Recent content by Ghostwriter4theflesh

I don't understand why I keep reading that the person in the reflection is a "women in white cloth". Its not some mysterious character, its just a random enemy dying by Max's han.......guns. In the Game Informer Issue with the cover story for Max Payne 3, there was a panel with dozens of these...

Metal Gear Solid(any one of them): Don't think I have to specify my reasons Max Payne(Artistic, revolutionary, and fun as hell addicting gameplay) Silent Hill(Immersive as hell, revolutionary in its presentation, and rediculous replay value simply to gain more answers to the story) Silent...

^Those lines you just attempted to belittle were far better than anything you could come up with. And for people saying the story is "cliche"........news flash........ITS SUPPOSE TO BE!!!!!!!! In an article of the game in Game Informer Sam Lake is even quoted saying "for the 2nd game, I actually...

2 years later Max was finally found by them. By a man named "Priest"(the co leader of the group). He offered Max the chance to "change his life" for the better. He offered Max a way out of the lost. Like Max, the S.O.C are made up of former soldiers, mercenaries, assassins who have nothing left...

Dead to Rights was a pretty blantant rip off of Max Payne. How could you play that game and not see the similarities to Max Payne. It even has storyline similarities. A fugitive cop, framed for murder(just the circumstances were different). Its also told through flashback dialog(its done by many...

^Thanks. I was going to post this in a seperate thread(which I still may do). But I always thought it would be a good idea to explore Max going undercover once again. We barely saw his undercover work in the first game. The only glimps we got was his interaction with the "Finito Brothers". My...

Part II 2 years pass and we are brought back to where the story was introduced in the beggining. Max himself has become a "private gun" and is still tracking the wear abouts of the "Sons of the Circle". Since his resignation from the NYPD, Max has been relentlessly hunted down by the...

Sorry to say but the story came up with by Rockstar is better than yours(no offense but you asked for an honest opinion). As a writer, I can see flaws in your story. One being your decision to kill off Max in the beggining of the game. It kills the theme of the series(as the title of the series...