Pissed at my English teacher, justified?

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Azure-Supernova

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renegade7 said:
The prompt for my essay was "Describe how an artwork has influenced your life." So I wrote my paper about how Pokemon Red got me into video games, and how that has influenced my interest in technology. This was last month. I finally get the paper back, having scored an 85%, which ordinarily I'd be okay with but, on the grade sheet, she wrote "The paper was excellently written but video games are not works of art." She said I had not 'followed the directions properly'. I tried making my case but she would not relent. I'm thinking of going to my counselor, since it makes up like half my quarter grade and I'm kind of pissed about being docked points because she disagrees with me on what is, at best, a semantic argument. Should I?
Huh...

Art - The expression or application of human creative skill and imagination, typically in a visual form such as painting or sculpture, producing works to be appreciated primarily for their beauty or emotional power:

1. The art of the Renaissancegreat art is concerned with moral imperfectionsshe studied art in Paris
2. works produced by human creative skill and imagination:his collection of modern art[as modifier] :an art critic
3. creative activity resulting in the production of paintings, drawings, or sculpture:she?s good at art
Now I don't know about you... but this is directly from Oxford's definition of 'Art' and I'd say EVERY videogame fits that mould. Anything created by man, whether a simple doodle or a marvel of engineering is a work of art. Might want to tell your teacher to stop being such an art snob. Just because videogames don't fit into her personal definition of art doesn't mean that they don't fit into the general definition of art. Objectively she cannot dock you points for that.
 

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Saying Pokemon Red is art is ridiculous. Films are a well established form of art but I don't think you'd see anyone describe stuff like romantic comedies or slasher films as art. Same with drawings, the oldest form of art, you have comics and stuff that just don't fulfill artistic criteria. Games like Flower, Little Big Planet and such can possibly be called art but you'd have to spend a paragraph justifying that.
 

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renegade7 said:
The prompt for my essay was "Describe how an artwork has influenced your life." So I wrote my paper about how Pokemon Red got me into video games, and how that has influenced my interest in technology. This was last month. I finally get the paper back, having scored an 85%, which ordinarily I'd be okay with but, on the grade sheet, she wrote "The paper was excellently written but video games are not works of art." She said I had not 'followed the directions properly'. I tried making my case but she would not relent. I'm thinking of going to my counselor, since it makes up like half my quarter grade and I'm kind of pissed about being docked points because she disagrees with me on what is, at best, a semantic argument. Should I?
do you live in the US? if so then Video games are legally considered art by the US National Endowment for the Arts. this makes her argument invalid. if the US Government consider it art then there not much point in arguing since games can now get funding from them.

EDIT link to artivcle on the escapist;
http://www.escapistmagazine.com/news/view/109835-Games-Now-Legally-Considered-an-Art-Form-in-the-USA
 

2xDouble

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You couldn't or didn't justify and adequately defend your argument. I'm sorry, but if you're just going to roll over and not defend the decision you made and the medium you chose to represent, you deserve more than 15% taken off your grade.

Explain to your teacher that video games are art and why (don't just appeal to the higher authorities of SCOTUS and NEA). Be calm, be respectful, be polite, and most importantly, be prepared. Research the subject thoroughly. Write another essay about it if you have the time. If you can justify it well enough, the teacher should recant. Worst case scenario: your grade stays the same. You earned that 85% regardless of the subject matter.

This isn't about grades or semantics, friend. This is about defending your work. You're going to need that skill eventually, and it will serve you well.
 

s0p0g

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only if:
-your teacher has given a definiton of the word "art" and thus what can or cannot be considered "art"
-your definition doesn't stray to far from that
-both your definitons are rather close to the commonly accepted definition of "art" (not what Joe Average says about that, but the definiton of people who work in the field)

because if the above applies, your teacher's a fuckhead who just is not willing to accept video games as what they've become over time.
also, if he/she (?) says games cannot be art, show him/her The Void, Fatale, The Graveyard, The Path,... because if "art" is somehow about any sort of experience, then your teacher has no choice as to agree that he/she's a prejudiced dickhead.

then again, prejudiced dickheads probably won't be able to change their and admit a mistake.

on the other hand, what is all this "videogames are art, RRRRRRRRAAAAAAAAAAAGEEEE!" about? why is it important that videogames can be seen as art? it has no meaning whatsoever, it's just linking two words together.
i don't get it, seriously ^^
 

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renegade7 said:
The prompt for my essay was "Describe how an artwork has influenced your life." So I wrote my paper about how Pokemon Red got me into video games, and how that has influenced my interest in technology. This was last month. I finally get the paper back, having scored an 85%, which ordinarily I'd be okay with but, on the grade sheet, she wrote "The paper was excellently written but video games are not works of art." She said I had not 'followed the directions properly'. I tried making my case but she would not relent. I'm thinking of going to my counselor, since it makes up like half my quarter grade and I'm kind of pissed about being docked points because she disagrees with me on what is, at best, a semantic argument. Should I?
Ask her if you can do another assignment, in which you attempt to make the case that video games are art. You can cite the fact that the National Endowment for the Arts recognizes them, for instance. You an also talk about how movies are "entertainment that contains art," but can also be works of art in their own right which people now accept--acceptance that video games are just now starting to gain, too. By doing this, you show her that you were acting in earnest, and that you want to fulfill the requirements of the assignment.

But don't argue with her. Ask to share information, but don't shove it at her. Don't try to "go over her head," either -- any principal/headmaster/etc. worth a damn will take her side on this. She is the teacher, and that is her classroom.

If you come to her with respect, let her know this was a simple misunderstanding caused by a difference of opinion (one that is very currently being debated, in fact), you might make an ally. It's all about how you approach it.

If you don't want to do extra work? Take the 85, and next time stay in the "middle of the lane."
 

Master-Jedi

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Radelaide said:
Flame me all you will but Pokemon is not art, nor will it ever be.

I love Pokemon. I grew up on it. I set up Pokemon trading centres at school where you could bring in your gameboy and battle/trade with each other based on your poke-levels. It's interesting, wonderful and I adore it, but I could NEVER call it art.

I am aware the term "art" is suggestive, but I find some of the shots in Assassin's Creed and Batman to be more artful than Pokemon ever will be.
So Pokemon red is not pretty enough to be art, is that what your saying? Would you say that a picture carved into a rock by a ancient human is less of a art than a painting? Sure,the rock carving more primitive and has less detail than the Mona Lisa, but that's due to the limitations of the time. Pokemon red was made on the original game boy. Assassins creed was made for a modern computer. Pokemon red has a unique world, interesting game mechanics and a simple story that ties everything together perfectly. The limitations prevented it form having a long and detailed story like Assassins creed, but it makes up for that by having fun gameplay and many places to explore (AC has that too, just for the record).

You might be saying that everything based on Pokemon is not art, but
Batman [http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Batman_%281986_video_game%29] is? That's a weird game to use for your argument, but I would still consider it art.
 

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master-jedi said:
Radelaide said:
Flame me all you will but Pokemon is not art, nor will it ever be.

I love Pokemon. I grew up on it. I set up Pokemon trading centres at school where you could bring in your gameboy and battle/trade with each other based on your poke-levels. It's interesting, wonderful and I adore it, but I could NEVER call it art.

I am aware the term "art" is suggestive, but I find some of the shots in Assassin's Creed and Batman to be more artful than Pokemon ever will be.
So Pokemon red is not pretty enough to be art, is that what your saying? Would you say that a picture carved into a rock by a ancient human is less of a art than a painting? Sure,the rock carving more primitive and has less detail than the Mona Lisa, but that's due to the limitations of the time. Pokemon red was made on the original game boy. Assassins creed was made for a modern computer. Pokemon red has a unique world, interesting game mechanics and a simple story that ties everything together perfectly. The limitations prevented it form having a long and detailed story like Assassins creed, but it makes up for that by having fun gameplay and many places to explore (AC has that too, just for the record).

You might be saying that everything based on Pokemon is not art, but
Batman [http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Batman_%281986_video_game%29] is? That's a weird game to use for your argument, but I would still consider it art.
The thing I see about Pokemon is that it wasn't intended to be thought about. There's no heavy subtext, there's nothing to engage you past "Holy crap, a rare candy!" (Which really weren't that rare.) Batman/Assassin's Creed are meant to engage you. There's stuff there to think about. That's what real art is, it's made to leave you thinking. The visuals of Pokemon are something to consider, but I prefer to think of the storyline and background information to be more substantial than the visuals. Think about Mona Lisa, it's a pretty picture, but the closer examinations of it show many smiles. That makes me think about perfection and imperfection and going on from there.

I think art is meant to be more than what Pokemon is. (Again, I loved it.)
 

ninjapenguin981

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People that are saying some games aren't art, why?

IMO all games are art, whether they're good art or bad art that remains to be seen, but nevertheless the models and textures and music and story and countless other creative outlets in games constitute art.

There are plenty of bad novels and paintings, so why do we declassify bad games, it just loses integrity on the whole argument.
 

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Non-gamers will (probably) never see games as art. If it was at all obvious and apparent that this teacher wasn't one, then you would've been better served either bringing it up prior, or just writing about something else entirely.

It's her opinion that "games are not art", yes, but it's also your opinion that they are. Really, you're very lucky with what you got.

The Supreme Court ruling that's been tossed around so much? Again, the generalized opinion of 9 people. :p

My take on what you should do? Walk away with your head held high, knowing you got a decent score on an English essay about Pokemon (personally, I'd be ashamed, but again, a matter of opinion XD).

The most I would do in a similar situation is ask to write another paper for bonus points... going straight to the school board, counselor, principal or whatever is just gonna cause undue friction.
 

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Ixnay1111 said:
Well games aren't classified as art so stop being self righteous? If i wrote the same paper about soccer as art do you think id be justified?
Well you're completely right and there should be a /thread.

Oh wait no they are legally classified as art now... and some people even call football the beautiful sport and seem to think it may as well be a work of art, somehow.

OT:
I'd be pissed. Art is subjective and there is no way a teacher should dock marks based on something that is subjective and justified to some extent.
Also don't bother writing another paper showing that they are art. You shouldn't have to.

Perhaps direct her to that supreme court ruling in the USA...
 

mayney93

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Didn't video games just get classified as art by a supreme court judge in america thus you are right and she wrong, provided my information is correct.
 

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Dags90 said:
This is really something you should've brought up with her before you even started writing it. That's entirely your error.

The topic of whether or not video games are art or not has cropped up on this very site, with notable people saying "no" or "not yet". Leaving that unresolved ambiguity with such a large portion of your grade at stake is irresponsible. You should be glad you got an 85%.

You could have taken two minutes the day the assignment was given after class to clear this whole thing up before it started. You didn't. Your fault.
Oh look, my opinion's already been neatly stated for me, this saved me some trouble of writing a longer post.

Walks off whistling
 

Master-Jedi

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Radelaide said:
master-jedi said:
Radelaide said:
Flame me all you will but Pokemon is not art, nor will it ever be.

I love Pokemon. I grew up on it. I set up Pokemon trading centres at school where you could bring in your gameboy and battle/trade with each other based on your poke-levels. It's interesting, wonderful and I adore it, but I could NEVER call it art.

I am aware the term "art" is suggestive, but I find some of the shots in Assassin's Creed and Batman to be more artful than Pokemon ever will be.
So Pokemon red is not pretty enough to be art, is that what your saying? Would you say that a picture carved into a rock by a ancient human is less of a art than a painting? Sure,the rock carving more primitive and has less detail than the Mona Lisa, but that's due to the limitations of the time. Pokemon red was made on the original game boy. Assassins creed was made for a modern computer. Pokemon red has a unique world, interesting game mechanics and a simple story that ties everything together perfectly. The limitations prevented it form having a long and detailed story like Assassins creed, but it makes up for that by having fun gameplay and many places to explore (AC has that too, just for the record).

You might be saying that everything based on Pokemon is not art, but
Batman [http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Batman_%281986_video_game%29] is? That's a weird game to use for your argument, but I would still consider it art.
The thing I see about Pokemon is that it wasn't intended to be thought about. There's no heavy subtext, there's nothing to engage you past "Holy crap, a rare candy!" (Which really weren't that rare.) Batman/Assassin's Creed are meant to engage you. There's stuff there to think about. That's what real art is, it's made to leave you thinking. The visuals of Pokemon are something to consider, but I prefer to think of the storyline and background information to be more substantial than the visuals. Think about Mona Lisa, it's a pretty picture, but the closer examinations of it show many smiles. That makes me think about perfection and imperfection and going on from there.

I think art is meant to be more than what Pokemon is. (Again, I loved it.)
Batman is literally just a game about batman collecting parts to a hovercraft as you can see by clicking this link [http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=BDK5nkHrczc].

Anyway, what about the strategy in the game? Like having a fire Pokemon to beat a grass Pokemon and knowing what moves to teach the Pokemon. That's something to think about for me at least.
 
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daftalchemist said:
You're justified in being pissed, but your teacher is justified in her remark. Unless you're completely dense, you knew full well that claiming a video game is art in an academic paper that would be graded by someone who most likely has never played a video game before would receive a comment of "this isn't art". In which case, you would have gone into the paper knowing that at some point you would have to defend your point, which you did. She didn't go for it, and you should accept that.
While I agree with that, I'd still tell you to go to your counselor. It was your fault for going for something that would obviously be controversial, but you were still technically right.
 

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Dags90 said:
This is really something you should've brought up with her before you even started writing it. That's entirely your error.

The topic of whether or not video games are art or not has cropped up on this very site, with notable people saying "no" or "not yet". Leaving that unresolved ambiguity with such a large portion of your grade at stake is irresponsible. You should be glad you got an 85%.

You could have taken two minutes the day the assignment was given after class to clear this whole thing up before it started. You didn't. Your fault.
That.

Don't be right, be smart. You took a controversial topic knowingly without even letting your teacher know. Doesn't matter if it's art or not, the world is not fair. You should've talked to your teacher before hence it's your fault.
 

Auron225

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While I agree with you and disagree with her that Video games are indeed Art, it it had been me, I wouldve gone to see her as soon as the idea of doing it on a game came to me and confirmed that this was OK before I'd even start writing it.
 

Master-Jedi

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jonyboy13 said:
Dags90 said:
This is really something you should've brought up with her before you even started writing it. That's entirely your error.

The topic of whether or not video games are art or not has cropped up on this very site, with notable people saying "no" or "not yet". Leaving that unresolved ambiguity with such a large portion of your grade at stake is irresponsible. You should be glad you got an 85%.

You could have taken two minutes the day the assignment was given after class to clear this whole thing up before it started. You didn't. Your fault.
That.

Don't be right, be smart. You took a controversial topic knowingly without even letting your teacher know. Doesn't matter if it's art or not, the world is not fair. You should've talked to your teacher before hence it's your fault.
When I was in school, my English teaches graded me on my ability to convey my point in a way that the person who was reading it could understand what I were trying to say. The OP said that the teacher wrote that the paper was well written. Weather or not Pokemon red is art or not is Irrelevant. He should not have gotten marked down for that.
 

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Yup justified. If a black and white picture of a dead woman (I remember seeing this picture in a museum a few years ago) lying in the street is art then anything can be art. Though not for the same reason I hate my English teacher too. She yelled at me because I didn't write my homework down one day. Okay. Then the next day she yells at me because I was writing down my homework "to much" as In I was writing everything she wrote on the board word for word because she checks agendas and I took a few seconds to long doing so. She can't help it though, she's an anal retentive B****. I heard from another teacher that on 9/11 while all the students (past class of course) were in the gym trying to call there parents she yelled at all the kids for having there phones out.
 

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You didn't go to your teacher and tell them what you were going to write about. If you did, you would have been told way in advance this would have happened.

Then there's the fact that you used Pokemon as an example of art. I agree some games can be art, but I honestly want you to tell me why Pokemon Red specifically is art and what features of art it has. Unless you're just using it as a spring-board into how you got into games that are indeed art, I don't see how it fits in at all.

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master-jedi said:
Anyway, what about the strategy in the game? Like having a fire Pokemon to beat a grass Pokemon and knowing what moves to teach the Pokemon. That's something to think about for me at least.
I think the person you are quoting didn't mean think as it 'think of a relevant strategy', but think of something such as a moral message, something that stays with you, or something that questions an established belief in our society.

Fire beats grass, grass beats water, water beats fire is just as much art as rock-paper-scissors.