Ooooookay. Why is the term "Mary Sue" being thrown around like paint?

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Metalix Knightmare said:
Also, wasn't Daala Tarkin's secret apprentice/lover who went on to lead Imperial remnants o humiliating defeat after humiliating defeat only to somehow end up leading the Republic, or am I thinking of someone else?
Yup that's her! The Tarkin fangirl who got left behind with the secret weapons facility for years before stumbling onto a galaxy where the Imperials were overthrown and vowing to do her sugar daddy proud, she embarks on a series of debilitating raids against the new republic which go well until she gets beated by jedi hax and her fleet gets wiped.

After that she limps back to imperial remnant space on her last star destroyer where she becomes an ambassador for one of the many moffs, travels around to get an idea of how fucked the empire is and after a series of awesome events unites the Imperial remnants into a cohesive force in quite a badass way (probably my favorite part of the entire Daala arc) involving a lot of (wo)manly tears as she genuinely tries to convince people to work together before finally accepting she is going to have to be the one to reshape the Empire:

It's worth noting she didn't even want to lead the Imperials at this point and was quite happy to be a subordinate but none of the major Imperial leaders were able enough and they spend their time bickering when she gathered them together to a big meeting..So deciding enough is enough, if they ain't gonna man up, then she will woman it up, kills most of them and grudgingly accept she is the boss now.
Under her rule Imperial remnants shape up and become an effective fighting force once again, she also amends regulations so aliens can join Imperials and women are considered more capable (this is an aspect of OT that never made sense to me btw..I'm glad this bit has been somewhat retconned and female imperials are now an established thing rather then being an anomaly), leading to a surge in Imperial patriotism across all their systems.

And then she proceeds to kick major Republic tail, seriously, she does awesome. But then once again, she gets screwed over by Jedi hax which totally wreck her plan as well as her super star destroyer. Then understanding she can no longer lead the Imperials after such a failure she hands over command to the long suffering Pelleon.

Then I kinda stopped following the EU shortly before the vuu zhong or w/e they were called, so I don't know what she was up to after that. If she ended up leading the republic then that is truly lulz worthy considering she is a die hard Imperial through and through.

Anyways TLDR, yeah she lead the Imperials to humiliating defeats..But it really wasn't her fault :'(
Friggin jedi cheated so hard.

BloatedGuppy said:
There wasn't much of a fleet left period, due to the disarmament treaty. And yeah, a lack of world building/state of the galaxy context was more of the film's most egregious sins. I get feeling allergic to "Space Politics" after Phantom Menace, but it resulted in a lot of (IMO) unnecessary confusion.
Only just caught this. So New Republic fleet had been shriveled and what's left was concentrated on 5-6 planets?
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Palpatine was right!

Also I'd love some Space politics. It just wasn't well done in the prequels ><
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Hmm no I'm pretty sure things that would call back to the prequels would be prequel references, or even continuations of prequel stories like in Rebels.

Disney have made it clear, in their expanded universe, merchandise and even FA, they're not saying the OT is "more canon". FA captured the spirit of the OT sure, but the prequels most certainly aren't being ignored or lessened.
I have a feeling we're arguing two different things.

The films are canonical. That's established.

Certain elements of the prequels, most particularly areas where they contradict the OT, either directly or in spirit, seem to be getting hand-waved and/or ignored.

Further, there was an aesthetic design and directorial approach taken with the prequels that isn't just getting ignored, they overtly stated at almost every opportunity they'd be doing the exact opposite. To the point where I half suspect a healthy number of the production staff watched the Red Letter Media reviews and decided to address them virtually point by point.

THAT is what I mean by "distancing themselves from the prequels".
 

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Frankster said:
Fair enough, I respect your god given right to snerk. But as the person who was in the quotebox you responded to, I felt a little miffled that my stated dislike of Poe went unnoticed. I'm an equal opportunity bitcher after all, and given the chance to ***** about Poe, I'm perfectly happy to, he is actually guilty of the single most immersion breaking moment of the film imo.
What scene is that? And actually I was snerking at Bloated Guppy's response, as his was the out layer of that quote. He was responding to you yes, but I was responding to him. Curse the russian nesting doll aspect of thread discussions.

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And honestly as a Poe hater, there's two sides to your story. Sure I don't feel like there's a lot of Poe haters out there like me, but on the other hand there's no one willing to defend him either. Truthfully it seems no one gives a damn about Poe, which I attribute to him being absent for most of the movie and therefore easier to forget about when one is bitching about TFA.
Well, since you admit that hardly anyone is bitching about Po, I'm not really sure who I have to be defending him against? I mean, if very few people are complaining about him, what do I have to defend about him? Your statement of dislike of Po is pretty much the first I've heard of it's ilk. That's right, you have your own ilk! Feel special! But yeah, uh, if there isn't a vocal community of dissent against the character, there doesn't need to be a vocal group of support either. As to Po's content in the movie, he was bookended. Since he's basically Han 2.0, they felt it would diminish the characters if we had 2 Han's running around side by side. That's why he vanished right before they introduce Han, and then he shows back up right before Han is removed. I didn't notice it really until I saw a review where someone mentioned it, but it's pretty accurate. So, honestly, there isn't much to Po from what we've seen. His movie content basically consisted of "Hey everybody! I'm the charming rogue/Han 2.0! I'm going to be the plot device to get Finn to Rey, and then I'm going to exit stage left until the climax! Enjoy my predecessor Han! See you more significantly in Episode 8!" *charming grin with a glint of light on his teeth, and a wink with a sound effect *ting**

Frankster said:
The bulk of the discussion in TFA when bitching about characters, seem to be about Rey and Ren. And as I like Ren I'm certainly not gonna be bringing him up in my rants.
You can like a character and still rant about how they are portrayed. The two things aren't mutually exclusive. No story is without flaw, and neither is any character.

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Re: Wedge. That's actually something I was thinking about after I had to leave to go do stuff. It's interesting why I came to accept Wedge as the best pilot of the OT, when really...Off the top of my head he only got 3 kills in the OT, the Tie fighter in ANH, the ATAT walker in ESB and then the TIE interceptor in RotJ.
Don't forget he also was the only X-Wing pilot to make it out of the interior Death Star run in RotJ. He even was the one that destroyed that regulator thingy before Lando shot the core. But yeah, strictly based on the movies, he's not at all described as being an ace pilot. In fact his name is hardly used at all. The fans, much like they did with Boba Fett, inflated what is basically a glorified extra into something much more epic and badass than he is portrayed with the source material. Which is fine, as long as people are willing to admit that it's all based on fanboyism, and isn't actually based on source material.

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Then you have Poe, who everyone says is the best pilot, and you see him raking up a ridiculous kill count, at one point he kills FIVE ties with a single pass.
Yeah, I thought that was a little excessive myself. And I felt Finn's "Whoo! Now that's one badass pilot!" comment was insanely redundant. Yes Finn, we fucking noticed, the movie took an entire minute of film time to devote to showing us how badass he was. The audience isn't that dumb. :p

Though personally, I think this is a bit of forshadowing to a large scale resurgence of Force users "awakening". That Rey, and Finn, and Po, are all going to, by the end, be potential Jedi, and form the core of the new Jedi that Luke either teaches, or that replace him when he eventually dies. I have no real evidence to support this, other than to say "Po's fighting skills were crazy good, almost Jedi good." I mean we saw Obi-Wan and Anakin doing insane piloting shit like Po, and it was fine. So I think that's a subtle hint that he might be force sensitive. And I still think Finn will ultimately be a jedi as well. This is partly due to my thoughts on how to structure a story, and to have a red herring like would be a significant dick move. But also, because of a very quickly spoken, and often overlooked statement from Rey to Finn. When they were in the Falcon, and she was doing her "I can fly this thing great", Finn also had a "I can shoot things really great" moment. When they meet in the hallway, and are talking fast over each other, Rey asks "I can't believe you shot that guy! How did you do that?!" Implying that his accuracy in that high-G maneuver was abnormally good. And he say "I don't know, I just felt it and bam!" I am paraphrasing him, because I don't recall his exact words, but it was basically along the same lines of Rey's answer of "I don't know I just did it!" Which suggests he might be as latent a force user as her. Maybe not as much raw talent, since he's not a Skywalker, but another person who has a connection to the Force. that's my theory anyway, we'll see how accurate it is in Ep. 8.

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Maybe this is part of why I hate Poe and feel his aerial sequences lack the punch the OT has.
Poe looks like a friggin superhero who everyone fawns over (btw I did say Poe might very well be a Gary Stu in this thread so it's not like I'm being inconsistent), whereas Wedge was the silent workhorse, he didn't need people to fawn over him, he just kept being awesome without receiving special praise or adulation.
I don't disagree that they were a little heavy handed with their portrayal of Po. But personally, I don't mind too much. He was enjoyable when he was on screen, and I felt his character was believable. His skill set is a different issue, but the actual person, and how he was portrayed, was fine to me.

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Well at least until you reach the now retconned EU.. The fact that Wedge is the only pilot to have survived all major battles and TWO death star runs (meaning he actually gets to paint two death stars on his ship as part of his kill markers) meant people commented on it a lot.
Right, but we're talking about how characters are portrayed based on the films alone. Using outside source material to justify a character's abilities isn't something that should be done. Or at least I don't think it should be done. I shouldn't have to do research to understand your movie. They did this a bit with Rey, and I didn't like it. But it wasn't enough of an issue for me to dislike her character. It was a "eh, they could've explained that bit more clearly, instead of just leaving it entirely up to reading the book."

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Re: Thrawn. You don't like Thrawn? You MONSTER. Well different tastes and all that, the whole studying his enemy through their art thing is what I like the most about this character xD But I'm also a fan of Vygotsky's theories on culture which might be partially why. If not Thrawn though, the EU had a wealth of other Imperials I liked like Daala or Pelleon, hope you feel more positive about those two :p
Sorry, but I just can't buy the "I've studied their art, thus I know everything about them and can crush them militarily" schtick he had. I've used this example before when Thrawn comes up, but that's like saying I can tell you how the US Military forces are going to behave and deploy, because I studied some Norman Rockwell paintings. It's completely idiotic, and only works if you have Homogenous Alienism, which is sadly, a common trait in scifi. You have to make multiple distinct alien cultures, but you make them all exactly the same. There is no diversity of culture and society like you have with humanity. Nope, all Gunguns act the same, all Mon Calamari act the same. Their culture is 100% inclusive to that aspect, with no variation. And I get why. The writer has a bigger story to write, they can't spend page time on a detailed breakdown on how this alien culture has 10 distinct sub-divisions of culture, and do that for every race they create. So, they are all the same. Which is very liekly incorrect when it comes to alien intelligence, and makes for gaping plot holes, like Thrawn's Art Magic. I just, couldn't stomach it. Even as a kid, when I read that trilogy I was like "Oh come on! He's too fucking perfect, the smug prick! I don't believe him!" As to the other people you mentioned, I don't know who they are, as I didn't really read much of the EU. I read the Thrawn trilogy, and maybe a couple others? But the Thrawn books just soured my palette on the entire EU as poor quality writing. I'm sure there are some diamonds in the rough, but since everyone holds up the Thrawn trilogy as the holy bible of EU storytelling quality, I think I've seen the best it had to offer, and found it lacking. :p

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Oh btw thanks for correcting that t-16/80 mistake. I feel like I've failed as a star wars nerd though because of it though. *commits seppuku*
Eh, I'm confident your Star Wars info is greater than mine, as I said above, I barely scratched the EU stuff. Though I can quote the original trilogy almost word for word if I'm watching it to refresh my memory of various line queues. Do not injure your belly on my account.
 

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If I'm not mistaken Mary/Gary Sue characters were characters that were perfect at everything, loved by everyone (except the antagonist), and had no character flaws what-so-ever. You know, like pretty much everyone's self-insert fan fiction characters. Nowadays I suspect it's become another synonym for " I don't like."
 

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Sexual Harassment Panda said:
springheeljack said:
Sexual Harassment Panda said:
springheeljack said:
It is just a stupid term sucked in by the internet and regurgitated over and over till it has lost its meaning like most popular terms. It is kind of insulting that it is always used on female characters most of the time unfairly. So many people use that term on Rey that you would thing that all the people who use it come from some weird hive mind. It is just the same tired argument over and over again
Hive-minder checking in. Honestly, she left me feeling pretty cold. She genuinely was perfect to the point of being a bit annoying/boring. Those were my feelings. You get to share internal conflict as well as the films better comedy moments with Finn(the other new hero character which I would still say was underdeveloped, though not to the point of stopping me from enjoying the film), which help give his character... Character.

Maybe you can tell me what I missed. If you were to sell me on the character, how would you explain her? What is her personality like? What are her affectations?




Really? I didn't feel that way about her at all I found her incredibly likable as a character and I thought that there was a lot of depth to her
Okay here is how I would explain her character
She has severe abandonment issues. She has had a hard life on Jakku where she has had to scrounge up a meager existence by hunting for scrap for many years. She has also done this on her own as it looks like she doesn't live with anybody else so consequently it has hardened her outlook on life. Her outlook changes through the course of the movie as she finally leaves Jakku in the wide world. Her manner brightens around Finn and especially around Han Solo because I think she seems him as a sort of father figure. Still even though she is enjoying herself on her journey she still feels obligated to return to Jakku in the vain hope that her family will eventually return for her. Through the course of the movie she has to come to terms with the fact that her destiny will be settled elsewhere. She is a dynamic character whose desires and motivations change throughout the movie. She is not some perfect character that has no growth at all. She is a protagonist who is gifted with many of the same traits that protagonists normally have such as Harry Potter or Odysseus. Oh and of course she is attractive this is a movie after all Hollywood actors are usually considered to be beautiful people. You can say that every main character in Star Wars Awakens are attractive people.
You fucked up the quote there. Not criticising exactly... Done so more times than I can count. Just to be clear that I'm misquoted.

I noticed what you're talking about enough to know what you're talking about, but I found it all to be underdeveloped. I hope they flesh out the details that you mentioned in the films that follow, because they felt like vague nods to character motivations and history than they did anything substantial, IMHO. That's where my heads at. Not that she can't be a good character, she just isn't yet.

Yeah I did fuck that up I kind of noticed it as soon as it happened but I didn't know how to fix it
Anyway I think the problem a lot of us are making is that we are treating Rey as the main character of a standalone film. That is like judging Harry Potter as a character by only what he did in the first movie/book. There is certainly a lot about her character that needs to be expanded upon which is a good thing because it would suck if her character had nothing else but what we saw in the first movie. My main issue was the whole Mary Sue thing which is not a reliable or even worthwhile term. It is like Manic Pixie Dream girl in that sense. She is a good starting protagonist to a much longer series. Something that the Phantom Menace completely failed to have on any level.
 

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Frankster said:
Metalix Knightmare said:
Also, wasn't Daala Tarkin's secret apprentice/lover who went on to lead Imperial remnants o humiliating defeat after humiliating defeat only to somehow end up leading the Republic, or am I thinking of someone else?
Yup that's her! The Tarkin fangirl who got left behind with the secret weapons facility for years before stumbling onto a galaxy where the Imperials were overthrown and vowing to do her sugar daddy proud, she embarks on a series of debilitating raids against the new republic which go well until she gets beated by jedi hax and her fleet gets wiped.

After that she limps back to imperial remnant space on her last star destroyer where she becomes an ambassador for one of the many moffs, travels around to get an idea of how fucked the empire is and after a series of awesome events unites the Imperial remnants into a cohesive force in quite a badass way (probably my favorite part of the entire Daala arc) involving a lot of (wo)manly tears as she genuinely tries to convince people to work together before finally accepting she is going to have to be the one to reshape the Empire:

It's worth noting she didn't even want to lead the Imperials at this point and was quite happy to be a subordinate but none of the major Imperial leaders were able enough and they spend their time bickering when she gathered them together to a big meeting..So deciding enough is enough, if they ain't gonna man up, then she will woman it up, kills most of them and grudgingly accept she is the boss now.
Under her rule Imperial remnants shape up and become an effective fighting force once again, she also amends regulations so aliens can join Imperials and women are considered more capable (this is an aspect of OT that never made sense to me btw..I'm glad this bit has been somewhat retconned and female imperials are now an established thing rather then being an anomaly), leading to a surge in Imperial patriotism across all their systems.

And then she proceeds to kick major Republic tail, seriously, she does awesome. But then once again, she gets screwed over by Jedi hax which totally wreck her plan as well as her super star destroyer. Then understanding she can no longer lead the Imperials after such a failure she hands over command to the long suffering Pelleon.

Then I kinda stopped following the EU shortly before the vuu zhong or w/e they were called, so I don't know what she was up to after that. If she ended up leading the republic then that is truly lulz worthy considering she is a die hard Imperial through and through.

Anyways TLDR, yeah she lead the Imperials to humiliating defeats..But it really wasn't her fault :'(
Friggin jedi cheated so hard.

BloatedGuppy said:
There wasn't much of a fleet left period, due to the disarmament treaty. And yeah, a lack of world building/state of the galaxy context was more of the film's most egregious sins. I get feeling allergic to "Space Politics" after Phantom Menace, but it resulted in a lot of (IMO) unnecessary confusion.
Only just caught this. So New Republic fleet had been shriveled and what's left was concentrated on 5-6 planets?
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Palpatine was right!

Also I'd love some Space politics. It just wasn't well done in the prequels ><
Game of Thrones Star Wars plz J.J.
...That honestly sound like it would've made for a far better series of movies. Would've left us with better villains at least. Instead we got Darth Linkin Park, a shiny Boba Fett, a less subtle Space Hitler, and Darth Monster From Lost.
 

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Mary Sue gets overused because it sounds better and more "objective" than "I don't like this character".
Considering she outdoes both previous main characters with the force by a significant margin, there's merit to the argument.

Luke: Good pilot, pulls off a shot anyone could've made.

Anakin: Phenomenal Pilot and prodigy with machines, blows up an enemy Space Station from inside. Also, is made of Force.

Rey: Phenomenal pilot, skilled martial artist, above average marksman (with no real training. Seriously, she missed twice and then nailed every Stormtrooper sent after her), Able to resist force mind jerkery and turns the tables on the uy who did it and then pull off the Mind Trick (Again, with no training) all with no real personality issues beyond not wanting to leave home. (Seriously, Luke was a hothead who tended to look before leaping and it eventually cost him his hand, while Anakin's issues with loss pretty much marched him down the dark side.)

Gotta admit, she's coming off as kinda sueish here.
 

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Metalix Knightmare said:
DementedSheep said:
Mary Sue gets overused because it sounds better and more "objective" than "I don't like this character".
Considering she outdoes both previous main characters with the force by a significant margin, there's merit to the argument.

Luke: Good pilot, pulls off a shot anyone could've made.

Anakin: Phenomenal Pilot and prodigy with machines, blows up an enemy Space Station from inside. Also, is made of Force.

Rey: Phenomenal pilot, skilled martial artist, above average marksman (with no real training. Seriously, she missed twice and then nailed every Stormtrooper sent after her), Able to resist force mind jerkery and turns the tables on the uy who did it and then pull off the Mind Trick (Again, with no training) all with no real personality issues beyond not wanting to leave home. (Seriously, Luke was a hothead who tended to look before leaping and it eventually cost him his hand, while Anakin's issues with loss pretty much marched him down the dark side.)

Gotta admit, she's coming off as kinda sueish here.
I didn't mention Rey? I've not even seen the movie. I was talking generally about the overuse of the term.
 

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DementedSheep said:
Metalix Knightmare said:
DementedSheep said:
Mary Sue gets overused because it sounds better and more "objective" than "I don't like this character".
Considering she outdoes both previous main characters with the force by a significant margin, there's merit to the argument.

Luke: Good pilot, pulls off a shot anyone could've made.

Anakin: Phenomenal Pilot and prodigy with machines, blows up an enemy Space Station from inside. Also, is made of Force.

Rey: Phenomenal pilot, skilled martial artist, above average marksman (with no real training. Seriously, she missed twice and then nailed every Stormtrooper sent after her), Able to resist force mind jerkery and turns the tables on the uy who did it and then pull off the Mind Trick (Again, with no training) all with no real personality issues beyond not wanting to leave home. (Seriously, Luke was a hothead who tended to look before leaping and it eventually cost him his hand, while Anakin's issues with loss pretty much marched him down the dark side.)

Gotta admit, she's coming off as kinda sueish here.
I didn't mention Rey? I've not even seen the movie. I was talking generally about the overuse of the term.
Ah. I apologize for jumping you like then. Sorry.
 

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Corey Schaff said:
Supernova1138 said:
though nothing really justifies her ability to use the Force to the extent that she does with zero training.
Well, here are my thoughts on that matter.

I have some suspicions as to why she has such a great potential that she is able to overcome Kylo Ren even though he has a bit more experience (but not even training, since he hasn't been trained yet). It must have something to do with who her parents are I bet. I hope Luke isn't her father though, but that's one of the possibilities.
My thoughts on your thoughts on that matter.

So my idea rejects the bloodline concept that everyone seems to have latched onto as to how Rey becomes so good so fast.

My theory is that the force as a whole is trying to balance itself. It latches both light and dark attributes onto a few items that were used by heavy force users and then "Awakens" a bunch of force sensitives around the galaxy. Two items that we see in this movie would be Darth Vaders helmet and Luke's/Anakin's lightsaber. A force sensitive that touches these items gets hit with a massive power boost and essentially a mental crash course in the basics to give them a fighting chance at becoming Jedi or Sith.

Kylo is exposed to Vader's helmet, either through Snoke or by himself and gains a massive amount of power, enough to rival Luke and his followers. Kylo's line "Show me again, the power of the dark side" seems to insinuate that he received a vision or other boost from the helmet.

Rey is the first or only force sensitive to touch the Saber as far as we know. It is only after Rey gets the vision that she exhibits any force related abilities, or at least any notable ones as her enhanced piloting skills could be force related.

If Finn ends up also being force sensitive then it could simply be that each empowerment works as a one time only deal and Rey drained the Saber before Finn touched it.
 

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DementedSheep said:
Mary Sue gets overused because it sounds better and more "objective" than "I don't like this character".
What???

No. Mary Sue is used (perhaps in error) in an attempt to call-out a character for being out-of-place powerful, with little-to-no drawbacks, within the universe of that character.

Saying a character seems like a "Mary Sue" might well be a reason a person doesn't like that character, but it is not a direct substitute for saying that specifically, which is what you suggest.
 

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If I'm not mistaken Mary/Gary Sue characters were characters that were perfect at everything, loved by everyone (except the antagonist), and had no character flaws what-so-ever. You know, like pretty much everyone's self-insert fan fiction characters. Nowadays I suspect it's become another synonym for " I don't like."
It can be that.

The idea of a Mary Sue character is "Wish fulfillment". It's just a symbolism for "shitty" writing in most cases, because a poorly created character is one that you feel nothing for when they win or lose, or more commonly, they break your suspension of disbelief by doing something that's unnatural to the story.

It's not a question of "like/dislike", it is the essential part of writing characters; that becomes a problem when people become genre savvy and have seen everything before, that they have a sense of belief and disbelief.

And it's the difference between an average writer, and a great writer in that they can create and use characters to do things that don't just fit in like puzzle pieces to fulfill the limitations of the plot and scope of the plot. i.e. there has to be a reason that the bad guy shows up and travels to the various locations in each chapter/arc/volume/episode, and for all of the other characters to be there too. If somehow the characters just show up, it's not co-incidence, it's deus ex machina by the author(s). If they then win this contrived situation, and get better as a result, that's where it becomes Mary Sue.

Heroes often break into bullshit territory if they are poorly written, or the author does not know how to write characters or make them believable or flawed. So instead, they will insert a perfect version of themselves into the scene to get past the plot or the universe, because they only need the character to be there.

From TFA, there's the example of R2D2 suddenly powering up with the final puzzle piece, for no explicable reason other than "it's time to get luke". There's nothing in the story that explains why R2D2 is prevented from doing so before or after. Deus Ex Machina.

For reasons that have to be ignored, Rey survives and thrives when confronted, using abilities she's never known or seen before. i.e. If rey had started floating down to the ground in TFA during her opening salvage scene, that would have been enough to explain "oh, she's a magical girl then", etc. Everything she does from that point onwards, is shaped by her abilities and as a character, second. And, if you know she's capable early on, then her motives change accordingly.

If she uses the force earlier on, the audience doesn't know, but the character suspects/is ignorant of the force/jedi, then things work differently too. in some sense, TFA breaks because she's appropriately "normal", and then she becomes powerful enough to get out of a bad situation without help, or any kind of extrapolation or explanation.

I don't really care that Kylo Ren is mortally wounded as a descriptive element to that fight, he has enough dexterity to fight Finn, and Rey together, and that's not a defensive bluff, that's his motive as a character. In a realistic setting, he has had combat experience with a lightsaber, and has defeated other jedi, even trainees with a lightsaber. It's to be expected that he's defeated Luke or another jedi teacher (are there any others ?), before Luke walked away from his job as a teacher, but regardless, in a regular universe, Finn and Rey are going to die unless they have some magical plot armor to defend them.

As a jedi character, Rey fails in the same way that a lot of hero characters do, they don't Exist in the same world as anyone else, because they can evade or survive against fantastic opposition and thrive on it.

The more infamous examples are characters that "don't" fail, because they're just apparently that good. Han, for example, is Sue-Riffic, but it's likeable because he ends up doing stupid things. That's his job. Rey and Finn, survive the attack in the Falcon, and get picked up by Han's ship because the plot required it to happen, and warped around to suit that outcome. Rey survives a lightsaber fight, because she has to. She won't be injured or calloused, because she's the new disney princess of the story. Neither, does Phasma.

Jedi are Sue Territory, in the Republic of Sue, led by President Sue and her harem of Sue's. And every week, some villains show up.

The former EU is littered with so many examples, its laughable, but so are the prequels and animated adaptations (Clone wars, Rebels, etc.). It's only when a Mary Sue Villain shows up that the jedi even face losses, ie a superweapon that devours solar plasma, and can fire coherent plasma beams across a solar system, let alone several solar systems, is a contrivance of epic proportion that not even the first movie gets away with. The rebels know about the death star at the beginning, and it's the central plot device.

Even the Sith, like Snoke, Ren, are the buttmokeys of this superweapon in a sense, because they're not defeating anyone who's a central character yet. Not even Finn. Jedi, are Mary Sue characters when written poorly because they have no impact on other characters when they lose, and also no impact when they win.

Very, very rarely, does the Mary Sue let anyone die if they don't have to, very rarely does the Mary Sue face an even battle, very rarely does the Mary Sue not fight. They win, because that's their job in the story. Odds, challenges, opposition, travel time, equipment, logistics, etc. are placed in between to pad out the eventual victory and make it more compelling. Or, they're not, and there's no sense of victory, only inevitability.

It's all part of the motivation and change of the character through the events of the story, and what they change about themselves to get there. In a Mary Sue, they don't change. They just need to be in Chapter 5 to fight the bad guy, so now they need something to dramatically get them there.

If the hulk has to ride the elevator to get to Loki at the end of the Avengers, that doesn't make it less hokey, it makes an unreal character that reeks of Mary Sue, hilariously parodied and inverted. It also doesn't change the impact of him just arriving for the monologue, at all. Does the hero need to board a train ? just have the hero/villain jump on top of the moving train/car. That's believable, right ? it can be, but that's a Mary Sue Universe.

To some degree, a Sue character has to do something that is unexplainable, or has no explanation in the universe. Sometimes, this is just parody, i.e. Austin Powers, Deadpool, etc. Other times, it's Author License, where there's no flaws in the character that affects the story going forward. Suspension of Disbelief is useful, but it's usually a character that faces all problems and wins, because the story needs them to win.

Jedi are in this "wiggle room" area of Mary Sue-dom because they don't have inherent weaknesses, they're not allowed to lose as a type of character unless they turn into a villain. And because of movie censorship, the villain has to pay a price, always.

Essentially, all heroes end up being Mary Sue characters because there's "not enough time" to show them as being regular people, but that's why good hero movies are hard to pull off if you don't build up characters that people can be willing to suspend disbelief for. it becomes a parody of a person instead of a strength to overcome the villain.

And by extension, Mary Sue can also extend to creating a wimpy villain when exposed to the Mary Sue hero. Aka holding the Idiot Ball, and other tropes, where smart people do infinitely dumb things because the hero is the only character that can move the plot formwards, right ?

Jedi OTOH, are walking plot armor. They survive until they're needed to undo the bad guys plot, pull out a Deus Ex Machina or checkov's toolkit, and win the day, keeping their friends and family alive, getting the girl/boy/tentacled alien, etc. It takes a universe destroying threat for Jedi to have a bad day where they don't immediately win. Most of this is due to the extended universe writers accommodating the YA audience / universe.

The Star Wars EU villians are worse in comparison, but the ability for even trainee jedi to survive unwinnable situations is what makes it tentative to use them in situations where you want dramatic tension.

Because, and this becomes evident/telling in the prequels, Jedi aren't supposed to lose, and when they do, they don't know how to handle defeat or subterfuge / betrayal, because everyone that they've ever fought with, has been on their side before.

Japanese Anime/ Manga characters regularly try to talk and walk that fine line between "god mode" and human being, and sometimes they pull it off. Examples like, One-Punch Man, who just wins every fight, to the point where he's using the moon as a springpad to jump back to earth to get back into the fight, because. He. has. to.

And, there's no ramp there. In every other facet of his life, he's depressingly unspectacular. And, that's part of a compelling story in some degree, because when he doesn't fight, he's wholly tragic.

There's also a few types of Sue's. One is the perfect character, easily seen as the hero. more often, they're really the villain for every other character, because they cannot be defeated. Author fantasy contrives these perfect characters (Bella Swan, Princesses, etc.)

Another is the reality warping character that changes other people to do what they want. Even the villains. (this is the jedi in a nutshell, and emperor palpatine in the prequels, etc.)

There's the character that exists solely to prevent the hero/villain from becoming too strong or unlikeable that conveniently shows up and then is never seen again, usually the foil or the romantic interest of the villain, or the seductress. Mary Sue's don't have to be the central protagonist either.

Another is the "detective" / analytical Sue, that can read other people's motives or action before they know what they're doing and formulate the required gambit, i.e. Ozymandias, Sherlock and some versions of Batman, etc, and Thrawn fit into this Gambit Mary Sue.

Having a Good Mary Sue rather than a Poorly written Mary Sue is important to character development. As Max Landis puts it in his reviews (and ultimately the Rey = Mary Sue) thing, Heroes can be Mary Sue characters. It just takes more effort to make characters "Good" and not two-dimensional. Superman is the exceptional Gary Sue/Stu, because when he's given extraordinary ability as an infant, he's still just a farmboy that helps people out, with the ability to destroy human civilization if he so chooses on a whim. And this is (apparently) the crux of the Superman reboot(s), trying to show this moral character in an immoral / disconnected reality, because we could never trust Clark's parents to be altruistic anymore in a modern storytelling.

Which is arguably why Rey is orphaned on a planet rather than be brought up by a single parent or Alien parent, cousins, uncle's, etc. Family is no longer a sacred or pure element in cinematic story because it takes too long to show development as a character.
 

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s0denone said:
DementedSheep said:
Mary Sue gets overused because it sounds better and more "objective" than "I don't like this character".
What???

No. Mary Sue is used (perhaps in error) in an attempt to call-out a character for being out-of-place powerful, with little-to-no drawbacks, within the universe of that character.

Saying a character seems like a "Mary Sue" might well be a reason a person doesn't like that character, but it is not a direct substitute for saying that specifically, which is what you suggest.
Except I see it sued on characters who aren't particularly OP and certainly aren't unusual for protagonists all the time often while being very selective of which parts of the story they remember. If you really tried you could fit the majority of protagonist for fiction into the mary sue category. It's utterly meaningless with how it's used.
 

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Except I see it sued on characters who aren't particularly OP and certainly aren't unusual for protagonists all the time often while being very selective of which parts of the story they remember. If you really tried you could fit the majority of protagonist for fiction into the mary sue category. It's utterly meaningless with how it's used.
Aye, the term is likely misused a lot. I wouldn't really be able to say, but I would take your word for it.

I disagree that you could fit the "majority" of protagonists as Mary(/Gary?) Sues, however. I think it is actually a quite small fraction that would actually outright qualify for the moniker.
 
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Anyway I think the problem a lot of us are making is that we are treating Rey as the main character of a standalone film. That is like judging Harry Potter as a character by only what he did in the first movie/book. There is certainly a lot about her character that needs to be expanded upon which is a good thing because it would suck if her character had nothing else but what we saw in the first movie. My main issue was the whole Mary Sue thing which is not a reliable or even worthwhile term. It is like Manic Pixie Dream girl in that sense. She is a good starting protagonist to a much longer series. Something that the Phantom Menace completely failed to have on any level.
Until there are more in the series you can only treat it as a single film, and I don't think it's wrong to do so. If they flesh her out more in the future, it won't change the first film... It might make the first film feel less stunted (I know it's just my opinion) when re-watched with the extra knowledge provided in the coming films, but that's besides the point, IMHO. You can judge films from a series as individual films.

I'm not particularly invested in the terms being used, to be clear. I thought she was "perfect to the point of being boring", and she seems to fit many of the other criteria for the term "Mary Sue". So... Why not? Convincing me that the label is wrong won't make me like her more. Only the next film giving me good reason to do so is going to achieve that.