Please help me write an ending to this story

[sb666]

I need to write a story about 3 children who become possesed while using an oujia board for a media assigment.The people in my group came up with the idea and i have been left to do the ending. I am stuck and cant think of anyway to end it and would really appriciate any help i could get. i basicly just need an idea on where the story could go after they have been possesed.

EDIT Okay what i need to come up with now is what could these demons do know that they have taken control over these 3 people thats what really has me stuck.

 

[Hellz_Barz]

turns out it was all a dream

Can't really think of more unless you tell us what has happened so far.

 

[sb666]

turns out it was all a dream

Can't really think of more unless you tell us what has happened so far.

Actually one of the rules for this was that cant be the twist ending.

 

[Hellz_Barz]

That's exactly why I said it to be silly. just take inspiration from some other source and stretch it to fit your story and change it enough to seem original. It's what everyone else does. go on youtube look up oujia boards and expand on the fake stuff already there.

 

[Tentickles]

hate plague
they beat each other to death with a baseball bat
chopped up with a machete
one of the children kills itself by stabbing itself in the neck with a cleaver.
turns out one of the kids in actually a ghost and the other two didnt know that
the board is a gateway to hell
the letters from the board come to life and attack the kids
its really all in a crazy persons head

 

[sb666]

There really hasnt been that much plot development other then they became possesed. I really need to get this dont if i dont i fail the subject.

 

[Tentickles]

oh, and parents are really drugging their children. It's not ghosts.

 

[Sgt. Dante]

Rocks fall, everyone dies...

Ended a few DnD campaigns that way.

Sorry, but without knowing more about the story it's hard to create an eding that woul dseem appropriate.

(traditionally the ending is the second thing to be written after the initial concept, and everything else leads up to that point, but in this case it looks like every act is being independantly created so the ending will have to suit what everyone else is already doing. [/rant])

If the twist can't be that it was a dream, could the twist be that it wasn't? EG the 'main' character wake up hurridly, and exclaims something tot he tune of, "thanks goodness that it was just a dream," then gets out of bed and stands in a puddle of murdered friend.

or something like that. The double fakeout is almost as old as the twist ending, but it still catches people off guard (eveyone knows a twist is coming, so much so that subverting it is much more impactful)

How I miss media studies.

 

[sb666]

Also i have to make a short film out of this so keep it realistic.

 

[HiC]

what's happened so far?

make it something cool like "the children become demons and decide to go whoring"
but really, make it something that can be picked up on if you re-read the story, but not on the first time

 

[ntw3001]

I KILLED THEM WITH MY TAIL

HA HA HA

SIGNED THE DRAGON

 

[unicron44]

Have them take over the world, hell rises and Lord Satan makes us his slaves.

 

[Distorted Stu]

And suddenly a large, blinding light of sheer intensidy burned in the distance. It burnt off the 3 children's skin and killed them instantly.

The Russians desided to attack their home country via massive Nuclear bombardment. The end.

 

[sb666]

ok i have the ending now what could the possesed charcters do while they are possesed

 

[sb666]

I cant really say what is going on in the story because i know just as much as you guys. The people in my group just wrote absoulte crap about demons riding unicorns and playing donkey kong or something like that.

 

[Battleaxx90]

I've given this some thought, and here's my idea. Keep in mind that "Three youths were possessed by an ouija board" is the only part of the story I'm aware of and I don't exactly know the true workings of an Ouija board.

The spirits possessing the children each represent the biggest flaw in their character, who then take over all the child's motor functions and generally exaggerate said flaw. Meanwhile, the child's psychonciousness (did I spell that right?) is still trapped in his/her mind, Psychonauts-style, and is fighting to regain control. The story ends with each of the children conquering said flaw and taking control of their bodies back, becoming a better person overall and dispelling the demon.

Whaddaya think?

 

[StormShaun]

Rocks fall, everyone dies...

Ended a few DnD campaigns that way.

Sorry, but without knowing more about the story it's hard to create an eding that woul dseem appropriate.

(traditionally the ending is the second thing to be written after the initial concept, and everything else leads up to that point, but in this case it looks like every act is being independantly created so the ending will have to suit what everyone else is already doing. [/rant])

If the twist can't be that it was a dream, could the twist be that it wasn't? EG the 'main' character wake up hurridly, and exclaims something tot he tune of, "thanks goodness that it was just a dream," then gets out of bed and stands in a puddle of murdered friend.

or something like that. The double fakeout is almost as old as the twist ending, but it still catches people off guard (eveyone knows a twist is coming, so much so that subverting it is much more impactful)

How I miss media studies.

You ended some of your D&D campains by making rocks falling on all of you!
All of your friends must want to kill you. No happy ending here, well I cant talk I abused my DM power too, I made one guy fall off a mountain and fall all the way down and made his house do a poppy on him, plus I nailed him in the balls with my Ball and chain after that...he did try to kill me!.

 

[sb666]

it dosent have to fit with the other parts to well were going to edit them and make them fit together in the end

 

[lachcal]

Sounds like the rest of your group have no idea what they're talking about.
Go back and edit the beginning so that it makes more sense, after that you'll probably have a much easier time thinking of an ending.

 

[sb666]

Sounds like the rest of your group have no idea what they're talking about.
Go back and edit the beginning so that it makes more sense, after that you'll probably have a much easier time thinking of an ending.

they just wrote down a load of crap also its due tommorow so i cant edit the beging