Poll: I drew a picture: tell me what you think

[Vault101]

It's hilarious, I don't know if that is a compliment or not but it's all I got.

It's not stunning or technically amazing but it made me chuckle so it gets a 4

Edit: come on guys the extendo dog alone makes it awesome

haha, thankyou that is definetly a compliment, yeah the dog is off too I know that, this was really just a practice drawing as I havnt gotten out the old sketchbook in a long time

 

[ssgt splatter]

It's a hell of a lot better than I can draw.
Nice job.

 

[6unn3r]

Put it on deviant art!

 

[MaxwellEdison]

I like your character drawing style, but it looks a bit...flat? I dunno if that's because of the room perspective or not.

 

[Vault101]

Put it on deviant art!

I will, though I wanted to get some direct feedback first, Ive been a bit unsure about deviant art because this isnt wannbe anime, fan art or fetish related, so Im not usre if it would be seen

 

[drunken_munki]

What's a fallot?

 

[Kadoodle]

I like your style. One thing I'd add is that the tiled floor on the right is not drawn from the same angle as the street on the left. Other than that, it's excellent. 4/5.

 

[albear]

Looks great, wish i could draw that well

loved the basket on that guys head, bit of randomness never goes amis

 

[esperandote]

If it's quarter past twelve or 3 o'clock is should be realy sunny or really dark... just kiding nice drawing. I like the zombie girl with an iPod.

 

[drisky]

You do a good job making sure each zombie has individualism, but as people said, perspective and anatomy. Look at the guy with the tie for example, his arm is almost twice the size it should be his waist appears to be head on, and his feet are completely side view and lungeing forward so even though he's moving forward, he looks off balance. The one in the red dress is probably the best example of this all done right, limbs are believable size body seems to twist better, legs look stable.

 

[Vault101]

What's a fallot?

what?.....oh dammit! typo I cant belive I missed that...thanks for pointing that out

in case you didnt notice fallout: Australia couldnt think of anythign else to put on there

 

[Hero in a half shell]

Well it's much better than I could ever do, I loved the small humourous bits, fallo(u)t Austrailia, the guy with the bin on his head.

 

[Raddragon]

Your picture made me smile

 

[iLikeHippos]

Wow, that seems like an incredibly busy day...

*Reads description* Ohhhh, zooombies... How silly of me.

OT; The floor is, as mentioned, off. Though I do enjoy the small details put into the picture (à la fallot, to avoid copyright issues from said joke) and a trashbin on the terrified retard's head.

 

[Vault101]

You do a good job making sure each zombie has individualism, but as people said, perspective and anatomy. Look at the guy with the tie for example, his arm is almost twice the size it should be his waist appears to be head on, and his feet are completely side view and lungeing forward so even though he's moving forward, he looks off balance. The one in the red dress is probably the best example of this all done right, limbs are believable size body seems to twist better, legs look stable.

thanks for your feedback

yeah the purple tie zombie was the first I drew the rest I just worked around him so he does look a little out of place and yes his arm is too big, Im trying to work on anatomy also I have trouble with figures in movment, they just seem kind of stiff anyway practice practice, I havnt attempted to draw in a long time

 

[Zarmi]

Seen worse, but not impressed.

 

[Vault101]

Wow, that seems like an incredibly busy day...

*Reads description* Ohhhh, zooombies... How silly of me.

OT; The floor is, as mentioned, off. Though I do enjoy the small details put into the picture (à la fallot, to avoid copyright issues from said joke) and a trashbin on the terrified retard's head.

erm....yes copyright issues its not a dumb typo at all......

its a washing basket..he's trying to hide anyway thanks for looking

 

[TheHecatomb]

There's no flow in the composition, nothing guides the viewer through the image, and because of that it tells no clear story, it's just a lot of people and a very, very poor perspective.

And obviously no thread like this is complete without some shameless self-promotion. [http://artbyruben.blogspot.com]