Please help me write an ending to this story

[No-one Special]

Given the limited detail you given us, here's some stuff to write about while the kid is possesed:
1. the kid whos possesed keeps playing with the ooige board and keeps bringing in more spirits to the real world
2. the kid keeps doing things related to child who died in the house eg if a kid was drowned in the bathtub or something like that, the possesed kid pretends to drown his toys while taking a bath and says things the dead kids mother said while she drowned him
3. he acts normally but his friends start acting strangly and it turns out he was possesed by a spirit and the other 2 demons, so he's protected
4. the boy begins talking to an imaginary friend that tells him to do stuff so the spirit can finally be at peace eg on his way to deliver a letter to a girl he liked, the person was killed, so now the spirit wants the kid to find the letter and deliver it

That's all I can really come up with. You don't HAVE to use the examples I've given you, they're more used to explain the point I made.

 

[sb666]

I have the ending i just need to make the beging and the middle now.

i need 120 words

 

[sb666]

ok i need the demons to do somethig that results in them killing the charcters

 

[StormShaun]

They were in the Matrix and Neo saves them...

Just kidding, mabey the Possesed kid opens up the gateway to hell and the other kids have to stop him and save him.

 

[lachcal]

How many characters?

 

[sb666]

How many characters?

there is currently 3 i think

 

[Dawn Patrol]

It's a hallucination from all the heroin they take. The reason they take this heroin is to try and forget the fact that their father molests them.

That's how I'd end it.

 

[Caligulust]

ok i need the demons to do somethig that results in them killing the charcters

As it turns out, Batman hears of this ensuing mayhem, and rushes to combat the demons. In retaliation, the demons kill the children and return to hell. The oujia board is returned to whichever toy store it was purchased from, and the involved families sue said chain. They settle out of court for an undefined sum of money.

But is it truly over? The end.

My defense of Batman
1. Your story already involves murderous demons, he's a feasible option to fight them assuming you're allowed to use characters under.
2. Batman costumes are not hard to find or reproduce, making it easy to work into a film.
3. How can you not like Batman?
4. A story about Batman might have been a better group decision.
5. Kevin Conroy is probably free if Arkham City is done recording voices.
6. Batmaaan.
If that doesn't work for you, you can't go wrong with the demons committing arson and burning down the house with them inside. You cut to a shot of an empty lot some years/months later, and you find the oujia board pointer in the dirt. They're demons, they'll murder children so why not burn down houses?

 

[No-one Special]

So the possesed kid now needs to do something to kill all the kids? That sounds like an ending, but you already said you'ld written it. Anyway, he can kill them by way of what kind of demon he is. So if he's a fire demon he burns them, if he's a water demon he drowns them. If he's an earth demon he buries them alive. So yeh try that.

Honestly dude just post up the whole store somewhere so we can read it. It's easier for us to make additions that way.

 

[sb666]

the 'main' character wake up hurridly, and exclaims something tot he tune of, "thanks goodness that it was just a dream," then gets out of bed and stands in a puddle of murdered friend.

i like this idea mind if i use it?

 

[lachcal]

I think someone said this, but you could kill them in ways that complement their flaws. Such as a gluttonous person choking to death or a vain person being stabbed by mirror shards.

 

[sb666]

woops ingonere this one double post

 

[No-one Special]

the 'main' character wake up hurridly, and exclaims something tot he tune of, "thanks goodness that it was just a dream," then gets out of bed and stands in a puddle of murdered friend.

i like this idea mind if i use it?

You said no twist endings!

 

[Haelium]

Eventually they figure out that they had not been possessed, and that they were absolute idiots for believing in the oujia board, seeing as it was just a board game. They then decide to kill themselves for the good of humanity.

 

[sb666]

I've given this some thought, and here's my idea. Keep in mind that "Three youths were possessed by an ouija board" is the only part of the story I'm aware of and I don't exactly know the true workings of an Ouija board.

The spirits possessing the children each represent the biggest flaw in their character, who then take over all the child's motor functions and generally exaggerate said flaw. Meanwhile, the child's psychonciousness (did I spell that right?) is still trapped in his/her mind, Psychonauts-style, and is fighting to regain control. The story ends with each of the children conquering said flaw and taking control of their bodies back, becoming a better person overall and dispelling the demon.

Whaddaya think?

I think someone said this, but you could kill them in ways that complement their flaws. Such as a gluttonous person choking to death or a vain person being stabbed by mirror shards.

i forgot to reply to this if i used this i think the teacher would know that i didnt come up with it

 

[Not-here-anymore]

oh, and parents are really drugging their children. It's not ghosts.

That's a good one. Maybe not parents, though? Perhaps if the kids were abducted/kidnapped/whatever, and find the ouija board in the room they end up locked in. Then, intoxicated to the point that their blood is more drug than haemoglobin, crazy shit occurs that they think is due to demonic possession. At least one of them should end up crippled/dead as a result. Probably due to the other 2 being convinced that the soon-to-be-beaten one is possessed

Societal metaphor? Drugs are the demons!

 

[Dawn Patrol]

I think someone said this, but you could kill them in ways that complement their flaws. Such as a gluttonous person choking to death or a vain person being stabbed by mirror shards.

Congratulations on your very original idea. [http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Seven_(film)]

 

[sb666]

the 'main' character wake up hurridly, and exclaims something tot he tune of, "thanks goodness that it was just a dream," then gets out of bed and stands in a puddle of murdered friend.

i like this idea mind if i use it?

You said no twist endings!

i cant use the it was a dream twist ending

 

[sb666]

So the possesed kid now needs to do something to kill all the kids? That sounds like an ending, but you already said you'ld written it. Anyway, he can kill them by way of what kind of demon he is. So if he's a fire demon he burns them, if he's a water demon he drowns them. If he's an earth demon he buries them alive. So yeh try that.

Honestly dude just post up the whole store somewhere so we can read it. It's easier for us to make additions that way.

i dont have the beging and the middle but i have my part which needs alot more editing The demons had just possessed the 3 main characters of the story.












one of the characters proceeded to wake up from his deep sleep and says luckily it was only a dream then gets out of bed and stands on one of his friends corpses lying on the ground.
i need to fill the middle the hole thing needs to be 170 words each person had to do 170 words

 

[Morning502]

Nothing happened because the ghost was a terrible speller and no one understood what it was trying to say.