To Kill a Dovahkiin: Chapter 9

[Daaaah Whoosh]

Not sure if this is the right subforum, but I've been making this comic for a while now, and the little forum I was posting it to thought it'd be a good idea for me to branch out. So I thought I'd bring my work to the Escapist. to see what you guys think.

Anyway, this is the story of the other survivors of Helgen, after a looting raid by the inconsiderate Dovahkiin. It's an ongoing story, and I have a few sub-plots in mind thus far, so expect many more to come.

Please leave constructive criticism, tell your friends, pin this thread, and give me money. Or at least some combination of those.

Spoiler: Chapter 1

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Spoiler: Chapter 2

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Spoiler: Chapter 3

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Spoiler: Chapter 4

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Spoiler: Chapter 5

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Spoiler: Chapter 6

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Spoiler: Chapter 7

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Spoiler: Chapter 8

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Spoiler: Chapter 9

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Due to popular demand, I've found a site to post this comic to from now on. It's not much, but it does its job. Thing is, I've been told I can't share the link on these forums, so just use the link on my profle under "homepage".

 

[Daaaah Whoosh]

Also, I'm worried that this thread isn't showing up. Not sure how that works...

 

[Vanitas likes Bubbles]

That was entertaining actually. Could use a bit more humour but was a good read and I'm looking forward to the rest of it if you make it. The generic bandits part had me in tears full of laughter.

 

[The_Lost_King]

So THAT'S why Alduin attacks Helgen.

 

[Nouw]

Chapter 3's main gag was hilarious. I'd like more of that . Overall pretty damn funny.

 

[dyre]

hah, that was actually very good! At this point I'm pretty much done with following Skyrim-related stuff for the sake of it being Skyrim-related (if that makes any sense at all), but this is entertaining on its own merits. Keep it up!

 

[Rose and Thorn]

I actually really liked it a lot.

snippy

Do you have a homepage for these comics so I can read the rest when it comes out?
I like the characters, humour and simple, but fun design. Story is shaping up to be pretty good!

 

[BLAHwhatever]

I like it.
Keep posting more

 

[Fieldy409_v1legacy]

Moar. Its good. Keep up the good work.

 

[BelfastSpartan]

I actually really liked it a lot.

snippy

Do you have a homepage for these comics so I can read the rest when it comes out?
I like the characters, humour and simple, but fun design. Story is shaping up to be pretty good!

Ditto!
Pretty good comic, some good ideas.
I'd like to continue reading if you have a website you post it to.
I have a friend who would probably read it too.

:CAPTCHA: nut case ummmm thanks(?) I think haha

 

[ChupathingyX]

That was more entertaining than the actual game for me.

Keep it up.

 

[Helmholtz Watson]

not bad, not bad. See if the Escapist will pick you up.

 

[TIMESWORDSMAN]

You need to set up a webpage or something, this is pretty good.

 

[Seanfall]

I like it. It's always nice to see fan stories that focus on things OTHER then the Dragon Born.

 

[talker]

that was some better Skyrim humour then some other people have made. keep up the good work!

 

[Frozen Donkey Wheel2]

Heh. That bit with the bandits was pretty funny. Keep posting these, I'm intrigued. Kinda seems like this could be an animated show on the Escapist. It's already better then most of them ever were.

 

[SayHelloToMrBullet]

I enjoyed reading it. Some good humour and it was interesting enough.

 

[Tiger King]

this is great when's the next part up?

 

[Secret world leader (shhh)]

I didn't think it was laugh-out-loud funny, but it was entertaining and the idea has some potential. I'd like to see a little bit more colour in there though, just a little. However if/when you make more i'd certainly like to read them

 

[Freechoice]

I like it. It's always nice to see fan stories that focus on things OTHER then the Dragon Born.

Here's hoping for a satirical M'aiq fic. That would fuckin' rock.