Haiku Battle!

[solidstatemind]

I may not like all
But thread is full of awesome
Glad it's still going

 

[iJosh]

A-N

Isn't there a haiku that goes 3-5-3 ?

That's a form
Though it's not used much
It still works

I knew it!
We did some poetry in high school last year.

 

[Jumping_Over_Fences]

A-N

Isn't there a haiku that goes 3-5-3 ?

That's a form
Though it's not used much
It still works

I knew it!
We did some poetry in high school last year.

It's American
So, it is not too standard
But, fun anyway

 

[coldfrog]

Does this ever end?
Seriously, how many
Haikus can you make?

I made two of them
And already I think I
Spent too much time here.

EDIT: So I lied.
I can't get enough of it.
I feel creative!

 

[Avatar Roku]

I am Tyr Elhaz
the Warrior of Protection
none shall defeat me

I am Orannis
The Destroyer, The Ninth Bright
Shiner. I shall win

For I would have stopped
the world turning, were it not
for the Abhorsen.

Damned necromancer,
The Abhorsen-In-Waiting;
Rememberancer.

Lirael, the kin
of Astarael, the Ender.
Final. Sorrower.

[A-N]You aren't going to get that unless you read the Abhorsen Trilogy. Oh well, I'm in character now[/A-N]

 

[Zykon TheLich]

Oh, griever eighteen,
oh, scum of society
stop with the turd talk!

Never will I stop
See I now send you my pants
Expect my gift soon

 

[Lukeje]

Dieses ist meiner
Deutsches Japanischer Poem,
mit kein grammatik

Warum ist dass? Nein?
Ich habe Deutsch gesprochen
Mit viel grammatik.

Entschuldigung, mein
Deutsch ist heute etwas aus
der übung, endsilbe.

Ich habe nicht kein
Deutsch seit Prüfung gesprochen.
Es ist Schlafenszeit.

I take rest knowing
that my German is at least
not as bad as yours.

Kids these days, they don't
know what, a-the jazz, is all
about! POK-E-MAN!

My German? I Don't
understand, a double neg-
-ative; positive.

Yes I cheated then
It's early in the morning
My German good is.

I knew it!
We did some poetry in high school last year.

That's not a Haiku.
Write it in Haiku form then
I will respond

With something more con-
structive than just berating
The lack of Haiku.

 

[Trivun]

The darkness in me
Creeps silently through the night
Overwhelming love

Yeah, I'm in a dark phase at the moment (have been since last November actually... oh well. [goes off to listen to Evanescence]. Anyway, this is my 'dark writings' stage inspired by the recent Short Stories thread...

 

[KValentine]

Haiku are odd poems
That sometimes do not make sense.
Refrigerators

 

[HateDread]

Diseases spreading,
With an oink and a sniffle,
STOP LICKING THE SWINE!

 

[Lukeje]

The darkness in me
Creeps silently through the night
Overwhelming love

Depressing Haiku;
I want you to cheer up please.
Here is for battles.

Diseases spreading,
With an oink and a sniffle,
STOP LICKING THE SWINE!

We all shall now die
Of flu that is of piggies.
We're all gonna die!

 

[Emeli]

The song and the dance
for worldwide epidemics
is my favourite.

Like mad cow disease,
I still can't donate blood now
It killed four people.

It's just that my tears
Are better saved up for threats
That really exist.

 

[Trivun]

The darkness in me
Creeps silently through the night
Overwhelming love

Depressing Haiku;
I want you to cheer up please.
Here is for battles.

Whether won or lost
Poetry is from the soul
Darkness overtakes

 

[Lukeje]

The darkness in me
Creeps silently through the night
Overwhelming love

Depressing Haiku;
I want you to cheer up please.
Here is for battles.

Whether won or lost
Poetry is from the soul
Darkness overtakes

But poetry can
Be happy and joyful and
Dispel the darkness.

 

[Trivun]

The darkness in me
Creeps silently through the night
Overwhelming love

Depressing Haiku;
I want you to cheer up please.
Here is for battles.

Whether won or lost
Poetry is from the soul
Darkness overtakes

But poetry can
Be happy and joyful and
Dispel the darkness.

(Well, you wanted a battle, so here goes)

My soul is a pit
Drowning in the dark abyss
Joy can never reach

 

[Yoshimota]

Haiku's are fair cool

For a short poem that is

Not really my thing...

 

[Yoshimota]

The optimist

He drowns in his shit
While remaining positive
I wish I were him

That was as good as
The time I made a haiku
That was one sentence.

A-N

I like that Optimist one 'wpheloung12'

And, Welcome to the Escapist 'Tehpengwan'.

...It's safer here.

 

[Lukeje]

The darkness in me
Creeps silently through the night
Overwhelming love

Depressing Haiku;
I want you to cheer up please.
Here is for battles.

Whether won or lost
Poetry is from the soul
Darkness overtakes

But poetry can
Be happy and joyful and
Dispel the darkness.

(Well, you wanted a battle, so here goes)

My soul is a pit
Drowning in the dark abyss
Joy can never reach

Fluffy animals
Never fail to cheer people.
Here's a fluffy cat [http://www.catsofaustralia.com/images/fluffy_cat_persian.jpg].