Well.. Im gonna say its pending. Your character seems a bit too proffecient in fighting Aliens. To put it bluntly, I have nothing against blank slates. Your character has a lot of developement in the characterdepartment left to finish and im fine with that. However.Technetium said:Area: England
Name: Will Galloway
Nationality: Irish, but born in England.
Age: 26
Education: Studied Engineering and Mechanics at the University of London
Affiliation: Rebel (in secret)
Appearance: Brown hair, green eyes, pale skin. Athletic, but not too muscley. Often seen wearing overalls. Otherwise seen in jeans, a t-shirt and jacket.
Familial status: Single, likes a girl
Social Status: Working Class Engineer
Notable Skills: Will works at the rebel base and spends his time trying to figure out the mysteries behind the rebel tech with reverse engineering. He has some combat training from the rebel facilities, but he mainly specialises in Tech, remote espionage and strategy.
Personal Philosophy: Will is very flexible in what he believes, although his main goal is to forcefully overcome the aliens, and use that as a stepping stone which might lead him to pioneer contact with deep space. He is not very violent, but is prepared to sacrifice everything for his ultimate goals.
Bio: Born in England, Will comes from a traditionally Irish family. He has lived his whole life in occupation and it was only since he finished his engineering course at University did he realise that with skills like his, he could aid the resistance.
Furthermore, the parents of the girl he likes were killed by the Aliens, which has been another driving force for him to assist the rebels in trying to drive them out.
He has sworn to get them out of this world, and so far, he's been pretty successful.
"He has sworn to get them out of this world and so far he has been successful!"
Sort of suggests that the resistance movement his in is winning? Or that his a pretty awesome guy. Now nothing wrong with that, but I'd like you to show 'why' his awesome by explaining about about 'how' he has been succesfull. How has this mere human engineer managed to outsmart and defeat ( In several conflicts in order to be pretty succesful) A hyperadvanced Alien race.