Please help me write an ending to this story
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They slowly become more and more consumed from the inside, to the point that they become rambling flesh monsters, similar to the ones seen in Silent Hill. This effect can be achieved by taking the following items of clothing:
2xLong sleeved shirts
A swimming cap
Plain Tracksuit bottoms
Make sure they?re all grey, and quite dirty. Then, take some red paint, dip your brush lightly in said paint, then just lightly flicker it. Don?t go crazy, just make it seem like they?re covered in just purely flesh and blood. Then put the swimming cap on your face (Like some gimp spiderman) and put both shirts on top of another. Tuck the shirt beneath into the tracksuits, and then, curl your fists into the over-shirt, so that they?re sheltered by it. The ending result should be quite passable. It?s not great, but hey, it?s something. Now just move inconsistently whilst fidgeting your fists from the inside of the curled shirt.
Have fun!
2xLong sleeved shirts
A swimming cap
Plain Tracksuit bottoms
Make sure they?re all grey, and quite dirty. Then, take some red paint, dip your brush lightly in said paint, then just lightly flicker it. Don?t go crazy, just make it seem like they?re covered in just purely flesh and blood. Then put the swimming cap on your face (Like some gimp spiderman) and put both shirts on top of another. Tuck the shirt beneath into the tracksuits, and then, curl your fists into the over-shirt, so that they?re sheltered by it. The ending result should be quite passable. It?s not great, but hey, it?s something. Now just move inconsistently whilst fidgeting your fists from the inside of the curled shirt.
Have fun!
Make at least one die so people get upset and hate the thing that is possessing the people. The two remaining people should kill the thing possessing them for a good happy everyone is happy ending.
That is how I always roll with my stories.
That is how I always roll with my stories.
It turns out they are already dead, and the ouija board was acting as a comms device talking to another oiuja board being operated by a live kid.
Have a botched Exorcism that does more harm than good, and ultimately leaves the fates of each character ambiguos to the audience.
Usually it takes a while for the ouija curse to set in. You live your life peacefully until you die horribly ten years later. I myself used a Ouija board about ehm... 12 years ago, and *chokes to death on thermos bottle*
Might be more realistic if it was a meth hallucination heroin hallucinations are actually kind of rare and "a demon is possessing me" seems like something a tweeker (meth user)would say and it could end up being a pretty good anti meth/molestation movie though that could be seen as cliche. Maybe kids get in to their dads meth stash and have a shared hallucination after being up for days? Hmmmm I guess you find out about this stuff when your families crazy haha.Dawn Patrol said:
A demon is something that haunts you until you face it.
They don't have to be flaws, they can be people or places that they hate, that they have to visit / talk to.
What I'm thinking of now is that one (a boy) can't handle that and attempts suicide, while another one (a girl) is afraid of loving him. Facing that demon, she goes to visit him whilst he's hanging himself. They face said demon together.
They don't have to be flaws, they can be people or places that they hate, that they have to visit / talk to.
What I'm thinking of now is that one (a boy) can't handle that and attempts suicide, while another one (a girl) is afraid of loving him. Facing that demon, she goes to visit him whilst he's hanging himself. They face said demon together.
That's why i suggested it dude, But if the idea takes off and you make a butt-load of money i want my cut xDsolidsnake101023 said:
Actually he said no, "it was all just a dream" twist endings. The mobius twist is an ingenious way to use that twist without using it.No-one Special said:
So you have 3 kids and one demon, said demon wants to be unleashed on earth so he can do whatever demons like to do for that he needs a human body to occupy and hes going to that via the ou...something board - thats the premise
At the end kids realize that they can't let the demon run away and that one of them is possessed so he needs to be... neutralized so begins the guess game of who is the demon. Let's use the previous ideas and have the demon amplify whatever character flaw his current carrier has (use I dunno anger, greed and envy), to make it more difficult make the demon switch bodies at some certain speed. TO not make it completely clishé end it with killing only one innocent kid while the other gets the honorable kill
At the end kids realize that they can't let the demon run away and that one of them is possessed so he needs to be... neutralized so begins the guess game of who is the demon. Let's use the previous ideas and have the demon amplify whatever character flaw his current carrier has (use I dunno anger, greed and envy), to make it more difficult make the demon switch bodies at some certain speed. TO not make it completely clishé end it with killing only one innocent kid while the other gets the honorable kill
They make them clean the house. Why do demons always have such a bad rep? where is the infernal lobby? this is discrimination!
The demons just...live as the children for a while, acting a normal as possible until the grow up a little. Then they proceed to just spread their 'seed' around as much as they can, attempting to raise as many half-demon children as possible.
Or it turns out the children couldn't be possessed because THEY WERE DEAD ALL A LONG
Or it turns out the children couldn't be possessed because THEY WERE DEAD ALL A LONG
How about they haunt/murder their families like in paranormal activity. The police then come and kill the possessed but the demons don't die, only their hosts. The demons pass on to the next available hosts which would presumably be the policemen.solidsnake101023 said:
Have the world appear continuously more alien to them. Not that the world actually changes (or does it?) until they're reduced to close to constant screaming and gibbering. Then they'd probably be institutionalised.
The cinch here being that the demons that are slowly taking them over aren't able to understand or interact with the world in the same manner as local residents, which leads to aforementioned breakdowns.
The cinch here being that the demons that are slowly taking them over aren't able to understand or interact with the world in the same manner as local residents, which leads to aforementioned breakdowns.