Please help me write an ending to this story

[zidine100]

Sudenly ninjas everywhere.

what....

The kids were the ghosts (without them knowing there dead of course) and it turns out they were actually being possessed by the living who were trying to contact the dead via a oujia board.

oh wait no twist endings hmmmmm.

they got.... bored!

sorry enough with he jokes now.

There minds break and there sent to a mental institute.

 

[Les Awesome]

oops double post

 

[Les Awesome]

I need to write a story about 3 children who become possesed while using an oujia board for a media assigment.The people in my group came up with the idea and i have been left to do the ending. I am stuck and cant think of anyway to end it and would really appriciate any help i could get. i basicly just need an idea on where the story could go after they have been possesed.

EDIT Okay what i need to come up with now is what could these demons do know that they have taken control over these 3 people thats what really has me stuck.

I like the idea of the kids beating each to death with blunt objects
it adds a hollow dark twist of fate . and the last one becomes
unpossessed after he kills his all his friends and forced to remember all
the horrible things he has done whilst possessed and then hangs himself
in a mental asylum 10 years later

 

[Sparrow]

They all kill each other.

You've seriously given us nothing else to go on and "everybody dies" is usually as shock ending in itself.

 

[awesomeClaw]

How about this:

The kids read of a demon in a book (They have an ouija bord, why not a book?) about a demon who kills young boys. They ignore it and use the ouija bord. The power cuts out and several spooky things begin to happen(but no unrealistic stuff). The kids read that the demon first posseses a human, then torments it´s victims and then finally kills them all.

Now, as paranoia and fear starts to grasp the kids, they become more and more anxious until the end where one of them finally snaps and kills one of the others. But the spooky things continue and the two kids face off in a struggle where the kid that killed wins. He buries them in the garden. The next morning, his father tells him that there have been gas leaks all over the city, causing paranoia and mild hallucinations. The kid realises what he has done and kills himself.

And then we are shown the father smiling in the kitchen. Cut to black.

Keep it ambigous wheter it´s all in their head or there really is a demon.

 

[Sir Ollie]

"They put down the controller"

 

[zelda2fanboy]

Nothing happens. They appear basically normal to friends and family, but very gradually their grades improve. They gain more friends and participate in more activities. They manage to graduate early and enroll in Ivy League schools. They major in political science. They get their masters. And then they begin to run for public office...

 

[manic_depressive13]

They all decided they couldn't be fucked anymore and they went to sleep.

 

[Chris646]

The demons let the humans go about their normal lives, with completely random outbursts of violence, possibly involving lasers. The violence places the demons into a different body, making everyone not trust one another because they don't know who could be possessed by a demon or not. It ends with everybody being dead. Now if you'll excuse me, I'm going to paste this into a text document because this sounds interesting to me.

 

[Meatspinner]

They travel to The White House/Military Base/"That haunted forest with the magical maguffin" and they smile for the first time hinting at the things to come.

That or barefooted Bruce Willis ghost comes along and things explode. Ending with all the demons falling of a skyscraper.

 

[Redwoodhats]

If you're looking for what the demons would do, perhaps they seek revenge and use the trio to do this? So they go kill somebody, the demons leave, police arrest them. They have no recollection of the events.

 

[Moromillas]

Well, what do all good little demons do when they get to run free through the tulips of the mortal realm? .... Devour souls of course, because they're so tasty. Seeing how easy it is to manipulate the mortals is also fun, especially when they kill each other over silly little things. Torture, especially any mental torture is also yum, like rape, then making sure they know that you're watching. Little things like that. You want it to end? Why? It doesn't have to have some neat little conclusion, they could just stay like that, none would be the wiser, especially since the vessels just look like little kids.

 

[Moromillas]

I cant really say what is going on in the story because i know just as much as you guys. The people in my group just wrote absoulte crap about demons riding unicorns and playing donkey kong or something like that.

That's not acceptable. They have to actually participate. Save the specific work, and show it to the teacher. If that doesn't work, the principle. You shouldn't have to bear a fail because other magnificent cock-sections are screwing you over.

 

[AdamRBi]

3 Possessed children? Do they really have to be possessed? You can have it so that one kid acts possessed to scare the other two (maybe by claiming his hand's moving on it's own and he's no longer in control). Then the other 2 kids become possessed by their emotions. You establish one as nervous and superstitious and the other as skeptical, as the prank progresses the superstitious kid starts to panic and show severe signs of paranoia and the other start showing signs of rage.

By the end the kid filled with rage over the ordeal throws a tantrum and throws the board against the wall and storms out freaking the hell out of the paranoid child. After the one kid storms off the prankster decides it's time to end the prank and tells the paranoid kid that it was all joke and the two alk off leaving the board where it lie. Then, zoom up on the board as the lens starts to move spelling out R A G E.

Then End.

Of course you can tell this anyway you want and mix a few things up. Get creative, I'm pretty sure that's why you took the class right? To be creative?

I'm hoping this isn't a "I took this class cause it was easy and now I need help" thing, but I'm giving you the benefit of the doubt here.

Hope this idea helps.

 

[AlAaraaf74]

How about only 1 of them becomes possesed and kills the other two. Ouija boards are dangerous, the more you know.

 

[lachcal]

Sorry I didn't mean to offend you.