To Kill a Dovahkiin: Chapter 9

[DoPo]

Hey, good one. Very vaguely reminds me of Goblins, in that the characters are actually NPCs. I like that - I like stories about unimportant characters doing their own thing, presumably raging at the player. Turn this to an webcomic, and I'll immediately bookmark it and start following it. Just a word of advice - advertising is frowned upon here, so if you do, put the link in your profile.

 

[Nuttydwarf]

I like it, please post more and hopefully it lives long and prospers. \./

 

[lRookiel]

MORE!

So I decree!

Seriously, that was pretty funny :3

 

[ResonanceSD]

This is supercool! =D

 

[SlaveNumber23]

This was fantastic, looking forward to seeing more.

 

[fish iron4]

You need your own web comic series on the Escapist, Like Critical Miss

 

[Daystar Clarion]

That's actually pretty good

Nice job dude.

 

[ResonanceSD]

Double post, not sure how that happened =\

 

[A BigCup of Tea]

Just like everyone else i found this pretty entertaining, it's nice to see that it doesn't focus on the main character, i'd love to see more

 

[busterkeatonrules]

not bad, not bad. See if the Escapist will pick you up.

Seconded. I don't think anyone here would mind if you decided to post more of this!

 

[Eddy-16]

Well I liked it, found it funny. Well done I like the simple-ish art style as well

 

[F'Angus]

Hell this is pretty damn good dude. I would love to see more of this. Would be great if the Escapist would pick this up!

 

[SpAc3man]

Love it. I want more.

 

[Sonicron]

Ha! That was pretty damn funny. I'd like to see more, please!

 

[Vrach]

That's actually... pretty good. Has room for improvement, sure, but definitely keep working on it, it's good stuff

 

[Legion]

I like the art style, simplistic, but in a good way. It wasn't laugh out loud funny, but I really enjoyed reading it.

Definitely would like to see more.

 

[Kungfu_Teddybear]

That was great, I really enjoyed it.

 

[cloone8]

This is actually pretty awesome, would love to see more of this. Great work indeed!

 

[Dragoon]

Pretty funny, keep it up and it could be something great