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CloggedDonkey

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Fallen-Angel Risen-Demon said:
Can I join too?
I got a CS
Name: Javol Zen
Age: 12
Moral: Chaotic good e.g. For the greater good kinda guy.
Gender: Male
Apearance: weres a long black duster that drags along the floor, army boots, leather gloves , gogles cover his eyes and has long black hair.
Items: Wrench, nuts, bolts and a screwdriver.
Weapons: Double sided chainsword (think warhammer 40k chainsword only it has the actual chainsword part on both sides e.g. Like a double lightsaber) and a Revolver.
Special powers: upon touching any item he knows how to use it to it's full potential. E.g. He touches a revolver he is instantly a expert shot.
Weakness: his mind gets overfilled with info now and again and he goes into a trance like state.
Bio: Was brought up after the end of days or at least he has no memory of before. His parents made a settlement where they lived with the settles till raiders attacked when he was 9. They killed everyone but him as they wanted to make him a raider, but Javol was having none of it he grabbed his fathers Double-sided chainsword and Revolver using them to slaughterd them all where he realised his strange power. He began traveling the wastes as a vigilante killing all he considerd evil. One day he was hacking a computer when suddenly a trance like state occoured he was still fully aware but unable to move.
I like the character, and every anime has to have it's kid character to make really overpriced models of, but I would make him older. Most twelve year olds can't deal with the death of something they don't care about, let alone kill things. Fourteen maybe? Besides that, pretty good character with a neat power.
 
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CloggedDonkey said:
I like the character, and every anime has to have it's kid character to make really overpriced models of, but I would make him older. Most twelve year olds can't deal with the death of something they don't care about, let alone kill things. Fourteen maybe? Besides that, pretty good character with a neat power.
K I'll make him say, 15 and the tradgedy happend when he was 13.
Everything else the same though except from his size is about the same as a 10 year olds mainly due to his brain taking all the growing energy up to keep his itself from overloading from the info collected from his power.
Oh, and thanks for the constructive critisism. :)
 

FalloutForever

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Xero Scythe said:
mind if I join this? I think it could be interesting.
Yes you may, please make a character sheet and i'll let you know via pm when I can throw you in.

Fallen-Angel Risen-Demon said:
Can I join too?
I got a CS
Name: Javol Zen
Age: 12
Moral: Chaotic good e.g. For the greater good kinda guy.
Gender: Male
Apearance: weres a long black duster that drags along the floor, army boots, leather gloves , gogles cover his eyes and has long black hair.
Items: Wrench, nuts, bolts and a screwdriver.
Weapons: Double sided chainsword (think warhammer 40k chainsword only it has the actual chainsword part on both sides e.g. Like a double lightsaber) and a Revolver.
Special powers: upon touching any item he knows how to use it to it's full potential. E.g. He touches a revolver he is instantly a expert shot.
Weakness: his mind gets overfilled with info now and again and he goes into a trance like state.
Bio: Was brought up after the end of days or at least he has no memory of before. His parents made a settlement where they lived with the settles till raiders attacked when he was 9. They killed everyone but him as they wanted to make him a raider, but Javol was having none of it he grabbed his fathers Double-sided chainsword and Revolver using them to slaughterd them all where he realised his strange power. He began traveling the wastes as a vigilante killing all he considerd evil. One day he was hacking a computer when suddenly a trance like state occoured he was still fully aware but unable to move.
I actually don't mind this character I was waiting for someone to make a character that was young.. hm.. your accepted. I think we can chuck you in now somehow, so let me think of something.
 

FalloutForever

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Rachael walks out of the room and proceeds outside the 'hotel' when suddenly a small child around the age of 13 bumps in and apologises, she nods her head and continues to walk.
As she is walking she puts her hand down to feel her money bag and it's gone. She immeadiately turns around and drops a few seeds on the ground planting them and whispers "Find this child for me."

A few seconds later the vines have returned and alert Rachael to the presence of the boy, she walks into an alleyway only to see the boy tangled beyond all belief and takes the money bag out of the boys hand. "Got a reason for doing this you little punk?"

If you didn't already catch on, this is you, Fallen-Angel-Risen-Demon.
 

FalloutForever

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Czargent Sane said:
looks interesting, I think I might enter a character if your still accepting.
Like I said, still accepting if you want to make a cs.
 
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'What the fuck!'
*tries to get free but fails*
'What? Oh, I see. You control these things.'
*stops*
'Can I have my cogs and gears back please?'
*Spins making the vines untangle enough for him to turn his DE chainsword on*
*the vines untangle to avoid the weapon and the boy falls, lands and pulls his DE chainsword out pointing it towards Racheal*
'Oh how the tables have turned'
'Now give me back my cogs and gears!'
 
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'No answer ay?'
*circles Racheal*
'suprised that a kid can perform such a feat?'
*he notices a needle on the floor*
'what's this?'
*he picks it up*
'strange... AAGGHH!'
*The boy stumbles back dropping his DE Chainsword and grabs his head*
'Not again!'
*he pukes*
'But why the pain? It is new.'
*a drop of blood comes out of his nose*
'Must.... Resist... Cannot... Give... U-'
*he faints hitting the floor hard*
this should of been a EDIT to the other post I apologise
 

FalloutForever

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Um.. the hell..? How did you get free of the vines? Like you don't even have a clue what I was doing.. hm.. I'm going to have a little chat with people.
 
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FalloutForever said:
Um.. the hell..? How did you get free of the vines? Like you don't even have a clue what I was doing.. hm.. I'm going to have a little chat with people.
what does OCC actualy mean?
I be confus.
Also to escape I used my power the use to full potential thing on the vines my Character could tell that spinning would loosen the vines grip which was over the on button on the DE chainsword therefore the loosening made it come on scaring the vines away and allowing my Character free and able to get his DE chainsword. Also he didn't steal your bag thingy he nearly knocked it on the floor so he thinks you are stealing off him.
Confusing I know but still makes sense... Sorta
 

FalloutForever

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Okay, now that everything is sorted, we'll start... around when F-A-R-D's character has passed out on the ground

Rachael kneels down next to the ground, "Hm.. what a strange kid.." She lifts him up off the ground and brings him into the 'hotel' room. She then lays him down on a nearby bed and examines him.
 

FalloutForever

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"Hmmm.. Doesn't look like he's going to wake up anytime soon." Rachael walks out of the room, locks the door and proceeds to the nearby Bar for some drinks and a meal.

While she is walking she sees Dane and waves "Hey, Dane."
 
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*The boy gets out of the bed*
'Thanks lady... But I gotta go, you should work on telling when people are acting'
*goes to open the door*
'Shit!'
*trys the window*
'Dammit it's jammed!'
*Searches for his stuff*
'Where did she put it?'
 

CloggedDonkey

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Joseph stepped out of the bar, his face turning a slight red from the alcohol. "It's okay, I'll pay you next time I come over." He said while waving into the bar. He turned around and bumped into an old man. "Huh, sorry sir." He said as he stepped out of the way. Behind the man he saw Dane, who seemed to be using his hand to control the man, like what he did with his puppet during the fight.

He looked at the man and saw that he had blood running down his neck. "You sick bastard. You would kill an old man to try and get me out of the way so you could get with Rachael. I'm not sure if I should feel sorry for you or just sick." Joseph reached behind his back for his shotgun, but found it gone. "You're lucky I forgot my gun. So put up your dukes, ************." Joseph took a fighting position and jumped back from the dead man. He saw Rachael approach. "Rachael, get out of here. I have a few words with Dane that I don't want to share with you.
 

FalloutForever

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Rachael stands there looking at Dane and Joseph. "Not this shit again.." Vines erupt from the ground and hold Dane and Joseph.
"Now explain to me why your doing this joseph.."


Elsewhere..
A voice echoes through a metallic hall..
"Like I said if we act now this group of people can be the greatest help for our plan.."
"Are you sure?"
"Incredibly, I swear on my life." "I'll take your word for that, fine.. I'll send a messanger to get them to go there."
"Okay then, either way I must depart."
Footsteps can be heard and then nothing..