Not much I can say that hasn't already been said; perspective's completely fucked, character anatomy is off, and there's no sense of flow to the drawing that makes you want to look the whole thing over, work on all that and it would be much better, apart from that the colouring is good and the expressions work well enough... 3/5.Vault101 said:
The anatomy on this one is superb, with the exception of her right eye, which is way too far from her other one, remember, ideally there should never be more than a single eye's distance between the eyes of a human being, and it looks like her shirt doesn't even have a collar, looks more like she has a really, really weird skin condition that causes the flesh around her shoulders hang off in a manner that resembles a shirt's sleeves... The bandages only add to the allusion that that skin on her arms have been torn off too. O_ODaystar Clarion said:Your character proportioning is a bit off and perspective of the enivronment is way off too. Still okay though, nothing a bit of practice won't fix.
Time for some shameless self promotion of my own...
She could also stand to have larger breasts, but I'm an incredably biased perv towards large breasts, so feel free to just ignore that bit of advice if you disagree.
Apart from that, excellent, just excellent, I'd give it a 5, but as I said, the messed-up eye and weird shoulder skin flaps throw the whole image off balance, fix that and you're golden.
Also, she's hot.
4/5
Really cute, not much more to say about it, as I don't think you can really crtique cutesy drawings like this when they're obviously not meant to be anatomically correct or any of that jazz.Cpu46 said:Really not bad. Proportionally its very well done and the coloring is great. The inside and outside don't quite mesh up, but thats just a small nitpick. I gave it a four out of five.
In other news...
Yay, an art thread!
Can somebody tell me how to make my picture smaller. Never quite learned how to do that....
4/5
