Saint Poemandres Boarding School
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Gots to go! Dammit, this always happens!
"Wha," was all Chaz could say for a while. He eventually decided on that she was just drunk, but he still sat there for a long while. He even missed perhaps the best scene of the first film [which I won't rant about right now] through his stuttering. "I... don't know what to say." He was blushing, obviously, but tried his best to hide it. The awkwardness lead to slow conversation for the rest of the films, but neither changed seats.
Catalina thought to herself after the kiss, she knew what she had done and she couldn't help but feel elated, she adjusted one of her belts, which actually contained some of her personal effects and she resumed watching the movie.
*drops to floor*
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Clearly not here, as far as I've read. Half of them are one line. There is always a way to extend your post length. Try putting in what your character's thinking, instead of just their actions and speech.
we interrupt your regularly scheduled character development for some plot.
Jeffery continued to bask in the luminescent glow of the space invaders arcade machine his score climbing ever higher as he descended into his usual habit of humming random and unfitting songs whilst he was playing.
"let`s all go to the lobby, let`s all go to the lobby, let`s all go to the looobyyy, to get ourselves some drink!" Jeffery said quietly as he continued playing but something interrupted his concentration a small roar came from the darkness around him, Jeffery did`nt tear his eyes away from the screen to see what made it.
"huh, what was that?, eh probably just some nocturnal student, best not interrupt him, cause if I know one thing, it`s that you never try and wake up a nocturnal creature in the darkness" Jeffery thought to himself as he continued playing blasting invaders away with precision but his game was cut short when he saw a small reflection appeared on the background of the screen two piercing red eyes before without warning a claw made entire of darkness shot out descending downwards, Jeffery managing to just duck out of the way, a section from the bottom of his coat being torn off before the claw hit the space invaders machine and tear through it like it was paper the machine now cut halfway from the bottom.
"************, I was on a high score too" Jeffery said to himself before taking several steps backwards and making himself transparent backing up against the wall and moving against it looking for a light switch, eventually finding one next to the door, Jeffery flicked the switched the room flooding with light and somehow, there was nothing there, Jeffery took this as his one opportunity to get the hell outta there and get back to where his suitcase was hoping to find a spell to find that creature.
"okay barely five minutes here and someone...or something is trying to kill me, but still I don`t know of any creatures that just attack out of the shadows like that or maybe it was....nah it could have been, but that`s the only explanation I can think of" Jeffery whispered to himself as he sat back down on his booth and ordered another scotch on the rocks from the server, trying to think of what exactly attacked him.
Kohana was just in the middle of practicing with her older brother, back in the clans mansion in tokyo, when a loud crash cut right through the surrounding silence and her dream alike. She shook of the last bit of dozyness, when another student hastened into the lounge, asking for more alcohol.
Without senses heightened beyond those of mere mortals, Kohana wouldn't have noticed the shaking of his voice, but there it was, unmistakeably, and with it an impossible to overlook sense of unease from the newcomer.
Not for the first time, since this strange trip first started, Kohana resisted the urge to rip off her blindfold, no matter the consequences. She raised her head, as she spoke in Jeffreys general direction.
"Summimasen, Konpaku-san, is something wrong?"
Without senses heightened beyond those of mere mortals, Kohana wouldn't have noticed the shaking of his voice, but there it was, unmistakeably, and with it an impossible to overlook sense of unease from the newcomer.
Not for the first time, since this strange trip first started, Kohana resisted the urge to rip off her blindfold, no matter the consequences. She raised her head, as she spoke in Jeffreys general direction.
"Summimasen, Konpaku-san, is something wrong?"
I'm sorry, should my posts be too short, It's been a while since I've been in an forum rpg, and the thin line between god modding and posting too short, is one I'd like to test out a bit, before going full throttle 
I understand now that you have some problem with my present tense writing. =-=
I am very sorry about that. Here in Israel, it's just how we play. I understood a long while ago that forum based RP's here and in other places work differently, but it never occurred to me to change such a basic thing. I will write in the past tense from now on.
I am very sorry about that. Here in Israel, it's just how we play. I understood a long while ago that forum based RP's here and in other places work differently, but it never occurred to me to change such a basic thing. I will write in the past tense from now on.
Jeffery looked up from his drink, his mind still shook from the experience in the arcade he heard the small Japanese girl ask nobody in particular but being the only one in the lounge assume she was talking to him
"konpaku-san...what the hell did she call me?"
He normally would have just replied with a grunt or some other half-hearted answer but the mixture of unease and alcohol made his response longer.
"oh nothing was just attacked by something I can`t identify in the arcade, nothing out of the ordinary" Jeffery replied not moving from his seat, his voice still having the same barely-hidden tone of unease to it.
"konpaku-san...what the hell did she call me?"
He normally would have just replied with a grunt or some other half-hearted answer but the mixture of unease and alcohol made his response longer.
"oh nothing was just attacked by something I can`t identify in the arcade, nothing out of the ordinary" Jeffery replied not moving from his seat, his voice still having the same barely-hidden tone of unease to it.
Just write the way your comfortable, it's not that hard to read, just something to get used toOneirius said:
Kohana tried to hide the unease that was now rising inside her, with little success. Her fright dripping more and more into her voice, she screamed more, than she spoke;
"You were... attacked? By whom? Did you kill hi... I mean, are you allright Konpaku-san?"
Pm me, if you had any plot points in mind, I don't want to stumble across your plan.
Jeffery noticed the fear in the Japanese girl`s voice as she spoke, Jeffery tried his best to try and comfort her moving next to her to talk to her;
"don`t worry I`m perfectly fine just annoyed it ended my all-time best run on space invaders, but it was so unreal I could`nt even see all of it, but it felt like it was something out of a nightmare" Jeffery said his usual air of arrogance gone, instead replaced with a somewhat calm demeanor only used to mask a sense of fear growing in him.
"don`t worry I`m perfectly fine just annoyed it ended my all-time best run on space invaders, but it was so unreal I could`nt even see all of it, but it felt like it was something out of a nightmare" Jeffery said his usual air of arrogance gone, instead replaced with a somewhat calm demeanor only used to mask a sense of fear growing in him.
Thoughts raged through Kohanas head, her first reaction to just run away. Realizing the futility of such an act in a cabin of a zeppelin, she tried to regain control of her mind.
Remembering her brothers lessons, her hands subconsciously formed one of the seals he tought her, and after moments of controlled breathing, Kohana managed to calm herself to an extend of thinking and speaking clearly.
"If you are sure, you've been attacked, and have not just fallen victim, to some kind of weird accident, than we can't just sit here. We're sitting ducks right now, and theirs other people on the ship. We've got to do at least something, right?"
Remembering her brothers lessons, her hands subconsciously formed one of the seals he tought her, and after moments of controlled breathing, Kohana managed to calm herself to an extend of thinking and speaking clearly.
"If you are sure, you've been attacked, and have not just fallen victim, to some kind of weird accident, than we can't just sit here. We're sitting ducks right now, and theirs other people on the ship. We've got to do at least something, right?"
Jeffery was a little shocked at the girl's decision to start searching for the monster, when not but five minutes ago she looked like she was scared out of her mind.
"what the hell kinda hand gesture did she do?" Jeffery thought before returning his mind back to the situation at hand.
"well if you want I can show you where I was attacked I left the lights on in there so we should`nt be in so much danger but I`d still watch your...oh right" Jeffery said awkwardly realizing the girl was wearing a blind fold, he got up from his seat before looking back at the girl.
"hey do you need any help going places...oh and what`s your name by the way?" Jeffery asked not wanting to leave until she went with him.
"what the hell kinda hand gesture did she do?" Jeffery thought before returning his mind back to the situation at hand.
"well if you want I can show you where I was attacked I left the lights on in there so we should`nt be in so much danger but I`d still watch your...oh right" Jeffery said awkwardly realizing the girl was wearing a blind fold, he got up from his seat before looking back at the girl.
"hey do you need any help going places...oh and what`s your name by the way?" Jeffery asked not wanting to leave until she went with him.
Kohana took another deep breath before sliding out of her chair. The doctrines of her clan, which despite being too young for actual combat training, she had well absorbed, had taken over her mind, and crushed alls thoughts of fear, all uncetanity underfoot. Uchiha nou osore wa jinshin ie. An uchiha knows neither fear nor mercy Her brothers words kept circling in her head, like a mantra. Still, she was suprised, her voice was still able of such calmness.
"My name is Kohana, from the noble clan of Uchiha, Konpaku-san. I apologize for the rudeness of not having introduced myself earlier. But if we are indeed to track an enemy, I won't be needing this. Just... whatever you do, do not look directly into my eyes."
It took another deep breath, before she rallied herself, turned around, and once more untied her blindfold. The comfortable sensation of seeing, together with the power of the sharingan, just out of sight, eased her mind a little, her heart still pounding and her knees still trembling, nonetheless.
"If someone is hiding here, his disguise will not stand before the sharingan, nor will his cover. And besides, you're a wizard, right konpaku-san? What could possibly go wrong?"
"My name is Kohana, from the noble clan of Uchiha, Konpaku-san. I apologize for the rudeness of not having introduced myself earlier. But if we are indeed to track an enemy, I won't be needing this. Just... whatever you do, do not look directly into my eyes."
It took another deep breath, before she rallied herself, turned around, and once more untied her blindfold. The comfortable sensation of seeing, together with the power of the sharingan, just out of sight, eased her mind a little, her heart still pounding and her knees still trembling, nonetheless.
"If someone is hiding here, his disguise will not stand before the sharingan, nor will his cover. And besides, you're a wizard, right konpaku-san? What could possibly go wrong?"
The puppy is called zuul
"I can think of a few things and don`t apologize I did`nt introduce myself either, I`m Jeffery Filmore" Jeffery said taking out his spellbook from his suitcase and started to make his way to the arcade, Kohana a short way behind him.
They were both walking down the corridor when Jeffery passed the door to the theater opening it a crack to check if the cat and incubi were still in there, seeing both of them were safe he continued to lead kohana down the well-lit corridor and to outside the door of the arcade.
"okay whatever attacked me, attacked me in here" Jeffery looked over a fireball spell in his book committing the incantation to memory before asking kohana to go inside and check for anything.
They were both walking down the corridor when Jeffery passed the door to the theater opening it a crack to check if the cat and incubi were still in there, seeing both of them were safe he continued to lead kohana down the well-lit corridor and to outside the door of the arcade.
"okay whatever attacked me, attacked me in here" Jeffery looked over a fireball spell in his book committing the incantation to memory before asking kohana to go inside and check for anything.
Kohana gathered herself, before pushing the door wide open. Despite Jeffrey's story, the room lay in complete darkness. Darkness means little before the sharingan, but the moment her gaze cut through the blackness, and the realized, what the was looking at, she wished, not for the first time in her life, for her ocular powers to be less accurate.
The crashed arcaded Jeffrey had used was there, and the panels that should have lit the room where shattered. But the worst part lay on the floor, in the middle of the room, in an steadily growing pool of red liquid. A body. Or rather, the mangled remains of a body, dressed in an old fashioned, grey uniform, the left arm, still holding a broken flashlight, manled from monstrous jaws, the right arm, and worst of all the head, missing completely.
Kohana gasped for Air sharply, only barely supressing the urge to scream for her brother - Uchiha nou osore wa jinshin ie. Uchiha nou osore wa jinshin ie.. Several quick steps took her away from the door, until she felt the corridor's wall at her back, and realized, she was mumbling the mantra under her breath.
All the training she had received, all of a sudden washed away, by sheer horror, her voice now shaking as much, as her heart was pounding.
"Don't... don't look inside. There is definately something here. Warawa nakare negai shine" (I don't want to die)
The crashed arcaded Jeffrey had used was there, and the panels that should have lit the room where shattered. But the worst part lay on the floor, in the middle of the room, in an steadily growing pool of red liquid. A body. Or rather, the mangled remains of a body, dressed in an old fashioned, grey uniform, the left arm, still holding a broken flashlight, manled from monstrous jaws, the right arm, and worst of all the head, missing completely.
Kohana gasped for Air sharply, only barely supressing the urge to scream for her brother - Uchiha nou osore wa jinshin ie. Uchiha nou osore wa jinshin ie.. Several quick steps took her away from the door, until she felt the corridor's wall at her back, and realized, she was mumbling the mantra under her breath.
All the training she had received, all of a sudden washed away, by sheer horror, her voice now shaking as much, as her heart was pounding.
"Don't... don't look inside. There is definately something here. Warawa nakare negai shine" (I don't want to die)