a spy behind the teleporter.

spah sapp.. ah i better dont write it.

Or you could just say "I SEE SPY!"

 

[smallharmlesskitten]

I love this thread

 

[Johnn Johnston]

EDIT: On the contrary, I'm sure the engineer would be proud of his teleport, it's much easier to build and reproduce, it's smaller, more compact, easier to transport and comes with a sentry!
Plus it doesn't mutilate cats

...what cat?

No, really. What cat?

 

[Fraught]

This is awesomeness in it's purest form. I am definitely waiting to see how the Medic and Heavy are going to share the Half-Life 2's car (you know, the one that Gordon used to drive through the chemical-swamp or whatever) and Ravenholm, especially the heavy with all the jumping etc.

Keep it up, definitely looking forward to next episodes.

PS. God damnit, do a site for this comic. It deserves one.

 

[Logan Westbrook]

PS. God damnit, do a site for this comic.

Oddly, despite my criticism, I agree with this. I think it would do you good to get some feedback from a wider audience.

Comic Genesis [http://www.comicgenesis.com/] might be a good place to start.

 

[Anarchemitis]

[img_inline caption="This one was fun to do, although I didn't care for the fact that Heavy's speech was supposed to be dimminutive. It improves as more postcards come. I also had fun with the fact that he has excellent caligraphy but only for his name and the Dear Red Team." width="700"]http://img525.imageshack.us/img525/7286/outsidefe4.png[/img_inline]

PS. God damnit, do a site for this comic.

Oddly, despite my criticism, I agree with this. I think it would do you good to get some feedback from a wider audience.

Comic Genesis [http://www.comicgenesis.com/] might be a good place to start.

Actually I'm sure that we couldn't do that. Not unlike Civil Protection or work of LitFuse films, we technically don't own these images, regardless how we mark them up.

 

[Fraught]

I would still like one thing. You guys could literally do it like a webcomic. Do 2 separate personalities for the Heavy and Medic, and put text balloons. Because I would rather see it as an adventure, than just pictures, and a message on the bottom.

 

[Omnidum]

I would still like one thing. You guys could literally do it like a webcomic. Do 2 separate personalities for the Heavy and Medic, and put text balloons. Because I would rather see it as an adventure, than just pictures, and a message on the bottom.

They be on vacation, fer feck.

But yes, make it periodically the postcard way as a means to give a resume about what happened x pages back.

 

[Fraught]

I would still like one thing. You guys could literally do it like a webcomic. Do 2 separate personalities for the Heavy and Medic, and put text balloons. Because I would rather see it as an adventure, than just pictures, and a message on the bottom.

They be on vacation, fer feck.

But yes, make it periodically the postcard way as a means to give a resume about what happened x pages back.

Well yeah, but they they could be on a vacation, and someone could start fecking around there, so that they would lose contact with the rest of the team. And then it could be a normal comic.

Even if it sound bollocks, I would still like it more as a comic.

 

[the monopoly guy]

Well, the letter was better this time, but this comic's only purpose (and the last one's) seemed to be to move the story along, with no punchline.

 

[Eyclonus]

I thought you guys were going for that "little viginette" approach, then again looking at what I'm saying here, I realize its practically "Ha! I haver caught you daring to use Narrative & Continuity! Take That Blaggart!"

 

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[img_inline caption=Alright. This was fun to pose. I never went to the Black Mesa East map to do this one. I went to the BME mockup in A Red Letter Day, which was pretty awesome, considering that it's mostly empty save for the vort, Mossman, and Eli. The pose Medic uses is reminiscent of the taunt Spy uses with his pistol. Have fun. width="700"]http://img505.imageshack.us/img505/4540/bmegi5.png[/img_inline]







Sorry for the late post, but this wasn't real "halloweeny" and I didn't want people to critisize that. I'll make one for Christmas.