We Are Our Avatars IV (Uh, closed for real now)
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@All: Back from being with Friends and watching the Avengers a third time... So what's up?
Phoenix slowly wakes up as her eyes flicker back to life.
Phoenix slowly wakes up as her eyes flicker back to life.
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[color=grey][i]Repairs complete. Attack drones, ready.[/i][/color]
"Seems to be a plethora of idiots here." Cloud says with a slight smile. "As for the monster, yeah, you should probably avoid that. Trying to search for something like that in a space you aren't familiar with would be dangerous. Too bad you haven't seen anything, though. I'd like to find this Knight and deal with him already. He seems to be our biggest threat."
"SOLDIER was designed to create super soldiers. People far stronger than normal people. Yes, I was part of it. I left my rural hometown and tried to join the rank of SOLDIER, seeking to be a hero. I managed to pass and quickly rose through the ranks to Second Class, where I met Angeal. And eventually was promoted to First Class. My sword was Angeal's sword which I inherited from him when he died."
"SOLDIER was designed to create super soldiers. People far stronger than normal people. Yes, I was part of it. I left my rural hometown and tried to join the rank of SOLDIER, seeking to be a hero. I managed to pass and quickly rose through the ranks to Second Class, where I met Angeal. And eventually was promoted to First Class. My sword was Angeal's sword which I inherited from him when he died."
@Slenn: LOL...
Jin was already asleep. He stirred up alittle, but quickly fell asleep once more.
Phoenix exited the room and saw Samus and Zack talking. She hid herself slightly as she scanned over Samus alittle
Jin was already asleep. He stirred up alittle, but quickly fell asleep once more.
Phoenix exited the room and saw Samus and Zack talking. She hid herself slightly as she scanned over Samus alittle
@Rosh: Not a damn thing is up right now.
"You can say that again." Etna replied. "Normally I'd just suggest torching the place and being done with it, but something tells me that suggestion wouldn't go over well. Although I've got no idea who this 'Knight' guy is. He could use a jazzier title though, that's for sure."
A prinny wandered over to Twilight, intrigued by her as it hadn't seen anything quite like her. "Uh, what's up, dood?"
"You can say that again." Etna replied. "Normally I'd just suggest torching the place and being done with it, but something tells me that suggestion wouldn't go over well. Although I've got no idea who this 'Knight' guy is. He could use a jazzier title though, that's for sure."
A prinny wandered over to Twilight, intrigued by her as it hadn't seen anything quite like her. "Uh, what's up, dood?"
Phoenix returned the wave shyly, and continued to watch Zack and Samus. I should probably go and say hi, but.... they are talking again...
"He won't have a name once, I'm done with him. As for torching this place, I'd rather not. I think we need to keep it intact. And if we can return the people to this planet, they'll need places to live." Cloud answered.
"The strength comes from being infused with Mako energy. Do you see my eyes? The slight glow to them? That's the mark of SOLDIER." Zack says, pointing to his eyes. "As for the amenities, we were well taken care of, standard equipment was amenable, food was plentiful, life was okay, especially since I was protecting the people of Midgar as much as anything. As a First Class, I could even refuse missions, if I wanted. As for the people, that was a mixed bag, I suppose."
"The strength comes from being infused with Mako energy. Do you see my eyes? The slight glow to them? That's the mark of SOLDIER." Zack says, pointing to his eyes. "As for the amenities, we were well taken care of, standard equipment was amenable, food was plentiful, life was okay, especially since I was protecting the people of Midgar as much as anything. As a First Class, I could even refuse missions, if I wanted. As for the people, that was a mixed bag, I suppose."
Samus scanned Zach over with her visor.
<color=gray>"Engraved in Log Book:
Subject: Zack. Genome match with normal human. Albeit muscle mass and eye color have been effected by an energetic substance within the body. The sword is made of a heavy metal that could only be lifted by super strengthened people."
She looked over the log entry.
"Hmmm.... from what it sounds like, I think your world may need protecting after all. If you've gotten missions a lot, perhaps something world-shattering is bound to happen at some point."
Samus yawned.
"I'm about to head for bed. You're always welcome to sleep in the ship. It's certainly cold out here in Russia." She got up on her feet and started to walk back in through the top hatch.
<color=gray>"Engraved in Log Book:
Subject: Zack. Genome match with normal human. Albeit muscle mass and eye color have been effected by an energetic substance within the body. The sword is made of a heavy metal that could only be lifted by super strengthened people."
She looked over the log entry.
"Hmmm.... from what it sounds like, I think your world may need protecting after all. If you've gotten missions a lot, perhaps something world-shattering is bound to happen at some point."
Samus yawned.
"I'm about to head for bed. You're always welcome to sleep in the ship. It's certainly cold out here in Russia." She got up on her feet and started to walk back in through the top hatch.
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Phoenix slowly walked over to Zack and Samus, hearing about 'Super Soldier' projects, but seeing that Samus was done talking started shuffling away.
OoC: Ok I need some opinionated people! I need help making this better! That especially includes you Slenn, Hatchy, and Rosh. (Nail too but I think he's in bed already so)
Critique this Son of a *****, and if possible any pointers would be appreciated. [sub]I didn't get big head syndrome this time... maybe?[/sub]
Critique this Son of a *****, and if possible any pointers would be appreciated. [sub]I didn't get big head syndrome this time... maybe?[/sub]
Zack shrugs. "Maybe, but I can say for certain a few things about Shin-Ra. They don't give up. Anyway, goodnight, Samus." He looks at Phoenix. "What's up with you?"
OoC: Worth noting that according to background information, a good chunk of the Turks quit because of how Zack and Cloud were treated. None of them really knew Cloud, I think only one was known to have seen him, but they all knew Zack. And were actively trying to prevent him from being killed by the Shin-Ra army. They actually acted against the Turks request to stand down.
OoC: Worth noting that according to background information, a good chunk of the Turks quit because of how Zack and Cloud were treated. None of them really knew Cloud, I think only one was known to have seen him, but they all knew Zack. And were actively trying to prevent him from being killed by the Shin-Ra army. They actually acted against the Turks request to stand down.
"I'm a unicorn. My name is Twilight"
OoC: @Zeph: I think you should add some more shading to the face (under the hair, around the nose) to add depth. Also, the middle finger on his left hand seems a bit... fat. Also, his shoes are pretty big.
Honestly, it looks good. I'm just nitpicking.
OoC: @Zeph: I think you should add some more shading to the face (under the hair, around the nose) to add depth. Also, the middle finger on his left hand seems a bit... fat. Also, his shoes are pretty big.
Honestly, it looks good. I'm just nitpicking.
@Zeph: The head is fine... Though the pants do seem to be rather large.
Phoenix turned around, playing with her thumbs infront of her. "Just that... You and Samus were talking about Super Soldiers and..."
Phoenix turned around, playing with her thumbs infront of her. "Just that... You and Samus were talking about Super Soldiers and..."
@Zeph. Not so much big head as much strange shortness. His legs are at an abnormally short length from his pelvis. A rule of thumb is that your hand-to-hand arm length is about as wide as you are tall. Hands should meet right between the thighs and knee when extended straight down.