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maybe someone should take down that auditions are open sign since auditions closed due to them being over since like 2 weeks ago
 

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fanklok said:
maybe someone should take down that auditions are open sign since auditions closed due to them being over since like 2 weeks ago
An excellent plan.

Game starts tonight, when I can get round to writing the opening...

Exictednuke said:
Name: Kenji Daichi

Appearance: Kenji looks similar to the stereotypical Japanese punk rocker, which is reflected in his clothing and his own trends. He is no taller then 5'7 and has a slim build. His hair is black and jelled up, so much jell that it appears to be rock solid. Covering a large deal of his arms and the top half of his chest, he has a wide variety of tattoos, ranging from simple tribal designs to a dragon that covers his back. What he wears is the definition of trashy, a bright red jacket worn over a dirty gray shirt. His blue jeans have scratches around the knees and have been faded, but then again that is pretty common now a days. To top it all of he wears a pair of tinted aviators, a bright orange tint to be exact.

That's right, Travis Touchdown.
Powers: Kenji has the ability to summon a veil of blue energy and manipulate to his will. Whether it be to make a sword, a shield or a blast of energy, it can be done, only limited by his own imagination. Being hit by the energy is an experience that one will never forget, as it seems to burn and freeze at the same time. The energy of veil it just as plentiful as the energy exhibited in it's hyperactive user, never seeming to run out of power at any given moment.

The energy has given him a few miscellaneous abilities as well, having no connection to blue power but still proving to be useful, and sometimes hilarious. He can in fact teleport over short distances, but rarely when he wants to. If he is drinking or fooling around he can teleport at random, resulting in some very awkward cases involving the cops. Other that he exhibits strength, agility, endurance, and speed higher then what is to be expected from someone his size, though by no means super.

Bio: The story of Kenji is rather bland, if not humorous one, until he got his powers at seventeen. He was raised in Tokyo by his mom and dad, being born into a middle class family living the big city life. Needless to say he was kind of an ass for the most of his life, the kind of guy who would shout at the clerk at the fast food joint for getting his order wrong. His habits only got worse when he entered high school, when he grew to think that he was better then everyone else. He would drink and party, living what he called the "Good life" up until he was seventeen...

While at friends house he said something incredibly stupid, this being an insult about a gang leader who happened to be at the party. After the party he was returning home when the gang leader and his goons backed him into an alley, intent on killing the stupid Kenji. In an act of desperation he picked up a wooden stick and threw himself into the group, when the energy began to spark from his body. He felt a surge of power, and soon the the attacker were no more. After the event the local police were called to the scene, only to find Kenji sitting down against a pile of charred skeletons. He told the cops to "Fuck off", they didn't hesitate.

Ever since then Kenji has decided to explore the world, party and get into sweet fights, continuing to live the "Good Life". His attitude of being a complete asshat hasn't changed much, but he has grown to be a smooth talker when there are ladies around.
Yorgmiester said:
Name: Pain

Appearance: Pain is completely black. Utterly and completely. He is made of a black, viscus goo that can shape and mold itself to whatever form it wishes. "Normally" his body is a huge, muscular, clawed mass, about eight feet in height. His head is elongated and alien, most of it's space governed by a wide, gaping maw of razor teeth, always grinning hideously. A long, black tongue with a life of it's own inhabits the dripping cavern's depths.

For the unimaginative bunch, basically this, except completely black and without the spider-web pattern or eyes.

Powers: In a nutshell, Pain can turn any solid substance into "goo". His power interacts with substances on a molecular level and makes them gelatinous, like a flowing gel that he can control. He can do whatever he wants with this "goo". Harden it, soften it, move it, destroy it, use it as a weapon, or a platform, or a limb... anything. And almost his entire body is made out of it.

The requirement for this conversion to take place, once upon a time, was that his human skin had to be touching the object to liquefy it. No more. When his mentality changed and he went insane, his power changed as well. It became like an infectious disease, changing everything it touched to blackness. He can now convert anything that his goo touches into goo, and the substance itself is like an extension of his own body.

Bio:
History: Pain's history may go back for centuries, but the only history that is known to him, or anyone else, is the only that started six months ago, when the weak, impudent, hopelessly romantic human named Ryan Strias went insane, and through his super powers became what the current being believes himself to be: pain incarnate. Since then, his path has left behind it a dark, shadowy trail of horrors that Pain feeds off of like nectar. Where he is going, even he doesn't know, but he's definitely going there.

Personality: Psychotic, sort of. He delights in pain and suffering, both inflicted on others and inflicted on himself. He goes about the art of causing pain with voracious tenacity, milking his enemies agony for all it's worth, dragging it out and mocking them as they die. The way he acts is completely up to him, and changes so much that the concept of trying to understand him is a matter for not even the brightest of minds to attempt. His lust is unquenchable His mind is unbreakable, for it is already broken. His name is untaintable, and his feelings untouchable. He has no ties, no emotional connections. He lives simply because he lives. His actions are governed by nothing, not even those who would seek to aide him.

Name: Ryan Strias

Appearance: "Age 22, height 5"11, thin build. Black, messy hair that comes down around his ears, clean shaven. He has a fair, kinda pale complexion, and dark green eyes. He typically wears faded bluejeans, a dark coloured t-shirt, and his favourite brown hoodie. His shoes are an old worn out pair of brown DC's that he's had since college, that are fast approaching their due-date." ~ Surge

Ryan's appearance, during the rare times when he isn't covered in Pain, is that of a broken man. The only thing that could be called an improvement is that he's vastly more muscular now. Everything else is bad. His skin is pale, to the point of whiteness, with deep black bags under his eyes. His black hair is long, wild and matted, a scraggly beard and greasy sideburns where his once fair complexion used to be. His cloths are long gone.

Powers: His powers while covered in Pain can safely be assumed to be the same as when he's "free", but this can't be for certain. Even he doesn't know, for whenever a lapse occurs and he becomes Ryan again, he instantly tries to kill himself, at which point Pain takes control again.

Bio:
History: Ryan's life before the events of Surge were uneventful. He grew up a slacker in a family of overachievers and rich go-getters. He inevitably became the black sheep and was eventually shunned by the rest of them.

When the Surge began, Ryan was living in a small, crappy apartment, working at a grocery store after dropping out of college for lack of money. He met a girl named Amy Vance, who has the power to control light, and they both fell for each other rather quickly. It would have been perfect, but for Ray...

Ray Sanchez, the psychotic lunatic that destroyed Ryan's life. He was being controlled by a demon, a fact that Ryan never found out and has yet to discover. Ray, along with Supergirl's old nemesis Mr. Terrible, wreaked havoc on the city. Ryan, Amy, and a few others fought back, exchanging victories and defeats, running and hiding, chasing and killing, until eventually, during a climactic battle, Amy and Ray were both killed. She sacrificed herself by causing a supernova, taking Ray with her. It pushed Ryan over the brink, and he became Pain.

I encourage you to see Surge for details.

Personality: Ryan has no personality now. The brief moments when he is himself are filled with fear, grief, and pain, and that is all he knows.
terribleyetfun said:
name: Trevor yosef Filmore

appearance:"7,7" thin with a pale complexion his blue eyes contrast with his long brown curly hair which forms a frame around his long face can usually be found wearing a black leather glove on his left hand and a suit with a white shirt, red tie and black jacket with coat tails accompanied by a pair of specially tailored black suit pants for his act as the amazing 'giant man' at the carnival.

powers: can activate and manipulate any electrical object by touching it, almost as if he`s ,communicating with it but in reality is just sending small electrical impulses that being the most he can generate, or has ever tried to.

bio:raised in your average low cost-housing district Trevor was always kicked around and made fun to a horrible extent by other kids for his height, his parents were always ashamed of him for this detaching themselves from him, even making Trevor think for a few years that they did`nt love him and one day at the age of 15 his insecurities finally got the better of him and he had ran off to join the carnival freak show as the amazing 'giant man'. He has been living a peaceful life for 10 years up until surge, one day his powers suddenly activated as he was struggling with an electric can opener all it took was one thought of goddammit work you piece of crap and the machine shot forward from the can creating a gash along the front of his left hand which to this day he has covered up with a leather glove and to this day has tried to forget about his powers but little reminders always had a habit of...popping up to remind him.

personality: a some-what timid person but after being around people like him for ten years has built up his confidence enough that he won`t back down from a fight so easily.

quote:(mostly says this to scare off little kids)you know what I did to the last person who did that....I`m still finding bits of them around my house.
Grimheart said:
Name:Kristopher Rahl

Appearance:A modest looking 20 year old, Kris tends to keep things simple when it comes to what he wears, meaning he doesn't stray much from his dark jeans and lighter colored t-shirts. He also wears a worn leather jacket, again, nothing too fancy. Kris stands at 5'8", has straight shoulder length brown hair and a grey eye, his right eye is concealed behind a make-shift eyepatch/head band made from many different cloth strips.

Powers:Kris can bind objects to his soul, making the bound item materialize and disappear at will. He also has the power to manipulate the air around him to a certain extent. He can compress and expand air, creating effects similar to shockwaves, as well as intense gusts of wind, creating currents of wind that can cut like a blade. He has also recently discovered that he can make bolts of static lightning by rubbing the air together, creating friction and the electricity that he uses.

Bio: Kris is an amnesiac, he had lost his memory in a violent attack when he first moved to the city. After awakening without his memories, he went to a life of theivery, using his powers to become something of a master theif. he gained a reputation very quickly and became a thief for hire and has been living a decent life, well as decent as life can be when you're a thief.

His life was lived without many consequences until one day when everything went to hell. Explosions in the city and running into the most villainous people he had ever met. Kris and a rag-tag group of super powered individuals were chased around the city by powerful individuals, a man that eventualy turned into a more devilish creature and an insane individual that seemed to only want to cause chaos and destruction.

The chase eventualy led outside the city limits and the location of the final battle. Light and darkness faught there, and for a while it looked as if the power of light had prevailed. But then one of Kris's friends went mad. The super power he had once controlled so well consumed the man and be became a twisted and violent force. The following events, Kris cannot remember well. The events that unfolded in the small gap in his memory left him without his right eye.

Somehow, after the traumatic events, Kris managed to make his way to another city. It is here that he was able to patch himself up and find a place to lay low from whatever forces that hunted for him. He was able to return to his old style of living, stealing for hire, althoguh now he is more paranoid and cautious about everything he does.
Aqualung said:
Name: Gladys Dubois

Appearance: Dubois is a petite woman, her back perpetually straitened in dignity. Although she is ageing in years, former beauty is evident in her features, from her slender face and pointed nose, to the softness of her skin; however, the effects of recent troubles are growing more prominent. Her lips are always drawn tightly, faced with wrinkles at their corner. Her brow is often furrowed as well, and laugh lines that once decorated her face pleasurably now only accentuate the years of building stress. Though she is 51 years old, her visual age is at least half a decade more.

As the wife and mother of a highly prosperous and influential family and corporation, her appearance is always presented neatly and professionally. She often sports a business jacket and blouse with a knee-length skirt, over skin-tone pantyhose and low work heels. Dark brown hair peppered with grey is pulled back into a comfortable bun, away from her dark solid eyes.

Powers: Dubois has been labelled as the Illusionist, a visual artist of the mind. She is able to tap into the minds of others and alter their perception of reality, essentially created hallucinations as she sees fit. This takes great emotional strain, though Dubois tries to conceal it.

Her most powerful mind inflictions occur when she has a deep insight into the mind of her target. By simple skin contact, she is able to access the memories and senses of another. A grazing touch can provide her with a year of visions; a handshake can deliver as long as an entire childhood; and a prolonged hug could give her fourty years of worthy events. By utilizing these memories, Dubois is able to reflect them unto the mind of another individual with near-perfect scents, tastes, etc.

She is unable to create any memory she has not gained, but she can bend them (by enlarging objects, brightening scenes, etc.) Her memory for her own life, however, is beginning to fade.

Biography: Gladys Dubois was born the daughter of a wealthy family in Quebec, Canada. The only child of a lawyer and a businessman, she was often left to the care of a nanny or herself. Busying herself with the family library, she taught herself complex mathematics and sciences, and declared 'gifted' by the age eight. Throughout school, she frequently associated herself with other wealthy and powerful individuals.

After graduating university at the top of her class in businesses and economics, Gladys soon caught the attention of a young businessman named Dunstan. They were soon married, the heads of a multi-million dollar corporation that bore branches from the Americas, to Europe, to even Asia. Since then, the company (which specializes in the exploration of genetic and infectious diseases) has prospered phenomenally, giving the couple the primary influence of human health research and development in the United States.

At the age of twenty-eight, Gladys gave birth to her first son, and another the next year. A month following her fourty-eighth birthday, Dunstan passed away from a long-term heart disease. Throughout his final years and following his death, she has become a more withdrawn individual, becoming increasingly absorbed in her work.
revolverwolf said:
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//Databaseinquiry: Project Outcry
[HEADING=3]Name[/HEADING]
Outcry
[hr][HEADING=3]Appearance[/HEADING]
Outcry's actual appearance has not changed a lot since she was last seen by other supers, though her body is now a mesh of it's usual flesh and bones, and some not-so-usual nanotechnological fibrous tissues and bones comprised of synthetic metal alloys replacing those destroyed before. These additions are nearly unnoticeable by the naked eye unless one were to be looking for them directly.

For a more in depth description of what Outcry looks like, we have a voice recording of her six months ago. Since then her hair has grown slightly, though that could be expected, and her muscles have degenerated to a small degree as a result of being kept in suspended animation for so long, but otherwise she remains the same.

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//VoiceRecording: Microrecorder 132: Recording 72
"Describe myself? Well, I've been told my hair is a ravishing burnt auburn, but that was a new colleague and I bet he was hoping for the drink to be stronger than it really was. I'd describe it as dark auburn. I used to wear it down in locks but it was in the way so I cut it to the base of my neck.

I've always thought I was a bit short and skinny. My body's rather proportionate. None of that ridiculous top-heavy supermodel appearance that comic book superwomen always have. I'm real. From having to superhero all the time I've become a bit muscled as well.

My favourite attire? Well, can I confide in you for a moment? It's a costume. I even wear it under my regular clothes so I'm ready at any time for trouble. Being super has all sorts of problems with it. When the first trouble was over, the second one came headed for you straight away. But when I'm disguised none of that happens. It makes me happy, knowing that no matter how hectic things can be I can still go back to being 'normal'... Yes, I sometimes feel a bit stupid in my costume but it helps me find the middle ground between special and mundane.

When I'm trying to blend in I wear common clothes though. This stuff here. Green jacket, blue jeans, white shirt and trainers. Of course, my costume is hidden underneath.

And you should never ask a woman her age. Though she might just let you know that she's 29."


And no, before you ask, she doesn't have the costume any more. We assume that she got rid of it at some point during the crisis. Instead of that we gave her a set of prototype bionic armour, based upon Doctor Carter's battle exoskeleton. It's got shielding, increased mobility, flight, fusion-core, pulsating blue bits and bobs and enough armour plating to put a tank to shame. You name it, the armour's got it. More than enough to make up for any little mistakes nature might have made.
[hr][HEADING=3]Powers[/HEADING]
Reality warping, 'Biological Remeshing', Advanced Reflexes, Increased Strength, Power Mimicry and Visions, insofar as you can call that a power.

Reality Warping - Outcry can summon what appears to be anything that she can think of, regardless of whether it should exist or not, and can even manipulate her own body's molecular construct to some extents. This means that the things she can do are impossible to predict, save for her own affinity for the use of guns. Luckily we have wiped this from her personality, meaning that every attack should now be the result of a microsecond-long calculation deciding which attack would prove most effective, and not from her personal experience of their previous effectiveness in other unrelated problems.

Biological Remeshing - Outcry has suffered severe wounds, enough to kill ordinary people and most other supers. The Company, noting the need to keep their investment upon the 'new' super has added something to ensure her continued survival and obedience. The nanotechnological mesh will rapidly divide to fill in gaps, meaning that she will heal most wounds, but if the host purposefully lets a super escape at any point, or tries to break it's programming, the mesh shall automatically commit a 'mass suicide', effectively murdering it's host. She heals when she works for us, or she dies. This is to prevent a 3W-type defectation.

Advanced Reflexes and Increased Strength - Exactly what you expect. Outcry's new skeleton and tissues have a much higher strength than usual bone, so she can pick up a much larger weight before having to restrain herself and can withstand a greater amount of damage before breaking, and the majority of her missing nerves have been replaced with specific superconducting materials, speeding up reaction time by several fractions of a second. Over-the-top perhaps, but it could be the difference between life and another spike through the lung.

Power Mimicry - Outcry can copy any power that is used against her, just as any Carter-made robot can. She gains mastery over the power slowly, to prevent an overload of new powers.

Visions - Not so much a power, but Outcry can swap between different lenses in her eye. Thermal vision, IR vision, X-ray vision and good old Regular vision.
[hr][HEADING=3]Bio[/HEADING]
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*error* Program //Memoryscan requires special access.
Insert Passcode: *********
//Approved: //Memoryscan: Running
6 months ago [http://www.escapistmagazine.com/forums/read/362.143318-Surge#3210727]

"I....win" Those were his last words? She gave him her entire life and that is how he left? She balled up her hands in rage, but could only beat weakly upon his chest as she felt her final moments were about to come as well. Her breaths came uneasily, each punctured lungful of air felt like it was going to be her last, and all she could was wait as her organs failed and her life slipped away into the dawn sun... The darkness slowly engulfed her and she was gone, lost forever in the inky blackness of death.

Or so she thought... It seemed that The Company had other plans for her.

3 months ago

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//Running: Biological Systems: Minimal.
//Automating Functions
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//EnterDatalog: Repairs underway. Subject is alive, severe damage to heart and lungs, adoption rate of mesh appears to be sufficient. More work needed before introduction to outer environment.
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//Reading: Manual Control
//Unlocking Pod
//Locking Perimeter
//Running: Muscular Control
//Regulating Enzyme, Electrolyte and Blood Concentration Levels
//Sensors Online
Her eyes opened to spy unfamiliar surroundings as the world around her seemed to be emptying and opening up to reach out into a brand new one, the outside of the small pod she had been encased in ever since the operation to transplant the mesh into her had been performed. She stepped out, confused at her survival, scanning the dimly lit room to get a hint of where she was. She could hear a faint sound of air whooshing around, most probably an air purifier and fan at work. And she could see the white walls were mostly blank, save for a speaker and a mirror on the wall opposite her pod.

Outcry, stated a loud female voice over the speaker. The mirror's panel faded into transparency, revealing it to be a window, and 2 figures were visible. A woman with red hair and a bandaged face, dressed in a white lab coat, and a small robotic boy. Welcome to your home for the next 3 months, Outcry saw the woman's lips move, but the sound approached her from the loudspeaker's direction, You have much to learn.

The woman leaned over to press a button, and then her lips began to move again. This time no sound came, she was speaking to the robot boy... When she stopped, he nodded and went away from the window. All this time Outcry was shouting to be heard, "Wait! No. You can't just leave me in here! Let me learn! I'll learn, please!"

Yesterday, 3:17PM

Outcry. You have an order. You must find and eliminate all supers, no exceptions. Do you understand?

"Yes, doctor. All supers will be eliminated. No exceptions will be made." Outcry reitterated monotonously into her earpiece as she walked along the wastes, the city she was going to was still so far off in the distance.

We are in for quite a fun game today. Remember to enjoy yourself. 1W sends his regards.

"Of course. Tell him to wait for my return. I will have him a present before I come back." The audio link went silent and Outcry smiled to herself. Yes, today would be a good day. Outcry would serve her creator, Doctor Carter, and that is all she had ever wanted.
[hr][HEADING=3]Notes[/HEADING]
Outcry remembers nothing of the last 29 years of her life. She is, for all intents and purposes, 4W. This means that she will follow the three laws set by Doctor Carter. She will not allow harm to come to a human. She will not allow herself to come to harm, unless doing so would conflict with the first law. She will follow any order set by a human, unless it conflicts with the other laws.

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//Databaseinquiryend
Xero Scythe said:
Name: Damien Lier
appearance: 17 years old, male, with blond hair and steel-gray eyes. He wears sneakers, black sweats, and a red shirt, with a black sleeveless flak jacket over the shirt.
Power: Gravity. He can manipulate the gravity around him within a set area. Whether he is redirecting the flow of gravity to disorient his enemies, condensing it into deadly projectiles, or encasing himself within the gravity and turning himself into a human wrecking ball, Damien is a force to be reckoned with.
Bio: When his parents died, leaving him alone at age 8, his life turned to shambles. First he lived in the orphanage, where the one good thing happened in his life. He met a girl named Rose. At age 12, they left the orphanage and lived on the streets. Soon after, at age 14, Rose was accidentaly shot during a gang fight. Damien watched as she died. Connor lost all sense of sanity as his powers awoke. He went on a rampage and destroyed every single one of the gangsters. There are six months in Damien?s life he cannot remember, starting from the day when he killed the gangsters. Damien has spent the last 3 years honing his powers.
Psychological: Damien is incredibly resilient. No matter what happens to him, he will get right back up and continue whatever it was he was doing. He is also fiercely loyal, protecting his friends even if it means putting himself in the line of fire.
However, when Damien gets into a fight, he is incredibly ruthless, stopping at nothing to achieve victory. This does not mean he is a moronic brute; rather, he is a genius of war who is not above any tactics. If the enemy is stronger than Damien is, then he will resort to guerrilla tactics. If not, then Damien will confront the enemy openly.

Name: War
Appearance:???
Power:???
Bio:???
Psychological:???
ThreeWords said:
//connection established: Company files: combat tech//

#InfoProfile-3W#

Designation- 3W

Basic specifications- Third in a series of all purpose androids. This model is equipped for heavy combat, especially against enhanced human terrorists and also carries new experimental AI programming unique to the other models ins the series, giving it far greater flexibility in the field

Appearance- All the series-W robots were built to resemble humans to the minutest detail. 3W stands 1.9 meters tall, and appears to be a slim, well built male of about 25. His hair is dark and short, and his eyes are a clear blue. The disguise is so complete that illusion of humanity will only be broken when the outer layers are damaged, revelation the robotic midi-skeleton that protects the inner mechanisms, but this outer layer is quickly repairable, to prevent causing too much panic among the civilian population

Advanced Specification- All series-W robots are far stronger, faster and more resilient than humans, to the point where it takes literally hundred of tons of pressure to do any lasting damage. Weapons systems involve both direct physical combat, and a variety of guns, though fire-power is limited. 3W specifically posses flight powers, highly advanced intelligence, and a system of nanobots that repair damage and analyse all technology that come into contact with the unit, scanning and copying all the designs within. The practical upshot is that 3W has the ability to copy almost any weapon used against it.

Recent History- Technically, 3W was a complete failure; it's first mission ended in it's desertion and betrayal of the Company, despite all it's programming. At some point, an error in the programming caused the Laws to be somehow deactivated, thereby removing all safety precautions involving the protection of humans, and allowing it to disobey orders. It then proceeded to turn on it's own forces, siding with the enhanced terrorists and doing millions of dollars of damage to military hardware.
The unit was last seen heading for the mountains outside the city, armed with several new weapons systems, a dangerously deviant personality system, and unknown motives.
However, it was recently detected, and our new long range overide system worked extremely effectivel-

//leak detected//

//connection broken//
 

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ThreeWords said:
Game starts tonight, when I can get round to writing the opening...
Tonight?! O_O

Frak!

I have a party tonight, will try to get on though
 

fanklok

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Why do the RPs I join always start on nights I work or leave the house.
 

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fanklok said:
Why do the RPs I join always start on nights I work or leave the house.
Because they hate you.

Unlucky, I guess.

ThreeWords said:
Xero Scythe said:
Alright, bring on Surge 2!
Did you make a sheet? I can't find it...
Right here. [http://www.escapistmagazine.com/forums/read/362.171619-Surge-2-Auditions-are-open?page=2#4748039]
 

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revolverwolf said:
fanklok said:
Why do the RPs I join always start on nights I work or leave the house.
Because they hate you.

Unlucky, I guess.

ThreeWords said:
Xero Scythe said:
Alright, bring on Surge 2!
Did you make a sheet? I can't find it...
Right here. [http://www.escapistmagazine.com/forums/read/362.171619-Surge-2-Auditions-are-open?page=2#4748039]
Thanks, edit done
 

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Damn, i was hoping on getting an early night. in the next 2-3 hours n im grand with it lol :p
 

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Ok, so I had this idea for at least some kind of storyline, but since revolver changed her character, I?ve revamped it completely and gone for a new route. Since this new story arc has been rather hastily constructed, please be aware for potholes in the road of narrative
That said, have an intro!

Go to Urbis

The command was all that mattered

Go to urbis, and search the city for non humans, for it has been corrupted with imitation humans who seek to undo out very society, causing harm to every human on the planet.

The command had echoed in 4W's skull as she trudged through the wastes.

Go there, seek them out, and kill them. Every last one.

The command rang in her head as she entered the outskirts of the city of Urbis.

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For everyone else, life still seemed normal. Since last year's ruckus up north, people had come to terms with the idea of superhumans, sort of, and those that doubted were foiled by the few supers who, for short times, came out and used their powers for vigilante justice. No one knew what happened to them, but they were disappearing as fast as they sprung up.

You may write your intro as a 'day in the life' style thing. Everything going normal, then things jump about as your power kicks up. Make it something obvious, something likely to draw some attention

You know what I like, so you'll know what I want. Put simply, give a reason for your being in Urbis (the city), a little insight into your head, and make a mess to get you noticed. Think you can manage that?
 

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Reggie strode through the ghetto like he owned the place. Maybe cause he did to some extent. The appartment towers reached up to the sky, filled with gangs, money and drugs. The streets had been rough to Reggie, they had taken much from him. Now it seemed they were giving something back.
"Hey Reg!"
"Reggie my man!"
"Reg, what up?"
Came the voices from a group he passed.
"Sup" He gave a small wave and walked inside one of the appartment blocks. He got the elevator up, twenty floors of the trashy tower flew past him. In a few seconds. Reg liked speeding up the elevators. The doors opened, no ping or similar sound, that had broken long ago. He stepped out in the corridor. The walls coated in graffiti, the floor paved with rubbish.

He strolled down the corridor till he came to room 44. He pushed the door open and stepped inside.
"Hey Reggie, where you been?" Came a voice fromt he other end of the dim-lit room. The sun outside hit the rotting curtains but didn't get that much further. It managed to iluminate the whisps of smoke floating out of the shadow where the man sat.
"Why? Am I late?" Reggie asked, ungracefully dropping a backpack onto a crude coffee table between him and the man.
The man laughed.
"No no, you never are though. Your almost too good. What you manage to get?" He sat forward a little. Intently staring at the backpack.
"Two kilos, maybe a little more." Said Reggie, casually. Sat in a laid back manner on the sofa opposite the man.
"Excellent." The man took a draw from whatever it was that he was smoking. His face lit up for a second. He was scarred and looking much older that he truly was.

"Here." The man chucked Reggie a wod of cash. Reggie caught it. As he did, there was a sound of smashed glass, a few floors down maybe. A load of shotuing soon followed.
"What was that?" Said the man, his voice concerned.
"I think we better get out of..." Before he could say the next word the door burst open. Before the door had hit the floor, Reggie jumped out the window on the balcony.

He scanned the building surrounding him. He closed his eyes.
Need power, need to escape
He ran along the balcony and jumped.
The next building was a good 50 metres away but slightly below him luckily, he landed on the roof in a combat roll. He then ran and jumped to then next. And another. Each an impressive distance away from each other. He did this a few times. He then stopped to catch his breath. No one had followed him. He sat there for a second and checked his payment.
Damn, two thousand? I got ripped-the-fuck-off
He sighed and then jumped down to the alleyway below, turned the corner, threw up his hood and disappeared into the crowd of one of the bustling streets of Urbis.

How was that for my opening post?
 

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Damien was wandering the streets once more, trying to clear the thoughts from his head. "How? How did it happen? What happened to Ryan? Was it my fault? And if it was, how could I have changed the outcome?" No matter how many times Damien played that final fight over in his head, it was useless. He had little say in the matter, and he could not have changed it. Damien sighed. He had come to Urbis since this was one of the best places for supers. He turned into an alley. Four men with crowbars appeared behind him. One hit Damien on his shoulder. The crowbar bounced off Damien's dense shoulder, but it still stung. "What the hell do you want?" The leader smiled as he summoned a fireball. "Hey there buddy. I recognize you. You're Damien, that fucker that destroyed our entire gang. We want you, dead." The other three snickered on cue. Damien's lips curled into a snarl. "You..." Then his eyes lit with recongition, and turned very, very dark. "I recognize you. You were the one who killed her. You were the one who killed Rose!"

The four supers charged Damien. The first one had super speed. Damien laughed as he just slammed the man to the ground. "Fat lot of good your speed does you now." Damien formed his right hand into a claw and slammed it down. The first guy turned into a pancake. Both of the next two supers had supernatural strength. Damien encased his body within unnaturally strong, warped gravity, and caught their punches. They screamed in pain as their fists turned to dust. Damien then grabbed their heads and squeezed, crushing them. He pointed to the last man, the one who killed the only person he ever loved. He looked like Fate itself. "Your turn." The man shrieked and threw a fireball at Damien. Damien was so angry, the fireball just deflected off his barrier and crashed into the wall. Damien grabbed the man and threw him to the ground. "a heart for a heart" Damien said, coldly. Damien stomped on the man's chest, crushing his heart. The man would die, but it would be agonizingly long for him. Damien turned around, sensing something. "Shit" He exclaimed. He saw a member of the Company, and the member saw him! Damien dashed away from the man, far faster than any normal person could move.

All hail the Wall O' Text!
 

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ZOMG i really don't know how to start off right now, i'm gonna have to think about it and post tomorrow afternoon o_O
 

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The outskirts of any city were fairly boring, but none more so than Urbis. Everything had a mundane air about it, a direct juxtaposition to the wealth of power that surged through the city's lifeblood. It was a bit too quiet for 4W to be entirely sure of everything around her, in fact.

Her eyes moved across the landscape, scanning each detail as it entered her vision, recording every disturbance among the outskirts of Urbis. Seeing no significant disturbances her left pupil blinked green, the tell-tale sign of her onboard connection to Carter's database being used.

Code:
//Databaseinquiry: Urbis(city)
//Upload: Map
She shook her head, pushing the function aside to run quietly with the rest of the background tasks that made up her mind, and returned to seeking out the city's supers. All she could see of the task was a green "36%" in the very topmost right of her periphery.

Outcry walked, an artificial feeling of gladness was making it's way through her sensors and parts, all of them pleased to be close to the start of their task. She could already visualise the smile on Carter's face when she presented the task done, and that was the smile she was performing now, she was so eager to please.

But first she had to overcome the annoying part of her task. She was designed to be unable to harm humans yet tasked to destroy every super she could find. So until a super showed themselves to her, or made a suitably big name for themselves, she had to play the waiting game.

It occurred to her that it would be easier, faster and so much more efficient to destroy the entire city, wiping every trace of its existence from reality in one fell swoop, but surely someone would question it sooner or later. And it went against the laws. Oh, how she despised those laws, limiting her potential so much.

Outcry, Carter's voice was heard, emitting directly into Outcry's mind, We have word of a super from a reliable source. Damien Lier, a gravikinetic, is here in Urbis. A picture of a young blond man appeared, whom Outcry assumed was Damien. Your plating should be more than a match for his power so we have prioritised him as your first target. A tracking beacon has managed to locate him so the map will be uploading with his location now. Steal his power then eliminate him.

The green number at the top blinked "100%" before a translucent map with two icons appeared in her vision. There was one, a green blinking icon, that showed her location. And the other, a red arrow, was showing Damien's.

Her smirk widened to something unhuman. She began to rise from the ground, the small flight boosters on the soles of her feet propelling her upwards before she took off in a burst of speed, screeching across the Urbis skyline. Perhaps it was too obvious to fly. She would be seen from a mile away. But she wanted to be seen. She wanted him to be afraid. His death was coming to find him.

Threewords... Did you just refer to me as a she? I thought I hid it so well! You should fix that. Yeh.

We're jumping right into the deep end, throwing caution to the wind with Outcry going straight after one of the guys from the last one. By the way, Xero, you kind of singled yourself out as a target there. Expect Outcry to attempt to rip Damien into two thousand three hundred and sixty seven point five pieces with her bare hands. =P
 

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He had never considered himself a man of faith, but as a man with nothing else to live for, Nathan Andrews was willing to try anything.

So as he sat there, in the front row of St. Mary's Church and listen to the preacher read his sermon, Nathan hoped that this place of worship would fill his void, give him meaning. The preacher looked over the crowd slowly, smiling at all his 'children' and Nathan smiled back. He doubted he stood out in the crowd of people. He wore black Sunday shoes, black dress pants and a nice white shirt that wasn't too formal. His black aviator sunglasses where in his grey trench coat pocket that lay wrapped neatly up beside him, his broken watch and white gold wedding ring the only jewellery on him.

Physically, he looked like any other well built male member of the church, with his broad shoulders and trim chest. His eyes a deep brown that matched his short brown hair, helped make him look like the average guy but the scar on his chin may suggest an accident or surgery of some kind.

He applauded silently along with the rest of the congregation at the Pastor finished talking, and started to make some final announcements, before a final "God Bless You" signalled the end of the service, and with that the wave of people rushing to get out of church and on with their outside lives began. Kids pulling on their parent's legs, men and women alike pulling out cell phones to check missed messages and making important calls.

Nathan had no outside life, so he sat quietly and waited for the Pastor to step down from his podium so he could intercept him. Once it looked like a majority of the people had left, the Pastor did step down and Nathan was there waiting for him, holding out his hand

"Hello there Pastor Martin. My name is Nathan Andrews, I'm new here"
He spoke softly and smoothly, that kind smile still on his face with a handshake that was firm, but not tight

"Welcome Mr, Andrews, it is a pleasure to have you join our family"
Pastor Martin smiled back, more of a tight lipped smile than a truly open one.

"Oh, I'm not sure if I wish to join yet"
Nathan responded with a light chuckle
"I'd like to learn more of the...family I'm going to join before I make an investment. That is, if you have the time?"

Pastor Martin nodded, his smile becoming a bit more relaxed
"Of course Mr Andrews, please this way..."

Nathan followed the priest into a side door at the edge of the podium. Entering it, Nathan discovered that it was a small side office, filled with files, and papers.

Brushing a few of the papers off the desk, Pastor Martin motioned for Nathan to sit down.
"Now my son, what do you want to talk about?"

Nathan leaned forward
"How about the truth?"

The Pastor blinked, obviously confused by the question
"I'm sorry, I do-"
He stopped speaking suddenly sitting much straighter, his mouth in a firm line, and when he spoke it was in a much more direct tone
"What do you want to know?"

Nathan smiled, his Spirit String from his index finger flowing into the Pastor
"Tell me, what are your sins?"

The Pastor began to speak, telling Nathan everything. The way he cheated on his wife, and how he killed her when she found out, and then abandoned his mistress when she became pregnant. His real name was Bob Frank, and he had joined the church to hide from the cops and not to spread the word.

After hearing all this, Nathan got up from his seat, while the Pastor remained seated, staring straight ahead. He took out a .44 Magnum revolver, placing it on the desk.

"You will take this gun and open fire in the lobby, aiming above the heads of the people. You will fire until you have one bullet left, then shoot yourself. You will do all this in five minutes from now. Understand?"

The Pastor nodded.

Putting on his trench coat and sunglasses, Nathan made his way out of the office and into the Church lobby. It was still fairly crowded, with plenty of people awaiting the next service.

As he walked out and towards his car, shoots began to be heard inside the Church,, and people began to spill out of the Church, screaming and calling for help.

Whistling happily to himself, Nathan opened the door to his blue Toyota and drove away. He hadn't found what he was looking for, but he had made the world, a little bit cleaner.

Sorry for the wall of text. Hope this is good
 

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Just another job. Thats what Kris kept thinking ever since he found himself in this city. It was a chaotic start but he had finally established himself on his old principles. Thief for hire, it was what he did best. The job he took today was an unusual one, but that was one thing he noticed from his clients in this city, all their requests were for strange items. nothing like he would usually have done before. This job was to steal a certain object from a preacher, Kris didn't usually steal from any church but jobs the past few weeks were getting scarce. He didn't ask many questions, not caring why exactly the pastor came into possession of the wanted item, his only job was to get it back to his client.

Kris had it all planned out. he would go to the church and sneak into the pastors office while he was preaching, take what he needed and then leave. But things don't really work out the way you planned them to. The first problem came when Kris found out the the church he needed to go to was not along the path of his usual hidden route. He had to go out of his way to find the place, losing precious minutes. he eventually arrived at the church and snuck in, making his way to the offices. Then things got complicated.

His detour meant that the pastor had enough time to finish the service, what was even worse was that he and another man walked into his office. Kris had just enough time to duck out of sight, he moved closer to the door once the two men were in the office so he could better hear their conversation. Its at that time that things started t get strange again. Kris heard the two men talking, the sound was muffled because of the closed door but he could still make out the words. As he heard the pastor finish talking about what the other man called his "sins" Kris listened to the instructions he was giving the preacher. Kris couldn't believe it. He moved away from the door as the man walked out, Kris decided that the theft could wait. If someone was about to start something on his hunting ground, his territory, then Kris wanted to find out exactly what this stranger was up to.

Kris quietly stalked the man until he left the church. When the stranger got to his car, the sharp popping sound of gunshots rang out from the church. The flood of people soon followed and Kris nearly lost his target. Even though he only had one eye, he still caught a quick glimpse of his target getting into a blue car and driving away. "You're not getting away from me that easy."Kris mumbled. He broke free from the growing crowd of people and took a running jump that took him impossibly high. An easy trick. one of the first he ever learned so long ago. Using the air around him to push him further, nowadays something this easy was just like taking a breath. Kris landed on a rooftop and started to follow the blue Toyota, jumping from building to building.
 

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You do not need to read this unless you're curious about this villain. Just an intro, nothing crucial. But you can still read it. ;p

Ya know when that shark bites, with his teeth, babe

Scarlet billows start to spread

Fancy gloves, though, wears old MacHeath, babe

So there's nevah, nevah a trace of red.


Bobby Darin had always been her favourite. A broad chamber within her home was lined with records, precious despite being lined with the settling dust of disuse. But times change. Now, his silken voice came from the radio of a gleaming black Nissan Altima, the windows blackened to hide its internal secrets. From behind those one-way windows, Gladys Dubois sat reclined in the back seat, her legs crossed daintily and with measurable fragility.

Dubois gazed outward to the dirtied streets, her brow somewhat furrowed at the mess, though she hardly saw it. Her mind was stranded in other places on distant matters. She did not return to the car until the driver spoke.

"They're here, Madame. Are you ready?" He was a young man, perhaps around thirty years of age. His rough face and gleaming bald skull told little about him, though Dubois knew every fact of his life. Married, had one son. Named Clint Gerald Manson. Educated in street racing, various martial arts, and sidearms, his favourite being a solid Glock. His favourite band was Muse, and he despised relying on others. All of this she had gathered from the first brief moment they had shook hands.

Uncrossing her legs and straightening in her seat, Dubois replied stiffly, "Go ahead, Manson."

The Nissan rolled into a back parking lot for an optometrist clinic, where the building shaded them from the eyes of the busy street. A white van was messily stationed nearby, the lone wolf of the lot. Slowly, the car fell to a halt on its right side, and a back door of the van slid open.

A figure stumbled out, his eyes blindfolded by rough fabric and his hands bound behind his back. At his side two heavily built men guided- or, rather, lifted- him into the smaller Nissan, before returning to the van and pulling out of the lot, leaving the lone Nissan.

"Manson." Dubois unbuckled her seatbelt. "Kindly wait outside."

Without a word, the tall bald man slid out of the vehicle, slamming the door and locking it shut with his hand-held remote. Outside he straightened his dark suit and reached for a phone from his pocket; a phone that would not hit markets for another three years.

The blindfolded man blearily lifted his head, seeming drunk or perhaps drugged. Raising a hand, Dubois placed her palm tenderly on his cheek.

Rough childhood. Bullied others. Bullied himself. Bullied his brother. Lost his brother. Lost himself.

Drugs. Sloppy pickpockets, learned from questionables. Learned from woman. Raped. Destroying himself, killing a strong body. Only a teenager.

Disease. Hopeless. Infections, many sexually transmitted. Contemplating suicide. Then, a light. A strength. Calling things to him, like magnets. He is a magnet. He is powerful.

Pickpocketing is easier. Stealing hundreds a day. Then, city explodes in chaos. Time to hide.


Images flashed within her mind until Dubois tugged her hand away, a difficult task as the final imprints of memory faded. With a deep sigh to calm her harshly beating heart, she removed the binds from his hands and the blindfold from his eyes. When he opened them, a young woman appeared sitting in the Nissan opposite him, a friendly smile on her warm, velveteen face. Relief filled her eyes.

"M-Maddy? I... How did you get me out of that place? I, I can't-"

"This isn't the time." She drew an eerie syringe from a dark purse on the floor mat, the needle of which seemed to glow somewhat. "Jeremy, I need you to listen, now. I need you to relax. This'll help."

"Are... Are you fucking kidding, Maddy? Now isn't a great time to be doing drugs. Let's-"

"Jeremy." The tips of her red lips tugged downward. "You trust me, don't you?"

His friend. Of course. He nodded finally, holding out an arm.

As 'Maddy' slid the syringe gently into a vein, a second black van entered the parking lot. While she placed the syringe in a cooler stored under the passenger seat, Manson tugged open the door on the pickpocket's side. And, as Jeremy went into a state of cardiac arrest, Dubois smoothed any fraying strands of hair from her greying bun, the illusion of a young brunette having faded. In less than a minute, the man had been pulled from the Nissan, roughly placed into the van, and the bald driver pulled away from the lot, leaving nothing behind but the wafting smell of car gasoline. And, as Dubois finally reclined once more, the cooler stored now beneath her seat, Manson clicked the CD player and Bobby Darin on once more before pulling into traffic behind a blue Toyota.

Look out ... old Macky is back!

Blue Toyota is yours, my character is behind you. By the way. :p
 

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Damien looked up as he saw a figure streaking towards him. "Shit!" He exclaimed. He had heard about them. supers that used their powers for vigilantism. He didn't have time. With a gring, he folded his arms across his chest, then threw them out wide. 12 copies of himself, looking the exact same, appeared. Since they even had his powers, each of them was indescernable from the original. Even supers who relied on tracking powers like Dark Mist couldn't tell the difference. He made one of the clones turn around while flying. the clone made his hand into a claw and brought it down hard on the air. The super in the air above slammed into the high-gravity area and rocketed towards the ground. Damien then dispersed the clones, sending them every which way. He himself landed on a gleaming black Nissan Altima, crushing the roof with his aura. There was a blue Toyota in front of him. He bent down and pushed off, crushing the roof even more.

Yes Aqua, I just ruined your new car. Hit and Run!
 

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Reggie glided through the crowd like a ghost. Money from the wallets of passerbys slid out from their leather bound carriers and stuffed themselves into Reggie's pockets. It was so busy that no one noticed. He moved out from the crowds and down a small alley. He looked up.
Sometimes it's just too easy
Harnessing the power of his mind, he gently lifted himself up. He kept climbing higher and higher into the air till he landed gracefully on the roof of the building that had been to the left of him. He opened a hatch door and jumped inside. It closed behind him as he landed in his reasonably sized appartment.

It was more of a bedsit. The bedroom, living room and kitchen were all just one big room. There was a small shower room just off to the side but that was in. The vacany of walls wasn't the only strange thing.It had no windows or doors(apart from the one on the roof for enterance, no one could get in that way other then him). Only other people would need such things. Not Reggie. He was special, he knew it. Not many other people did. He didn't let them know.

He stared at the wall and as he did it warped. It bent forward and revealed a small room behind it. The room was almost full of money.
I'm basically collecting it now he thought as he threw in the money from today and reformed the wall. He was used to never having enough money on the streets. Stockpiling it was kind of natural. He glanced at the kettle and it boiled instantly. A mug flew out of one of the kitchen cambinets and landed on the counter. A jar of coffee tipped some of it's contents inside. The kettle then tipped some of it's own contents into the cup. Finally a carton of milk wizzed out of a fridge and tipped a little of it's self in. By this time Reggie had brought his mail from his box downstairs out of the building, up to the roof and dropped it in through the hatch.

He caught it and began to sift through the junk-mail and what was of interest. The coffee cup glided into his hand and took a sip.
Ah, life's good
He retired to the sofa/ He drank his coffee as the newspaper suspended in mid-air for him to read. It turned it's pages for him as he glanced through.
Nout good, no change there. That's Urbis for you
 

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Cursing as something crushed the roof of the vehicle behind him, Nathan quickly jumped out and ran off. No way he had time for dealing with other super powered freaks. Lucky for him, a police cruiser was just pulling up a side-street, with two policemen inside.

The perfect hosts.

Running towards them and waving his hands like a civilian in trouble, Nathan shot a string into each of the officers. His spirit string passing right through the glass window and attaching itself to each officer.

"Candy from a baby..."

He chuckled as he got into the backseat

"Where to sir?"

asked the officer driving, a young stocky blonde kid

"Away from here"

Nathan muttered, and then to the officer in the passenger seat

"You might want to have that shotgun at the ready"

And on cue, the older looking veteran pulled out the pump action shotgun from under the seat giving it a quick CHA-CHIK, ensuring it was loaded and ready to go.

The cruiser quickly backed up down the alley and spun around down a separate street as Nathan pondered what had happened. More powered people? Probably, but he was too busy to deal with them. He just needed peace and quiet for now. Time to think.
 

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Just as Dubois was beginning to feel the calmness resettle in her heart with the pleasurable comfort of sunlight on her face, an explosive noise sounded from above. The roof of the shining vehicle crumpled inward, as though a bowling ball had dropped from incredible heights. She straightened in her seat stiffly, staring at the roof, before calling,

"Manson!" Another one... It must be. Or is this too good a day to be true? "Steer us straight."

The bald man didn't need to nod or speak- she gathered his affirmation as he swiftly reached into the glove box. An array of pistols and handguns sat on racks inside. He grabbed a rather odd looking one, some sort of cross between a pistol and a three-needled syringe.

Jamming a wrinkling finger on the button under her arm, the window rolled down smoothly, and Dubois poked her head out from the empty gap. She craned her head up carefully upward. Strangely enough, she was greeted by the backside of a stranger, crouched and seemingly preparing to launch himself onto the next car. Without hesitation, she established a connection with the man's mind- an easy task, considering his unawareness of her.

Within mere moments, an illusion sprung to the stranger's mind, a hallucination of such detail it felt impossible to differentiate from reality. He now stood crouched in a foreign schoolyard, the ground soggy with rain, puddles from recesses in dirt very common. Nearby sat a few rustic playground toys- four wooden swings, a straight slide with a ladder, and a variety of other old playthings. Present day plastic horses and such things were not to be found.

A building was visible nearby, of beautiful architecture. Under the shadows of its arches and glass paned windows, a number of girls huddled away from the rain, while the braver ones stomped in the wet soil. A chill fall breeze stirred their skirts. In fact, all of them wore skirts, a common uniform, though the style seemed to be of a different time period.

As the man took in the sights, a small hand tugged on the back of his sleeve. A small girl with an abundance of brown ringlets stood behind him, gazing up to him with inquisitive eyes.

"Are you the new teacher, sir?" she asked in a tiny voice; she couldn't have been more than seven years old. She looked him up and down. "Those are odd clothes. Are you the Russian teacher?" There was a faint trace of a French accent in her voice, but not overly so.