Katawa Shoujo fan box art

[Lunar Templar]

Ok, I just finished version 3. What do you guys think?

much better not what i had in mind but a lot better then before

 

[DrRockor]

much better not what i had in mind but a lot better then before

I know, I just always really liked the pattern they used on the main menu and on the website

 

[Rainforce]

Ok, I just finished version 3. What do you guys think?

could use a question mark at the end of the back cover text. Otherwise, nice concept. maybe a less monochromatic background? the color theme itself feels right, though.
EDIT: fixed quoting errors >_>

 

[DrRockor]

could use a question mark on the end of the back cover text. Otherwise, nice concept. maybe a less monochromatic background? the color theme itself feels right, though.

Crap. I thought I had got all the grammar right. Thanks for telling me

 

[blizzaradragon]

All in all I like the box art you made. Only things I could say is maybe have a better picture for Hanako and Rin, probably something outside of the school since you pics like that for the other 3, but that's just my opinion.

 

[Marik2]

Ok, I just finished version 3. What do you guys think?

While the back is better I do feel like the shots of the girls look too cramped and a bit forced if that makes any sense

 

[DrRockor]

All in all I like the box art you made. Only things I could say is maybe have a better picture for Hanako and Rin, probably something outside of the school since you pics like that for the other 3, but that's just my opinion.

A picture for Rin was hard to think of and I thought this would be a nice shot of her and I always liked this pic of Hanako. It down plays her scars and I always thought that it would be something Hisao would see a lot

 

[DrRockor]

While the back is better I do feel like the shots of the girls look too cramped and a bit forced if that makes any sense

I was going for a photo splayed across a table sort of thing if that makes sense but they are also all coming from the scene when Hisao is in the snow

 

[Tony2077]

the front is great the back looks better now with more substance to it nice work.

 

[ChupathingyX]

Uhh, after looking at the enlarged picture I just noticied that the picture of Hanako has the mouse cursor on her sleeve.

You might want to replace the picture.

Also, the text is touching the bottom picture.

The colour is much better.

 

[DrRockor]

Uhh, after looking at the enlarged picture I just noticied that the picture of Hanako has the mouse cursor on her sleeve.

I was staring at that picture and I didn't notice that. Thanks for telling me

 

[Tirak]

The heart in the upper right needs to be cleaned up, the edges aren't consistent and it looks a little sloppy, same with Rin's hair, but that's less noticeable. Love the work so far though

 

[blizzaradragon]

All in all I like the box art you made. Only things I could say is maybe have a better picture for Hanako and Rin, probably something outside of the school since you pics like that for the other 3, but that's just my opinion.

A picture for Rin was hard to think of and I thought this would be a nice shot of her and I always liked this pic of Hanako. It down plays her scars and I always thought that it would be something Hisao would see a lot

I can agree with Rin because thinking back to it there aren't that many good pictures of her. However I always thought the images of Hanako playing billiards were great pictures. It shows her in such a happy state and I felt that Hisao would be overjoyed to see her enjoying herself so. Just my opinion of course. Either way the box art is still awesome.

 

[DrRockor]

I'm trying some different pictures for Hanako and Shizune and I wanted to know if people think that these are better or if I should stick with the old ones

also I cleaned up the logo on the front a little

 

[ChupathingyX]

I think you should use the picture of Lilly where she is more happier.

It should be the first one in that "set" when you look at it in the gallery.