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[PureBredGentleman]

Name: Mayor Livshitz

Mannerisms: Very jealous and jumpy. He tries to act confident like he knows what he's doing, but his decision making skills are very poor at the least. Very gullible as well. When he realizes that George is the town hero, he needs to make it about him instead. He likes attention a lot.

Background: Livshitz grew up in the city with his politically correct parents, whom accuse everything of being racist. This caused Livshitz to rebel somewhat by reading comic books that were confiscated from the neighbor children by his parents. They kept all confiscated goods in the attic.

He loved superheroes and how good always defeated evil. Eventually his father became Mayor and he would soon follow in his place. But with a different mindset. Now all evil had to be extinguished and brought to justice. Unlucky for him, since his father ran the city, all evil had already vanished. Luckily for him a certain league moves into town..

Why is he important?: The mayor keeps the town quiet, and plus he's a superhero at night. All villains need a hero to show them justice, but like most good ideas of the mayor, this fails miserably. Comedic value is his main purpose really.

 

[godsmagnum]

Henrietta Characterization

Written by Ryan Farr

Age: 23

Character?s Name: Henrietta

Physical Description: around 5? 4?, so pretty short. She has long blonde hair, a broken and ripped straight jacket. And ripped grey pants, with black high heels.

Mannerisms: Runs around a lot, says, loudly, very random things. When she sees a male of interest she will often go into what I like to call, ?A make out session.? Where she just goes up to them and makes out with them. She sometimes twitches. She is very evil/dangerous. She finds very abnormal things to be ?sexy? including ears. She often has one eyelid lower than the other. She will sometimes stop mid-sentence when seeing an orphan child, then she will go up to the orphan child and do terribly random things to it.

Personality Description: Seductive, insane, evil, and she knows what certain guys want. Oddly smart.

Background: She at one time was very sane, a psychologist in fact. She grew up with only a mother figure. Her dad ran off to Africa when she was born to escape responsibility. She finally graduated college and became a psychiatrist where she dealt with quite a variety of patients. There was one patient in particular though, his name was Phillip and no matter what, he would not SHUT THE HELL UP. He had a slight lisp and talked to such an extent that even Henrietta went insane. She started twitching and half blinking with one eye but not the other. And eventually came to work with a plate of flaming waffles, she threw them at all the orphan children that were there at the time. She was quite quickly taken to the insane asylum where her insanity grew even worse with each passing day. She eventually broke out. The moment she did, she grabbed all the orphan children she could find and threw them down what she thought was a well. In actuality it was actually a very large oak tree. She now thinks that her parents were a left shoe and a jar of peanut butter. She sometimes sees people as various foods or objects. Which brings us up to now, now she is a threat to everyone, even the super villains, with the exception of George and Jaguarman. They have large ears/noses which is a huge turn on for her, along with having extra toes or fingers.

What makes this character important? : This character is the actual threat to everyone, more specifically orphan children. She also adds morbid humor and a bit of a needed sex appeal.

 

[PureBredGentleman]

Henrietta Characterization

Written by Ryan Farr

Age: 23

Character?s Name: Henrietta

Physical Description: around 5? 4?, so pretty short. She has long blonde hair, a broken and ripped straight jacket. And ripped grey pants, with black high heels.

Mannerisms: Runs around a lot, says, loudly, very random things. When she sees a male of interest she will often go into what I like to call, ?A make out session.? Where she just goes up to them and makes out with them. She sometimes twitches. She is very evil/dangerous. She finds very abnormal things to be ?sexy? including ears. She often has one eyelid lower than the other. She will sometimes stop mid-sentence when seeing an orphan child, then she will go up to the orphan child and do terribly random things to it.

Personality Description: Seductive, insane, evil, and she knows what certain guys want. Oddly smart.

Background: She at one time was very sane, a psychologist in fact. She grew up with only a mother figure. Her dad ran off to Africa when she was born to escape responsibility. She finally graduated college and became a psychiatrist where she dealt with quite a variety of patients. There was one patient in particular though, his name was Phillip and no matter what, he would not SHUT THE HELL UP. He had a slight lisp and talked to such an extent that even Henrietta went insane. She started twitching and half blinking with one eye but not the other. And eventually came to work with a plate of flaming waffles, she threw them at all the orphan children that were there at the time. She was quite quickly taken to the insane asylum where her insanity grew even worse with each passing day. She eventually broke out. The moment she did, she grabbed all the orphan children she could find and threw them down what she thought was a well. In actuality it was actually a very large oak tree. She now thinks that her parents were a left shoe and a jar of peanut butter. She sometimes sees people as various foods or objects. Which brings us up to now, now she is a threat to everyone, even the super villains, with the exception of George and Jaguarman. They have large ears/noses which is a huge turn on for her, along with having extra toes or fingers.

What makes this character important? : This character is the actual threat to everyone, more specifically orphan children. She also adds morbid humor and a bit of a needed sex appeal.

Orphans=Comedy Gold.

 

[godsmagnum]

Henrietta Characterization

Written by Ryan Farr

Age: 23

Character?s Name: Henrietta

Physical Description: around 5? 4?, so pretty short. She has long blonde hair, a broken and ripped straight jacket. And ripped grey pants, with black high heels.

Mannerisms: Runs around a lot, says, loudly, very random things. When she sees a male of interest she will often go into what I like to call, ?A make out session.? Where she just goes up to them and makes out with them. She sometimes twitches. She is very evil/dangerous. She finds very abnormal things to be ?sexy? including ears. She often has one eyelid lower than the other. She will sometimes stop mid-sentence when seeing an orphan child, then she will go up to the orphan child and do terribly random things to it.

Personality Description: Seductive, insane, evil, and she knows what certain guys want. Oddly smart.

Background: She at one time was very sane, a psychologist in fact. She grew up with only a mother figure. Her dad ran off to Africa when she was born to escape responsibility. She finally graduated college and became a psychiatrist where she dealt with quite a variety of patients. There was one patient in particular though, his name was Phillip and no matter what, he would not SHUT THE HELL UP. He had a slight lisp and talked to such an extent that even Henrietta went insane. She started twitching and half blinking with one eye but not the other. And eventually came to work with a plate of flaming waffles, she threw them at all the orphan children that were there at the time. She was quite quickly taken to the insane asylum where her insanity grew even worse with each passing day. She eventually broke out. The moment she did, she grabbed all the orphan children she could find and threw them down what she thought was a well. In actuality it was actually a very large oak tree. She now thinks that her parents were a left shoe and a jar of peanut butter. She sometimes sees people as various foods or objects. Which brings us up to now, now she is a threat to everyone, even the super villains, with the exception of George and Jaguarman. They have large ears/noses which is a huge turn on for her, along with having extra toes or fingers.

What makes this character important? : This character is the actual threat to everyone, more specifically orphan children. She also adds morbid humor and a bit of a needed sex appeal.

Orphans=Comedy Gold.

PERFECT

 

[PureBredGentleman]

Henrietta Characterization

Orphans=Comedy Gold.

SNIP*

PERFECT

Thank you very much. I have a feeling this will be a fun gag to come back to in the comics.

 

[Salem_Wolf]

Sorry for taking so long to check back. I checked all the character sheets and read the posts, the characters do look very interesting, from the ones without character sheets, they seem...well I like the potential nuttiness, let's go with that, lol. I think I could be on board with something like this, with my unfortunate unemployment, I'm pretty open at the moment.

So far this idea looks, with a bit of work, like it could take off! And as a poster earlier mentioned about the League of Super Evil, I saw that show too an episode or two, wasn't spectacular but had the kind of humor I can somehow see on this webcomic, but yeah, it was somewhat shallow, and focused on the main cast, and was kind of a kiddie humor, I sort of see this as a more intelligent humor.

Yeah I'll work on the remaining character sheets as well. Lately I've been just wanting to get most of the main characters drawn and ready to pose. Right now I'm working on a sort of "pilot" to set up the whole premise in one strip. Something that sets up some plot points and gives us room to elaborate later on. I think this will be fun. Welcome aboard mate.

Definitely understandable, glad to be aboard.

 

[PureBredGentleman]

Here are some of the everyday citizens of Zoar City, they will provide the contrast and single gags that will take place in between story lines and such.

From left to right, Henry the Psychiatrist, Amy the Banker, Bob the Unemployed moocher, and Dave the Salesman/Cop/Cross-dresser.

Still need some racial diversity and whatnot though. Zoar City is looking like a pretty vanilla city so far. Any ideas for some new characters?

 

[Marble Dragon]

Hmm...how about a business worker caught up in the rush of everyday life? His eyes stare blankly ahead as he goes about his repetitive work day. He craves variety, but he doesn't know how to work it into his ordinary day at the office, so he doesn't change anything in his life. He loves bright colors and pretty objects, and he's prone to being caught up in things that look even mildly interesting.

That was a bit random...oh well. This comic is going to feature a man who dresses as a koala as a central character, so I suppose randomness is the least of anyone's worries at this point.

 

[PureBredGentleman]

Hmm...how about a business worker caught up in the rush of everyday life? His eyes stare blankly ahead as he goes about his repetitive work day. He craves variety, but he doesn't know how to work it into his ordinary day at the office, so he doesn't change anything in his life. He loves bright colors and pretty objects, and he's prone to being caught up in things that look even mildly interesting.

That was a bit random...oh well. This comic is going to feature a man who dresses as a koala as a central character, so I suppose randomness is the least of anyone's worries at this point.

Good idea, but I already have the "office worker" guy, George, to fill the role of "Stressed man" but a few of those personality traits are easily transferable over to Bob the unemployed guy. I hadn't had a defined personality for him yet so thanks.

And yes these stories are turning out to be a bit random, but I'm hoping that the reality of the city world and the everyday things that could easily happen where YOU live can somewhat contrast that and ground the comic deeper into reality.

Once again thanks for your support and stay tuned for more updates as we progress the comic along.

 

[headshotcatcher]

How about another villain, Blue Collar Man. His power is to appear like a harmless person but he takes it a bit too seriously (and is not evil at all)

You could make him black for racial diversity (and to get some Left 4 Dead puns for the fuck of it )

 

[godsmagnum]

How about another villain, Blue Collar Man. His power is to appear like a harmless person but he takes it a bit too seriously (and is not evil at all)

You could make him black for racial diversity (and to get some Left 4 Dead puns for the fuck of it )

That'd be funny.

 

[Kollega]

I have an idea for a civilian. You could make one of the civilians an "artsy" guy (beret,black clothing,square glasses,goatee),who constantly comments on how everything is not up to his standarts.

 

[WolfThomas]

I'd probably read it...

 

[PureBredGentleman]

I have an idea for a civilian. You could make one of the civilians an "artsy" guy (beret,black clothing,square glasses,goatee),who constantly comments on how everything is not up to his standarts.

Haha yeah that'd actually be great, it can also occasionally provide some fourth wall humor in the case of me being an artist as well. I'll get on it.

 

[Kollega]

Another idea for a civilian! You could make one of the civilians a paranoid,tin-foil hat wearing conspiracy theorist. He always suspects something and never trusts anyone,he KNOWS about Koala's tomfoolery (but overestimates his threat),he's sure that the aliens are among us,and he is never listened to.

And to top it off,his long-lost (they don't remember eachother) identical twin works for top-secret spy agency,and he once got photographed while on duty.

 

[PureBredGentleman]

Another idea for a civilian! You could make one of the civilians a paranoid,tin-foil hat wearing conspiracy theorist. He always suspects something and never trusts anyone,he KNOWS about Koala's tomfoolery (but overestimates his threat),he's sure that the aliens are among us,and he is never listened to.

And to top it off,his long-lost (they don't remember eachother) identical twin works for top-secret spy agency,and he once got photographed while on duty.

Wow these ideas aren't bad at all, thanks for the help, I'll make sure to give this twin character a good defined look. That aside, I still need to come up with a way to introduce the main storyline in a 3-5 panel joke. Thats gonna be tough. The pilot still needs some writing.

 

[Kollega]

Wow these ideas aren't bad at all, thanks for the help, I'll make sure to give this twin character a good defined look. That aside, I still need to come up with a way to introduce the main storyline in a 3-5 panel joke. Thats gonna be tough. The pilot still needs some writing.

How about that.

PANEL 1: Panorama of Zoar City. Sun is shining brightly.

Variant of a text: - Ahh,Zoar City. One nice place to live. Everyone lives happily and works productively,like a well - oiled machine.

PANEL 2: Panorama of Zoar City. Sun has just set - there's still a bit of red light coming from where it was.

- But not everything is fine in Zoar City. One man is already plotting it's downfall...

PANEL 3: View of Koala's hands - he is putting one of his gloves on.

- Nothing will stop him. He is plotting and scheming,and will not hesitate to do horrible,horrible things. He is...

PANEL 4: Hitler Cam view of a Vengeful Koala. His hands are propped on his waist. Moon takes up most of the background.

- ...Vengeful Koala.

PANEL 5: Full-height view of a VK. It is revealed that he stands on a box by one foot. Jaguarman stands nearby and says:

- Aren't you overdoing it a little?

 

[PureBredGentleman]

Wow these ideas aren't bad at all, thanks for the help, I'll make sure to give this twin character a good defined look. That aside, I still need to come up with a way to introduce the main storyline in a 3-5 panel joke. Thats gonna be tough. The pilot still needs some writing.

How about that.

PANEL 1: Panorama of Zoar City. Sun is shining brightly.

Variant of a text: - Ahh,Zoar City. One nice place to live. Everyone lives happily and works productively,like a well - oiled machine.

PANEL 2: Panorama of Zoar City. Sun has just set - there's still a bit of red light coming from where it was.

- But not everything is fine in Zoar City. One man is already plotting it's downfall...

PANEL 3: View of Koala's hands - he is putting one of his gloves on.

- Nothing will stop him. He is plotting and scheming,and will not hesitate to do horrible,horrible things. He is...

PANEL 4: Hitler Cam view of a Vengeful Koala. His hands are propped on his waist. Moon takes up most of the background.

- ...Vengeful Koala.

PANEL 5: Full-height view of a VK. It is revealed that he stands on a box by one foot. Jaguarman stands nearby and says:

- Aren't you overdoing it a little?