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TakerFoxx said:
Richard fucking Rahl from the Sword of Truth books. Started off fairly sympathetic, flawed, and well-rounded, but turned into Lord Sue with greater force than a Harry Potter fanfic self-insert. This is a classic example of why using fiction as a medium for soapboxing is a dangerous route, folks.
QFT

Pretty much worthless as a protagonist from the end of the second book on. The only interesting character in the rest of the series was Nicci, and then they stuff her in the corner for the epilogue. Great, real great.

It's sad, because I still love the first book. Even like the second book to a degree. After that it's just Goodkind jerking off.

I still think the pages upon pages of moralizing was worse though. Yes, I get it, Atheists = good, religion = bad. You don't have to spend 50+ pages EVERY BOOK banging on about that.

*sigh* such a waste of a series... In capable hands it could have been so good.
 

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Binnsyboy said:
Also, Max Payne, who I dislike.
I don't really see how Max Payne is a Mary Sue, considering that he constantly fucks up at every turn and is so flawed that his imperfections far outweigh his actual merits.
He's basically the exact opposite of a Mary Sue.
 

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I know it's probably to early to call, but I'm gonna call it anyway. I can't resist... sorry.
They still have a chance to prove me wrong.

 

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Eclpsedragon said:
I know it's probably to early to call, but I'm gonna call it anyway. I can't resist... sorry.
They still have a chance to prove me wrong.

DON'T YOU BRING THAT EVIL IN HERE! Why would you bring that up? Argh it's horrible.

To quote Spoony, 'BEETRRAAAYYAAAAAALLLL! BE-TRAYAL! THEY BETRAYED ME! THIS GAME SUUUUUUUUUUCKS!
 

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Froggy Slayer said:
Eclpsedragon said:
I know it's probably to early to call, but I'm gonna call it anyway. I can't resist... sorry.
They still have a chance to prove me wrong.
DON'T YOU BRING THAT EVIL IN HERE! Why would you bring that up? Argh it's horrible.
I'm surprised he's not in here sooner, if any character fits the definition both classic and otherwise it's him.

Overpowered (he's an angel/ demon half-breed, at least the original had some human thrown in)

Blatent self insertion
 

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Superman? ...I haven't read much Superman recently, the most recent Superman thing I've seen is Superman and Batman Apocalypse, but certainly in the Christopher Reeve series and the reboot/remake thing, he more or less exactly fits the bill, right? I mean sure he's an orphan of a different world and Kryptonite is like bad-stuff-don't-touch, but... that's not a character flaw.

I did read the New 52 Justice League, though, now that I think about it, and his major flaw seemed to be that he was a Mary Sue. So that invalidates that I s'pose.

FalloutJack said:
*Does not agree with Doctor assessment*

Characters with longtime build-up are exempt from that status. Longest sci-fi show ever? Doctor Who. In terms of an RPG where characters level up, take in new feats, and get better equipment, the Doctor has been steadily leveling for a VERY long time. This assessment of Sue-ness is therefore DENIED.
Then David Tennant happens and his Sue-ness is reinstated.

Thing is, "The Doctor" is not one character, but rather eleven characters. Sure they have sort of an arc, but mostly Mary Sue-ness is attributed towards any one incarnation of the Doctor - or rather, one incarnation of the Doctor. David Tennant's. I'd agree if the Doctor was the same character over forty plus years and was, as you analogize, "leveling up," but to stick with the metaphor, the Doctor really does just re-roll each regeneration. As far as I'm (and fanfiction) is concerned, the Doctor is eleven different characters and "Mary Sue-ness" should be applied to each incarnation separately where applicable.
 

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Eclpsedragon said:
Froggy Slayer said:
Eclpsedragon said:
I know it's probably to early to call, but I'm gonna call it anyway. I can't resist... sorry.
They still have a chance to prove me wrong.
DON'T YOU BRING THAT EVIL IN HERE! Why would you bring that up? Argh it's horrible.
I'm surprised he's not in here sooner, if any character fits the definition both classic and otherwise it's him.

Overpowered (he's an angel/ demon half-breed, at least the original had some human thrown in)

Blatent self insertion
This shows the difference between an escapist character and a blatant Mary Sue. Yes, Original Dante was ridiculous sometimes, but he was well characterised enough for you to sympathise with him. New Dante is just a blatant author avatar.
 

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Sillyrian said:
I won't post my whole rant on it as it's quite long, but River Song from Dr Who is the biggest Mary Sue I can think of.

For having knowledge above and beyond the main character, appearing and disappearing at will, and basically everything in the last 2 seasons has been about her.

Amy Pond is a pretty bad one as well.
River bloody Song... everything about her is Mary Sue-ish... flaming excellent at everything, the story focusses on her and even flaming marries the Doctor. Hitting all the points for a typical Mary Sue.
 

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Vault101 said:
has anyone read Earths Children series? starting with "Clan of the Cavebear"?
I remember those.

I read them when I was thirteen.

Yeah.

To this day I still wonder if my parents had any idea what was in those books.
 

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Combine Rustler said:
Goddamn Courier 6.
Kill a pack of Deathclaws with your bare hands? Sure thing! Fuck every major faction over, take New Vegas for yourself and turn it into the best possible place in post-apocalyptic America? Sure thing! Drink enough Vodka to murder an entire city? Sure thing!
Still, it's pretty fun to play as the guy(/gal).
Well, it's kind of generous to call the Courier an actual character, because it has no backstory (apart from that one thing in Lonesome Road and a couple of dialogue options) and no set personality.
Okay, what you said is true, but most player characters in any game are starting to resemble gods when they're getting closer to the maximum level.
 

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Andy of Comix Inc said:
Oh, I know! Optimus Prime!

...everyone's gonna throw me out now aren't they?
Not really. I mean yes, ostensibly he is perfect, but at least in the newer series' he is very scaled back so that others can get some screentime and therefore when he Stu-s it up you're not sick of it and it's awesome.

Also helps that he's so damn stubborn about being wrong on Megatron.

Optimus: Megatron can totally be reformed and we can end this peacefully.
Everyone else (even Starscream): Optimus for f-
Optimus: REFORMED! PEACEFULLY!


I've generally given up on there being any interesting main protagonists. The other characters are often far more interesting.
 

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Amethyst Wind said:
Andy of Comix Inc said:
Oh, I know! Optimus Prime!

...everyone's gonna throw me out now aren't they?
Not really. I mean yes, ostensibly he is perfect, but at least in the newer series' he is very scaled back so that others can get some screentime and therefore when he Stu-s it up you're not sick of it and it's awesome.

Also helps that he's so damn stubborn about being wrong on Megatron.

Optimus: Megatron can totally be reformed and we can end this peacefully.
Everyone else (even Starscream): Optimus for f-
Optimus: REFORMED! PEACEFULLY!


I've generally given up on there being any interesting main protagonists. The other characters are often far more interesting.
Is having a strong resolve really a negative? I mean maybe he's right about Megatron, huh? He could, like, just have his wires in backwards or something. Totally a thing, by the way. I'm super-versed in Transformers lore. (Well. I've played the first half of War for Cybertron. ...shut up.)

But I accept that if he's out of the spotlight so much then that reduces the impact of his perfectosity and makes it more interesting when he's on-screen being perfect. Kinda like how Captain Planet only shows up at the end of each episode and stuff. I can't attest to the validity of your claim that he's scaled back, but I'll agree with it. He seems more like a reluctant leader in War for Cybertron anyway, like a less-than-perfect guy who wants to do the best damn job he can, so... yeah, okay, I'll trust that.

Actually, I think Captain Planet counts as a big fucking Mary Sue.

Yeah I'm going with Captain Planet.
 

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Jesus and Superman. ?Nuff said.

Son Gokuu from Dragon Ball is because, no matter how many progressively selfish and idiotic decisions he makes, it?s always dismissed because ?aww, that?s just how naïve, energetic Gokuu is!? and it always miraculously works out in the end. Seriously, look at the shit he pulls in the Boo arc, yet he still gets to put the finisher on Boo with the Genki-Dama, a technique that?s never fucking worked until then.

Batman is definitely not a Mary Sue because it?s repeatedly made a point of that, despite his ?no killing? rule, he?s a psychologically disturbed man who dresses up as a bat and fights criminals as a method of venting out his rage and frustration over his parents? deaths.

SirBryghtside said:
You know, I'm going to be controversial here and say Marty McFly. I've only watched the first film - and don't get me wrong, I really liked it - but just stop and think about it for a second. He doesn't have a single character flaw.
Not really. He?s just a normal teenage boy who?s out of depth and, before going back in time, didn?t have confidence in his band?s performance at his school.

*SPOILERS*

In the second film, he inadvertently ends up killing his father and dooming his mother to be married to abusive bully Biff due to his own greed. Not to mention that, in all three films, he has a temper, especially whenever Biff calls him a ?chicken? or ?yellow belly?.

SirBryghtside said:
Rocky Balboa is the only Mary Sue that works (mainly rocky iv)
Rocky isn?t a Mary Sue because he?d always been an underdog whose cornerstone of his success was his insane durability and the fact that his coach (the old guy played by Burgess Meredith) revealed in Rocky III that he?d been pitting him against weaker opponents so he?d uphold his title. And remember that he lost against Apollo in their first match, and only won against Drago in Rocky IV because he got a lucky shot in that cut his eye and temporarily stunned him.

And remember that he?s uneducated, had family problems, and fell right down the ladder back to his house in Philadelphia in Rocky V.
 

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Alterego-X said:
Sean Steele said:
The term Mary Sue means to many things to too many people and thus is meaningless.
This.

For example, I would say that identifying POPULAR Mary Sues, like Bella Swan, is an inherent contradiction.

While she fits the most simplified definition in that she is an overtly perfect heroine, she doesn't fit the original PURPOSE of the Mary Sue tag in fanfiction communities, that was a way to warn amateour writers that they are going off on a tangent with blatant self-insertions that's petty wish fulfillments would bore everyone else.

That obviously doesn't apply to Twilight, or to any of the franchises listed above, since they already have huge fanbases that don't consider them too boring.

Most of those are not really writer avatars, but audience avatars, that is a completely different thing. If you start bludgeoning general escapist characters with the term "Mary Sue" just for being too perfect, you are no longer complaining about bad writing, just forcing your random literary theories, about how protagnists should act, on others.
I'm going to requote bothe of you because it needs to be said.

Some people define perfect author insert characters as Mary Sues, others define characters which are implausible, others define any character who wins in the end (Come on guys, most Western stories fit this one), others define one without any character flaws (The worst definition for it I've seen used).

There's no way this doesn't devolve into long chains of trying to work out what a mary sue is why everything isn't one.

As even TVTropes says: "TV Tropes Wiki doesn't get to set what the term means; the best we can do is capture the way it is used. Since there's no consensus on a precise definition, the best way to describe the phenomenon is by example of the kind of character pretty much everyone could agree to be a Mary Sue. These traits usually reference the character's perceived importance in the story, their physical design and an irrelevantly over-skilled or over-idealized nature. "

Also, come on. Ash Ketchum, The Doctor, and Marty McFly clearly aren't. #1) Is there even enough of a setting to describe it as all about him? Nevertheless, he's got clear flaws and tends to fail. Yes, the heroes usually prevail. That's generally what happens. It sucks, but underdogs aren't what they're talking about.
#2) Maybe the later ones could sort of be counted... I guess? But if you've ever seen any of the earlier ones from the original run, hardly. And, as many have pointed out, characters becoming more and more powerful or vital to a setting is not Author-insertion OP nonsense. NEXT!
#3) Really? Marty McFly?
1) Story: Not really focused on him. The tendancy of these things is that the MS is the focus of the story, and all story driven events. Most of us can probably agree that that's not really the case here.
2) Special plot powers: Nope.
3) Perfect? I don't see how he's depicted as perfect. Not having blatent character flaws != Perfect.

Remember: This term originally described a character inserted into a familiar setting, whilst incongruent with the setting in specific ways, and generally having the story arcs specifically revolve around them. So calling Mary Sue on characters that were written with a setting's going to be pretty hard...