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ToxicPiranah

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Name: U?tack
Physical Description: A humanoid species that are almost fully cyborg, , human in appearance with vast amounts of robotic upgrading to their bodies.

Style of Technology: There technological state is highly advance, with cybernetic replacements for most limbs and organs this has lead to a form of mecha in warriors being upgraded with giant size limbs. They have developed Magnetic accelerator weaponry to an efficient standard. Their cities are huge gothic styled buildings, all buildings are connected in such a way that they are encased in a protective reactive metal layer that dissipates physical projectiles and absorbs them into the sheath. Energy is also absorbed aiding in powering the cities defences.

Attributes/Notable qualities: They avoid all forms of magic and spirit, in fact any U?tack that has used either is stripped of all augmentations and placed outside of the cities. Any U?tack that comes across them knows that they have been renounced and will either chase them away or kill them outright. Though they all have individual conscience, they all endeavour to advance the U?tack Empire as one. They wear a basic metal sheath when in combat, much like the one that protects their cities, it can absorb almost 100% of all forces against it, but it can only take so much damage. This suit of ?Living Metal? increases their speed and strength whilst it is active.

Fighting style: Though they have vast physical strength the old arts of close combat, and melee weapons have been lost to them. A single blow from a fist can crush bodies in an instant but they?re awkward when fighting up close, merely swinging their arms and hoping they connect. They excel in fire arms combat, their MA weapons causing excessive damage when brought to bear, launching all sorts of rounds at the enemy at great speeds and force. When fighting they will endeavour to, literally, blow the enemy away before they get to close.
Name: Invin T?oria
Age: 125 years (approximately a 5th of a U?tack?s life span)
Rank/Title/Occupation: D?alrom (Corporal equivalency)
Appearance: Invin is 8?3, he has augmented both legs, his full right arm, his left forearm, his external torso, both eyes and both ears.
Weapons: Living Metal body amour, Magnetic Acceleration Rifle magazine of 30, 40mm rounds, MA pistol magazine of 10 15mm rounds. He is carrying ammo of the following varieties High Explosive, Armour Piercing, HE Anti-Tank, Depleted uranium and solid ammunition for the rifle and solid shot for the pistol
Fighting Style: A journeyman in the way of medium to long range weapons fire and a novice in short range. He has no skill in melee combat.
Alignment: Lord Shannow
Bio: Born artificially like all U?tack?s, he was first augmented on his 16th human birthday, he became a full U?tack on his 21st birthday earning his name of Invin T?oria. He joined the fighting forces of the U?tack when he was 75 years of age. He was promoted to corporal for showing good battle skills. He like all the U?tack pledged himself to Lord Shannow?s cause.
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ThreeWords

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Laur Farren said:
If i join how often do i have to post?
As often as you like, though you might miss some stuff if you don't check up roughly once a day, as that will be roughly the speed of the updates.
 

The Hairminator

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This RP is really a bunch. Guess I'll help saving your ass and join, in exchange for your good will :D

[blockquote]The Marbori
The Marboris are creatures made of pure energy. The core is surrounded by plasma, and the very same plasma causes them to float a few feet off the ground. No one is certain on just how they move, though. They have no society to speak of, no buildings, no laws or rules, yet they live in a complete nature's paradise. They have no religion, although they think of nature as one big thinking organism, and see themselves as its children. They do not communicate with speech, instead they talk with psywaves. This only works, however, if both minds are willing to communicate. They have been in their world since the beginning of time.

Even though they are generally very intelligent they have never created anything solid. They are simply the guardians of peace in their own world. The Marbori prefers to stay out of combat, but if they are cornered they make a formidable foe. They can direct electric current at their enemies and they also have lesser power over the forces of nature. If you try to harm them with a physical attack you will most likely be incinerated by the plasma surrounding them.[/blockquote]


[blockquote]The Furious One
Age: Unknown
Rank/title: Guardian (basic rank in Marbori hierarchy)
He who is called 'The Furious One', has in the past proved himself to be one of the more (in combat) skillful of the Marbori. He is said to be easily angered. (by Marbori standards; that means he is as peaceful as a tree.)

He is not as wise as many of his brothers, but in battle he stands unchallenged. Millenniums have passed since he last was forced to make use of his powers, though. He is impatient and is bored most of the time. The others see him as unpredictable, but also as a source of amusement, because of his sometimes child like behaviour.



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Name:Ser'thaath
Physical Description: Human sized, purple skinned creatures. The Ser'thaath have only one eye, however, has perfect sight during night. They usually blend in into the night with their dark-purple skin and have dark hair, however their eyes are either green or yellow and shine in the night, so they have to be really careful while nighttime, not to keep their eyes open for long. Everything else is pretty much human, except slightly longer arms.
Style of Technology: Unadvanced in technology, mainly bows 'n axes. The buildings are mainly built on trees, made out of wood.
Attributes/Notable qualities: As said before, one eye that can see in the dark, dark skin that pretty much blends into the night, longer arms for...better thieving skills?
Fighting style: Quick and from a distance. Mainly relies on bows, and for close combat the Ser'thaath use either combat staves or axes. Swords are also a possibility, but they are too slow for the combat style that the Ser'thaath use. Swords are used for tournaments and duels only.
Name: Haldural.
Age: 37. (Young at Ser'thaath age.)
Rank/Title/Occupation: Member of the Ank'hla hunter squad. Close to promotion.
Appearance: Dark skin, one eye, pretty tall, though slim. Has snow-white hair, which are unusual for his race and doesn't blend in while nighttime, so he mainly keeps it under a cowl. He has a leather suit with shouldercaps and a leather cowl.
Weapons: A long staff he carries at his back and a bow that is attached to his left hand with a leather strap.
Fighting Style: Quick, strikes while the enemy can't see him. Mainly with his bow, but if he has to go up and personal, he draws out his staff.
Alignment: Lord Shannow
Other Allegiances: *optional*
Bio: Born in the village of Ank'hla, he was trained to be a hunter, like all the male Ser'thaath are. He quickly rose up through the initiate rank to become a member of the squad, and despite his white hair, he was one of the best hunters in the village, competing for the title of the captain. However, have heard that Lord Shannow is gathering forces, he thougt this would be a really good opportunity to gain a reputation as a skilled fighter amongst his village.

I want myself in this also!
 

ThreeWords

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A few things I need changing

The Marboris are creatures made of pure energy. The core is surrounded by plasma, and the very same plasma causes them to float a few feet off the ground.
I take it they are non-physical beings, like ghosts or spirits?

If you try to harm them with a physical attack you will most likely be incinerated by the plasma surrounding them.
In that case, they would actually be weak to physical attacks. Anyhoo, burning people who attack you is usually know as being overpowered


As for The Furious One, I'll need more details. At least, I need an overview on how he fights, an alignment, and a bio containing motives

ninja chicken said:
Name:Ser'thaath
Physical Description: Human sized, purple skinned creatures. The Ser'thaath have only one eye, however, has perfect sight during night. They usually blend in into the night with their dark-purple skin and have dark hair, however their eyes are either green or yellow and shine in the night, so they have to be really careful while nighttime, not to keep their eyes open for long. Everything else is pretty much human, except slightly longer arms.
Style of Technology: Unadvanced in technology, mainly bows 'n axes. The buildings are mainly built on trees, made out of wood.
Attributes/Notable qualities: As said before, one eye that can see in the dark, dark skin that pretty much blends into the night, longer arms for...better thieving skills?
Fighting style: Quick and from a distance. Mainly relies on bows, and for close combat the Ser'thaath use either combat staves or axes. Swords are also a possibility, but they are too slow for the combat style that the Ser'thaath use. Swords are used for tournaments and duels only.
Name: Haldural.
Age: 37. (Young at Ser'thaath age.)
Rank/Title/Occupation: Member of the Ank'hla hunter squad. Close to promotion.
Appearance: Dark skin, one eye, pretty tall, though slim. Has snow-white hair, which are unusual for his race and doesn't blend in while nighttime, so he mainly keeps it under a cowl. He has a leather suit with shouldercaps and a leather cowl.
Weapons: A long staff he carries at his back and a bow that is attached to his left hand with a leather strap.
Fighting Style: Quick, strikes while the enemy can't see him. Mainly with his bow, but if he has to go up and personal, he draws out his staff.
Alignment: Lord Shannow
Other Allegiances: *optional*
Bio: Born in the village of Ank'hla, he was trained to be a hunter, like all the male Ser'thaath are. He quickly rose up through the initiate rank to become a member of the squad, and despite his white hair, he was one of the best hunters in the village, competing for the title of the captain. However, have heard that Lord Shannow is gathering forces, he thougt this would be a really good opportunity to gain a reputation as a skilled fighter amongst his village.
Accepted
 

Xero Scythe

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save me a spot, I'll send in a sheet as soon as possible!

also, you took this from the His Dark Materials books.
 

ThreeWords

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Xero Scythe said:
save me a spot, I'll send in a sheet as soon as possible!

also, you took this from the His Dark Materials books.
Well spotted =D
You win a cookie for awesome taste in books

I forget who said it, but I quote "imitation is the most sincere form of flattery"

Also, reserved
 

Xero Scythe

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Race: SoulWeaver
Description: Humanlike, except much more deft of hand and sharp of eye.
Style of Technology: SoulWeavers are somewhat stuck within the medevial era technology-wise, having mostly expanded with magic.
Attributes: Silver hair and slightly luminescent skin, a consequence from spending so much time so close to the very essence of the universe.
Weapons/fighting style: A SoulWeaver takes on the powers of an elemental by bonding with one. Adept SoulWeavers can bond with multiple elementals for interesting results.

Name: Lucia Tenebris
Race: SoulWeaver
Alignment: Lord Shannow
Age: 17
Description: 7 feet tall, with silver hair and ice cold blue eyes. His skin is silver and slightly luminescent, like all his brethern, yet his has a slight black tint within it. He is extremely strong and has a fair amount of muscle on him. Has the ability to bond with multiple elementals, though his limit is 3.
Bio: As far back as Lucia can remember, his people have been persecuted by the Church, under the pretense that SoulWeaving was a demonic art, worthy to be banished from the earth. One day, when cornered by 10 soldiers, and having no elemental to draw on, he fell back, clawing at the air, hoping for something to save him. suddenly, his arm passed through the very air, disappearing and drawing him with it. He fell through to a peaceful world, where there were no soldiers. He stared at what he had done. He had the ability to find the seams between the worlds and cross through them! He heard of Lord Shannow taking on the Authority, the name in which the Church did all these evils. Lucia set out to find Lord Shannow and join his army. All his life, Lucia has been struck down.
It's time for him to strike back.
 

ThreeWords

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Xero Scythe said:
Race:Fallen Born
Description: Born of a human and one of the angels that rebelled at the beginning of time. They vary greatly depending on their parentage, though those who have the greatest differentiations from normal humans are often more powerful.
Style of Technology: A Fallen Born has the same technology availible to him as a human.
Attributes: Mentioned above, though all can see in the darkness and see what will most easily twist a human to evil, although very few Fallen Born can act upon this ability.
Weapons/fighting style: Very few, most fight using martial arts, but some may materialize their powers into a weapon.

Name: Damien Lier
Race: Fallen Born
Alignment: Lord Shannow
Age: 17
Description: 7 feet tall, with silver hair and ice cold blue eyes. Often wears black gloves and oversized army boots to hide his hands and feet. Instead of having 5 toes, he has 3 talons on the end of his foot and another talon extending out of his heel, flat to the ground. His fingers end in 3 inch long claws, thick and unbreakable. (Look at an Asmodian from Aion for an idea how they look.) Extremely muscular.

Powers: Damien can manipulate Darkness itself, disappearing into the shadows only to appear elsewhere or cloaking himself in the night. His greatest ability, however, it to manipulate the darkness in hearts, able to twist them to his purposes. He rarely uses this ability, as he believes it is dishonorable.

Biography: Damien was born in darkness and in darkness he remains. Born in the slums of Los Angeles, he left his mother at an early age, disgusted with the life of alcohol and debauchery she was living. At age 13, he first used his powers. Running with a gang, Damien wanted out. Instead of letting him go, the leader decided to have Damien killed. At night, while being chased down by the gang, bullets missing him by inches, Damien sought to hide in the darkness he has known all his life. He turned a corner and ran into a pitch-black alley. The leader carried a flashlight, shining it right at Damien, staring him right in his eyes. Yet the leader did not see Damien. Damien realized his new-found seat of power and laughed. the boss became spooked, and started to fire into the night. Damien walked up to him, calm as rain, and grabbed the man's head with his deadly claws. He squeezed, sectioning the man's head like an orange. He then hunted down each and every member of the gang. No record exists for that night. Damien has lived all his life without once getting help from the Authority. If anything, The Authority had it in for Damien.
It's now time for revenge.


Weakness: Damien cannot stand bright light. It weakens his powers. He cannot escape into shadows when a bright light is banishing his powers.
Sorry, but I can't take that, for a few reasons. One if that angels can't breed, two is that angels don't have power over light and dark, and three is that it talks about Los Angles, which doesn't exist here, escpecially if he's the son of an angel

Also, I'd prefer if you didn't just reuse the same character from Fall of Hope
 

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So it's a war of all time and space? Hope there is still a spot for me.

Name:Tyranaxium
Style of Technology: Biological Warfare
Attributes/Notable qualities:
-Forced evolution, able to evolve at a super fast rate. Over the course of just 2 generations, any change possible can be made.
-A Hive mind society, with smaller creatures(Commonly refered to as 'Grubs') being 100% controlled by the larger, sencient creatures(Referred to as 'Hive Lords'). Each Hive(The equivalent of a city) is controlled by a Queen. She spawns all of the grubs, usually for labor or combat, as well as all the Hive Lords(used as Generals/administration).
-Due to rapid evolution, very few Hives are alike as they change so rapidly.
Fighting style:Usualy swarms of grubs, using the power of numbers, accompanied by "Tanks" or "Commandos"; larger Hive Lords used as heavy support or shock troops.
Physical Description:
Varies creature to creature; The grubs are usualy dog-sized, kind of skeletal in their appearance. For combat they have two large scythe-like blades for fore-arms, as well as armored hides, and legs.
Hive Lords generaly come in two varieties: The Tank form, which are larger than a truck and armored to the teeth, or the commando form, which are roughly man sized in appearance, with six limbs: 2 blade arms, two legs, and two small arms withs 3 fingered hands. Both forms bare resemblence to grubs, but are larger and more armed.

Name: Lord Tyranctus
Age: 22
Rank/Title/Occupation: Shock Trooper
Appearance: 'Commando' Hive Lord, Dark Green Armor and dark blue flesh.
Weapons: N/A
Fighting Style: Stealthy, commands grubs when available. Moderately powerful physicic
Alignment: The Authority
Other Allegiances: Queen Xenoctorus III(Hive Queen)
Bio: Lord Tyranctus was born into the Xenoctoria Hive on his home world. Quickly gaining a reutation for a skillfull melee combatant, as well as a useful physicic warrior, he soon became a member of the Queen's elite warriors. During the 30 day war(A massive battle between Xenoctoria and a neighboring Hive) Lord Tyranctus showed true valour and military skill. When the Administration called on his Hive for warriors, He was one of the first to be sent forward, despite his wishes.

If there are any problems with this, please tell me. I kind of based my Race of the Tyranids, if that helps.
 

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Xero Scythe said:
Race: SoulWeaver
Description: Humanlike, except much more deft of hand and sharp of eye.
Style of Technology: SoulWeavers are somewhat stuck within the medevial era technology-wise, having mostly expanded with magic.
Attributes: Silver hair and slightly luminescent skin, a consequence from spending so much time so close to the very essence of the universe.
Weapons/fighting style: A SoulWeaver takes on the powers of an elemental by bonding with one. Adept SoulWeavers can bond with multiple elementals for interesting results.

Name: Lucia Tenebris
Race: SoulWeaver
Alignment: Lord Shannow
Age: 17
Description: 7 feet tall, with silver hair and ice cold blue eyes. His skin is silver and slightly luminescent, like all his brethern, yet his has a slight black tint within it. He is extremely strong and has a fair amount of muscle on him. Has the ability to bond with multiple elementals, though his limit is 3.
Good, but I'll need a little more, like for example a bio for the character, giving his motivations for choosing his side

TheGreatCoolEnergy said:
So it's a war of all time and space? Hope there is still a spot for me.

Name:Tyranaxium
Style of Technology: Biological Warfare
Attributes/Notable qualities:
-Forced evolution, able to evolve at a super fast rate. Over the course of just 2 generations, any change possible can be made.
-A Hive mind society, with smaller creatures(Commonly refered to as 'Grubs') being 100% controlled by the larger, sencient creatures(Referred to as 'Hive Lords'). Each Hive(The equivalent of a city) is controlled by a Queen. She spawns all of the grubs, usually for labor or combat, as well as all the Hive Lords(used as Generals/administration).
-Due to rapid evolution, very few Hives are alike as they change so rapidly.
Fighting style:Usualy swarms of grubs, using the power of numbers, accompanied by "Tanks" or "Commandos"; larger Hive Lords used as heavy support or shock troops.
Physical Description:
Varies creature to creature; The grubs are usualy dog-sized, kind of skeletal in their appearance. For combat they have two large scythe-like blades for fore-arms, as well as armored hides, and legs.
Hive Lords generaly come in two varieties: The Tank form, which are larger than a truck and armored to the teeth, or the commando form, which are roughly man sized in appearance, with six limbs: 2 blade arms, two legs, and two small arms withs 3 fingered hands. Both forms bare resemblence to grubs, but are larger and more armed.

Name: Lord Tyranctus
Age: 22
Rank/Title/Occupation: Shock Trooper
Appearance: 'Commando' Hive Lord, Dark Green Armor and dark blue flesh.
Weapons: N/A
Fighting Style: Stealthy, commands grubs when available. Moderately powerful physicic
Alignment: The Authority
Other Allegiances: Queen Xenoctorus III(Hive Queen)
Bio: Lord Tyranctus was born into the Xenoctoria Hive on his home world. Quickly gaining a reutation for a skillfull melee combatant, as well as a useful physicic warrior, he soon became a member of the Queen's elite warriors. During the 30 day war(A massive battle between Xenoctoria and a neighboring Hive) Lord Tyranctus showed true valour and military skill. When the Administration called on his Hive for warriors, He was one of the first to be sent forward, despite his wishes.
Nice, accepted. I like the way you've gone for something other than 'humans with different colour skin'. Also, It's good to have someone on the Authority's side, though more would be nice....
(Oh, and I take it that when you say 'the Administration' you mean the Authority's forces, right?)
 

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sorry for my noobyness but how do i make those tabs that ppl are useing for the charcters sheets
and race sheets?
 

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ThreeWords has left for the holidays, he will be retuning on the 28th.
 

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Devling said:
sorry for my noobyness but how do i make those tabs that ppl are useing for the charcters sheets
and race sheets?
put something like this:
(spoiler=Random Shit)Stuff you want in the tag(/spoiler)

Do that, except use square brackets, not circular ones
 

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TheGreatCoolEnergy said:
Devling said:
sorry for my noobyness but how do i make those tabs that ppl are useing for the charcters sheets
and race sheets?
put something like this:
(spoiler=Random Shit)Stuff you want in the tag(/spoiler)

Do that, except use square brackets, not circular ones
What he said!

[sup]By the way, CoolEnergy you will probably interested in this. I have decided that my next RP will be straight up science fiction, exploring planets and fighting big aliens will be included.[/sup]