renegade7 said:
The prompt for my essay was "Describe how an artwork has influenced your life." So I wrote my paper about how Pokemon Red got me into video games, and how that has influenced my interest in technology. This was last month. I finally get the paper back, having scored an 85%, which ordinarily I'd be okay with but, on the grade sheet, she wrote "The paper was excellently written but video games are not works of art." She said I had not 'followed the directions properly'. I tried making my case but she would not relent. I'm thinking of going to my counselor, since it makes up like half my quarter grade and I'm kind of pissed about being docked points because she disagrees with me on what is, at best, a semantic argument. Should I?
Ask her if you can do another assignment, in which you attempt to make the case that video games
are art. You can cite the fact that the National Endowment for the Arts recognizes them, for instance. You an also talk about how movies are "entertainment that
contains art," but can also be works of art in their own right which people now accept--acceptance that video games are just now starting to gain, too. By doing this, you show her that you were acting in earnest, and that you want to fulfill the requirements of the assignment.
But don't
argue with her. Ask to share information, but don't shove it at her. Don't try to "go over her head," either -- any principal/headmaster/etc. worth a damn will take
her side on this. She is the teacher, and that is
her classroom.
If you come to her with respect, let her know this was a simple misunderstanding caused by a difference of opinion (one that is very
currently being debated, in fact), you might make an ally. It's all about how you approach it.
If you don't want to do extra work? Take the 85, and next time stay in the "middle of the lane."