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crimson5pheonix said:
You say that like Tony hasn't been scarred by the events of Avengers 1 and had it play out in Avengers 2 and that it's not going to come up within Civil War. You're talking like Batman didn't lose his girl. You're talking like Captain America didn't lose most everyone he knew when he got frozen. This is the primary antagonist to the protagonists losing in the first act. This usually doesn't go well for the antagonist in question.
Oh, you mean they faced mild to moderate obstacles that they overcame by the film's end, at which they stood victorious. Like being captured, or knocked out and forced to watch your only friend cut down, shortly after watching your new father figure die. Stuff like that?

Man it's almost like...it's almost like all these escapist fantasy films have VERY SIMILAR NARRATIVE STRUCTURES. Must be something unique about the protagonist of this one.
 

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I'm just wondering how Finn survived having a liquefied spine. I thought for sure he was done. I wonder how that will affect him in the upcoming films. Robo-spine?

The old Star Wars movies were charming as hell but not particularly well written, although that doesn't excuse this one if it does have sub-par writing.

Yeah it's a little tacky and corny and obvious and filled with tropes we've seen a million times before, but that's what Star Wars revelled in. In that sense, with the goofy humor and over the top characters, I found that it really captured the feel of the old films, which is what this one really needed to do. It needed to be classic Star Wars with a new coat of paint and as much fan-service as tastefully possible to capture the old crowd and bring back the magic.

I really liked Rey. I liked her character, loved her design, her acting was good. I adored the scenes in the beginning which just showed her living in her world, I love when directors just let their characters and worlds breathe. But it struck me as pretty jarring and hammy that she could understand and master her use of the force so quickly and unguided, and the saber fight at the end was a bit silly. Kylo Ren must be an awful swordsman, even if he was wounded and blinded by anger and euphoria at becoming wholly dark. My view is that he definitely wasn't trying to kill Rey, and her sudden awakening surprised him enough that she got the better of him in his wounded and dazed state. But at the time I was just enjoying the spectacle and emotions really, which is what it delivered on very well. Logic be damned!
 

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BloatedGuppy said:
crimson5pheonix said:
You say that like Tony hasn't been scarred by the events of Avengers 1 and had it play out in Avengers 2 and that it's not going to come up within Civil War. You're talking like Batman didn't lose his girl. You're talking like Captain America didn't lose most everyone he knew when he got frozen. This is the primary antagonist to the protagonists losing in the first act. This usually doesn't go well for the antagonist in question.
Oh, you mean they faced mild to moderate obstacles that they overcame by the film's end, at which they stood victorious. Like being captured, or knocked out and forced to watch your only friend cut down, shortly after watching your new father figure die. Stuff like that?

Man it's almost like...it's almost like all these escapist fantasy films have VERY SIMILAR NARRATIVE STRUCTURES. Must be something unique about the protagonist of this one.
Rey getting captured was a mild obstacle as evidenced by her getting herself out. Black Widow getting captured was a moderate obstacle because she couldn't break out on her own. Ultron was a significant obstacle because he killed one of the heroes on his way down.

After Vader killed Kenobi, Luke had to wait 2 movies (for the equivalent of the third act) before he could settle it. Rey settled it in the equivalent of the first act. So answer this, what is Ren going to do for the next movie? I've asked this question several times and have gotten no answer. We've already been shown that Rey is better than him. Saying that he was holding back is going to feel cheap. He's going to have to beef up to be a problem again. I hope his training puts him back on par with the hero at least.
 

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I was mostly put off by Rey being so impeccably better than everyone and awesome at everything.
This was probably it for me as well.

I thought all the acting was great, however the writing was lacking. Except for one scene where Rey gets kidnapped she kicks ALL the asses. Hell, even during the scene where she is kidnapped she's still blasting away at stormtroopers. I get Kylo was wounded during the last fight but we weren't given a real reason to think "well she's screwed" other than one scene where they previously encountered each other and she hadn't magically gained force abilities rivaling that of someone who (albeit is still inexperienced) was trained by Luke Skywalker and what appears to be Darth Plagius.
 

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Digi7 said:
I'm just wondering how Finn survived having a liquefied spine. I thought for sure he was done. I wonder how that will affect him in the upcoming films. Robo-spine?
You could do a lot worse than cyborg ex-Stormtrooper as a character for people to enjoy.

In all seriousness, I wasn't sure if the hit, decisive that it was, was to his spine or just up his back on either side. Either way Finn got knocked the fuck out.
 

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Gordon_4 said:
Digi7 said:
I'm just wondering how Finn survived having a liquefied spine. I thought for sure he was done. I wonder how that will affect him in the upcoming films. Robo-spine?
You could do a lot worse than cyborg ex-Stormtrooper as a character for people to enjoy.

In all seriousness, I wasn't sure if the hit, decisive that it was, was to his spine or just up his back on either side. Either way Finn got knocked the fuck out.
It looked pretty central and very deep and broad, but this is Star Wars where apparently being chopped in half and knocked down a vertical garbage chute isn't enough to keep a good man down. Looking at you, Darth Maul.
 

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Winnosh said:
Ren was bleeding out through the entire fight, he needed immediate medical attention but still fought the two of them in rapid succession.
I was still very aggravated by it. The whole thing. A similarly wounded Darth Maul would have torn them apart (in my script. I know, in reality, it is whatever is in the script. I really wish it hadn't gone down like this).

I liked Finn, Poe and Ray. I liked Ren, mask on. Mask off he was not physically what I'd expect. I thought all three had likable enough traits and developed character. Worst aspects of the movie:

1) Wasted potential. Why is Leia in the resistance? After return of the Jedi, she should be the government. NOTHING has really changed or advanced. 40 years of fantasy wasted. What could have been? Something like the Foundation series but set to the Star Wars universe.
2) I am going to lose it if this becomes the redemption of Ren. Darth Vader was not redeemed. That whole story arc was an accident caused by audiences liking Solo more than Luke as a romantic lead, while Ford fiddled with the idea of not even returning to the series. It stopped being about Luke's story arc and become Anakin's and it was stupid. You don't stop hating Adolph Hitler because he couldn't bring himself to murder how own son.

But I really, really don't want to see that story arc again.

So much wasted potential.
 

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It just seems like every other stormtrooper is of the monotone, do everything that is asked kind. If we saw some scenes of other stormtrooper camaraderie, then I could believe it. But stormtroopers have always been just suits, so maybe it is just me.
TR-8R begs to differ.



She never really gets instant mastery. The mind trick was pretty silly though, I'll give you that. But really all of her scenes like the mind trick and beating Ren go back to her character of being strong willed, determined and focused. The writers certainly could have been more subtle with how she uses her traits but nonetheless, her character has plenty of....character.
It wasn't only that or the fact a woman who could barely get enough food to eat could outrun a man who was a well fed soldier born and raised.

It was also the fact she could maintain the Falcon better then Han despite her background not logically giving her that experience, and the fact on her first time flying she was out-piloting trained pilots, and that the first time she held a blaster she missed once before getting perfect marksmanship skills. Honestly the only thing in the whole movie she doesn't execute perfectly was her fiddling with fuses on Han's cargo ship, and even that worked out for the better in the end.
Yes, of course, that's the whole point. She is extremely force sensitive and so can achieve things that others could not, her perfect outcomes of events were part of her characterisation. (And IIRC that wasn't her first time flying.)
 

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Gorfias said:
Winnosh said:
Ren was bleeding out through the entire fight, he needed immediate medical attention but still fought the two of them in rapid succession.
I was still very aggravated by it. The whole thing. A similarly wounded Darth Maul would have torn them apart (in my script. I know, in reality, it is whatever is in the script. I really wish it hadn't gone down like this).

I liked Finn, Poe and Ray. I liked Ren, mask on. Mask off he was not physically what I'd expect. I thought all three had likable enough traits and developed character. Worst aspects of the movie:

1) Wasted potential. Why is Leia in the resistance? After return of the Jedi, she should be the government. NOTHING has really changed or advanced. 40 years of fantasy wasted. What could have been? Something like the Foundation series but set to the Star Wars universe.
2) I am going to lose it if this becomes the redemption of Ren. Darth Vader was not redeemed. That whole story arc was an accident caused by audiences liking Solo more than Luke as a romantic lead, while Ford fiddled with the idea of not even returning to the series. It stopped being about Luke's story arc and become Anakin's and it was stupid. You don't stop hating Adolph Hitler because he couldn't bring himself to murder how own son.

But I really, really don't want to see that story arc again.

So much wasted potential.
Kylo-Ren isn't fit to polish Darth Maul's boots - I suspect that people like Kylo are the sort people like Maul would be turning into practice dummies before their breakfast. You remember that scene in Kill Bill where the Bride sees that the last of the Crazy 88 is not a hardcore gangster but an obviously stupid teenager in over his head and she just spanks him with the flat of her sword? That is how I picture any hypothetical meeting between the idol and idolater.

One of the biggest problems with the film is that with such a huge time-skip there is some missing stuff. To answer your question about Leia, she's in the Resistance because the New Republic government has absolutely no pattern recognition and instead of the uprising totally crushing the Empire they negotiated a tentative peace and they don't think the First Order are more than a group of angry fanatics with no powerbase.....

As for Vader, I think that he's more analogous to Rommel though far more of an asshole. He's not responsible for the massive genocide (Tarkin was the trigger man on Alderaan) and has a tendency to lead from the front which doesn't make him a good person, but at least an adversary you can respect. And he was a tall, deep voiced, space wizard with a laser sword who commanded a starship the size of a continent - I don't begrudge them not foreseeing his incredible impact on popular culture, but I find it baffling that no one could at least conjecture that people would think he was cool.

Besides, only one person ever stopped hating Darth Vader and that was his son, everyone else would have been content to take a big steaming shit on his ashes. In fact I imagine that Kylo got the helmet from his father, who had been using it as an ashtray.
 

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Winnosh said:
We actually get a couple of scenes of Stormtroopers showing emotion in this movie.
Tonfa guy upset that Finn turned traitor.
Captain Phasma in all her appearences,
The two stormtroopers that just turn and leave when Kylo Ren is having his little temper tantrum.
The Stormtrooper that gets annoyed at Rey and says he'll tighten the straps

Every time a one of them is shown doing anything they all behave differently.
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Finn and Rey are two of the most lacking-in-subtlety audience surrogates I've ever seen.

The first time we meet Finn he's dazed and confused at what's happening around him.
He's everyone in the audience who hasn't ever seen a Star Wars movie, or who isn't invested in the universe.
He sees death and cruelty and reacts with horror and revulsion.
Just like the audience is supposed to.
He wants to escape what he sees as the evil forces surrounding him.
Like any sensible person would.
When confronted with big, explodey space battles and the rush of combat, he whoops and rejoices.
Just like the audience did.
He doesn't care about the politics or the history of what's going on, he wants to escape to somewhere far away and live an adventure.
It really couldn't be more spelled out.
He stays because of a connection to Rey, a wish to explore her world, to help her; he prances around with laser swords, wise cracks in Phasma's face 'cus he thinks that's what you're supposed to do in this universe. Eventually he's felled in defence of his friend(?) but survives to be revived by the life he was fleeing (the Resistance, the political situation, the conflict with the First Order etc.)

Rey is a loner, wistfully reminiscing about a time long ago when things were better.
You need this explained?
She spends her days gathering scrap and keeps hold of Star Wars memorabilia (rebel pilot's helmet).
Not at all subtle.
She's basically a good person, but hung up on something in her past that's holding her back. She has to go back to Jaku 'cus that's where she needs to be, waiting for the past to return.
No coincidence that it's Tatooine mk.2.
She's dragged into the larger conflict by outside forces, she's inherently knowledgeable about the universe and how it works, she's got skills that back this up and she flourishes despite not really enjoying herself.
Eventually she's forced into a confrontation where, and it cannot be shouted louder that it is, a FORCE AWAKENING makes her move on, face up to the world as it is rather than how she wants/dreams/hopes it to be and by the end has embraced the change.

As has been said, Abrams makes competent, uninspired, glossy movies, he doesn't do subtlety.

The reason you don't like Finn is because he's the new audience, enjoying Star Wars. He's the uninitiated holding on for the ride and not respecting the past 'cus he doesn't need to, acting the way he thinks he should based on what he's seen.
The reason you don't like Rey is because she's the fans, desperately clinging on to the past, unwilling to let go and the overwhelming message of the movie is to do just that and enjoy the new, like Finn does.

TLDR: Finn and Rey are audience surrogates and the way the movie depicts them is an unsubtle message to said audience.
I like what you say here, but I would argue that Kylo Ren is desperately clinging to the past more than Rey is, and failing miserably, which is the whole point of his character. Any Star Wars fan knows you can't match Vader for sheer awesomeness and badassery, Ren knows it too, it's why he's such a *****.
 

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Gordon_4 said:
Kylo-Ren isn't fit to polish Darth Maul's boots
LOL. In presence, I agree. But Ren displayed some amazing powers. Maul was an amazing acrobat. He does do a force push, but Ren walked around turning people into tortured puppets and freezing laser blasts in mid-air. No way to I buy that due to him being wounded, totally untrained people would not be sliced into itty bitty rebel bits by him. I simply didn't buy it. I just have to accept that they were selling it.

To answer your question about Leia, she's in the Resistance because the New Republic government has absolutely no pattern recognition and instead of the uprising totally crushing the Empire they negotiated a tentative peace and they don't think the First Order are more than a group of angry fanatics with no powerbase.....
True, but due to that, we are largely left at square one again: A resistence fighting against, for all intents and purposes, fighting the empire. Foundation you had an empire that ends, leaving warring feifdoms in its wake. That could have created a lot of fun. We could have been introduced to whole new powers in new struggles (though, you have to worry that it can come off as badly as did the Trade Federation). There would be a gamble: what if people don't like the new bad guys or their situation? A risk I think would have been worth taking.

As it is, I feel like the previous 6 films resulted in nothing. Heck, the Rebellion should have figured out a way to make peace with the Empire.

As for Vader... I don't begrudge them not foreseeing his incredible impact on popular culture
I think they knew he'd be a great villain (ala Joker, who was initially killed in his first appearance until an editor screamed, what are you doing? That character is going to be a star!... so they added a few art panels and had a startled medic say, "this guy's alive, and he's going to live.) Vader lives, spinning off into space in 4 so when I was 15, I smacked my head and said, "sequel."

But the story arc, I think, changed due to Ford. Vader still would have been big but I hope, big, doing something else. Take away the "father" BS and just have Vader offer Luke an apprenticeship. Die, or join me and gain great power! Fits.

Instead, Lucas says all along, "no, no. Darth Vader is a play on the words, Dark Father". Um, no. Sounds more like Dark Invader. Oh well.
 

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Gordon_4 said:
In fact I imagine that Kylo got the helmet from his father, who had been using it as an ashtray.
I had a discussion with a friend about that helmet, and how Kylo Ren could have possibly come in contact with it. Wouldn't everything left of the Death Star have been picked over by scrappers?

I have no idea how Ren got that thing, and your suggestions seems most likely.
 

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-Samurai- said:
I had a discussion with a friend about that helmet, and how Kylo Ren could have possibly come in contact with it. Wouldn't everything left of the Death Star have been picked over by scrappers?

I have no idea how Ren got that thing, and your suggestions seems most likely.
Luke took Vader with him when he left the Death Star, including his helmet. You see it on him when he's being burned on the funeral pyre.

Kylo Ren either got it from Endor, or from Luke himself (because Luke kept it as a memento/cautionary reminder).

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A similarly wounded Darth Maul would have torn them apart.
The same Darth Maul who stands at the edge of a pit making sparks and then watches gormlessly as Obi-Wan flips over his head and disembowels him without ever raising his weapon in defense? THAT Darth Maul?

I guess they definitely would've given Ren some more twirly choreography. And there would've been like, asteroids and a billion robots fighting in the background frame instead of a bunch of boring trees.
 

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Pluvia said:
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How do you know the targeting computer was guiding the missile mid flight? There's good reason to believe he was just using the force to aim since that was the focus of his training before, Law of Conservation of Detail [http://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/Main/TheLawOfConservationOfDetail] and all. The base knows he wasn't using his targeting computer but the shot still went in. Nobody is amazed at how the shot curved, people are amazed he aimed so well.
The targeting computer was of course telling the missiles what to do, otherwise there would be no point in the targeting computer. Without anything to target they'd just fly right past it, I mean they're be propelled at high speeds in space.

Luke's force training is where to move his body to block, it's not exactly helpful here, so the Conservation of Detail would be putting his trust in the force and he'll be able to do amazing things. Also, again, no one is ever amazed by any force powers in the series.

So yeah, the missiles curved because we see Luke tapping into the force to curve them. If they curved naturally then there would be no use in the targeting computer, the ships would just need coordinates on where to fire their missiles from. If the missiles were designed to curve automatically over the exhaust port then it'd be even easier, they'd just need to line themselves up with it and fire from any distance as long as their missiles flight path was over the port. Like we watch this happen, we watch him turn off his targeting computer and we watch the missiles amazingly curve. The power he has in that scene eclipses anything Rey does in the entire movie, and he was just a farm boy.
If he can do that, why does he struggle to move a lightsaber and a fighter in the next movie? That was the subject of his training then. If he used telekinesis, he got severely weaker between movies. Contrasting, he showed no ability to use telekinesis in ANH apart from your assertion that he was using it at the end. However he did have a scene letting him hit things that he couldn't see, which is an equally valid use of the targeting computer (just getting the missile above the port from that distance).

Luke comments when Kenobi pulls a mind trick (an ability Rey just does on the spot). And it's only you thinking Luke curved the shots. Kenobi's robes collapsed, but they were far away.
And even he doesn't seem so shocked. Vader blocks blaster shots, no one mentions it.
But he does question how that works. And the group is busy talking to Vader.

If the shot curving was impossible, what were the other bombers doing on the run?
Using their targeting computers so their missiles would curve into the port they're targeting, rather than flying right past it like Luke's would've done before he curved them with the force.
Or using them to get the missiles over the exhaust port where they curve themselves. That would actually make sense given that if the computer was telling it where to curve, they could fire from any distance and it would curve. But they wait until they're a specific distance away before they fire, the missiles were likely on fuses.

So he doesn't believe in the force, like he says. Believing in the Jedi and believing in the force are two different things. He calls the force a "hokey religion" and says force abilities are "simple tricks and nonsense".
*All-powerful force controlling everything, nothing controls his or anyone elses destiny. Don't cherry pick what he says.
That's what you're doing. I pointed out that Luke asked if he didn't believe in the force and gave Han's full answer, you're just using one line. I'm even pulling in other Han quotes. Your line that you love so much, when taken with everything else he says, is another reason he doesn't believe in the Force. Even when Luke successfully deflects a training blaster, he chalks it up to luck.

It should be pointed out that Windu was one of the most powerful masters and so was Yoda. He fought Yoda until Yoda had to duck out, he was winning handily against Yoda. And he was beating Luke until Vader turned on him.

Ren was effective at the start of the movie, but he stops being useful later on. He just becomes straight useless after he takes his helmet off.
Hmm he wasn't beating Yoda, in fact they were pretty eveningly matched. Luke didn't fight back against him, so there's nothing impressive about that.

The point here is basically complaining that Ren isn't Vader and, well yeah, he's not. But when it comes to other Jedi they're not exactly much more impressive or threatening than him. They pretty much all got taken out in some of the most pathetically easy ways possible.
Early in the fight kinda, but Yoda started losing when Sidious started throwing hover pulpits around. Luke wasn't fighting back against Sidious because he was getting fried by force lightning. Y'know, because Sidious is powerful.

They got taken out in a surprise attack by groups of well trained military personnel. Ren gets taken out by 3 people only one of whom had used their weapon longer than a few minutes. And he's supposed to be one of the strongest fighters on team evil, so who's going to threaten the group in the next movie?
 

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BloatedGuppy said:
-Samurai- said:
I had a discussion with a friend about that helmet, and how Kylo Ren could have possibly come in contact with it. Wouldn't everything left of the Death Star have been picked over by scrappers?

I have no idea how Ren got that thing, and your suggestions seems most likely.
Luke took Vader with him when he left the Death Star, including his helmet. You see it on him when he's being burned on the funeral pyre.

Kylo Ren either got it from Endor, or from Luke himself (because Luke kept it as a memento/cautionary reminder).
Ok, now I remember. I had forgotten if the helmet was left on the Death Star, or if it was with Vader during his "funeral".

Still a really weird thing to keep. Nothing says good times like the melted helmet of your once evil, dead father-who-tried-to-kill/convert you.
 

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Still a really weird thing to keep. Nothing says good times like the melted helmet of your once evil, dead father-who-tried-to-kill/convert you.
Given Luke's own struggle with the Dark Side, it might have served as a puissant reminder. Or it might have had sentimental value, in that Luke believed his father redeemed and had precious little else to remember him by.

Naturally, there's also the consideration that Kylo simply went to Endor and got it himself. He clearly feels a sense of ownership over "Vader memorabilia".
 

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She had a fairly good attitude, but it's hard to take seriously when she's hyper-competent and has instant mastery at things she has never done, but that's a discussion for another thread.
I think that while she is hyper competent for the most part it is explainable by her upbringing on Jakku. She learned to speak a variety of languages due to the mixed nature of the scavengers. Her fighting ability is self explanatory due to the rough nature of the locals. She learned how to repair, maintain, and fly ships as those would be essential skills when doing scavenging runs and odd jobs.

A lot of people say she is too good with the blaster but she really only hits 2-3 Stormtroopers who are caught by surprise, Finn and Han are far more competent than she is shown to be as far as shooting.

The force abilities actually comes down to a personal theory of mine. She only exhibits these abilities after the vision caused by grabbing Luke's lightsaber. My theory is that Luke imbued the lightsaber with the vision of Kylo's betrayal and some way to trigger an individual's personal memory to keep them from abandoning the quest. In Rey's case the knowledge that her parents left her and would not be coming back. Additionally he packed it with knowledge about the basic abilities a force user should know in order to give any new force user a jump start and a fighting chance against the Knights of Ren and the First Order.

Its only a personal theory but I feel it makes sense. Kylo is shown to force interrogate, the lightsaber knowledge bomb is pretty much the opposite of that.

She is still a Mary Sue and I hope she gets knocked down a peg in the next 2 movies, but I did actually enjoy her screentime.
 

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Or using them to get the missiles over the exhaust port where they curve themselves. That would actually make sense given that if the computer was telling it where to curve, they could fire from any distance and it would curve. But they wait until they're a specific distance away before they fire, the missiles were likely on fuses.
Okay, this point has been bugging me more and more whenever you bring it up and I cant take it anymore.

Why the hell would an engineer design a missile -a weapon almost exclusively meant for three dimensional air to air combat- in such a way that it automatically turns downward after a set amount of time?

That just doesnt make any sense. It completely negates the weapon's primary purpose of taking out aircraft or aircraft-like spacecraft.
It has a fuse to do so? Apparently if you pay attention when they're going over the plan, the top of the exhaust port is covered so they can't shoot in straight from above (I know I never personally noticed). So perhaps they engineered these missiles specifically to do so?