Czargent Sane said:lag.
Czargent Sane said:well, forum ate first post.
Czargent Sane said:some one who will be joining shortly. and I tend to wait more than a couple of hours before assuming someone is not going to show.Fallen-Angel Risen-Demon said:Czargent Sane said:Sil made her way through the town. she had been traveling with the man called arthur for three days. Sil had found this man unconscious near the bodies of some raiders, she had given him food and water, and decided to travel to a nearby settlement with him. he seemed like a good man, but his love of firearms and explosives made Sil uneasy.
approaching a bar, Sil noticed a dead body and signs of a fight. running to find arthur, she indicates. that something is wrongWho is Arthur? Is he a RPer? If so he seems to be inactive so you might want to edit your post out and make a new entrance. Just some advice.
Czargent Sane said:Okay, this RP is just a little too much for me. I'm out, rest assured, but allow me this closing, if pointless defense:
1. OOC boxes, alright, its your rule, I concede that point
2. Introducing another character, alright, your complaint is perfectly valid, a simple edit request could fix that
3. did you just tell your roleplayers what they have to do? dont they get to choose the actions of their characters?
4. there are no "raiders"? what? so, essentially, either you are saying that in this post apocalyptic setting no one in the world has decided to shoot someone else to take their stuff, or that we are simply unaware of it. Do not forget that several other players have mentioned similar things such as "bandits".
5. punctuation....ugh... lets take a look at your first post:
" the world has change." I'm sorry, what?
"The world destroyed nothing left but rubble," what does that even mean?
"dust and memories No matter how you saw the world before being a pessimist or an optimist, " I think you're missing a period there, right before "no"
"humanity has done it's toll on itself." alright, you cant "do your toll" "TAKEN it's toll" is the correct phrase
"So, what will you do..?" two periods then a question mark. you scolded me for abusing punctuation..?
"Will you strive to live and survive?" to live AND survive? those two essentially mean the same thing in that context
you know, when I sent in my sheet, I just assumed you were young or english was your second language, but I am not putting up with hypocritical garbage about my posts having bad punctuation when this is what you are typing.